Date: 10 Jun 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
amazing little story ;) the time line was a bit confusing and edward was called cullen in chapter 2 but overall a very enjoyable fic ;) thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
a gold medal winner
Date: 07 Jan 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
glad u went for more
Date: 29 May 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hello I found you on Facebook and I am so happy I did I loved it thank you
Date: 16 Feb 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was a great little story. I loved it!
Lula
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
I liked this story...kinda confusing though that you kept switching last names for Edward...first Masen, then when he proposed it was Cullen, then at the wedding, it was back to Masen.
Date: 27 Jan 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
So look forward to reading your next story
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
SO WONDERFUL! I loved every bit! I wish there was one more chapter... a future-take of sorts :-)
Date: 24 Jan 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
What a perfect ending....or I guess I could say beginning for them. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't help but smile at this. I love these two! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow...I love it! I am so glad he was there to see her skate in person. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMG LOOOVE
Date: 24 Jan 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved this
Date: 24 Jan 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
loved it, wish there was more but understand that this is it. lol, sorry my gready ass..... Can't wait for the next story...
Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awwwww! Loved it!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing! I love a tattooed Edward (and the viper bites are great too). I cannot wait to see what will happen next for these two.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
This story is great to have to of my favorite things put together has been great to read
Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love this story!!! Thank you so much for the paragraph adjustments. Much easier for my old eyes:) can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 22 Jan 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
It is really hard to read. Super small print and long paragraphs make it difficult. I suggest you adjust the format to make it more friendly. What little I could read was good and I love the idea of the story:) I hope this is helpful and doesn't come across harsh. I would really like to read more!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. and i cant wait to read more......