Reviews by chelletwi83
Summary:

Bella is the local bad girl.  Edward is the new kid.  What happens when they meet while she is serving out her latest punishment at church?  Rated NC-17 for lemon and language.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5466 Read Count: 1509
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Sinner and the Saint One Shot

So hot! Excellent



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116412
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very nice start.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was hot but Edward's a bit of a dickhead isnt he lol.

 



Author's Response:

Oh he definitely can be!  But then again, can't we all? LOL

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OMG- that was unexpected.

Edwards a creepy ass little mofo isnt he now.

good chapter

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh another a little suprise at the end there.

 

Very good.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You should definitely keep Edward this way.

I like a darkward.



Author's Response:

I love me some Darkward too!  I'm definitely keeping him that way :)

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Okay, so Edward is taking posessiveness to a scary level.

I can see why Bella would find it a turn on, but she's young and shouldnt lose herself just to be with Edward.

Im gald she stood up for herself a little there.

Your writing this caveward really well.

Great chapter

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So last review I said I wanted Bella to stand up for herself more and she delivers.

I'm glad Edward seemed to back off a bit after, maybe he's not such an asshole after all.

Another great chapter

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

he's such a dick to her- i would fuck him off.

 

good chapter

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oooooooo angry caveward and whats happened to Bella

great chapter

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oooooooo angry caveward and whats happened to Bella

great chapter

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

mmm Emmett was always going to kick off regardless.

 

good chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315689
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God

Loved the first chapter.

I love stories where Bella isn't a simpering little bitch.

She's a whore and I fully approve.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun

A-fucking-mazing.

I love a horny Edward.

This made me piss myself with laughter-What, had she been reading ‘101 dirty sayings to use in bed?’ 

Really good chapter.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me

I quite like the Sugababes version of Freak like me too. Good choice.

I can't tell you how many times I laughed during this teacher.

Jimmy Hoffa's briefcase- fucking priceless.

Onto the next one.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth

I wrote teacher in my last review where I meant to write chapter.

Do you see what your doing to me.

So they have a bet?

Shit is about to get interesting.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy

Oh dear lord.....

 

When they do it Im gonna die.

Good chapter.........again.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone

Excellent.

You do know your keeping me up right?

Totally worth it though.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Closer

okay now im  up early for a Sunday reading this.

you have a lot to answer for lol

excellent

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life

She's getting feelings for the horny little bastard.

The expression 'flicking your bean' is not something I read often enough in fics because most writers are American.

It's a great way to describe getting yourself off dont ya think?



Author's Response:

lolll....no i think its a british thing- its something a few friends and i used to say- i think its the greatest saying ever!

xx KB

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat

This shit is hot, so what if they're not screwing yet.

They will and when they do I will most likely require a defiblirator.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Situations

JESUS CHRIST!

Worth the wait.

I loved the threat in your authors note. Fucking Renesemee but that's a discussion for another day.

Excellent

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets

Ohh hornwards getting jealous.

It will be interesting to read his EPOV next.

 

 

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist

If it could be arranged, I would very much like for caveward to bite me.

Excellent.



Author's Response:

Get in line my darling- right behind me! <3

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Add it Up

Explains a lot.

Renee is a total twatbag.

 

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - End Credits

Oh my- they are so falling.

And doesnt hornward have quite the sweet side to him?

Excellent.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything

Poor slutella, she is not feeling very loved right now.

Another great chapter.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light

God I love this story.

Set in Stone by Psyche001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward saved the life of a girl he was not supposed to save. Bound by secrecy and by the terms of his sentence, he has no choice but to stay away from her. What happens when she accidentally finds him three years after her rescue? What she finds out will turn her life upside down. His time is running out. Will their fate keep them together or tear them apart?

Nominated for an Indie Award!

Romance/Angst/Adventure/No Vampires

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191619 Read Count: 13264
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jun 2010
Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Yay! Stoneward is here and I know I told you before but your banner rocks !!

Now is that everyone here? lol

 



Author's Response:

squeeee. party in the library! ssshhhhhh......