Date: 10 Aug 2017 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh my, Billy is insane. I do not feel sorry for Gregory. But I do feel sorry for Jasper. To have your own father betray you like that. Gregory betrayed everyone. Then was surprised when Carlisle ordered him to be taken to the basement. Where is Carlisle's army of men? Where are their bodyguards? Why don't they use the tunnels to get to Billy's estate? So glad you are back writing. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 05 Aug 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
Omgosh!!!!!! Why have Edward and them just been sitting around all these weeks? Why were they not gathering their army/weapons. It seems like they were just sitting ducks. I can't believe that Jasper' s father Betrayed them like that. If Edward finds out he will kill him. Family or not. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm a little upset that Bella is in Damsel in Distress mode ( Edward don't let him take me)I hope when she calms down she'll begin to rescue herself. I'm glad the Carmen will be with her and I hope Carmen is a smart as she thinks
Date: 18 Jul 2017 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
I just re-read from the beginning I re-read each and every time you update since it's usually very infrequent and it helps plus it helps in reminding me where you left us but?... mostly I just like re-reading it over and over.
READ YOU SOON ðŸŒº
Date: 15 Apr 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
So excited to get this update. Billy is really scaring me. He is one sick dude. I have to say that I can't wait to read more with Jasper's dad. He and Jasper were funny to me, their reactions to each other. Congratulations on your wedding.
Date: 19 Feb 2016 2:14 AM Title: Before the sorrow, a Prequel to Where forgiveness ends.
Oh my goodness I can not wait for the next update, what an absolutely intriguing, beautiful, inspiring story I can not wait to read what happens next.Thank you for sharing this story with all of us!