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ok ,i braved this machine and put up my stories, please give them a try.
i am all for team Edward ,but, i do love the cowboy.
MUCH love <3<3<3MHAH
must rec an awesome writer that is WOMBAT, LOVE HER STORY,SO CHECK IT OUT, you will not regret it.
Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89650
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
no,no,no,no,no,nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooo,you are pure evil woman,bring it back,not fair!pppppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzz don't leave us too long,it will be unbearable(?),must.have.jasper.LOL
great cliffy,REALLY,looking forward to what comes next.
bye.c.
Author's Response:
*giggles*I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Thanks for the review!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**
Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.
A dark journey of love, power and death.
All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD
Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.
A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells
hope edward gets bella out safetly,,he still doesn't know about the pregnancy,will he believe bella,that it's his? is charlie going to survive? will kate help out the cullens to get some revenge on the one's who treateg her so badly,
excellent ch,looking forward to the next,.c.
On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.
2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:
way for alice to be more cryptic! starting to react like bella with the whats and the whys,it has to be bella and edward in the end, daddy c and bella is just a little too creepy feeling to me, even if they are both in their 20's, what was that from alice, that they are just friends?huhh, the plot thickens lol.
is charlotte based on the peter and charlotte characters,if so is peter going to make an appearance.?
if something has happened between char and edward, bella has no right to act badly after alll she shacked up with Dr C,not that 2 wrongs make a right.hope teh cullens kick ass in this war and take numbers hee hee hee lol.thanks for an amazing story so far,bye until next time cheryl.
Author's Response:
Charlotte is an original character of my own creation and not based on Jasper's old friends. But Peter and Charlotte might make an appearence in the battle between the Volturi and the Valhallas.
Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
edwards playing a dangerous game,does charlotte know why edward keeps going siberia?or is she just going for ignorance and stupidity? i know there will be the war, but i have to say i have no clue who's on who's side,surely alice has seen where edward keeps going and if aro is constantly tapping into them (visions), then he knows also?
*scratching head and rubbing forehead*it could be my cold but you have left me stumpted,it's brilliant,i have no clue whats happening next,can't wait for your next up-date,excellent,thanks,bye.c.
Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback. Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two? Rated NC-17 for language, lemons. An entry in The Sport of Love contest.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Touchdown
whooooooh,*fans face* now that was hot,yay they finally got down n'dirty,jasper can be such an idiot sometimes,can he say DUH!,,,,any way looking forward to whats to come,excellent chappy,until next time.c.
Author's Response:
Haha Jasper was in his own little world. Silly guy! But that's okay, he made it fun.
Glad you found it hot! :) Thank you! I wanted it to be hot and sweet and fun!
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
omg havent laughed so hard in ages ,,,have tears running down my face, cant. catch.breath.lmao
cant wait for more ,,,,,,keep um coming.c.=P
Author's Response:
:) Love hearing that! An excellent compliment by all means! I'll keep em coming, promise! Thanks for the review ;)
Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men. Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position. Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?
Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series. Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway
lovin it so far,like it when bella puts them in there place.your writng has made me a fan fic junkie,always dying for more,lol.keep it coming... can't wait.
Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.
***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
yep definatly good,loved getting the sneak peak,thank you , again........
i hope it's not bitchtoria that's smashing glass,,,i hope they get to jasper fast,anyway loved the cliffy,can't wait for more,cheryl.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for looking at it! Sorry about the cliffy- it's the POV changes right now that make it necessary!
Thanks again for the help!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
take this is literally the calm before the storm,can't wait to see what happens next,thanks,bye.c.
Author's Response:
You're not wrong! Buckle up, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
sent you a PM,excellent ch.edward back arrogant as ever i see,hope the major sorts him out,hope you up-date soon,bye.cheryl.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the return of Edward! He'll get what he deserves, don't worry! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
it was even better the second time through,hahaha,i don't think you should have any problems,just tell everyone to think of 'braveheart',there isn't alot of slang in it anyway,it's not a robert burns poem,that's hard for even the scottish,including me,PMSL. any way, glad i could help,ready and waiting for more,it was fun,heehheeee, until next time,
BYE ,Team Malcolm(cheryl)
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm getting a total British fix off of you!! PMSL- love it! I should have thought to mention Braveheart- everyone saw that! Thanks a million for all of the help. It was great having him come to life just like I dreamed him up! Glad you had fun doing it!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
brill ch. when is edward going to get a clue? how many times does everyone have tell him no ?, any way looking forward to whats coming next are we going to see the Volturi in this story?
until next time,cheerio,fae cheryl.
Author's Response:
Thanks! We'll see if Edward has a clue once they clean the paster off his head, lol! I haven't entirely decided about the Volturi yet, but if they do show up, it won't be in a major fashion. Thanks for the help!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
what a way to end,excellent story,very surprised with edwards out come,lol, was so sure you would of made bella hand him his ass permanantly,,,not so much of a prude now is he ,,,,lovely,pmsl.
glad to of been of some help with team malcolm, it was a great honour, so thank you again, looking forward to more of your work. c.
Author's Response:
Lol, glad you liked that little twist! My feeling is that any guy who voluntarily remains a virgin for 107 years is just denying what he's into!
Your help is much appreciated- are you game for a whole chapter on Alice and Malcolm? :)
Til next time :)
After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!
AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297697
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up
was it just me or was it strange that alice and rose didn't know that edward was out with the boys,was he with jasper and em or other guys?
i feel sorry for bella,the emotions that go with pregnancy,well damn, i'm surprised my hubby still lives ,lol,i can laugh at it now,but some of the stuff i did was just strange,
hope you can up-date soon,bye .c
Author's Response:
He was with other guys, but that will be brought up in the next chapter!
Thank you for your review! :)
xx
Gelix
Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation. Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago.
Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!
TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34247
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'
this wasn't just a 'little tissue warning'! this was bring a box. OMG very few stories have made me cry but this alternate ending was a massive tear jerker, excellent writing,,looking forward to more of your work...c.
Author's Response:
Sorry my tissue warning wasn't sufficient. I am glad that you liked my story and even my weepy alt ending. I appreciate your review immensely. Thanks so much!
Thank You moonlit_wishes for making this banner for me...I Love it !!!
An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?
This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 6931
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire
went to ff to read, WOW, Evil bella has reached a new level of manipulation,can't wait to find out how jasper reacts to find out that bella still played him ,god i love me some Major, will we get to see more? plz? i'm not beyond begging for the cowboy lol! Bellas not really going to let daddy C / peter die is she will he be able to be turned back to vamp with this new cure he has had?would be sad to see him go , but i suppose its not all vampy sparkles and rainbows.
can't wait for more updates ,cheryl
Author's Response:
I love Carlisle, and Jasper is right on his heels as far as I'm concerned. I love me some major as well :). I just don't know if I could kill either of them off and sleep at night. But I guess we'll have to wait and see how it all turns out in the end. I am writting the next chapter now and it's giving me a hard time. It's more like two chapters so I might need to split it up. I do know I need to get things moving a little faster though. I hope to hear from you again soon. Diane
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Wicked Lies
holy shit,way to go carlisle, punching a wolf in the face(get it),i know not funny anyway,i think he handled that quite calmly,so how long before they change him back? what is going to happen when he finds out jasper is the father? will edward get another chance? or will they just kill/change her?
can't wait for next up-date,excellent ch.,bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
Thank You chedoo your support it means alot to me. LOL...yeah I get it. I figured that Sam knew he had that one coming so there was no need to go all wolfie on Peter. I don't think Peter can handle much more hurt at this point, but you know it has to come. I miss my Carlisle alot though and I am ready for him to come back. So other than that I can't tell ya much more ahead of time...<EG>
I love coffee sweetie so keep it coming. Thanks, Diane
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Goodbye
oh no poor peter/carlisle, will they make in time to turn him back?,,,,,will jasper really protect her,or was he just saying that for the child?, is the true vampire nature about to come out of the cullens?will edward be her knight in shinning armour and save her? you have totally baffled on where you are leading this,,,it's EXCELLENT,obviously there will be a child born but it just leaves a whole lot of what if's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
until next up date .c.
Author's Response:
Um, Coffee...thank you. Yes, I have left many doors open for them to walk through. I love that you share my out look as far as the unexpected twists and turns. I want to keep it interesting so you'll keep reading and giving me reviewa like this one. Oh and the coffee...;p . Take Care chedoo, Diane
Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.
This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!
Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!
This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......
I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never
i have to say this one was really timid,,,,BUT,,,,, i can't wait to see what bella has instore for Tanya,will it be violence or a lesson in modesty,i get the feeling that T might go a little to far with revealing things,,,huhumm,,,, Alice was really mild with her shopping torture and wax torture, what's wrong with her or was this a false one so bella can be ready for slutanya? my god woman,,,,stop giving me straight answer's what happened to your cryptic?your other readers will think you have gone soft PMSL.*laughing* it's not good for your rep .LOL.
can't wait for next ch. is it going to be a long one with everyone in it,,,you are too calm in this chapter, is this for the proverbial shit to hit the fan that's about to happen,thanks again,i'm now bouncing ,waiting for your next up-date,,,think i might of had too much coffe today already,,,going for another,yipee.c.
P.S sorry if none of it makes sense,oh well.c.
Author's Response:
hehehehe yeah it was a little bland but she can't be super woman everyday and frankly I think the family needs a reprieve from the tension hehehehehe... I can't wait to see what B will do to T either it should be fun to write.... lol Nup not gonna answer my lips are sealed.... hehehehehe
Yeah Alice was very sedate That's my fault hehehehehe I sided with Bella I hate shopping.... but just because Bella left the mall with only a few bags that doesn't mean the evil pixie didn't buy out the place... hehehehe just wait til Bella gets home and goes to put on her old clothes...... She is gonna go nuts hehehehehe and yes Alice wants a cool calm bella for Tania so she didn't want to push her toooooo far....
HA your sooooo use to my angst that now your hanging for it...hehehehehe - you will get a little of Charlie a little of Edward and a little of the evil Aro... hehehehehe see I can still be cryptic....
MWAH!!!!!!!!!! see ya on facebook I want pic's
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never
well definatly wanted to scream at all the total fucknuts in this ch. i was literally shouting at the screen ,1 ewww low standards ho2,really mike and tyler yuck !!!! 2 aro and jane, seriously sick people, they definatly need taken out.not in a nice way...3 yay for charlie not feeling so sad anymore, 4 tough luck for Vic not being controlled enough,laughed imagining her stomping her foot and throwing a tantrum,pmsl. really hope they get rid of ho2 she is just going to get worse she has already started going to the dark side,(wrong story ,i know heheheh) so glad B finally told them about wanting to change...... when you finished with marcus,,,,plllleeeaaaasssseeee tell me he isn't going to italy first, and that he is on his way to the cullens?
good ch. ,cant wait for what is to come next year, that is unless you update before sat???!!!!!!,,,,,cheerio,hope you have a great new year.c.
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, I can sooooo totally see you getting all pissy at your computer, I actually smiled a few times as I wrote wondering what kind of a reaction you would give me PMSL you never dissapoint me MWAH!!!! Can't kill Ho2 off just yet I still have some wicked plans for her, but don't worry your pretty self because what I have planned for her later will be worth the wait, sQuEaL I knew everyone would freak ot my cliffie, (hangs head in shame) hahahahaha nah it was sooooo worth it and I'm sooooo not telling whats going to happen next with him... I wish I had the next ch done but it not so you will have to wait until after the New Year, (pout) yeah I know if you didn't have to get on a plane to find me you would be hunting me already PMSL.... Have a great New Year and I will get the next ch done asap just for you!!! MWAH!!!!
I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS!!!!!
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
this story is so cool,how many chapters do you plan and will bella be changed?
Author's Response:
WOW!!!! Thank you for your review.... I have no idea how many chapters it will take to get through this story.... I have so many plot ideas that I haven't touched on yet truly it may never end... *SPOILER Just FOR YOU* I have plans for sequal..... Its titled Always And Forever.... So yes I plan on changing Bella one day...
Big Hugs for the review
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
lovin this story,its good to see a stronger bella, nxt chapter plz, sending luv <3
Author's Response:
HaHeHaHeHa..... loving the love.... Let's hope I hit 17 fast... hehehe I know I'm evil.... I wont' make you beg for too long if I don't hit 17.... Thanks for the review
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
so cool. bellas gonna prove them all wrong, yipee,poor emmet always the test subject,oh well.can't wait for bella to be turned,she will be totally bad ass. thanks can't wait for next chapter.cheryl
Author's Response:
YAY!!! Thanks so much for taking the time to review... I can't wait for bella to be turned either but in the mean time she will still be bad ass..hehehehehe and Em loves it... he finally has a sister he can play with...hehehe
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
wow the suspence is killing me here,i really hope bella kicks some serious but,maybe she will take some of the volturi too.is there going to be a sequel to this story,where they go get renee? plz say yes!i so want to see aro handed his nuts lol,hee hee,great story,sorry to see it coming to an end,thanks, cheryl....bye.
Author's Response:
There will be a sequel eventually... *Spoiler just for you* it will be titled Always and Forever.... but don't worry this story is not over yet...hehehe
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
i can't believe bella is allowing the torture of a shopping trip to keep alice happy ,now that is love for a sister,lol.....lovin and hating these cliffys,it is keeping me at just the right level of frustration for waitng on the next chapter to arrive,you must start demanding from your dedicated readers that they must review,,,only kidding!!!
i know this will sound bad,BUT,i really don't feel bad for renees situation,i know she feels like a bad mom now, but how could she just ignore her daughter when she said she was being abused by physco phil..it's just wrong, i'm a mom and would of castrated him first and asked questions later,,sorry,it's true.
any way sending<3<3<3,hope you get to 30,roughly how many chapters do you see this story being?,always a pleasure reading your work,until next chapter....cheerio,cheryl.
Author's Response:
HUGS & KISSES to you for your review... MWAH!!!!!!!!!
I know what you mean about Renee... and I am in total agreement with you!!! She finally gets it but it maybe too late... if she ever gets out of her situation she will have a lot of making up to do and I pity her if she comes face to face with Esme... hehehe
I really don't know how many chapt to go... there are still sooooo many plots in my head and I am having way too much fun to end this story... I can tell you though that I am planning a sequal titled *Always and Forever* but depending on how this story continues to play out will start either with E & B getting Married or when E bites B.... hehehe
There is still plenty of angst left to come and I know sometimes I am pretty nasty with the cliffys... hehehe but the next chapt is pretty long for my standards because I couldn't bare to keep you all hanging to see James die.... YAY!!!!! for your review... and I am so happy you like my story
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
ok i had to come back in and re do my review,left some things out.First, thankyou for the shout out ,and OMFG what a chapter,it was excellent.but it has lead to a couple of questions,of course.
~When are the volturi showing up?. ~Is vic coming back?.~ will edward and bella get down and dirty before she will be turned? .... I know ,you can't answer as it would spoil the suspence and you wouldn't be able to leave us with these all important cliffys that you love to torture us with so much,oh yeah,excellent one again,not knowing how bellas coping or the gasp was from another vision or more, superb.i have to say its been a while that a story has left me constantly thinking of the what if's, why's and maybe this could happen,as you said before ,even you don't know how long the story will be depending on what plot you follow,and there is always the sequel too.I would love to see bellas reaction to tanya laying the moves on edward that would be so funny.ok maybe i just want to see more of the slightly broken,healing and confident bella ,who just wants to kick some ass.lol.
Again, sending <3<3<3,can't wait for next up-date,cheerio.cheryl
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA!!!! of course you have questions and I will answer if I can.... Volturi is on there way but my lips are sealed as to the outcome of their visit... hehehe.... Vic will come back but not in the near future.... My lips are sealed on E & B but I will say the next 2 chapters are *HOT* (well I think so anyway) hehehehe
SqUeAl!!!! I am bouncing up and down in my seat with a very large smile on my face right now!!!! to hear that you are on the edge of your seat with suspense and are constantly trying to figure out whats about to happen is great... Thanks soooo much for taking the time to review and also for sending my ego to through the roof.... It funny I have had a basic plot since I started writing and I am still following it but as I write, the story kind of take on a life of its own and sometimes it writes its self... strange but true.... Tania will be fun to torture.... hehehehe
hehehe, I wont make you wait very long for my next update to keep an eye out.....
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
you are so,so,so bad but fantabulus at the same time,thanks for the shout out again,glad to stroke your ego,pmsl.lol.any way,you were right this chapter was H.O.T,nothing wrong with a little self lovin,wish we could all have the hightened powers of bella,that would be....*sigh*.... (shakes head)Again, back to the story before i lose myself in my own little fantasy,yet another great ch.good to see some lemony goodness to take away the stress of the day,heeheehee.couldn't stop laughing at how bella and edward affected the house,that was priceless! can't wait to see what you come up with next, so until next time,i sit here waiting,twidling my thumbs.lol,
thank you ,bye for now ,cheryl.
p.s HAVE to give another 10.
Author's Response:
YAY!!!!! hehehehe... I sooooo love your reviews, I read them and start laughing and my husband looks at me like I have lost my mind... hehehe... he sooooo does not get my obsession.... hehehehe... ah but thank good he puts up with it!!!!!! I can't wait for you to read the next ch for EPOV on the whole B personal lovin...hehehe if you thought the chapt you just read was HOT you better start packing your freezer with extra ice because you are sooooo going to need it.....
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
oh poor edward,he must be really stressed now,let him go to the woods ,he needs relief,lol.i have to give you warning now,i am on cold meds so if i don't make much sense then that is my excuse and i am sticking to it!
any way i got ice like you requested and i am now using it for my head,it hurts bad,oh poor me,you got me little worked up with how heavy things were going and suddenly like a cold shower it stopped,are you trying to leave your readers as riled up as edward and bella,it's so not fair,i know i sound like a child,i wish my hubby was home so he could help out,although,i not sure snotty tissues, a red nose and sniffles would be much of a turn on,pmsl.
i love this cliffy you left us with,it didn't even cross my mind to hide the house and everyone in it,although won't jane and the others get a little suspitious with a big blank area to where a road leads and nothing there?
i hope you manage to post soon,good luck with family visiting,cheerio.c.
Author's Response:
I know how bad it suck to be sick... I am just finally rid of my flu... I hope you get better soon!!!! I hope I didn't get you too worked up with out relief, truly it's not all my fault...hehehe I want B & E to do the deed but theu wont let me make them yet... They are both very worked up and I promise that Bella will be the one to slap Edward into submission very soon to work out a compromise to rid bith of their tension... their relationship is more sensual than the other vamps so it will be slow and steamy and wanting....
YAY!!! I am so glad you like the cliffy with the house that plot did worry me a little... my lips are sealed how the Volturi will react....
I will post as soon as I can... Thanks sooooo much for your review you are an AnGeL
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
wwooooohhhhooooo,gimme those others ch., you left us with a nnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooo! .... cliffy,you can't stop there.heehee(love it)
so is bella going through a slow change? or is it really just because of james gift for her hightened sense of smell? is her redirecting due to renata?looked back,can't see if you mentioned her or not so the question may be redundant,sorry?anyway,will victoria see bella hide the house,if she is staying around? i know you won't give me a straight answer,your way too teasing for that,lol,still wanted to ask!!!!!maybe ,i might get lucky!
back to your family visiting, tell them i said thank you!inspiration or maybe boredum(sorry if there really nice)lol,we want more......please,please,please up date soon.
thank you again,awesome ch.sending <3<3<3,bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
hehehehehe..... Nup Bella is still just plain old Bella no change she did just pick up James's gift.... Yup I think it safe to assume that she has Renata's gift... your right I haven't mentioned her yet but Aro never goes anywhere without her!!!!! hehehehe.... HAHAHAHA ok straight answer just for you... NO Victoria didn't see the house vanish but I wish she had that would have been good, too bad I didn't think of it... hehehehe
hehehehe, the ones visiting are nice thats why I said they could come...heheheh... I don't waste my time on my brother he is a tool but my sister is cool... You can thank both my sister and her 20 yr old daughter for my fast fingers hehehehe... I won't let them read the story because it's far to pervy for them but they told me I was mean for teasing you all so much by all the E & B Cockblocking... hehehehe so stay tuned for some real E & B fun!!!!!!
You passed your challenge so I have taken a day off thus meaning at this stage I will post on Friday!!!! heheheh... keep watching... I haven't read all the reviews
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
ohhhh you are so so bad,way to leave us hanging on,pmsl.
firstly *shivers*Aro is one creepy dude,i have to say , i think i threw up a little in my mouth and my stomach is churning right now,thinking of how he intends to treat bella,can you say YUCK!ok i feel a little sorry for renee going through that,but at the same time,i think she was too fast just to give up and become a sex slave if thats what she even is. i'm glad bella didn't act on her feelings of anger with felix and the others, i really hope when she does get revenge that it's degrading and painfull for them. i love how you cliffyed this can't wait to see where this compromise leads to,very excited,hopefully it will be lots of lemony goodness,are they getting a private moment or are the rest of the house going to benefit from what's about to happen?
i am still in shock........thank you for your non cryptic,straight answer about vic,heeeheeehee lol,although it still leaves me with tonnes of questions, of course, it wouldn't be right to review with out them,but i will keep them to myself this time and wait to see what happens next!
thanks again for great ch. hope you up-date soon,bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
hehehehehe.... OK firstly.... Breathe dear one.... hehehehehehehe..... I know i can't believe I gave you a straight answer either that was soooooo unlike me.... hehehe you must have got me on a good day.... Ask as many questions as you like... I may just answer some.... LMAO.... oops sorry I made you slightly ill with Aro but yes he is one sick puppy and he will get what he deserves eventually.... not sure how much torture will be involved but he will cause himself issues with jealousy over Carlisle very soon... that will be his first round of hell as he is sooooo used to getting what he wants..... I think renee only cave because she suddenly freaked out about Bella I say about time for the motherly concern... but I know what you mean....
ooooooohhhhhhh let me just say when I said their would be a fair amount of coming in the next ch.... hehehehehe..... hahahahha... SqUeAl.... it wont all be happening in E & Bs room!!!!!!!!!! shhhhhh don't tell anyone.....
YAY!!!! LOVE YOUR REVIEWS!!!!!!!! BIG MWAH!!!!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
OMG*LAUGHS HISTERICALLY* what have you done to the others in the house*giggles*,it seems that they can't seem to keep up with little bella,pmsl.i am so glad i am alone in my house right now,any one who saw me laughing this hard would have me commited,i started out going to make a coffee ,logged on,saw you had posted and ignored every other one to read this hotness.it got me hot and bothered then you brought in the rest and i haven't laughed so hard in ages,now who is going to try and control e&b if they are like this just with a little playing,i think you are brilliant,and they still haven't finshed yet,,,,,MWAAHHHHMMMWWWWAAAHHH,you are an evil geneious.(sorry if my spelling's bad).
any way, i have calmed down ,slightly,*sniggers*way to leave us hanging for the last couple of days,hope your family visit went well,this was a brilliant chapter,you have me bouncing in anticipation with what is to come next,CAN'T WAIT.
sending so much <3<3<3<3<3<3,until next up-date,bye .c.
Author's Response:
WOW!!!! What can I say you have me speachless right now..... Thank you just doesn't even come anywhere near what I want to say.... hehehehehe I am sooooo doing a pixie happy dance right now and its all because of you... I must say that the original ch didn't have the families POV's but after a few re reads I just couldn't help myself.... I am sooooo stoked you liked!!!!! I was alittle worried that I may get shot because after all that they didn't go all that far but I can't write E any other way... He just isn't the type for wham bam thank you mam... hehehe So all scenes for E & B while she is human anyway will be slow and sensual...
YOU Seriously have made my night and I think I could say that this is probably my best review yet!!!!!!
If I was a lesbian I would be sticking my tongue down yur throat right now... hehehehe MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
HOT DAMN, 3 miles and still strong,PMSL. can't help but see emmet and jasper on their knees when they get back home doing a wayne's world,'WE'RE NOT WORTHY'!, haahhahahahahahha,so glad i could keep you laughing from the last review.......edward has to be the first guy to turn down a girl wanting to return the favour,who knew they would be that freaky on their first compromise *snickers*,to watch each other get off,BRAVO!
*SHOCKED* say it ain't so...you need inspiration!...you lie,i tell you,you lie!,,, LOL.
so will there be more laughs before we go all serious again?maybe a surprise visit from victoria? before we have eleazar arrive are you going tell us whats going on in italy,with creepy ol' aro? bet he is having a bitch fit,maybe a little stamp of the foot,*giggles*,hows charlie doing? see all the questions want to burst out, will keep some for next time.
sending <3<3<3,hoping to keep you laughing,until next up-date,bye.c.
Author's Response:
hahahaha!!!! I may have to see if I can write the we're net worth in hehehe... I'm glad you liked.... and yes you made me laugh again even I need inspiration on occasion... hehehe
no victoria yet.... but Bella will face her hardest task yet!!!! (hehehehe... shopping with Alice) I will be writting Charlie & Jake back in for another ch soon for aan update on them and you will get to here from Aro b4 Eleazar arrives in Fork... See I'm still giving you answers ... shock horror...hehehe
I will post asap
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never
helloooooo,i'm back.heheheehehe,yes you are correct i went and read them straight away,you didn't really give anything away ,with that i am so glad your cryptic is back,this might be the wine talking but ,i'm glad your back to this,it makes it all the more frustrating and exciting whan you leave the CLIFFYS,YAY, i swear i am not drunk, it's only been a bottle,this just made my night cause i have just sat and done 3 hours worth of ironing,i'm sad i know....... any hooooo ,back to the all important questions lol.
did charlie take that a little to calmly?are the cullens going to get a heads up and move before the big bad volturi show up? BTW where is emmet,he has been silent lately,is he up to something? ewwww Aro still creeps me the fuck out! how old is jane anyway? i'm looking forward to T's arrival,liked the idea of torturing with bella's shield(laughed really hard at that,demonically i might add)
Once again thank you for the shout out,?!?!?!? !don't know about the facebook thingys!!!!!! already said about being technologically challenged PMSL,any way loved the ch. i am waiting excitedly on the next to come,sending <3<3<3,ok maybe the wine is starting to talk,heehee,until next time,cheerio.cheryl.
Author's Response:
I knew you would... that's part of the reason I was a little more cryptic with stressedout than normal hehehehehe... Ironing grrr I'm surprised you didn't need 3 bottles hahaha... check your email for the link to see what Bella is wearing or go to my faceboook page.... Yes Charlie may have been a little too calm it might hit him later who can tell... hehehehehe no answers for you today on the volturi but I can't wait to see what Bella gets up to.... you can bet it will be good!!!!
MWAH!!!!
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never
thank you, thank you,thankyou........HOT DAMN! now i need a cold shower or i could stand outside it's cold enough to help me cool down,,,,,,,now this cliffy not so much evil,just highly frustrating*fans face* i gave up smoking a few years ago but think a ciggie is needed to help me calm down... how much of a sweetie is emmet for setting up the meadow,awwwwww.ok soft moment over, lol,
REALLY, really looking forward to next ch. the anticipation has me bouncing and giggling just thinking about what bad ass bella is going to do to tania,i also hope that what ever she does to tania doesn't come back to bite her in the ass ,if she humiliates T enough to get revenge on her she might end up going to the Volturi,also if bella put's T in her place,she might turn more deloustional(?) in her quest to get edward......
SOOOooooooooo, when's the next update gonna be,huh?just alittle clue,ppplllllzzzz,,,,,,,LMAO ...,,,,,,your like me,i got myself a new lap top last year,my hubby hates it cause i am ALWAYS on it,,,just needed to play with my new toy....................Any way ,excellent ch,loved the excitement of it all and the confidence that bellas showing with having the cullens around,as i have already said looking forward to what's coming next,until then,see you through the emails,,, heehee.c.
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!! hehehehehe, you never miss an oppotunity to bring a smile to my face and for that I bow down to you!!!!!! Don't worry I think I smoked enough for bith of us writing that ch and even more while I've been writing the next.... I hope you like TPOV it went in a completely different direction than I thought it would.... but I think it works hehehehe god I hope it does.... Gotta love Emmybear his just soooooo lovable...... I won't keep you bouncing long I am almost finished with the next ch... my lips are sealed on T but I will say she won't be going to volterra, ******stop reading if you don't want a clue*************** I think Bella should be more concerned about herself than Edward... hehehehehe*****************
Thanks <3<3><3<3
You are fantastic as usual.....
MWAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never
OMG,,,,now that is one hell of a cliffy,excellent....well done to bella,glad edward liked that she had him under her shield,,,looks like edward has a little naughty in him too PMSL........think T might be a tad bit pissed heehehehe it was funny how quick she was wanting to join them then want to kill them,don't think she will like the families reaction to everything, oh well,,,,so can we get a wee clue to what else is coming,is it victoria? or the wolves? maybe charlie? the Volturi? or is eleazar here early?...see what you've done to me , all these possibilties,,,only joking........
really looking forwrd to what's coming next,as you can see ,i don't have a clue,heehee until next time.....excellent as always.c.
Author's Response:
hehehehe.... I'm glad you liked the cliffie I was worried I might get death threats hehehehehe.... *shock horror I'm gonna anwser your questions hehehehehe* yes Edward does have a devilish side because of his monster, this would normally be dangerous for a human because all the monster wants is sex and blood but because B & E share a soul his monster has been tamed by her and is able to focus past her blood.... Let me also say things aren't gonna get any less confusing for Tania, and the next week at the Cullen house will be OMG WOW FUCK AWE OH SQUEAL....... hehehehehehe LMAO!!!!! I know you don't really want me to spoil the cliffie so I will only say all your possibilities are wrong and that it is not a bad problem.... well not for B & E anyway....hehehehe MWAH MWAH MWAH as always love heariing from you.... you alway bring a huge smile to my face... Next ch is almost done so I will post it asap....
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never
heeheheheehehee,I LOVE IT........way to go bella,this is so exciting, what an amazing cliffy,T really has no idea what she has let herself get into., this review is short and sweet because you pretty much answered what i was going to ask about what's happening next in your end notes.
anywhooo,love it,<3<3<3,that's the norm. lol, until next update cheerio,c.
Author's Response:
YAY!!!! you know your the only one who doesn't threaten me with violence at every cliffie, hehehehehe.... I'm glad you enjoyed, your right T has no idea, hehehehehe she will find out soon enough. MWAH MAWH MWAH!!!!!!! check out the link I wanna know what you think of the ring
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never
so cool,,,so is marcus going to side with the cullens? how long till we find out about this christopher?,,,see told you once E&B started there was no stopping them heeheeeheelol.has victoria figured out anything about B other than her being human? like how you didn't give anything away in your notes.....and your cliffy ,ace again.... so how fast/quick is T going to notice that she has no chance with E,will she take it the full week?
your amazing as always,,,how's the ego stroking!!!????!!!PMSL........how quick is the ASAP for an update,yes i know i'm impatient,you love me anyway <3<3<3<3,until next time.c.
Author's Response:
About time woman, I've been waiting hours for your review!!!!! hehehehehe.... So glad you found that ch cool, now the question is should I ot should I not answer any of your questions.... hummmmm let me think about that for a minute................................................................................................................................................................................................................. hehehehe you stroked my ego perfectly so I will answer a few...... You will meet Christopher in ch 58... (the great thing about this question was I didn't spoil anything by answering it) hahahahaha.... Victoria knows nothing other than that bella is human and doted over by the strange golden eyed vamps.... (YAY another evasive answer) hehehehe... T's blonde so if things remain the same it could take her forever to figure it out but you never know I may just give her a huge slap in the face to wake her up.... hehehehehe I'm being mean to you now aren't I... but I still love ya!!!! PMSL.... OK I will give you an answer to the Marcus question so if you really don't want to know look away now................ hehehehe.............. Once he witnesses the natural unbreakable bonds of the whole family and especially E & B he will want to bow down to them all for bring him back to life, they say love is the strongest power so just think about how strong Marcus may become once he soaks them all up... hehehehe.... MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!! as always you bring a huge smile to my face, I so love to tease you....
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never
hahahahaha,,,,who knew edward had it in him,,,what a tease,YOU have taught him well grasshopper,PMSL.so did T get into bella's dream there or was she really just dreaming about edward?.......look's like the fun and games have just started,edward seems to be very willing to take part where bella's concerned.hahahaha!
as for taking so long to review,i turned traitor for the day and went to that other site to get a cowboy fix, sorry to keep you waiting,,i know how much you miss me LOL,,, as always you have left me stumpted!!???!?!?!?! thank you for the avasive yet answered questions,,glad to see you still have the cryptic with you,heeeheee,i'm really looking forward to how these games will play out with E,B & T,,,,,,,
sending <3<3<3<3,,,,are we gonna get a quick up date again,,i will beg if i have to ,i hear bribery works well too, although i don't know what i could give,how about coffee! even though i give it every time,,here you go..........until next time .c.
Author's Response:
I know isn't he amazing, I want him!!!!!! LMAO (love your grasshopper remark sooooo funny) hummmmm do you really want to know if T got into B's dream well I will leave that answer up to you, if you really want to know read my response to kittyisme0341 review for your answer, hehehehehe.... TELL ME what cowboy story are you reading, you can only be referring to Jasper here & I'm curious cause I sooooo love him.... hehehehe I thought you would get a huge kick out of my last response, you know I'm always happy to drive you crazy hehehehehe. NO begging nor bribery will work on me this time hehehehhe, but I will take the coffee anyway hehehehehe. I won't make you wait toooooooo long but I am just reworking a few things hehehehehe
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
WOW,i'm speechless...........................uummmmmmm, can't think!!!!!!!
Amazing ch. don't think i can form questions right now, so shocked at everything that was in this one,loved getting the alice and jasper POV,it was good to see the families worries about bella,really astounded that you made T into the self sacrificing type, or was that a ruse?,,,see first question,yay,brain is coming back on line, are edward and bella heading for a break down with all the stress? take it this is return of christopher and maybe vic?....see i was paying attention......can't get the image of a naked cowboy out of my head* sigh* if only, PMSL.
ABSOLUTLY LOVED THE CLIFFY, just thought i would let you know,LOL,before you get the replys of being evil,,,,,,
as always sending<3<3<3 for ya! i'm going back to writing my own,heheehe, until next up date.c.mwah back.
Author's Response:
YAY!!!!! speechless hey wow that's pretty cool!!!!! Yup I didn't see that coming from T until after my little fingers started typing hehehehehe, don't think it was a ruse but don't expect her to give up she still wants to fuck em both hehehehehe glad you liked the A & J stuff that was quite funn to write, NAH no breakdown yet, B will get it together in the next ch but she won't be the same innocent girl.... LMAO yes you were paing attention, no vic yet just her friend... see I'm still giving you answeres did you faint yet HAHAHAHAHAHA * I so should have had Em throw Jaz a cowboy hat to cover his bits hahahahah that would have been golden (sigh) too late now.... MWAH for loving my cliffy, I think you may be a little wierd because you always love the suspense of a cliffy I know when I read some of my fav's I HATE CLIFFIES!!!! hahahahahaha ah well I'm not complaining because you didn't threaten to get on a plane and hunt me down, I have to say that those reactions crack me up so in the end I can't be hating on the other writers when they do it to me hehehehehhe....
WHEN ARE YOU POSTING YOUR NEXT CH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
once again wombat you have out done yourself,left us hanging and wanting more,shame on you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,you know i'm only jolking,heehehehehe.
have to say what an emotional roller coaster for bella, was shocked how you left it open for tania to use her gift on edward, will they go ahead with it? and will bella and edward be able to get past it? it will be near impossible to go through ,for the pair, as they are so bonded to one another, really looking forward to see how this plays out.
thanks for the shout out,no.3 is on it's way might be short like 2 or just might make it big and finish,lol.
excellent ch. until next up date ,<3<3<3.c.
Author's Response:
YAY!!!! ok not responding to this one beacuse I know you have already read the next ch so I will respond to that review MWAH
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
yay for edward and bella,still don't like tania! never had any feelings for how she was may be hurting,,,,,,,excellent ch. again,your right it was a nice surprise having another update so soon. i so can't wait for bad ass bella to kick some Aro butt,i hope she makes him suffer,,,,alot. so is eleazar going to show up during the family meeting or are we going to have some trouble from vic,,,,i feel sorry for anyone who steps in the way of bella,she has finally realised her power as a good thing and something she can control.
once again your writing astounds me, i still drop all other stories to get to yours first and i have over 160 on alert,lol.well until next time sending the norm,<3<3<3<3,.c.
Author's Response:
hehehehehe, (pout) I can't believe I couldn't sway you on T.... oh well that's ok because she is and always will be a ho so there is still stack of fun to be had, I didn't respond to any reviews because I figured you would all prefer me to update after that cliffy and I was feeling kind hehehehehe, not sure how things are going to play out next I started writing the next ch but I go a little out of control with some E & B yummyness that now doesn't seem to apropiate so I am gonna have to post pone that for a ch or two or tone it down at the very least heheheheheh but you can be assured things wont slow down to much from here on, Aro has big plans and I still have a few tricks up my sleeve... OMG do you really drop everything else for my updates thats just WOW so cool, MWAH I thank you my lovely!!!!! OK gotta go and write or you will never get the next ch
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
I WANT MORE, MORE, MORE, yay that was one hell of a ch. and very well done......so, take it the family meeting continues next ch, wonder how the family will take her and jakes conversation? so when are we gonna hear wedding bells? will there be a bella pregnancy in this story,after the wedding night? can't wait to find out all of bellas gifts when eleazar turns up or will it be classed as just one gift being a shield?
laughed like a crazy woman, with the prank on em,what a shame NOT,pmsl.would love to see more laughs with em...
yes i really do drop all to get to your story up dates! BET I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE, did it again tonight,with a bottle of wine,of course lol, really wasn't swayed with T,sorry it's true, i knew she was an EVIL HO!LMAO,,,,,,,been back and forth from the hospital to see my sister shes not well after having my 2nd nephew but hopefully getting home soon.
Can't wait for more,until next time,<3<3<3, can't go without sending the <3 lol,cheerio.c.
p.s try out AKIRA23, guardian angel!, it's a brill story, just thought i'd let you know,bye again.
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA You greedy little minx!!!! see this is what happens when you get excited and end up posting early and having a huge ch, my lovely loyal readers that I couldn't live without get GREEDY!!!! MWAH I still love you though hehehehe. OMG and then said lovely loyal reader goes crazy with questions HA well my lips are sealed >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>NO NOT TELLING>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Ok I will answer one hehehehehe, the answer is NO!!!! Now you just have to figure out which question I'm answering.>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Sorry I will stop being mean to you now, Master Jasper has punished me thoroughly for being evil.. There is a little more of the meeting to go but not much, Bella won't be telling them about her talk with Jake yet.... No idea about the wedding HAHAHA & Not sure what Eleazar will or will not be able to figure out about B's gifts, I will say thought that he will drop a bombshell at some point!!!! (sigh) so did you figure out what question the no was for???? heheheh I'm glad you liked the Em prank I still don't know what made my fingers start typing that, I think I needed to lighten things up a little because the bath scene wasn't meant to contain anything serious but then my fingers typed and it got serious oh well hehehehehe ..... SQUEAL!!! It's just so strange for me to know that people are really hanging out for my updates, I mean I do that with some of my favs but their great writers and great stories and I know my writing has come along way but its still WOW... hehehehe... *POUT* OK OK I get it you don;t like T but I've still got something up my sleeve later that may change your mind hehehehehe... OMG I hope your sister and the baby are ok and that they get home soon, that's awful!!!!
Thanks for reviewing as usual you are beautiful!!!!
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
go esme ,horny bitch,lmao. i have a funny feeling that irina is gonna be bad news for E&B and that T will put irina in her place ,it still won't make me change my mind on the uberslut,sorry,but only guessing...maybe bella should send a lightning bolt up their asses,lol......woooooohhhhoooooo you got marcus to change his ways,veggie seriously!!!???? so how long until everyone turns up on the Cullens door step? charlie,eleazar,marcus, the pack,victoria , the volturi? did i miss anyone,(classing mom from hell in with the volturi) oh yeah peter and char,if they turn up?
there are just too many questions for me to put down here, my mind is a total clusterfuck,,,,,soooooo thank you very much,,,only kidding,heehehehehehehe,thats down to my daughter who is now away out with her aunty kerry to give me peace,,,,who the fuck invented teacher training days any way and giving 2 just before the weekend,,,,they have not long had 2weeks off,,,,sorry rant over. im just stuck with disney channel and icarly for 2 whole days,Not happy!can you tell,lmao.
as always your story and imagination have led mine to go nuts,,,, excellent chapter,can't help but get the feeling that your trying to finish, ok wrong word,wind down maybe!?!?! this and leave us with the biggest, almighty cliffy that will have us all screaming at our screens, i will laugh so hard when that happens,wonder how many threats of flights out there you will recieve to make you get on with the sequel......hahahahaha!
sending <3<3<3, looking forward to whats next.cheerio.c.
Author's Response:
hello dear lady, OMG you have no idea how hard it was to write that sex scene, I'm gonna have to work so hard to get Esme and Carlisle to the slightly kinky shit I have been seeing in my head for months hehehehehe that was almost like writing about my parents *GAG SO NOT RIGHT* heheheheheh I may be willing to confirm you funny feeling where Irina is concerned hehehehehe.... *COUGH - SPLUTTER- CACKLE* OMG Uberslut did you seriously just go there LMAO that's just hilarious but a lighning bolt up their asses fuck girl your killing me right now.... hahahahaha I don't think the veggie Marcus will be permanent but he does put a higher value on human life than a normal vamp so who knows hehehehee... slow down slow down one question at a time, I can totally see you bouncing up and down on your seat squealling questions hahahahaha.... I'm not too sure when everyone will arrive, I can tell you that Eleazar will arrive in the next ch but know idea on the rest, except victoria that show down is quite a way off.... I'm soooo loving that I can screw with your head it brings me such joy HAHAHA... By the sounds of it I posted at the exact moment you needed a reprieve from the real world hehehehehe, I'm glad I could be of assistance MWAH. OH no my dear lady sooooo nowhere near the end I have way to many things to write hahahahaha I will jump to a sequal but it won't matter because I have no intention of having a break between them but I can promise this story is far from ever being finished, maybe I should have called it the never ending story!!! I will say that yes there will be a cliffy between the last ch of this story and the start of the sequal but I won't keep you hanging... I would sooo totally love like 50 screaming reviews all with evil nasty threats of bodily harm hahahahahahah... MWAH till next time angel girl
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
wow, what an emotional one for bella again, glad to see that she has finally realised that she needs to talk things through with everyone. Irina is going to be a total bitch, i can just see it,,,just had a thought,,,it would be so funny if no.1 ho! imprinted on someone from the pack,although i don't know if i would be so cruel to the member of the pack,it would defo NOT be jake, i think i might actually like him just a little bit! ???? hows it going for jake?, has he told anyone yet about allowing bella to change/how long until we find out?
so happy when i saw this today,my internet has been acting up all morning, i just hope i get to finish reading my other up dates too, as for stories to read just go into my profile, all my favs are there unfortunatly all the completed ones i have read are no longer on it,,,just the ones i am reading now(over 170) i iknow,' i have a problem' there i said it,lol.
hope you can up date soon, really looking forward to what you've got coming for everyone,soooooooo,,,,who/whats next? i know impossible to answer without giving it away, so, maybe i should ask ,is eleazar next to visit? or are the the slut sisters about to pop back up first?will bella get to use that lightning bolt i asked for in my last review?pmsl, or will it be the WPOV on the bella situation? or maybe its time to tell charlie she said yes!??? bet alice is chomping at the bit to start planning or she has probably already started the wedding!? i know this is a long assed review, i have the jumbled mess that is my mind to work through,LMAO.
waiting patiently,yeah right!!!, for next up date, until then,<3<3<3,.c.
Author's Response:
hello dear one!!!! MWAH!!!! Very emotional for Bella that one because she is always thinking about everyone before herself, it would kill her if she hurt one of them and with all that power if she can't find a way to control herself after her change it could be a disaster.... OMG Irina is totally a bitch ho hehehehe I don't think I could be so cruel to any of the pack and inflect them with her as an imprint thats just nasty but amusing to think about.... Well at least I was able to get you to like Jake even though you won't submit to liking Tania hahahahaha, Jake has only told Billy at this point, honestly the Elders and the Pack won't have any say in the matter Jake is the rightful Alpha so what he say is pretty much law.... lol, yeah you do have a problem but don't we all hehehehe, this ch took so long because my hubby finally cracked it over my obsession, it almost killed me not to read or write anything for 5 days, but I think I appeased him (for now) lol... I'm pretty sure you will get Eleazar in the next ch, maybe a little POV from either Tania or Irina, I can't be sure until my fingers hit the keyboard... hahahahaha I will do my bestest to do something just for you with the lighning bolt, no wedding yet, my chapt are kind of only like a day ar half a day in there life so its a little ways off yet, LOVE LOVE LOVE your jumbled brain it gives me such pleasure.... And Yeah I know your patiently means not patient at all PMSL!!!! MWAH MWAH MWAH.... oh did you listen to the song?????
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
OMG, holy shit, un-fucking-believable,woman you know i love your cliffys but after i have calmed down from squeeling and screaming at my laptop i am able to actually write this,,,,,,, you are very brave and it also helps that nobody knows your actual address that you are safe from death threats and such like,,,I LOVED IT , hee ehehehehe, im slightly hysterical,but that has to one of your best ch.'s yet, YEP, i definatly said it.
i love how everything seems to be coming together,a big awwwww to the family with there reassurance to bella that she will be more than able to handle the change. A big BOOHOO to the slut buckets know as the dumb blondes that are T & Irina,seriously, how can T still be that bad , so her gift didnt work on E&B ,you would think of decades of trying and still not getting anywhere with E that she would give up and take a hint,DUH!anyway the other one needs something done about hers serious case of PMS that she constantly seems to carry around with her, was she changed on her time of the month?lol it would explain so much,pmsl. Eleazar's reactions to bella gifts had me laughing,holy mother of god indeed,pmsl.
i know i said things are coming together, but as always you have so many things left WIDE open and i can't wait for more,,,,,thanks for that shoutout,im glad that i can keep you writing along with others.
again,<3<3<3<3 and coffee, plz don't leave us hanging to long, until next time.c.
Author's Response:
WHOA woman take a deep breath I can't have you passing out on me, hehehehehe, OMG you're super awesome for my ego and I get such a kick out of reading your thoughts, even when they are a million miles a second and I can tell that you are bouncing up and down as you type.... Seriously you think that was my best ch yet, wow that is saying something, you blow my mind, PMSL at your threats and you are right if I had to put my address up to post this I would probably not be sooooo unkind hehehehehe, I think the mean gene may just run in my blood because I didn't think it was that much of a cliffy myself hehehehehe but I guess because I have an inkling of what's going to happen it didn't seem soooo shocking... hehehehehe Love to AWEEEE for the family chat, and once again PMSL with your BOOHOO, (slut buckets HA that's gold) OMG how funny are you, perm PMS that's a perfect description.,... ok I better go and get typing before you find me, board a plane and come torture me for the next update... hehehehe, I will post as soon as it is done, I hope it doesn't take too long, sux to be you right now having to wait.... LMAO... MWAH MWAH MWAH
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never
OMG,* laughing hysterically*,now the was hot, take it la push and forks end up with a' baby boom' cause that many vamps amping up bellas projection would turn the state of washington into a bunch of horny teenagers,omg total over kill on teenage pregnances,pmsl. still think it funny about eli's reaction!!!!!,, hahahaha ho no. 1 thought that was mild, really looking forward to bellas night time play*sniggers*,wonder what she will do next,hummmm!??? .....never knew daddy c had it in him to curse so much,,,,,again ewwwww with the parental sexcapades!!! i have already had a life altering experience myself,,,that i don't want to think of ever again*shudders*YUCK,HEEBEEJEEBEES.
thats is now a full week of being snowed in ,love that i have my computer for company at times like this,heehehehehe, daughter is still off school,booo.
anyway,excellent ch.so happy bella can blow everyones mind,lol.looking forward to lotsand lots more,if you want snow you are more than welcome to visit,although major airports have been closed,hahaha,plus its one hell of a long flight, again MERRY XMAS,until next time cheerio.c.
Author's Response:
HA I was actually saving the baby boom for the honeymoon *snort* PMSL.... I'm wondering if you had tears while you were laughing, or maybe if you did they were just left over froom the fact that your still snowed in OMFG I can't believe that... poor girl, but I'm glad I could break up your day with a little yum yum hehehehehehe, *gigglesnort* I still love your references to the ho's never fails to crack me up... I sooooo don't want to know what said life altering experience was... *giggle gag* PMSL... sQuEal YAY thank god they closed the airport *chuckle* now you can't hunt me down if I keep you hanging HAHAHAHAHA!!!! Now to your question... *raises eyebrow and pokes tongue out* Soooooo not telling what going to happen but I will say it will be a night on the town that no-one will forget in a hurry.... hehehehehehe....
OH and WARNING to you miss I read everyones reviews.... if you don't want your curiosity peaked and maybe a few too many OMFG I soooooo didn't see that coming.... stay away this week.... hehehehehe.... your choice.... MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never
nice! easy ch. it was good to see everyone relax ,go out and enjoy themselves,,,,why is it that no matter how bad the singers are at karaoke you still have a brilliant time? glad that edward was able to catch ho1&2 on there real thoughts and to keep an eye on them,,,,think ho1 needs a trip to the loony bin,she is starting to sound deranged with what she keeps thinking about e&b ,i said it once and will say it again.......DUH, NOT INTERESTED!!!!!!
looking forward to where the rest of the night will take them,lol,hope you can update soon,<3<3<3, until next time.c.
p.s school went back tues ,YAY,but we still have loads of snow,,,,,,,
Author's Response:
I was a little worried about this chapt, I guess I am used to having more drama and that fact that it was very sedate cause me angst hehehehehe I will just have to make it up to myself in the next chapt PMSL You are soooooooo right about the Karaoke, hehehehehe but I need several drinks in me before I can subject my terrible voice on anyone but by the time I'm pissed enough I let go and don't give a shit hehehehe.... I'm sooooo glad to hear that school went back OMG what will you do with yourself hehehehehehe, I soooooooo love your Ho talk it never fails to crack me up you are my shining light !!!!!! MWAH!!! I will try my very hardest to churn out a chapt before xmas but in case I don't BE SAFE & HAVE A AWSOME XMAS WITH YOUR FAMILY!!!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never
its good to have you back and what a way to come back,excellent cliffy,cant wait to find out what happens when marcus arrives
cant wait for more.c.
Author's Response:
YAY< SQUEAL!!!!!! OH you were soooooooo patient with me too hehehehehe, I hope your New Year was wonderful? mine was great and I have read soooooo much.... OMG I was obsessive and I'm still going hehehehehee, I'm bouncing up and down I'm sooooo happy you liked that ch, I was worried about the baseball cause I know NOTHING about baseball so I just tried to keep it fun hehehehehe..... MWAH MWAH MWAH
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Never Say Never
hope your move goes ok,if i was in the same country i would offer my help but being on the other side of the world,it may be a wee bit hard ,pmsl,again good luck with that.
ok the story........WOW so im guessing the bella now has the power of either a sucubas or a goddess? im hoping that its not gonna cause problems B &E but seeing as you all about the angst and drama ,of course it will Or maybe you will really kind to the pair and make it so it's stronger than imprinting type of thing and it makes there bond more unbreakable from any one they already have? any whooooooooo ,how long till marcus gets there? im really hoping with this new power of bellas that she is gonna give him a major power boost ,an aura high?!?!!?!?, enough that he goes back to italy and helps bella kick some psyco sick aro ass hee heehehehe , that would be a great read.
once again excellent ch. looking to when you can update next,we loyal readers dont mind waiting,again good luck with your move,happy unpacking,lol<3<3<3.c.
New banner by Julie C.
Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths. She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.
AH. Canon Couples.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282980
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
awwww,thats it, no stopping them now lol.
great story,can't wait for more,would love to know what miss alice is hiding,when are we going to find out?
again,thanks for great story,i so want more,bye.c.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
yey,for the up and coming alice info.
loved the ch. nothing worse than a big bro having the sex talk with his sister,feel so sorry for bella.
look forward to next up-date,bye .c.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
c'mon,has no one realised that mallory's have had nothing happen to them(hardly).....if this is their way to get the railroad through that way ,are they trying to bankrupt emmet,thought they needed there buisness to get them there, they are needing to sort out the volturi bro's and mallory's men,james etc..... can't wait to see what happens next..bye.c.
Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58242
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
lovin this story,its very emotional and has had me crying buckets of tears,you are an excellent writer, ithink this of all your stories. keep up the good work, i think i should start buying shares in kleenex,lol.can't wait for next up date, thanks, cheryl
Author's Response:
Thank you. I put alot of emotions in to my stuff.
Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129662
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
awww,what an amazing gift from madame,didn't need to cry for this one,although it was sad what was happening it was leaving good memories for bella,always a plus to have something happy to look back on when your sad.
great chapter,can't wait to see how the auditions go!hopefully things will start looking up ? hope you up-date soon,thanks,bye.c.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
you are a meaney: ) but a fantastic one,oooohhhhh the auditions are next, i can't wait to see how it goes looking forward to next up-date, you got this out really fast,thank you,bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
I am mean but the next chapter will be up tomorrow:)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
no,no,no,stop doing that,i'm glad you up date fast i so want to know who's going where,pleeeaaaassssseeee up date soon again,bye .c.
Author's Response:
lol, I am a tease:) Next chapter will be up tomorrow. Only a few left:)
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
ok it might be the wine talking,but OMG, the tears came full force i think i am overly emotional,due to the fact that 2 of your stories are ending, any way, sorry to see this ending soon too,can't wait too see what else you come up with next, will keep my eyes peeled, thanks again you are a great author. bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I cried so much during this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I cried so much during this chapter!
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238921
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
lovin the suspence of this ch. this might be stupid but bella is able to be turned isn't she,love this story,keep up the good work,until next update,c.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm happy you liked!
No not stupid at all, I love q's. And yes, Bell will be able to be turned, but she'll be a hybrid. She'll be able to live for the rest of eternity with Edward but you'll find out in future chapters the diffferences between half-vamps and vamps. But Aro doesn't allow vamps to turn humans into hybrids, it's a strict law punishable by death. And you'll find that out later on too.
Thanks for reading and commenting =)
Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79104
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
love this story,i was laughing so hard when she told the guys about steve,bella being confident is refreshing it strange seeing rose so vunrable(sorry for my spelling, but you get it).looking forward to the photo shoot with jake, can't help the feeling that he is going to be the obnoxious type/ladies man or maybe even gay seeing as hes such a sex symbol,maybe bella will lay down more attitude, looking forward to next update. cheryl
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
woo hoo ,way to go jasper,i think alice will say yes,wonder how the rest of the group will react to bella and edwards news too,take it em is moving to san fran to be with rose and vic and leah will to?
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
get them past the few weeks fast please,i cried at all the goodbyes,i'm full of the cold to, it's more tissues gone from my reserve,lol.
great story,up-date soon plz,thanks,bye.c.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
aawww how sweet and romantic ,a fuck fest, i couldn't of said it better myself.look at emmett getting all depressed and lonely too,how are they going to manage the proper wait for moving to san fran and not just a couple of days(if my timings right).oh well will just have to wait and see,waiting for next update,thanks for another awesome ch.,bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
yay i knew they wouldn't be able to go through with leaving each other,thank god for the fairy godmother's that are james and leah,with the help of their partners of course,great ch. sad to see it nearly coming to an end:(
thanks again for an amazing story,bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
please tell me there is still the epi? , have to say this has been a fab story to read and it's a shame that it has to end, i look forward to future stories ,the new ones i have already added to fav's.thanks.c.
Author's Response:
Thats it but I am mulling over the idea for either a sequeal or a one-shot to go with it. Just haven't decided yet.
Banner by: edwards_girl_1918... Author & Co-Author of some great Fics... check ´em out!!!
4yrs After leaving Forks Bella is ready to face the past. Faithful to her true love she sacrificed her happiness for his future. Now she s returning to Seatle in hopes to soon practice law. He`s moved on sort of, but can Edward forgive Bella´ s secret or is it to late for their ´Happily Ever After´ rated for languge and very lemony lemons!!!!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44252 Read Count: 6166
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: What the.... Didn´t See that Coming
holy shit,omfg,i can't believe that happened,you can't leave us hanging us on,more please,please,please,any way cool so far
Author's Response:
thanks for the review... I´m working on it.. done wanna leave you hanging on to long!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?
Dark Edward.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80456
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
i think micheal might be there to help,turn up at the last minute,save the day,or the police barge in and arrest edward cause jess turns up.......my imagination doesn't know where to stop.lol.OR the good samaritan could of contacted the police about his behaviour outside the shop??!?!?!!!!
any way excellent ch.,looking forward to next update.c.
28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61889
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
i love your story so far hopefully bella isn't too messed up after what went down with james. Jacob may be a little too mike ish with his lost puppy routine,heres hopeing he stays far from bella and doesn't take a stalker's look on things happening in bellas private life,,can't wait to see what happens at the reunion,,i bet there will be a few slacked jaws when these two walk in,YAY.! Will there be scankerellas trying to get their claws into our poor edward?don't won't want to know to much obviously,really can't wait for next up-date,thanks, bye .cheryl.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delay in replying to your lovely Review. Jacob is annoying isn't he? But don't worry, although he is a bit like a puppy, he's only looking out for Bella. He is aware of the WHOLE situation with James and has been a wonderful support for Bella, as you will discover in future chapters. But I don't want to give anything more away. He will be trying to get her though because he honestly does have feelings for her. My Bella isn't as dumb as SM's in Eclipse though, because after all, there IS no choice between Edward and Jacob.
Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm glad you are enjoying my story.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
such a strong ch.cried all the way through,excellent job,heart felt saddness for any one who has lost a child this way.
until next time,
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
that was brill,i will join you in how nice edward is* sigh*,can't wait for next up-date
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
hope edward puts tanya in her place,think kate's got something to do with it too,hope he can get home to bella when he said,i think the sister's are going to try and stop him,,,,, they are nothing but trouble.
excellent ch. looking forward to next up date.c.
Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C
Banner By: Rachel MS
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28910
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
have to say great start,way to leave a cliffy,so...did bella cut her self when she fell?way to meet a family of vamps! i love jasper /bella story,will defo be adding to favs,
i want more please ,lol.c.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. How would you feel if some of Chapter 5 was from Jasper’s POV? Well, some of it is. So here you go. It’s written, in the way a Southern man would talk. I hope I get it right. Enjoy! Chapter 5 Sneak Peek (JPOV) Yes, she is My Isabella. She has been since the moment she was born. I’ve waited so long to be with her. And now she’s here, she’s freakin’ out, and I know she’s gonna run for the hills at any moment to get away from me. I just knew this was gonna happen. Fuck, I hate this shit. “Jasper she will be awake in four minutes, and fifty-six seconds. Just calm down please.” said the little pixie. She can be calm. She’d spent the whole morning with my girl. Getting to know her. Being able to laugh and joke with her. I felt Alice’s emotions when she came back to the house. She was projecting nothing but amusement and confidence. Well, at least someone in the family thinks that this is gonna work alright. Alice, damn lil pixie know-it-all. Thanks again!! Hugs~Izzy
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
so cool,keeping silent as requested,you are evil,lol.
so,where is renee?,can't wait for more.
thanks,c.
Author's Response:
Thank You for your review of Chapter 5. I know that for every question answered to THaTH, that two more pop-up. I thought that’s what a good story does. It draws you in, and always leaves you wondering what’s next. The next chapter will be out on Monday. Thanks for Your Review Here’s you Sneak Peek of Chapter 6. Enjoy! “Did you try her cell number? You know Renee, she most likely just forgot to pay her bill. There’s no need to be getting yourself so upset over this Bells. I’d bet my next paycheck that she’s just being her normal Renee-self.” Said Charlie. I could hear the wind in the phone. He must have already been on the road when I called him. Good, that means I can get home faster. I thought. ~Hugs~ Izzy
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
ok my head hurts for poor bella and everything that she has to think about,,,,sssooooooooo are we going to see a j/b baby,could bella still be changed into a mix of elf/vamp?is she able to have kids after she is to take over as an elf?
fab ch. can't wait for more,bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
I guess all of your questions will be answered in time... LOL I know I'm Evil! Sorry. Hugs~Izzy ;)
Thank You for your review of Chapter 10. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 11. Just so you know ahead of time. Chapter 11 is HUGE. I talking nearly 13,500 words. Almost triple my usual chapter size. 27 pages on Microsoft Word in 12 font. HUGE CHAPTER! Oh ya, it also holds a LEMON!!! Love those. Anyways, don‘t get use to my chapters being this long! Hugs~Izzy _________________________________________________________ Chapter 11 (BPOV) Then the full realization of my new revelation hit me. Jasper’s eyes grew wide while I was thinking. His face broke into the an absolutely gorgeous smile. Without saying any words, he knew. Then without warning, he projected his feelings back to me. It was the most euphoric feeling that I’ve ever experienced. Hugs~Izzy
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
excellent ch. as always,can't believe charlie get's to become a vamp before bella,looking forward to what's to come,,,,,,,hop you update soon.c.
Author's Response:
YEP, Charlie is first. Bella needs to learn control of her Elf crap, before taking on the vampire crap too.
Thank You for your review of Chapter 17. I love that Chappie. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 18.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 18
(JPOV)
Carlisle walks up to the front door as an old pickup truck comes into view. I see Billy Black in the passenger seat, and Harry Clearwater is drivin’. As they get out of the truck and Harry gets Billy’s wheelchair outta the back, nine wolves come to stand behind their leaders.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
aaawwwww,they are so cute,you were right that was one hell of a ch.excellent job once again,,,,,ok ,so ,some of my questions have been answered but i have new ones is renee in trouble?is she going to bring it to forks?in what order will bella be changed,full elf then vamp or vice versa?
for your first lemon ,have to say, you did very good,can't wait for future lemons,heeehee,hope for an up-date soon.bye.c.
Author's Response:
Renee is a crazy lady, and is she in trouble? ummm....Let me see? ;) LOL
Bella has already started the Arising Process. So I'd say Elf first then Vampire. I mean unless something goes complete wrong with her Arising. I know I'm Evil. You'll see I promise! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for review from Chapter 11. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 12.
Hugs~Izzy
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Chapter 12
(BPOV)
“What’s there to work out this better not be over my mark. Peter told me that the wolves bit there imprints so this wasn’t going to be a big deal.” I said scared about what this could mean.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
EVIL,EVil.evil,excellent cliffy, :),really hope you update soon, i'm sitting bouncing,waiting for what's gonna happen next,bye............c.
Author's Response:
I am so sorry about the Cliffie....cough...NOT!!!! LMAO I'm running and hiding now! Hugs~Izzy
Thank You for your review of Chapter 12. It’s starting! L Your words are keeping me writing, and giving me the motivation to try and write at couple of chapters a week. I hope that you’re enjoying THaTH.
Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 13. Hugs~Izzy
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Chapter 13(JPOV)
Why do the elves have to be so secretive if we’d a clue about this Arising shit? I could at least kick the lil fucker out of the house if I knew more, as it is he and his daughter ain’t moved a muscle yet. That could be the horse sized wolf breathin’ down their necks. Maybe those foul smellin’ things will come in handy after all.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
noooooo,another evil cliffy*pouts*no fair ,PMSL, only joking,excellent ch., what an unreal connection between jasper and bella,looks like everyone is catching the love bug,heeeehhehhe........so when do we find out about where 'hippy bitch' has been? when bella's 'arising' has finished who's first to get on bella's bad book?
anyway,already said but will do it again,,,,,excellent ch.,dying to know what happens next,,,,pppppppllllllleeeeeeaaaaaassssssseeeeeeee!,,,,,,see not ashamed to beg,lol,bye for now.c.
Author's Response:
You know that Jasper really loves it when a girl begs right? LMFAO i'm so sorry about the another cliffie. i just couldn't find a better way to make the chapter stop. i have so many idea's running throught my head as i write that just wont fit inside of one chapter, that i have to stop writing to put them down on paper somewhere. if i dont stop, then i lose them completely.
anywho, your answers are coming and soon! i'd say within the next two or three chapters. i have some major decisions to make about the book itself. like i am trying to figure out if i should write the whole story in one book or break it up into two. i am thinking two, but it will depend on how it writes itself out. so well have to wait and see.
Sorry i got so long winded Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chapter 13. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 14. Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 14
JPOV
Next fuckin’ thing I know the lil fucker’s up here and in my girl’s room. He’s runnin’ away from a girl vampire like the true pussy he really is. He must’ve pushed his way past Irina to get his sorry no good fuckin’ elfin ass up here.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
i don't mind that the major likes it when i beg,,,,LMAO,i will do it any time if it will get another update,,not ashamed,pmsl,,,,,,anyway,can someone smack the selfish cow that calls herself 'mom' aka renee,could she honestly be any more annoying ,it's all about what her and phil need, not what she could of done for bella,i really could not have seen myself at 10 being able to run a house and it's finance's, have a feeling it will get worse when phil turns up,ok i think renee will be first on bella's shit list followed by phil,just cause he sound's like an ass,then it could be tie between the Black's and grandaddy elf,,can't wait till bella's awakening has finished and she lets rip on them,heeehehee, should be fun,,,,,
amazing again,can't wait for more,,,will continue beggin' if i need to,lol.c.
Author's Response:
I can't stand Renee, not even in the real books! Grrrr, that woman has always been to nervery for me! Oh ya... You're are Kind of Close in assuming! hehehehehe
Thanks for your review of Chapter 14. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 15. Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 15 (BPOV)
Family Ties
There have been times over the last almost four days when I’ve wanted nothing more than to rip my own skin from my body, and just pull out every strand of hair out of my head. The pain is all consuming and overpowering.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
yay go on bella,can't wait to see how everything goes down from now on,
excellent ch.,can we get another fast up date,love this story.c.
Author's Response:
Saturday is about as I can do. I mean three chapters in three day's was tough! LOL
Thanks for your review of Chapter 15. Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 16. Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 16 (BPOV)
Ten Long Days
He was standing behind me looking at my body from the reflection in the mirror. He pulled back a little and unclasped my bra from behind, and he watched as he brought both of its straps fell down my arms.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
nice ch.,thank god bella has takin' to being an elf,i'm so jealous that she get's the major,*sighs*,,,,don't get me wrong i'm team edward all the way but on ff and others,oh my,it's got to be the cowboy!
really looking forward to finding out who's behind the attacks,feel sorry for both J/B with having charlie around,parental sex ,BLUUUAAAAHHH,brain bleach. lol. wonder what jasper has planned for her birthday surprise!!????!!.looking forward to what's coming next....until next time.c.
Author's Response:
Bella's Birthday is gonna be good! LOL ;)
Thank you for your review for Chapter 16. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 17. Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 17
Happy Birthday Bella
(BPOV)
I was in no mood to be level headed right now. I just wanted to kick the shit out of something and then throw a tantrum like a three year old. How come everyone in my life with the exception of Jasper or the Cullen’s always seem to want something from me? Why in the hell do I allow myself to be put into those positions?
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
omg,12 times,that's hot. excellent ch. does everything with charlies change go ok? when are the tribe going to pull the sticks out of their asses?
can't wait to see what happens next????!!!!????? until next time, heres coffee.c.
Author's Response:
Wouldn't it be such a hardship in life to have to reconnect with JASPER, during sex? NOPE NOPE NOPE! I have the first ticket in line, so don't even bother cutting in line for that one girlie. LMAO ;) Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 18. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 19.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 19
(BPOV)
My reverting back into a second grader did nothing for Jasper’s mood at that moment. So I used his gift on him. I pushed as much happiness as I could at Jasper at that moment. He was trying to be completely hardnosed and bad assed, but he lost it when I started singing.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
loved the action, as your last reply stated,you are first in line but i reserve 2,3,4,5..... and all the rest for jasper, i just love the major,PMSL.this could seriously start a fightlol,although i don't think he's wiling to give up bella!bummer! looking forward to what's going to happen next,,,,until next update,cheerio.c.
Author's Response:
As holding back Bella. You hold her down for me, and i'll do the same for you! *Wink Wink* No fighting, just lovin' girlie! ;) Hugs~Izzy
Thank You for your Review of Chapter 19. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 20.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 20
(JPOV)
All I could do was stand there, holding my mate in my arms, and growl when I thought someone was too fuckin’ close to her. I knew mentally that she was right, and that Carlisle needed to look at her. But I couldn’t seem to put the Major back into his box.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
come out ,come out ,where ever you are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh izzy,,,,you are fantasticaly cruel ,loved your cliffy,pmsl......plz ,plz,plz update soon,i will continue to beg,if i have to too,might even ask jasper to join in ,LMAO,,,,,,,,,so did bribery with the major work,,bet it did,,,hehehehehe..until next time .c.
p.s,,,coffee too.
Author's Response:
Peek A Boo! Here I am! LMFAO I love being cruel ya know... Jasper makes me that way sometimes. LOL Jasper NEVER BEGS... LOL ok he does but o nly when it's really good ... I accept the coffee, and will still make ya wait til tues. HEHEHEHEE~ Hgus~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chapter 20. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 21!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 21
(BPOV)
He walked over to my side of the bed, and gave me the once over again. I knew that my fever was high, but Aaron had warned us beforehand that it would be. He checked my pulse, my temperature, and my eyes and ears. Same old, same old really.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
excellent ch.,yay, a baby,really looking forward to what you got cooking next, it has so many possibilities !?, i have had a total mind blank for question's so sorry on that part,,anyway................hope you up date soon and again, excellent ch..cheerio.cheryl.
Author's Response:
I know it, I feel like I'm a kid in a candy store right now... Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chapter 21. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 22.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 22
(BPOV)
What are you holding back from me, Jasper Whitlock? I know that you are trying to hide something so you might as well spill it before I have to go dig through that mind of yours. I said, while crossing my arms over my chest. I’d rifle through his thoughts if I had to, and he knew it.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
i think bella may blow a fuse if carlisle keeps up with the tests and counting,,,,she is not a science project!
excellent ch. is there more trials and tribulations to come,one can only hope,,as you can see i am a fan of the angst,lol.and the major,yum.
until next update,thanks for the story.c.
Author's Response:
Yes, these is always in the blowing in the wind these two, or three now! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 22. Here is your Sneak a Peek at Chapter 23.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 23 (JPOV)
“Isabella Swan and Jasper Whitlock,
You are both invited to the first ever Cullen / Whitlock Family Night.
*Clothing is optional*
Meet your family in the living room no later than 7pm.
Snacks and party to follow.
RSVP: by yelling ‘Hell Yeah’ NOW!”
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
SHOW ME THE MONEY, im glad bella didn't pass out i sure as hell would of, holy shit thats better than winning the lottery wish we could all have a fairy money maker like alice, can't wait to find out about the bubs
on another note....how in the hell did she turn down doing naughty things with the major, let me tell you , iwould of been front and center, waiting for my orders then let him carry on any way he pleased,PMSL,i'm sure you agree LMAO, anywhooooo,,excellent ch. can't wait for more.until next time .c.
Author's Response:
I guess she was upset about being caught, don't forget she'd never used a BOB before! LOL I would have been there with nothing but bells on Baby! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of chapter 24. Here’s your Sneak Peek into chapter25.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 25 (JPOV)
“Before I turn this picture into 4-D, I need to know if you two want to know what you are having? The fetus’ outline will be quite clear from this new angle.”
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
excellent ch. again .i can only imagine that bella is floating on a cloud of jasper fluffyness lmao.*sigh* i wish.until next update.c.
Author's Response:
LOL you gotta to love any type of floating around Jasper! ;) Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 25. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 26.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 26 (BPOV)
Alice was still talking about what she had planned for us to do today, and how Jasper and I had kept everyone from getting ready earlier. I kind of laughed at how one couple kept all of the others so busy that they were unable to get ready for their day. Especially since one half of that first couple, slept for several hours in the night.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
awww, i think i want to kill alice she reaaly doesn't want to be on the receiving end of more hormonal bella,,,,i could see a few matches being lit,lmao.......i hate to say it but the major would be dead if he had said 'fat' things to me ,there would of been no chance of an apology,lol.....it's too quiet with the wolves and other elves whats happening?
excellent ch. really ,really want more,until next time .c.
Author's Response:
Ummm, the others??? Good question! ;)
Yep, and I think that Alice also has a death wish by pissing off a pregnant elf! LOL
Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 26. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 27.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 27
(JPOV)
When Bella was awake during the day, I tried to read as much as I could about pregnancy, the birthing process, what the lil Peanut was doing on each giving day, how he was changing and growing. Anything I could get my hands on about this shit, I was taking to like a duck to fuckin’ water.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
so sorry about your uncle,my thoughts are with you.
excellent ch,looking forward to more,i'll send the major over with hugs,cheerio for now.c.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your thoughts! Ok, Senf the Major over! I need a back rub, and Oh yeah ... Never mind! LMAO!! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 27. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 28.
Have a Great Thanksgiving!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 28 (BPOV)
I watched as Jasper normally butterscotch colored eyes turned into jet black orbs with his lust. As I took an extraordinarily, painfully slow time releasing each button on the shirt of his I was wearing. One by fucking one. Jasper’s body went to move off of the bed, but I made sure to hold my shield securely around him.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
oooooohhhhhh is jasper gonna get trouble from aro? so now that the pair need a break from the house are we going to see a naughty weekend in their plans? really want more,pppplllllllllllzzzzzzzz, really not ashamed to beg, pmsl.excellent ch. until next time,cheerio.c.
Author's Response:
OR are the other Resolutes gonna come soon?? Ummm ... I think the others are coming! (That sounds bad even writing it!! LOL) A weekend away will happen but there are a few lil things that pop up along the way... I know I sound like a politicain. dont I? I never give anyone a REAL ansewer! HUgs~Izzy
Thank You for your Review of Chapter 28! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 29!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 29 (JPOV)
I’ve been trying since we found out that Bella and I are expecting the baby to be more open to the Lil Fucker, but he and I are like oil and water; we just can’t mix together. I’ll admit that he has been doing better and trying harder than I’ve ever known him to, but I always have a thought of ‘what if’ or ‘what’s he up to now’ in my head.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
OSM,plz dont leave us hanging on too long ,excellent cliffy,,,,,maybe jasper should just hit the sex bible that is 'kama sutra'....*shivers*kama sutra and the major,,hehehehehe,pmsl.(i know your thinking about it izzy!!!!) =P
ANYWAY,,,,,,,,, another great ch. looking forward to next up date,cheerio for now ,.c.
Author's Response:
I hope you know that I am a Preacher's daughter! Yeah, No SHIT!!! and i would never never ever think anything like that! Nope, it ain't gonna happen! THoughts are pure, wonderful I like thinking about ..... ;O Nevermind! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 29! Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 30!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 30
(BPOV)
I slowly rolled over and was staring at the ceiling as Jasper got up off the bed and made his way toward the bathroom. I heard the water in the sink running and a few short seconds late my mate walked out of the bathroom with a wet washcloth in his hands. After handing the cool cloth to me, I started to slowly rub my face clean and it felt wonderful to me.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
omg ,i would like some lessons from the major,is this were the shit hits the fan?lol or is bella going to go all hormonal and kick some more ass?
excellent ch. hope you update soon.c.
Author's Response:
I guess we will have to wait and see... I know that i am evil! LOL hugs~Izzy I'll see you TUes like always!
Thank you for your review of Chapter 30. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 31.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 31
(JPOV)
I instantly knew that there was no way to keep the Major from escaping the cage that I’d kept him in for so many years. I knew that Jasper Whitlock was a man known for his compassion and tolerance. And the Major on the other hand was a possessive and uncaring bastard that would only worry about what was his and his alone. I knew that he scared the hell outta our mate, but I couldn’t help but let him outta his carefully crafted cell to protect our mate and our child.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
major!!!!,,,,take me,take me,hopefully the order for the line is still the same you first me second everyone else can shove off,pmsl....the was one HOT,HOT lemon,looking forward to the pranks/ laughs in the new house,also i hope they kick some serious vamp butt with the pervs hanging out in the woods?????lol,,,,,,
excellent ch. can't wait for next up date....merry christmas,cheerio.c.
Author's Response:
Getting to the house is what Chapter 34 is about! I will post it on Sat! Hugs~Izzy Merry Christmas Chickie!
Thanks for your Review! Here is your Sneak-a-Peek at Chapter 34!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 34
(BPOV)
“Isabella, why are you doing this to us?” Jasper, or hell, I think it was the Major asking.
Charlotte was rocking with laughter at the two fools sitting at the table acting like five year olds, asked to eat there lima beans.
“Well, I thought that since you weren’t paying attention to me earlier that this might be a great way to get and keep your attention,” I boosted.
“Major, believe that your pregnant mate has lost her better judgment and took up smokin’ crack,” Petey all but growled out, causing Char and I to laugh even harder at them.
See you on Saturday! Hugs~Izzy
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
OSM...... didnt see that coming,amazing,hope bella will be ok? lil' fucker is about to have a near full vamp family lol find it totally ironic and the fact that renee is now part of the vamp royalty. oh well hope they can sort through it?.....
excellent as always =) hope you have a nice new year.c.
Author's Response: OSM, is right! LOL Gotta love that NO one saw this coming... Hugs~Izzy Happy New Year to you too! ;) Thanks for your Review of Chapter 37. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chpater38. Hugs~Izzy Carlisle’s POV Esme and I had left the house early today. Carmen and Eleazar wanted to meet up with us early. Jasper’s and Bella’s shower was not to take place until the early afternoon, so we had a few hours to kill before our presences would be needed at the Tea Cottage.
Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together? All-Human
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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Haircuts & Pepper Spray
OMG, LMAO,it's too good :0)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Captain Jack & Drunkella
LMAO,what a bright girl,,,,i'm surprised she didn't offer to eat off of j.d.,now that would of been a fantastic lunch,,,
my hand is up high ,for many a night o' drunken stupidity,haahaaa,good times
hope you up-date soon ,excellent ch.,bye.c.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! We got really good news about our kitty..She's improving, so it may not be lymphoma...Our family is so stupidly happy right now. i'm psyched to write more!!
In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
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Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
no fair , you can't leave us hanging like that,it's too good to stop there hope you up date soon, i rreally want to know what happens next,,,,ppppppllllllleeeeaaaasssseeeee!
thanks, great chapter.bye.c.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad that you like it.
Here's a tiny teaser for ya!
"Demetri came at Bella again, and I reacted before I could consciously think about what I was doing. I caught him by the throat and slammed him to the earth, shaking the ground. Bella wobbled with the vibrations, and before she could fall, I had her in my arms, halfway across the meadow and shielding her from further attack."
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
i want more, this is different,it also sounds cool,please up date soon.thanks:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading!
Here's a teaser for the next chapter:
"I ran my hands through my hair and noticed that they oddly smelled of Bella. I had only touched her once, and I already reeked of her. She had an intoxicatingly sweet smell and her scent sparked a physical reaction in me that I wasn’t expecting. I didn’t know how to describe it; it was more than a feeling of hunger, it was a tight tugging feeling in my chest."
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
i love the cowboy,i really do ,but , could he be any more of a dumb ass! how could he not see that one coming,after she helped heal him too,sometimes men can be so stupid ,we all know alice hates her,but even she was laughing at the moron......well played bella,heeeheeehee.
anyway,excellent ch.can't wait for more,until then,cheerio.c.
Author's Response:
Yes, men are stupid sometimes, Jasper included! LOL
Thanks for reading hun!
T
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Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 134974
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
i hope bella deals with that room,she can finally close some doors and be able to deal better with herself,,iwas so happy when edward met them at the airport,another person she can rely on,great ch. it's good to see her in the light now,instead of being swallowed by darkness,until next time.c.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)