Date: 25 Oct 2015 3:21 PM Title: Spring of lies
Such a bad place to leave it be... I hope you'll continue this story
Date: 25 Oct 2015 3:04 PM Title: Glitches
Even more drama for Edward, am I evil if I say, good? ;)
Date: 25 Oct 2015 2:35 PM Title: Naked Truth
So, its Edwards "fault" they're in this situation? Interesting...
Date: 25 Oct 2015 1:37 PM Title: Life Unexpected
Seems like charlie gets what he wanted, I just have no clue why he would want his kids to get wed...
Date: 25 Oct 2015 1:22 PM Title: Thy Will be done
Well, you didnt really gave much away with his first chapter, but have me intrigued; )
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2015 2:35 AM Title: Spring of lies
I hope you plan to update & continue with the story; I'm hooked!
Date: 22 Apr 2015 10:57 PM Title: Spring of lies
Too bad Charlie isn't around to deal with the mess he's made
Date: 10 Apr 2015 7:46 PM Title: Spring of lies
She needs to make the best of it. Think of it as a vacation or an adventure. Why be miserable.
Date: 10 Apr 2015 5:43 AM Title: Spring of lies
I hope Edward is sweet to her when he gets home. What a huge transition for her. I can only imagine that Charlie while he was alive thought that the two of them would make a wonderful family and would be perfect for each other.
Date: 09 Apr 2015 11:10 PM Title: Spring of lies
more plzzzzzzzzz.
Date: 09 Apr 2015 10:16 PM Title: Spring of lies
OH THANK U FOR UPDATING !!!!!HOPE U UPDATE SOON THIS IS GOING TO BE A AWESOME STORY .... NEXT IT EDWARD AND BELLA .....;) I CANT WAIT SO PLZ UPDATE SOON LOL
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2015 12:18 PM Title: Spring of lies
Love the story. Thank you for the chapter I really do like this story
Date: 31 Mar 2015 7:10 PM Title: Glitches
Bree needs help. Edward and Bella need to make the best of this crazy situation. I still don't know why they hate each other so much.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:43 PM Title: Thy Will be done
Sorry but your story shiver is so much better!!!!! Are you planning on updating anytime soon???????
Date: 24 Mar 2015 10:54 PM Title: Glitches
Wow What a dick. Getting his dick wet again. Hope Bella asks for a STD test. Bella should make a requirement he stop smoking too. Nasty habit.
Wow we really need some more backstory on all this hate.
Date: 24 Mar 2015 7:54 PM Title: Glitches
So excited about this update! I love seeing that he has a soft side. Poor young Bree!
Date: 24 Mar 2015 1:13 PM Title: Glitches
I wouldn't Marry him either
Date: 01 May 2014 12:34 PM Title: The Poison
What is Alice's problem? She got the money she wanted and none of the hoops to jump through. I think she is a person who can't be trully happy.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:56 AM Title: The Poison
I LOVE IT MORE PLZ!!!!!! YOU POSTED THIS AWHILE AGO ON HERE OR FF I REMEMBER. PLZ UPDATE SOON, I CANT WAIT. LOVE YA!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 8:29 AM Title: The Poison
The cat & mouse game with Edward & Bella is going to be soooooo good!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:16 AM Title: The Poison
Bella and Edward are going to be in for some interesting married life...but a lot can happen in a year. They do share a good Love/Hate type of chemistry so it'll be fun to see how it plays out...see you next time !!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:00 AM Title: The Poison
Oh my! But oh so good
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2014 12:21 AM Title: The Poison
There should be a clause that if Alice or other family members cause trouble then they forfeit any and all money they inherit....Take that shit Alice
Date: 23 Apr 2014 11:15 PM Title: The Poison
Mercy... drama, drama, drama!! Its like Facebook!! LOL
Loving this, its great!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 11:06 PM Title: The Poison
Ugh....just want to slap Alice!
-Kate
Date: 23 Apr 2014 10:52 PM Title: The Poison
Wow Alice needs a muzzle and leash
Date: 23 Apr 2014 1:10 PM Title: The Poison
well I wouldn't just give the money back, she can do so much good with it.. get her self finacially set then give it to charitys, homeless shelters...the marriage thing she can work around marry him and sleep in seperate bedrooms, but the guy is fine let him scratch the inch every once in a while
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:27 AM Title: Life Unexpected
Isn't it kind of......I don't know nasty to ask your kids to marry each other?
Date: 11 Apr 2014 5:11 AM Title: Naked Truth
Interesting, can't wait to see how he explains what his plan was all about! Lol
-Kate
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:37 PM Title: Naked Truth
Edward, Edward, Edward what are you thinking???
Maybe I should be asking Charlie?
Looking forward to more of the story!! :)
Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:47 PM Title: Naked Truth
"so I'm going to have free reign of your body." Oh so he's one of those men that think he owns his woman and it "entitiled" to do what he wants? Lovely
Hate to tell ya Eddie, but without consent, its rape even if she is your "wife"
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:22 PM Title: Naked Truth
He is completely lusting after her. Them living together is going to be interesting!
Date: 09 Apr 2014 1:36 PM Title: Life Unexpected
Great chapter! Can't wait to see how the next meeting goes!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:43 AM Title: Life Unexpected
Loving this. I had to go back and reread the first chapter, i had forgotten what it was about. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:01 PM Title: Life Unexpected
If her mom left the building to her how can Charlie interfere?
Author's Response:
Her Mom only verbally told her it's hers, but legally ... that's another story, which will be revealed as we go along.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 3:17 PM Title: Life Unexpected
Are Edward & Alice adopted by Charlie? Since He wants them to Marry they must not be related by blood.
Author's Response:
You'll know as we go along. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:56 PM Title: Life Unexpected
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Date: 15 Feb 2014 12:44 AM Title: Thy Will be done
Is Charlie making them move with each other? There is so much good stuff to discover, I can't wait for your next update!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 9:07 AM Title: Thy Will be done
Ooof. That made me uncomfortable and I wasn't even there! Oh yeah, and it's a fic! Cannot wait to see the inevitable throwdown!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. =)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:31 AM Title: Thy Will be done
Love the dramatic tension you've created.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:53 AM Title: Thy Will be done
Loving it!! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:31 AM Title: Thy Will be done
I am definitely intrigued. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 7:05 PM Title: Thy Will be done
Wow how intriguing this sounds. Wasn't expecting Alice and Edward to be Charlie's children as well, I'm assuming its by adoption and not blood. Looking forward to more...I have a feeling that Charlie's stipulation is marriage :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:21 PM Title: Thy Will be done
Marry children that are blood related? I jumped to that but hey that is where it usually goes. I guess it is something else siblings can not marry even half siblings.
Author's Response:
You'll get some answers as we go along.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 9:50 AM Title: Thy Will be done
IN THINKING THET ARE BROTHER AND SISTER AND THEY ARE SUPPPOSED TO GET MARRIED????????????????????
Author's Response:
You'll get answers as we go along. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:38 PM Title: Thy Will be done
Oh this is great, so different ! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:24 PM Title: Thy Will be done
So, confused.. hoping that the next chapter clears up the 3 siblings and what the stiplation is...
Loving it so far!! :)
Author's Response:
You'll get some answers as we go along. Thanks.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:18 PM Title: Thy Will be done
Nice set up but our Edward an Bella related
Author's Response:
You'll get answers as we go along. Thanks.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:03 PM Title: Thy Will be done
I'm confused. E B and A are all siblings or stepsiblings with Charlie as the father of all?
Author's Response:
You'll have your answers in the next chapters. Thanks.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:57 PM Title: Thy Will be done
Great start. Anxious to see what Charlie proposed.
Author's Response:
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:30 PM Title: Thy Will be done
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 3:42 PM Title: Thy Will be done
So they aren't his bioloical children only Bella
Author's Response:
You'll have your answers in the next chapters. Thanks.