Date: 10 Jun 2022 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved your story. Would love to read the story you mentioned in the final author's note: Just Give me a Reason, but don't see it posted anywhere. Did it ever get written and posted?
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2022 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
Such a beautiful story
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 26
Can't stop reading your stories.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2017 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
I Can't stop rereading your stories.love it
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
I don't know why I waited so long to read this story, but it was freakin fantastic. Took me only a few hours to read it, I freakin loved it & glad I decided to go ahead & read it instead of waiting any longer. I wasn't disappointed, I totally loved it. Great story.
Date: 17 Jun 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great story. Thanks so much.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
WONDERFUL!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is kinda treating her like Jake by hiding their relationahip
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2015 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
he needs to learn to juggle both
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 26
Just fucking awesome!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Atta Boy! It's about time!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
They are fooling themselves, and he is making excuses. They are never gonna be comfortable seeing other people either. I guess that is what makes a story a story, right?
Awesome work BTW ~ LOVE IT!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
i LOVED this little story ;) thanks so much for completing and posting on here ;D
Date: 19 Nov 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
I've buzzed right through this story tonight. Sorry I didn't comment more. I really loved it. Thanks, you 2, you write some very enjoyable stories!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
I like that Edward thinks Bella's full figure is just fine.....very much!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm on a roll with your stories! This one looks good too and I like the overweight Bella idea...here's to all of us round women!!
Date: 03 Sep 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE YOUR STORIES
Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you both for writing this great little story for your friend, I loved it too!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
Lovely for them to have their son and their friends and especially each other!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 24
Are you seriously going to have those two awful people show their ugly faces to Bella and Edward again? I'm just happy they have their big boy(ten#, wow!)
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
That was one of the best wedding toasts I've ever heard, so sweet and so moving!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm thinking they are doing the exact right thing for each other. I'm glad the bad guys are going to get justice and I hope a long sentence!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
Neither one of them is completely convinced yet and will just have to get used to being there for each other!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
Well, of course she believes him, since he's never lied to her! This was a hell of a way for them to finally face their feelings for each other, but I'm just tickled they did!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
I just hope Bella believes him! I was real sorry to read that you had such a nasty time on that other site, but you did the right thing coming over to TWCS. Those people over at ff are a bunch of twts anyway, and don't know a good story when they see it!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bella, she has to be hurt gain for him to show up? He might as well admit defeat and tell her he can't live without her!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so pleased that Bella told off and rid herself of that malignant Jake, once and for all! Too bad Edward didn't cut out his tongue for speaking to Bella that way! I also think Bella is about to kick him out because she wants more than he's willing to give, the dummy!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
I shopuld have known that was the first time she had ever seen him! That was a horrifying story, that poor girl!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
I sure hope Edward gets his head screwed on straight and quits kidding himself before he breaks Bella's heart!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Sure thing, Edward, just keep telling yourself that!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
It was nearly as if Bella was a virgin, since Jake, being so small, didn't get the job done! I don't understand why Edward still feels he can't offer Bella marriage. That's just silly!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Playing games, drinking and sexy talk! Where else would that lead?
Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm sorry Bella didn't slap Leah right back! I am real glad, though, that Edward punched out Jake for his nasty mouth! I hope she never has to see either of those awful people again!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Leah is an awful bitch, and Jacobis the pits, pretty mutch. They both seem to be the type of people who are only happy making others miserable!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
I never thought Edward was prone to pity a friend, and I'm thinking Bella is a good friend by now! By the way, that dress is revenge on Leah's part, sure as hell, she's ticked off at Bella for something!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Not to mention how very human it was of him to want to know a little about Bella! It sounds like they both like puppies.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
Found this today and I LOVE it!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Not only is Jake a POS, but a useless one at that! How he could treat Bella like that is beyond me! I'll bet Edward feels kind of bad he said no to Bella's invitation, now! Poor little lonely thing, makes me want to hug her!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
A little break was all that was needed to move this case along it seems. Now Edward knows part of who's been mugging women in the park!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
I like how this is developing between them, too. Friends before lovers is always best, I think!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
I see Bella is still a little diffident about being around Edward, as if she's afraid he'll think she's a bother!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
How sad that Bella is all alone in the world, and still mourning her dad's passing. She could probably use a friend right about now.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
As soon as Jessica told Edward there was another mugging, I just knew it would be Bella!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Shame on you, Edward, for not explaning your reasons for turning Bella down! I'll bet she's feeling pretty bad about herself right now!
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great story! Karma sure is a bitch, isn't it Jacob? LOL. Loved what Bella said to both Jacob and Emily at the end.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
This was a very lovely story and I enjoyed reading it. It was a different Bella for a change and different dynamics. I ended up really liking the good characters-- the bad asses? Not so much!
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh boy, I can't wait to read about Jacob and Leah again. They just talk smack.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hate the way Mike talked about her. That is just plain cruel.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am happy for Bella. Things weren't going well for her and her only friend was that stinking Jacob who treated her worse than dirt.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
He is a changed man! LOL
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
I would hope she believes him, but she was sort of dense when it came to Jacob-- I just hope she finally sees things the way they are.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
Looks like he finally learned how to think rationally. I wonder what she's going to say. Maybe she doesn't know about the baby either. Hmmm
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward is so stupid.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
Jacob and Leah are such losers. Edward has a thick head, it seems. His thinking is skewed.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
He is a bit thick-headed, isn't he? He doesn't realize that not all women are going to be like that last girlfriend of his. Bella understands it because her dad lived that life.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
Pushy friends, eh?
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
He's got some weird ideas.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Starting out as friends is always a good thing, I think.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Seriously-- it is well beyond time she was done with that bunch.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
Why that girl seems to think she even needs to give them the time of day is beyond me.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
She really shouldn't have agreed to be in that wedding. Those two are just taking advantage of her and will probably make a joke of her at the wedding.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
For the sake of the story-- his reading that journal was necessary. I think in reality most people would read it, but they would never own up to that!
Date: 05 Jun 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
My heart goes out to her-- she is a glutton for punishment.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
This Bella I feel sorry for-- she seems to be all alone- both parents dead and she doesn't have a high opinion of herself.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
That poor girl-- being so brave and asking him out-- only to be turned down.
Date: 25 May 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved the story!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 26
Another brilliant story!!!
Date: 22 May 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter made me cry. How can people be so cruel to the bigger girl when they are so young. I know how it hurts me as I have got a lot heavy since I had 5 kids and had my tubes tied.
Date: 02 May 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful story! Glad to see Edward and Bella so happy together with their family and friends. Looking forward to more of your stories :)
Date: 02 May 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm sorry to hear about the problem you had at FFN. I discovered your story while checking the fics that came in the top 10 on TwiFanFicRecs. Congrats on 2nd place! I decided to read the story here to get the uncensored version :) I'm really enjoying it. So sorry that poor Bella has to keep being the victim of violence. I'm sure things will turn out much better. Thanks for posting here.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ten pounds? All I can say is OOUUCCHH! if she is only 5'2", I'm surprised they didn't C-section her. And it's a DAMN good thing she didn't go those extra three weeks!
Thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved the whole story! Y'all did a great job! Sorry you had trouble with FF. Makes me leary of posting another story there, if I ever decide to write anything else.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awww....sweet!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awww...the joys of moving.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
She will worry that he only wants her for the baby.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
hmmm, is Edward fixing to screw up?
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
So Edward was the blast from the past.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
Rose is mighty pushy.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hot! Hot! Hot! with no condom....hmmmmm
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Is it getting hot in here?
Date: 14 Apr 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Those two are a piece of work and really deserve each other, meaning Leah and Jake.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Not liking Leah and Jake at all.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sounds like she is being set up with this dress. She needs to put her foot down and get another dress.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
I never kept a diary or journal. I was too afraid someone would get ahold of it and read it.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wonder if she is still "technically" a virgin. Edward is going to feel guilty for reading all of her private thoughts...at least he should be.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hmmm, Bella's journal is amongst them I'm sure, and he will be able to read her inner ramblings. Bout as good as reading her mind.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bet Jessica would love to clean the bathroom.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Most people are conscious of their weight and it tends to make them shy and withdrawn. At least it does me and others I know. I was surprised she would ask him out, if he is his normal hot self.