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Hi!
I'm a mother of two little boys who's totally obsessed with stories that touch my heart. I've always admired people who have a gift for putting their ideas into words that have the power to bewitch people and pull them into other worlds. I've loved books and especially series of books before, but I've never been as captivated as I am with The Twilight Saga.
Always needing to read more and to stay with the beloved characters, I was really disappointed that Stephenie Meyer didn't finish Midnight Sun. Surfing the internet, I got the tip to look for a good fanfic finishing the story. So I came here, finding a brilliant version of Midnight Sun and Edward's Eclipse. But the author hadn't done Breaking Dawn, yet. Frustration again. But the disappointment made me ponder the idea of writing it myself. I would never have thought that I'd enjoy venturing into Edward's mind that much. But what is writing good for if no one will ever reads it? So I decided to post my attempt at telling Edward's side of the story here. Unfortunately, althoug I still love the story, I've kind of lost my inspiration for it. I'd still love to finish it some day but I don't want to fool anyone into thinking there would be updates in the near future, because there won't be. But I haven't completely given up on the story.
A few months later, I started writing another story. It's called Puzzle of my Heart, a mostly BPOV, A/H, OOC, story filled with lemons. I just hit the complete button for this one a few weeks ago.
My newest story just started posting. It's called Two Blue Lines and is the story of Bella and Edward struggling through an accidental pregnancy and later parenthood together.
Unfortunately I'm not a natural-speaker of the English language. But, considering that I love it very much and even dream in English sometimes, I hope you will forgive me for a few mistakes I'll inevitably make.
A Dominant & A Gentleman
Growing up with a father in the military was hard on Bella. She made a promise to herself that she would never date or fall for a Marine like her father. That is until she runs into a pair of identical twins that have her reconsidering her rule.
Anthony is shy, extremely polite, and a true gentleman.
Edward appears to be in control and exudes confidence, and has a very dark side.
Will she take the risk or walk away?
A special thank you to Chandrakanta for creating the awesome banner for this story.
And a heartfelt thank you with undying gratitude to my awesome beta LostInPa who has helped with this story from the very first chapter.
I ♥ you hard!
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134473 Read Count: 94271
Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Recruit Training
At least Anthony gets to explore his new relationship.
Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Reassigned
No matter how often I read this it stays heartbreaking. I'm so sad for both of them. I wish I could read on now until there's a conclusion but I know I'll have to wait for that.
Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Marine Blues
I hated this the first time over. But add long as neither of them really knows what they want there's no way around what's coming next. And that after such a perfect morning.
Date: 05 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
I'm so sorry for your loss. I can't begin to imagine how you must feel. I hope we can help you feel better, if only for a little while.
I can't tell you how happy I am that this story is back. I'll read it again now add you update so I'll have it fresh in my mind once the new chapters will be posted;).
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Water Warrior
Who wouldn't be paralyzed if standing between two Edwards. But wouldn't that be great? Although I'm reading this for the second time, I still have to say Edward sounds way more interesting than Anthony does ;).
I can imagine reposting and rereadiRenee must be strange but I'm so glad you're back and trying.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Combat Zone
They look alike and Max sounds alike but Edward's so much more interesting than his twin. Can't edit to reach the point in the story where Bellagives into his advances.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Zero-Dark-Thirty
Poor Anthony. I'm afraid he's not what Bella needs. But Edward sure is. Yay!
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Attention!
Edward could chain me up in his cage any time he wants, lol.
I'm sure it's hard for Anthony to understand his brother's brother's if it's so far from his own. But maybe there's a change he'll eventually get a taste himself ;).
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Camouflage
Oh,so damn sexy. I've never been into slash but that scene with Bella and Bree, damn, that's hot.
Author's Response:
I bet you I could get you hooked on Inveigled by beauty...
Bella, Rosalie and Edward as a threesome...thats just hot... lol
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
I just realized the mistake I made in my review for last chapter. I meant I'm not into femslash of course. My silly brain only ever starts working after I hit send.
Anyway, dammit,Edward's hot. And the little scene on the dance floor ... Wow!
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
Well, Edward in low-hung own jeans must really be a sight to behold. I think is had jumped his bones. Kudos for Bella's control, lol.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Inspection
That manip is damn hot! Anyway, I'm glad I know she isn't really letting him hang. So on to the next chapter.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
There's area definitely since inspiring pics on that site.
Anyway, I love how protective Edward is of Bella. Can't wait for them to actually enter the cave.
Date: 23 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Lean, Mean, Fighting Machine
Dammit! That's one of the hottest scenes I've ever read. I'm all got and bothered now.
Date: 23 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 About Face
I'm not much into male submission but this scene is quite beautiful. Thanks.
Date: 23 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Chain of Command
Edward finely feels a difference. Too bad things can't stay all flowers and rainbows.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
I have to admit I wouldn't have minded Edward leaving the military. I couldn't handle all the separations and fear of my beloved one never coming back. I also understand that it's part of Edward's life and am glad Bella decided she could handle it. Her moving close is a great turn of events.
I'm happy for Anthony and Bree as well, and think it's great he finally connected with his own sexuality.
I'm so thrilled you're going to wrap this story soon, although that means I'll have less updated to look forward to and I'll really miss these four :(.
Date: 14 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Return to Camp Pendleton 2
First, let me tell you how happy I was to see this alert. Just a few day ago, LaPumuckl and I talked about how much we missed this story.
Okay, now on to my actual review. Dammit! Reading this the second time just hurt as much as it did the first time. Since we're about to get to the place where you pulled the story the fusrt time around, I'm excited to see what happens next.
Date: 14 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
Please, please, please, don't make her turn him down again. He basically laid his heart at her feet. She just has to be honest to him now so they can find a way to be together, find a compromise they can both live with.
Please, update soon!