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Reviewer: silverelvis Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 31

Really great chapter! And what is a story without some cliff hangers?  Thanks!

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 31

I just found your story and started reading. I love this Bella. Looking forward to the end. I hate that Alice and Jasper.are stuck for a century with Aro. Looking forward to whats next!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it. Bella did the right thing and Alice made up for what she did. Looking forward to the next chapter.

merrily

Kat

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 31

OK Alice is redeemed 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 31

Alice and Jasper gave up there freedom to save Edward and Bella??

I didnt think she had it in her...

I feel bad that Bella had to kill Tyler..

Poor Edward...

 

Dang this is a sad..

 

Loved it!! :)

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 31

Thanks for the hard work. Truly enjoying the story.

Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

I'm happy with whatever timeline works for you. Love the story and Bella is a gem. I love how impulsive she can be and loving to her man. So like a good reader I'll be happy to read your update whenever you get to it. Because a good story is always worth the wait.

Merrily

Kat

Reviewer: Intsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

Post tomorrow please.  Curious about the dinner guest.  I look forward to your finishing this intriguing story.  Have anjoyed every chapter.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

Aro is just trying to get Bella to slip.

 

Bass-Turd!! (see I didnt cuss!)

Post again soon. Good luck with 32 (write faster!!)  :D

 

 

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

What is Aro doing?

 

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 29

you can't leave us like this-please update soon

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 29

Grrrr,dang cliffy!

Reviewer: sarahplumb Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 29

uh no mostly they just piss people off

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 29

Freaking Jane??

 

No way...

 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 28

This such a bittersweet chapter for me.  They no their time is limited due to the Volturi and yet, they are trying to get in as much as possible.  I am afraid that once Aro finds out the Bella can go invisable they will force her and Edward to stay.

 

Looking forward to more :D

 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

loving this story

great to read

well done looking forward to update

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 27

Crap!!

 

Looking forward to more :)

 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 26

I get that Alice is a no all-see all.  But there  had to be another way.  And maybe IF  this was the only way to keep Bella safe for Edward.  If she is correct then Alice would have seen the outcome of Edward hating her with a passion.  She chose between herself and Bella for Edward....

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 25

Excellent!  Really like this story.  Great writing!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 25

It may be sappy, but sometimes everyone needs sappy!  I personally loved it!! :)

 

What a great story!! 

 

Just flove it!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

I'm thrilled they survived. I hope we not have to deal less with the Volturi. I also hope we get to see more of them of Edaward and Bella together and perhaps a lot more Cullen drama.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 24

"You save me every day, Bella. No thanks necessary."- awww.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 23

This is an amazing story. I may hate the Hedi element (thought well written) because I always want Bella to be his first, and having it been so close to when he finds her is hard to take- but well done. Also, I love how he hates his family. It's refreshing for the  Cullens to not be Cleavers or the  Brady bunch. I so look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh, no recovery needed....that bitch had it coming and I hope she dies for the second time! Ashes to ashes...bitch to dust. Yeah. Like that. ; )

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

Nooooooooo......

You are a evil, evil clifty woman!!!

 

BUT I love you and you need to update soon!!

PLEASE :)

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 22

Heidi??  Why dont they kill her??

Or just let her not find them..  keep hidden till she leaves???

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'd say Heidi

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 21

Heidi?  Please update soon! I can't wait to see how Bella will handle this or Edward for that matter.

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 21

Must be Heidi or her mother. By the way that was a mean cliff hanger. Just plain ole mean.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

Who is it???

 

An ex of Edwards perhaps??  I hope not, Bella will freak!!!!!!!!!!  Or maybe she is Edwards surprise??

 

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 20

That was a great chapter.  To think that they held Edward hostage so he could meet Bella.... Thats just wrong.

 

But I am glad they met and fell in love.

 

Loved this chapter.

 

Looking forward to more :)  As always! :D

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

HI!!

 

No eye rolling here.   They have to have the stuff that makes them a couple.  Him with Heidi is more beleiveable than a 122 year old virgin!

 

Looking forward to more! :D

 

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

No rolling eyes here....just wishing it was ME rolling in the sheets with Edward! Wait...did I say that out loud?! GAH! Naughty ol' gal....

Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

No eye rolling going on. I love this story. I think it's well writen and I like how it not the same as others. Love the how Bella cathes herself now when she's upset. Love the purring thing too. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Merrily

Kat

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

*Encouraging* or maybe not...I don't want this to be over with~I really like your version of Edward & Bella!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

LOL.. That should have been in the BD2!!

That would have made a great scene instead of the rock climber!!

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ut oh!  Run faster Edward!

 

Loved the lemon! :)

Reviewer: Arwyn of the Realm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow!  Hi, araeo - This is quite the story, and never a dull minute!  I'm v. much looking forward to future installments, and this seems to be one of the sexiest Edwards of all time!  You're a v. talented writer - have you published anything in hardback or paperback yet?  (I'll be surprised if you haven't!)  ;o)

Reviewer: judyB Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hi!!

 

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

Geez Louise! Whew! That was hot! *fans self* Um, I'm hoping Edward can stop her in time. You know Bella and her guilt trips~~~

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hi I am still here lol:) I really like your story it's awesome!

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thank you again! Still loving every word...but often read on my phone, which is crap to review from!...so take this as 5 reviews?

keep them coming...(the chapters I mean...of course!)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

Good Luck surviving the snow storm.  We are expecting one also.

 

Glad that E/B are moving forward! :)

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

A few years ago, I was boarding the Seattle to Bainbridge ferry, and I saw a guy getting on the Bremerton ferry that I still think "maybe I should have gotten on that ferry and introduced myself!" My life just may be different now. ;)

 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love that you had Bella hurt an angry with Edward. You gave another side that doesn't get written a lot 

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

....still loving it! Thank you. T

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

She is starting to accept everything... I think.

She is so worried about Charlie and Renee..

 

 Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

Happy Margarita Day!!

 

Poor Bella, not knowing if she can get passed this or not..

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 11

This is a great story! Love it!

Well written,  and lots of my favourite 'show don't tell' approach to to story telling...laughs too... SO looking forward to the next intallment!

Thank you for sharing it with us! T

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh.. I am so glad that he changed her. 

 

Love this so much!! :D

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 11

Once again great job

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

:-) 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 10

NOO not another cliffhanger

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh no you didn't! ACK! Kill me now!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 10

OH... please tell me  your updating soon!

Thats one hell of a cliffty!

 

More please!!!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

Um, hell yeah, I like him any way I can get him!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

The Cullens trapped him...  that shitty!

 

Glad that he and Bella got a little frisky! ;)

 

Looking forward to more..

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 8

Looking forward to finding out what happened that pissed Edward off so bad.

 

Loving this story,Its great  :D

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yes, Edward *insert big sigh here*, show me something.....

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 8

MORE PLZ!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 7

Love this story

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

This was a good chapter. 

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

Holy sheet, that was hot! *fans self*

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loving this. Glad he gave Tyler the heave ho!  But what about Jakey dog???

 

Does Edward read minds in this also.  If so didnt he know that his family was in the house they went to?

 

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wow.. this is exciting.

He is the king of mood swings.  But I like it!! :D 

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: Catalyst

I am hooked!!  Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

I LOVE IT! MORE PLZ!!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

I like this Bella, she's a feisty one~~

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

love this fict

well done

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

So in this story is Edward really 17?  Bella is really having a hard time and I hate that she does not have jake anymore.  Seems as if Edward was tired of being the odd man out amongst the family and maybe that is why Alice has not talked to him?  Please update soon!  Love the story.

 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love Alice, aways the chipper one.  It's about time Edward ask her for a date.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Catalyst

Just started this story can't wait to see what happens

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wonderful!  This story pulls you in!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3

LOVE IT MORE PLZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh, I'm liking this very much! More please!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Catalyst

MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Catalyst

She knows he is dangerous but she cant stop wanting him.  I like it.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Catalyst

great start

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