Reviews by twimom220
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624471
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Wow, I can't believe it only one chapter left to go! I'm going to miss TPW so yeah turning it into a novel would be awsome. I'm gonna go cry now and wait for the last chapter.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171310
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter, I'm thinking it was Vikki who's been making the calls, leaving the gifts, and now vadalizing the house.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, we'll find out who it is next chapter :0) It might not be who you think it is *evil laugh*

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167519
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I'm guessing the baby will be named after it's daddy, even though she doesn't know that he would want her and the baby, I don't think she'll deny that.

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Yay!!!

Was Every by jol27 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Was Every Banner


 

Was every smile I gave him a lie?

 

Was every look a lie?

 

My name is Bella Swan and I have a secret. For 25 years I have been in love with my best friend.

 

When Edward returns home he also has a secret that will change their lives, "guys, I'm getting married!"

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84116 Read Count: 24053
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2010
Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG!!!! You have got to be kidding me, all this time I was getting pissed off at Edward for nothing! I have faith that as I continue to read this that my thoughts will change.

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by xrxdanixrx

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71563
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I don't hate Bella's answer, I think it was very Bella in her response. I also thnk she did the right thing, she's not ready mentally to take that step and she didn't. Bella did what Bella needed to do and didn't say yes just because she knew that's what Edward wanted to hear.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73190
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The World at Large

Great chapter, I can't wait for the next!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297515
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

Please don't tell me she attempted to kill herself or did because that would be depressing, I want to see her and Edward make things work.



Author's Response:

You'll find out on Wednesday! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

I love you're story, it's great. I love it and can't wait to see what happens with those two.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas

legally Bella could have had an annulment within 90 days of the marriage if the marriage wasn't consumated, at least that's the laws in Florida, not sure about anywhere else. An annulment is easier than a divorce, it's like it never happened. As to why she said it and Edward's reaction, I couldn't even begin to fathom.



Author's Response:

Yes she could. She'll explain it in the next chapter :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

i think she is pregnant and had a bad test or something.

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

like i said last chapter bella's pregnant.



Author's Response:

Hm, we'll soon find out! ;)

Thank you for your reviews!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital

i knew it, my pregnancy was complicated. I kept going into premature labor and was on bed rest my last three months.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing! : ) It must have been a pain in the ass to be on bed rest that long!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower

Will the kids actually eat it? If it means i can get my kid to eat hell yeah i want instructions. Btw great chapter, I remeber those days of my pregnancy, my ex thought I was psychotic.



Author's Response:

It's very popular with the kids here in Sweden, but I don't know! I would say: it doesn't hurt to try! :)

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It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usually do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

 

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

Sounds good, just without the ketchup. I'll try it next time I make macaroni and I'll let you know how it turns out.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211493
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

the suspense is killing me, please, please, please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Wow, is the only reaction I have for that chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!

♥ Shel ♥

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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."

She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."

The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"

Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.

"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.

Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Please update soon, the suspense in killing me!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.