Penname: onlyinyourdreams77 [Real name: Kat
Member Since: 08 Mar 2010
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Hey Everyone. I'm a fan fiction reader as well as a fan fiction writer.  


Name: Kat  




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Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

Okay, Are you stockholm syndrome? Where is jacob in this story? 

And where is Rosalie, Emmett and Esme. Plus, Alice is not a vampire? She's human? hmm! Interesting! 

So they fell in love already ehh? hmm! That was fast. Is this true love or not? 

 

 



Author's Response:

Erm i suppose you could call it true love, and yes it does happen very fast, but Bella is a little like a love sick puppy, she has never reli had anyone interested in her, and she gets very curious  :) And rosalie and emmett are coming, and you shall find out about esme :) and no Alice is not a vampire, she is a likkle human :) and whats stockholme syndrome? xxx thanks for the mugs :) xx

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

So the werewolves are evil here ehh? 



Author's Response:

yes yes they are :) xxx i dont like them lol so i thort i would make them baddies :) xx

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

Hmm! So they love each other then? I haven't even read them kiss yet. When are we going to see that?

Stockholm Syndrome is sometimes an outcome when you are kidnapped and held captive for a long period of time. Some people develop love and loyalty towards their captive despite the treatment they have over their captors. 

 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

I can see you don't like them. lol. 

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Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Cruelty & Kindness

That's it? that's a tiny kiss. Passionate but tiny. 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Confessions

Aww! She's scared. Poor Bella-Boo. aww! Where the heck is Emmett and Esme?

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Cruelty & Kindness

Aww! I feel so bad for Carlisle. Aww! He lost Esme. Poor Esme. Are you sure she's dead and not a vampy? *pouts.

Protective Edward (*swoons)

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Control

Okay, what did he do to ALice? Why is she wearing gloves again? lol. 

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Peeping Tom

What? Rosalie and Jacob in cahoots? Seriously?! Is that Emmett she's carrying? Really? Finally! 

By the way, when did he kill James for her?


Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations

hmm! I don't really like Jasper in this story. Then again, all the vampires here are somewhat ruthless and cruel very unlike the book/movie. hmm! Even Carlisle. 

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing the Corrupt

Hmm! At least he's finding out that Jacob is spying on Bella. When the heck are they turning Emmett and Alice? Good Grief! lol. I mean they are freaking outnumbered. I miss Esme. 

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles

Hmm! I wonder if it was Tanya. hmm! I wonder if Carlisle just said that to be mean. Hmm! Seriously! I think he's still grieving over Esme. Maybe someone should set him up. Another Esme by chance. hmm! I don't know but that boy needs to be laid! lol. 

Are you sure this is not Stockholm syndrome? lol. 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Unleashing the Monster

Aww! Very cute. Hmm! I'm still wondering who the other vampire is. Hmm! Tanya maybe? 

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Doomed

Hmm! So Carlisle hates Bella because she reminds him of Esme. Hmm! Kinda sad but in a way it's true. 

I was wrong how Edward was not there when she woke up. Hmm! They are going to need to talk soon.

Jasper and Carlisle are still mean to Bella ehh? I wonder about Rosalie but I think she'll still be mean too. Gah!


Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Notes

Wow! Jacob's really crazy, deceitful, manipulative, and evil here in this story. This chapter is very well written you captured your version of the characters very well.

Hmm! I still am wondering who the vampire Carlisle was talking about. I wonder if it really is Tanya. Hmm! 

I somewhat want Jacob dead. Hmm!

Edward needs to learn to balance both the monster and his real self. We know he wouldn't hurt Bella but he still needs a balance. 

Will Emmett be changed? How about Bella?

 

 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Trust

Hmm! Evil Jacob. Wow! He really is evil. Poor Edward. They need to really form a bond the monster and Edward because in actually they are one in the same. He just needs to accept that he can't let go of the monster and vice versa. If they do both will die. 

Bella's innocent and I can see how Jacob can manipulate and deceive her. Let's just hope she picks it up more quickly. Hmm! I wonder what Emmett and Alice are saying to Bella. hmm! 

Hmm! I like how Edward is somewhat giving her a choice. hmm! I wonder what happens if Edward did leave? hmm! 

 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Fighting the Monster Within

Hmm! He's a baddie since you said you don't like him. He's evil! lol. 

Anyhoo, when are we going to see the fight with Edward and Jacob? Bella needs to see the real Jacob. I mean Emmett and Alice doesn't trust Jacob and they are human. hmm! I wonder if they know something that Bella doesn't. Why don't they just tell her?

I love how Edward is fighting the monster but I still say the monster and Edward needs to work together. They are one in the same person. Compromise!

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: To Touch a Psychic

Hmm! It's Jacob isn't it? hmm! I wonder when Edward will change Bella?



Author's Response:

it will all become apparent very soon i promise :) bt i think you know the answer to that question :) thanks for the mugs :) xxx

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One

Wow! these people are nuts. good grief! So when do they turn into vampys? Also when the heck are these nutcases dying?

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two

Aro was always the crazy power hungry man! When are they going to die again? Seriously! 

Jacob seriously needs to die also. 



Author's Response:

Hey dont worry, they will be dead very soon :)

And Jacob is on my death list! hehe xx thanks for the mugs and th support xx

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: New Home

that was interesting. hmm! they teamed up because she wanted Edward and he wanted Bella. Hmm! Interesting. I think they should just be together. good grief! Disgusting individuals! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 372980
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

So Bella's Isabella II? So I'm guessing Tony is Edward and He and Bella both met in Italy eh? lol. 

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

Lothario? what's that? Nice chapter so far. I think Alice guessed who bella is in terms of Edward's song. hmm!

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

Hmm! So Angela and Jacob met Edward. Has Renee met him yet? hmm!

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

Aww! Poor Bella. She's in love with Tony but Tony is Edward too. aww!

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

Awww! He misses Bella. aww!

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

This is taking so much longer. Good grief! When's the wedding? lol. I can't wait. lol. 

hehe. Angela and Alice know it was Bella and Edward in Italy. lol. 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

yay! It's about time. Good Grief! lol. Charlie is a bit of very traditional royal ehh? He kinda reminds me of Henry VIII. Man hoe! lol. 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

hmm! That was just plain nasty. All those people watching them have sex. yuck! hahaha. Then again, in this society, it's like porn. lol. 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

Aww! He's so proud of his Bella. Aww! That's beyond cute and romantic. He's already protective of her. Awww! 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

Well, I love this chapter. It's very cute, hot, and romantic. Aww! Aww! I can't wait for Chapter 11. 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

Hmm! Garrett...what's up with him? hmm! I wonder...if he's has something up his sleeve. I don't know yet. He seemed apprehensive about Bella. 

So alone time....yay! The boat was fun but this estate might be fun for a little mini vacation. 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

Aww! that was so cute. Very very cute and hot! They seem so happy and in love. aww! hmm! so where's the obstacles? 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

Hmm! Tanya again? Hmm! When do we get to meet her? Hmm!

Anyhoo, Georgiana of Derbyshire is from Pride and Prejudice right? lol. 

So I loved it. I loved how Edward reassured her while they were being introduced in court. It was very sweet. I love their secret code. 



Author's Response:

LOL...yeah...couldn't resist even if it's a totally different time.  I was stumped so I figured why not

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

We're talking about Georgiana right?

So when do we see Tanya? 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

aww! so how long is the gents staying? hmm! This is torture. hmm! I can't wait for what Edward says about Bella. lol. 

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Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

Aww! Poor Bella. I miss Edward too. When is he coming back? Hmm! If Rosalie wants to warn Bella about Tanya I wonder what Tanya is up to. 

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

Hmm! I think Bella needs to get new ladies of waiting. The ones she has lack loyalty to her. hmm! Also, Tanya...what else is she up to? hmm! 

When are the boys coming back? I want Rosalie and Emmett to meet already. 

Baby Bella/Edward?  

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

yay! she's gone. the harpy is gone! yay! 

i'm so happy she's pregnant. yay!

 

i'm slowly catching up so bare with me. 

 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

hmm! so nuts that woman. 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

I love Bella here. She thinks like a diplomat. hehe. Wise and cunning. Very very slick. lol. 

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

aww! that's so sweet. nice christmas presents. aww!

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

hmm! maybe it's the members of court. I can't remember the actual term but the men who didn't approve of Bella? hmm! 

A woman scorned. tsk tsk. 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

of course alice had to turn the attention to her. hahaha. poor alice. lol. 

yay! they're king and queen. so I'm guessing Carlisle and esme will be retiring then? lol. 

i sort of pitied tanya. It was like the movie, The other boleyn sister. The story of anne boleyn and her sister. tsk tsk. lol. 


Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

hmm! So when are the babies coming? hmm! I love Bella and Edward. aww! So who is Kate in love with? By the way, what happened with Tanya after the transition? that's going to be so much fun to see. hehehe. Though I pity her but it was still her fault for her mess. lol. 

 

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Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

hmm! that was an interesting chapter. wow! Yay! the babies have arrived. yay! 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties

aww! very very cute chapter. I love the babies. aww! I love Bella and Edward. aww!

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Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Aww! That was a nice ending. aww! I loved it. 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995606
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is interesting. hahaha. He got ambushed. Poor Edward. lol. 

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Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hehe. that was interesting. hmm!

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Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow! they are so into each other. hahaha. That was fast. hmm! 

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Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmm! Interesting Alice is a submissive and Jasper & Edward are doms. hmm! 

Now, Edward and Bella are dreaming of each other. hmm! Hot!

That was one hot chapter with the body shot. 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well BDSM is all about control anyways. I mean those who participate live in that realm and participate in that activity because their lives lack control within their reality. 

So Jacob is nuts here ehh? hmm! What's up with Charlie? Alcoholic ehh?

Hmm! I think they have more in common than they thought. hmm!

 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh dear me! Did he just ask her to be his submissive? Are you kidding me? Oh good lord! lol. 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Okay, so many similarities. Would this be a bad time to tell you that there's already a BDSM fic featured Edward as a Dom and Bella a sub? It's called Master of the Universe? It's in ff. 

It's an interesting story though from my classes about BDSM there were some errors. In my professors' research there hasn't any relationship with Dominants and Subs. I forget why it never worked out. I think someone had to get out of the lifestyle or if they did. I don't remember. I have to look at the notes he/she gave us. Or I could as him/her since it's their field of study (Human Sexuality that is). hmm! 

I'm liking how their relationship is developing but I get the feeling she doesn't know what she's getting herself into. hmm! 

 

 



Author's Response:

glad you are liking it!

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Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Like I said she was ready or prepared for this. hmm! 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well, she's doing a lot better that's for sure. 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

hmm! Interesting chapter. I love how they tease each other. cute. 


Now, I have made some notes below:

I forgot to tell you, you had a few typos in your chapters. 

Also, you have a few heteronyms. Like this one: "She through a shoe at him, which missed him by a mile and made him laugh." --> "She threw a shoe at him, which missed him by a mile and made him laugh." (They should the same but have different meanings. I believe they are also called homonyms)

Watch your sentences. Like this one -  "Hey talking of Em, are they still coming over?” --> use this one instead: "Hey speaking of Em, are they still coming over?” (See the difference)

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hmm! I heard it's quite hard for doms to switch up but not impossible. (like I said, it was a class about sexuality. lol. )

 

Very interesting chapter. I'm liking how trustful they are of each other. :)

 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well that was an interesting chapter. hmm! They are so in deep trouble. uh...oh. lol. 

I do love how Bella took the role. lol. hehe. 


Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well that was interesting. Her punishment is not bad. It was kinda hot. lol. 

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Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow! Rosalie is really a bitch! Wow! But I get the feeling I would be too if it was me. I mean she's got to be defensive if new suspicious people come into the family. But damn Rosalie is definitely a bitch! 

I think Edward senses that Bella is upset since Rosalie came to visit. She barely smiles. 

Question, isn't Alice Twister and if so, why did Alice call Bella Twister? 


Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hmm! I'm glad that they have settle that inzy winzy bit. Hehehe. Hmm! Garrett and Kate ehh? hmm! 

I can't wait for Edward and Bella to be reunited. Where is Angela? I hope she didn't ditch Bella. That would be just wrong. If so, I can see Edward moving Bella to his house. hmm! He's not going to like where she'll be living. I can see him have Alice fix up the house. lol. 




Author's Response:

working on chapter 16 now - patience angel....

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay! 



Author's Response:

Me too!!! Yay!

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Very very hot! Nice! 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hmm! I'm starting to wonder where the heck is Angela? I think Edward isn't going to be happy once he finds out where she's living. tsk tsk. 

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Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hmm! Angela and Lauren are not very nice here ehh? How rude of Angela! Edward should go Caveward on Angela. That would teach her to be mean. 

 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was a great chapter. hmm! I loved it. Hmm! What is Emmett's title again? So is Bella preggers yet?

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/11066/images/Tasteofinnocencejpeg.jpg

Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50074
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Why is she making him take out Angela again? Good grief! What the heck? lol. 



Author's Response:

Ha, because she identifies with Angela in a major way.  She's putting her old wounds on Angela and making Edward help her out I guess.  It makes sense to Bella, but not to the rest of us since we're in E's head! :)

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good grief! I think I need to reread this fic. I can't remember anything. lol. 



Author's Response:

Haha I don't go THAT long without updating!

Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21772
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well, i guess he's had his wake up call. I'm glad the family is doing a damage control and taking it into his own hands. 

Hmm! Edward is still turning Bella right?

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward are happily engaged with their whole lives ahead of them. What happens when a tragedy strikes that will change them forever? AU, all human.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86164 Read Count: 6795
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2010
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Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--Do You Realize?

I'm starting to like this story. It's early but I like it. Hmm! I wonder what's up with Edward. hmm!

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Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please

Oh dear! I wonder what's up with Edward. Poor Edward. aww!

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Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day

Aww! Poor Bella and Edward. The poor Cullens. He better wake up soon. aww! Come on Edward Wake up! There's still the wedding! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever

That was amazing chapter. I felt so bad for the family. aww! I can't imagine if that happened to my family. Though you captured Bitt's feeling's perfectly. She's a teen and in her world Edward was always been there to protect her and now he can't because he's sick. It shattered her world. That's why she didn't want to go see him. I get that. Sometimes we have to be in denial to be sane. It's our way of coping what we can't handle. 

I'm glad he's finally awake. I was so happy. aww! 

 

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5--Grace

aww! Poor Edward. Aww! I feel bad for the Cullens. Aww! Poor Bella-boo. I love what Elizabeth and Emmett did. It was sweet. 

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 It's Not My Time

I thought auras happened only in seizures. My friend gets hers from seizures. Hmm! interesting. I read it online and it said an aura is a mental visual disfiguration occuring when you are about have a seizure or migraine. 

What happened on his other hand? I know the other one was from the fall trying to go to the bathroom but what happened to other one? 

Hmm! I can understand what edward is feeling. I would be too if that happened to me. Poor Edward! 

So does Bella and jake have a history here?

 



Author's Response:

Edward's left side is paralyzed as a result of his stroke.  Right now he's unable to use his left arm and leg and has no sensation on that side of his body. 

I think you'll like Jake in this story.  :-)

 

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Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Give Me Strength

Hmm! Seems like maybe that it's taking a step to a better place but I also think he might need to talk to a therapist or something. Someone else who might explain his behavior more. Carlisle may be a doctor but his area of expertise is not psychology. 

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know

Well that was cute and sweet and interesting! 

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

Hmm! Sponge bath?! Hot!!!!

So what else are you going to submit poor Edward into? Poor man!

 

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11--Falling Into Place

Yay! Now, he's in a walker. aww! yay! I still want to see her shopping. hmm!