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UPDATE 11th August 2013: We now know what is wrong with me but it cannot be cured and so I still have pains and lethargy. I'm afraid that whilst it continues to mean that I have nothing but free time, I just don't have the energy to focus on writing and updating right now. The pain has also become so debilitating that it hurts to type. I will try to update when I can, I just ask that you take into consideration these extenuating circumstances and try to be patient. Thank you!
~Anna-Margaret
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15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
Yet another truly amazing chapter. I love getting a glimpse into the mind of Father Aro. He really is a nutcase! Poor Edward and Bella. I hope somehow they can beat Father Aro and at least now he won't take Bella...hopefully.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
I started reading this story this morning and have found myself unable to stop. Its taken me a little over ten hours to read and I have absolutely loved every minute of it! Its a really intriguing concept if not slightly horrific. Cults and their 'brainwashing' is a fascinating subject and you've portrayed it wonderfully. I just hope Elizabeth/Bella is okay and that Charlie/Edward/Felix/Esme/Carlisle/ANYONE (lol) can save poor Bella before Aro can have his evil way with her or even take her baths a step further.
It truly is an amazing story! Please update soon.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
You always keep me on the edge of my seat for what will happen next! I love how Edward has now seen how the compound he lives in is not what it appears to be. His confusion was brilliantly portrayed and I love it!
I'm going to guess Aro *coughs* wanker *coughs* is holding Bella/Elizabeth in his private quarters. I wanna know what he's doing with her!
Yet another fantastic chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Father Aro is truly a perverted, disgusting man who deserves to be restrained while a small blunt guillotine is used to remove his dick from his body. Then he should be placed on a medieval rack and stretched until his shoulders dislodged from their sockets. After that a hammer should be smash against each one of his bones until all of them are broken, the skull being the final blow. Is that enough hatred for him? :)
Even though it was quite a bit disturbing and dark I did enjoy it. It shows how evil Father Aro is and how sick and demented he truly is. But you kinda left it on a cliffy seeing as it doesn't mention if it actually is Father Aro returning. Please don't let it be! Let it be someone who can help Bellabeth. *realises my thoughts are probably only wishful thinking and you two are going to make me want to cause Father Aro much more pain*
Great chapter as always!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Such an awesome chapter. Hurray for Charlie the Attempted Rescuer! Hopefully along with felix Charlie will be able to save Bella from Aro's clutches before he fucks with her even more.
FANTASTIC!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Poor poor Charlie. I kinda also want to hug Felix but slap him upside the head for taking so long to find his conscience. A very good chapter. As always I'm already waiting with anticipation for the next one!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Volturi Order
Fabulous action-packed chapter. Poor poor Carlisle being beaten like that. Those Elders really need their heads looked at. Are they actually insane? How could they just hand over power to Father Aro?! He's mental!
Hooray for the chapter and for the rescue. Here's hoping they can get out now as can Carlisle, Esme, Jasper and Alice. I also liked how you gave a little bit of information about how Alice and Jasper are doing. Poor souls.
I'd just like to point out thought that I got multiple emails regarding an alert for this chapter and in the drop down menu thing for the chapters it is showing multiple chapter 36's.
Fantastic chapter! Thanks so much for updating.
~Anna-Margaret
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After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624954
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
This story is just fabulous! I've read it almost non-stop the last few days and loved every moment of it. Your plot is quite unique and adds to the greatness that is this story. I loved seeing Bella begin to grow even under the repression by the males in her life. The ending was perfect and absolutely beautiful. I'm glad that Carlisle, the true villain, got his comeuppance. All of this has been exceptionally well conceived and I want to thank you for creating and sharing such an amazing story.
Brilliant!
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Check out my other stories.
A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
What a way to end a chapter! A very evil cliffy but it keeps me in suspense. I love this story and love Jasper to pieces. I was so happy that Esme and Charlie are chosen mates :) But lets hope Jasper can retrieve Bella from Carlisle *coughs* Bastard *coughs* Cullen as I'm guessing he's the one that kidnapped her or paid someone to.
Excellent chapter! Keep up the amazing writing skills you possess.
~Anna-Margaret
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“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan
This story is pretty awesome! I love how you named the Kaleidoscope Alice; that was rather funny. Also it was quite sweet naming the EPA Renee. I thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter and glimpse of Bella. Your Bella seems pretty cool and a kickass character that I will definitely appreciate.
Your writing is fabulous, however I would like to point out a minor detail. Bella mentions that her workplace is called JIG. This acronym is quite funny but it doesn't fit with her previously saying she worked at 'Jameson International Banking' as this would then be JIB. Other than this very minor part of this chapter this is an overall excellent beginning!
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your thoughtful review. The first few chapters are the least edited and when I complete the story I'll be giving everything a thorough typo / grammar / style / details check but it's extremely helpful when readers such as yourself point things out that I missed, so thank you.
I sincerely hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Aurora
Was every smile I gave him a lie?
Was every look a lie?
My name is Bella Swan and I have a secret. For 25 years I have been in love with my best friend.
When Edward returns home he also has a secret that will change their lives, "guys, I'm getting married!"
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84116 Read Count: 24053
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
A good chapter. In some places you have grammatical errors and could do with breaking up some paragraphs with full stops or commas. Apart from this its a really intriguing chapter and I liked the split point of view, however I would like to know what the story notes pertains to. The inclusion of this confused me slightly.
Can't wait to read more!
~Anna-Margaret
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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction. Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love?
This story was made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.
**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story. Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
*wants to slap some sense into Edward* Great story and I can't wait for more.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
So Edward, no? I know it's frustrating, but we have some fun coming up in the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.
Very well written and beautiful beginning. I love the writing style as it helped to 'transport' me back to the era this is set it.
Fantastically intriguing first chapter!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Second day in Volterra
I truly love this story. Its fantastically written. Surprisingly I actually like naive Bella and Jacob is a sweetheart. Edward needs a good head bashing!
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
When I started to write this fiction, I thought that a truly naive Bella would be a nice change from what we usually read. I'm glad you like my story.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Doctor Carlisle Cullen
Awww Carlisle is so sweet! I liked how you're looking at all the couples and not just keeping the focus on Edward and Bella, but at the same time integrating them with all the other romantic relationships. The bit with Carlisle and Edward finding Emmett shackled to the bed was hilarious.
Yet another fabulous chapter!
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
And you can imagine the fun I had writing this part...lol
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Caring for Bella
GREAT chapter! I really enjoyed the evilness of the cliffie cause I'm weird like that lol. Edward was...HOT! Can I have my own personal comte de Morvalle XD
~Anna-Margaret
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Being a Knight of the Round Table is a great honor. But in this story, things are not always what they seem. Join your favorite Twilight characters as they discover lies, truths, deception, betrayals and love all in the court of Camelot. Canon and non-canon couples. Humans and witches, wizards, dragons, immortals, etc. Various POVs.
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Categories: King Arthur/Merlin, Twilight, Crossover, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward, Emmett/OC, Jacob/OC, Jasper/OC, King Arthur/Guinevere, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Action, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance, Love and Faith, Supernatural
Series: Finished, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155108 Read Count: 21896
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
This story is so mysterious and intriguing. It just keeps me guessing and when I come up with a theory you write something else that disproves my thoughts.
Is Esme Morgan or even Morgause? And I still have no idea as to who her nephew might be. Jasper is on my list of possibles, but is he not in London...Gah! Its too hard to try to work it out...I need more! Please.
Great chapter!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Yet another fabulous chapter! The appearance of the little boy is somewhat mind-boggling. I look forward to hopefully gaining some answers soon as to who is behind this situation Camelot is in. Have a happy New Year!
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Hi Anna-Margaret! Thanks so much for reading. The boy won't have a MAJOR role in this, but will prove suprising once people realize who it is. What do you think will happen between Rosalie and Jasper? Will Victoria get her hooks into him?
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Poor Jacob but hooray for Edward and Isabella! XD Although Jacob hates Edward I don't think he is the one that Esme fears, I don't think he is Edward's cousin.
As always, an intriguing chapter that leaves me wanting more!
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Hi Anna-Margaret! No, you're right, Jacob is not his cousin. Thanks for reading! Here is your preview:
I pushed the covers back and went to stand by the window. I could tell change was coming to Camelot, yet no one wanted to listen to me. I was just the freak with the visions. I wasn’t taken seriously as the Princess of Camelot. My own sister made fun of me every chance she got.
Just like when we were little.
I became lost in my thoughts as my childhood memories flooded back to me. I saw myself playing in the field by our home; my only companion was the animals that stopped to see me. Guinevere had told people that I was strange so no one wanted to play with me. I had to learn to entertain myself while she was always out with someone.
Little miss popular.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
ALICE IS MORGAN LE FEY'S DAUGHTER AND MORGAN IS ESME! THEREFORE EDWARD AND ALICE ARE ACTUALLY RELATED!!!
Sorry for the shouty caps but this chapter was a nice one and had no 'mean' questionable remarks that turn my head upside down. In previous chapters you've always kept me guessing and disbelieving my thoughts. This chapter was superb and I loved the insight into Alice. I also just wanted to pick her up and hug her to pieces for her upsetting past...may I bitch slap/kick/punch (or all three) Guinevere for being the self righteous little bitch she is?
Anyway as always it was a great chapter and I look forward to reading more; especially regarding a certain Sir Jasper (he's the only part of the puzzle I haven't exactly figured out)!
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Those are great guesses and I'm glad that Jazz is still a mystery. His behavior in later chapters won't help solve it. Thanks for reading! Here is your preview:
Before I could say anything, Paul reappeared. “Sir,” he said quickly.
“Yes?”
“There’s been an accident with Emily.”
I raised an eyebrow. This ought to be good. I gestured for him to continue.
“One of the dogs lost control and ran its paw across the right side of her face. She will be permanently scarred.”
I smiled. Serves the bitch right. “Where is she now?”
“The infirmary. Felix is working on her. She shouldn’t be any more trouble.”
I nodded. “Thank you, Paul. Make sure she gets minimal recovery time. I want that bitch to be an example for anyone who crosses me.”
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Great chapter! I loved the peak into Mordred's mind.
Blondie? Is this Rosalie? And therefore is Mordred Jasper?! *is confused* But I don't think that could be right because Jasper warned Jacob about his opinion of Mordred. Also Jasper was in the Great Hall when Mordred was welcomed into Camelot...Gah! I cannot figure any of this mystery out!
Can't wait to read more.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that. Don't worry, I have the answers. :)
Here is your preview:
It wasn’t that I didn’t want to talk about my mother, I love her very much. It’s just that it never came up in conversation. What I talk to Isabella about has nothing to do with my mother. We discuss our dreams and plans for the future, our pasts and who is dating whom. My mother has always been cautious about certain subjects with me, although I don’t know why. It’s as though she’s worried I might stumble on something I shouldn’t know. But we shouldn’t have secrets from each other as we are family.
She was gone on holiday for a few weeks. I think she was missing dad too much and had to leave. Every time she comes to Camelot it pains her. The memory of how he died haunts her every day, not that I blame her. She was deeply in love with him and he was cruelly taken from her. If that happened to me with Isabella, I would never forget it either.
I shuddered at the thought. If anyone tried to take her from me now, they would regret it. She was my life now and Camelot was second. The King may not like that, as he demands loyalty, but he’ll live. It wasn’t like the other Knights didn’t have lovers or wives or anything on the side.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Yet another intriguing story that keeps me guessing. I truly have no clue as to what the heck is up with Jasper.
I don't understand how this story doesn't have more reviews. Its really good and keeps me on my toes.
Great chapter that has left me mindboggled as usual :P
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad to know I have a few faithful readers. Here is your preview:
I nodded. I knew that Edward was frustrated at the fact that his mother was hiding something from him, yet didn’t know what. He has started digging to find information, but so far found nothing. It seems that everyone who would know something has been of no help. Including the King.
He was also worried about Sir Jasper. His demeanor has changed lately. While still a gentleman, there is darkness to him. I passed him the other day and his eyes were hollow, devoid of emotion. It was disturbing enough that it caused a chill to run down my spine. Edward believes it has something to do with his mother and that is stressing him out. That and the fact that another attack on Camelot is suspected.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
That kiss was excellently written! Loved it! As always, a great chapter.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Thanks! I am SO glad you're enjoying it. Here is your preview:
She looked at me, her brown eyes wide. “Do you think he’ll kill Edward?”
I shook my head. “Of course not. He doesn’t want that. Believe it or not, Edward is still his best friend. He’s blind by jealousy right now, but he’ll get over it. I guarantee that in a few weeks, they will be talking and laughing as though nothing has happened.”
She seemed appeased by what I said. Placing her thin arms around my neck, she squeezed lightly. “Thanks, Rose. Jacob has an awesome sister.”
“I know,” I said with a smirk.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Lordy lordy lordy! Now that was a fantastic cliffie and brilliant chapter. *whines* But I'm still in complete suspense, which although I complain about it I do enjoy! ;)
I look forward to the next chapter :D Here's to hoping someone can save Rose before Royce takes her maidenhead. (A little guess though regarding the growl to Rose's right is that it is Jasper coming to save his girl)
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Yet another brilliant chapter. I kinda wanted to box Jacob's ears for thinking of himself instead of his sister but thought you portrayed it very well. Is it wrong that I loved how Jasper, um, 'decorated' the tree? :P I thought it was very befitting, but yet again you leave me confused about him...Though the tenderness he showed Rosalie...*sniff* it was so damn sweet! Is Jasper Mordred? Because Jacob was fighting Mordred when Mordred saw his men attacking Rosalie and then Jasper said that he managed to get there in time...gah! You have me in so much suspense but I do truly love all the guessing games :D
Thanks for another fantastic chapter. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked that. Obviously, people hurting Rose sends him off the deep end. And that's a good question about Mordred, however remember that Jasper's shoulder was not cut, Mordred's was.
Here is your preview:
As I walked to Lady Rosalie’s chambers, I saw a boy peering at me from one of the drawing rooms. He hid behind the door a bit but his eyes stood out. They were gold, unusual for a human. I smiled as I approached him.
“Hi there,” I said softly, squatting down so that I was at eye-level. “I’m the Princess. It’s nice to meet you.”
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Much foreshadowing that added a nice drop of tension and suspense to this chapter :P You always keep me hanging for more and continue to keep me in the dark even when more information is divulged. Is it wrong that I did a happy dance that possessive and jealous Jasper hurt Riley? :D
Great chapter that leaves me wanting even more as always.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Lol. No, I actually did that too. Thanks for reading! Here is your preview:
I smiled and opened the door wider, allowing him to enter. He walked with an air of grace that I could only hope to match someday.
He is way too good for me.
I shut the door and counted to ten in my head quickly before turning to face him. What I didn’t expect was how close to me he was. As soon as I turned around, I gasped before his mouth closed over mine. I recovered quickly and kissed him back passionately. I had missed the feeling of his lips on mine. While we re-familiarized each other’s mouths, the past three weeks flashed through my mind. Our first kiss was amazing, but the ones that followed trumped it. They were passionate and needy; it was as though we couldn’t get enough of each other. And I guess we couldn’t.
Well, I couldn’t.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
OOOOHHHH! LOVED the chapter as always. Alice's Point of View always makes me giggle but can also be quite sad (regarding her sister's treatment of her) but also serious. This bit was the most hilarious within this chapter I think: Why not just hump the man in front of the King?
Again you left me hanging with learning more about the unusual, shy child! *huffs* I am looking forward to future lemons and think you portrayed Jasper in a very sweet and romantic light in this chapter but he still has that dark cloak of mystery veiling his secrets from me. Grrr.
Fabulous! Thanks for updating :D Happy SAD (Single Awareness Day)!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Yays Edward! Good man! So so happy he didn't take Guinevere up on her 'offer'. The King's reaction was fabulous but quite sad. It made me want to just go up and hug Arthur. And the little mention of battling at Camlann and how the final outcome is unknown leads to more suspense. You're so damn good at adding that in to every chapter.
Geat job on this chapter. Looking forward as always to the next one.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm afraid you'll hate me for what I've got in store. Here is your preview:
He shook his head. “I think for him it’s a question of territory. He is so protective of you, not letting you out of his sight. If he saw me talking to you, he’d probably flip. I understand he was upset about what happened, but so were all of us. He is no more to blame than Edward is!”
I nodded. “You have a point, Riley. But that’s Jazz. He cares and it causes him to act irrationally sometimes.” I smiled and looked down. “That’s one of the things I love about him.” Finally, the words were out. Now I just had to tell them to Jasper.
I heard Riley suck in a breath and I raised my head back up. He was frowning, his brown eyes angry. Out of the corner of my eye I saw his hand ball into a fist against the stone building.
“You-you can’t love him.”
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
A fantastic chapter! Truly loved it though was really surprised that it was Isabella and Edward that got the lemon. My money would have been on Rosalie and Jasper.
Sorry it has taken so long for me to review; my Netbook broke :(
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Oh no! Damn you and your foreshadowing! *glares*
*giggles* Great chapter! But I'm still confused by Jasper *narrows eyes* Though I can guess that if Rosalie is settling it is with Riley.
Thank for confirming that Alice is Esme's daughter. Will this all come out? I think Edward would be very pleased to know she was his sister. I was laughing like mad over this: She will be a great choice for Jacob, once he gets his head out of his ass.
I know it's a very minor detail but it bugged me a little. You mentioned Esme's hair was blonde in this. Carlisle's hair is blonde and if Esme's hair was blonde then they could not have created Edward and Alice who are both dark-haired. Even with this I did enjoy seeing the past and how Carlisle and Esme came to be together.
Fabulous chapter as always!
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Interesting observation. There could be a recessive gene at work or Esme's powers. That is a good point that I will try and work into the story. :)
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Oh dear, oh dear. Something bad's coming. Grr you left it at such a cliffhanger! Good chapter though! I need more! :D
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Lol. I should have chapter 26 up today. No preview, unfortunately, but you'll get one for chapter 27.
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
WHAT??? Holy crap! That was some chapter...but to end it with those words?? *glares* Now you are just being evil...Edward can't be dead. And what the hell was that with the sword's blade not retracting. Plus the camaderie between Jasper and Jacob puzzled me a bit.
Even though you ended it with that - evil - I did enjoy the chapter. Great job!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Poor Isabella. The only thing that could worsen her situation is if her night with Edward resulted in pregnancy of a bastard child. Riley seems to be pushing a lot of blame towards Jasper and I'm still not sure what to think of him. Still can't get over the fact that you actually killed off Edward!
Looking forward to the next chapter as always.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Lol. Yeah, I'm getting that a lot. I hope I don't lose readers because there's a surprise near the end.
Thanks for reading! Here is your preview. Chapter 28 should be up in a day or so.
Jasper stroked my hair. “I love this,” he breathed. “I love being with you. I love being like this. I wish it didn’t have to end.”
“Who says it has to?”
I felt his hands on my torso and he pulled me away gently. He looked into my eyes. “Everything ends, Rose. At some point, so will this. I have no plans to leave you alone, but sometimes death has other plans.”
Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast? AH/AU OOC
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Hells Bells
I'm absolutely in love with your story. The characters personalities are so strong and very well portrayed. This is excellently written and I cannot wait for more! Really want to know about both Bella and Edroar's family dynamics. Also cannot wait to read about the Halloween Ball; it sounds like it's gonna be a blast.
Not sure if the charity I'd pick is a worldwide one but I'd choose the Dog's Trust cause I'm a huge dog person. If it isn't a worldwide charitable organisation (which I don't think it is) then I'd choose WWF (World Wildlife Fund) - I'm all about the animals! ;)
Fantastic chapter and amazing story. Thanks for sharing.
~Anna-Margaret
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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
I'm absolutely loving your story! It is fantastically written and such an original concept.
Hopefully Victoria and James will get their comeuppance for what they did to poor little Jack. The end was sweet and I love the entire dynamic of Bella and Edward and the fact they refer to Jack as 'our son'.
So sweet and lovely and I can't wait for more.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!
I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!
Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.
♥ Shel ♥
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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?"
Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."
"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself.
"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."
Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
Such a sweet and loving chapter but there is also a bit of worry at the fact that Edward isn't doing anything in regards to James. I understand his reasoning but it makes me concerned as to what could happen.
Fantastic chapter and I loved Charlie's greeting of Edward, it was perfect!
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?
I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.
"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.
"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.
"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"
Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."
The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.
"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"
"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
EEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPP! Wonderful chapter. Hate hate hate Victoria for dredging up Bella's doubts. Love love love the ending with Edward considering moving to Seattle!
Great chapter.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!
Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!
♥ Shel ♥
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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.
Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.
"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."
Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.
This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!
Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!
This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......
I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Aww Jacob is sweet! I just wanted to point out that you've wrote Folks not Forks and was just checking to see if you actually meant Folks. A nice story and I like the mystery as to what all is in Bella's past.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
OMG!!!! your the first person to point that out I don't think anyone else noticed my error... no I didn't mean it.... hehehe... Thanks so much for taking the time to review.... you are a star
The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into. NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.
This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.
Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;
http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com
Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Please Remember Me
I like your story and think it definitely has a lot of potential. I also like how you have portrayed Edward. I never would have guessed it was Rosalie that Edward phoned. Also is Tanya the little girl he saved?
Great chapter and I look forward to reading more.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
thanks i'm glas your enjoying it, i can't tell you right now who tanya is, but you will meet her soon. xx
Facing certain death for defending Bella’s honor, Jasper finds himself depending on Bella making the ultimate sacrifice; her complete surrender to the dark and dangerous Edward. But is the price too high? Will she succumb to Edward's persuasive calling?
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9579 Read Count: 8931
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
What a way to end a chapter! Really good and cannot wait for more.
~Anna-Margaret
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You never think you would wake up and your life will be taken, throwing you in a world you never knew existed. Bella sees life through the black market only to be sold as a virgin beauty. Please no one under 18!!! Rape, suicide, love and angst Rated MA
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Alright just so y'all know before you read this. This story is completely off the wall! Left field, I'm talking way out there! There is no HEA in this story. I cried like a baby writing the last 6 pages. So just before warned!
Ari
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14962 Read Count: 1417
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Coming My Love
This was so emotional and very well written. A really great story! Wonderful.
~Anna-Margaret
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Author's Response:
Oh...that makes us feel so good! Thank you for all your kind words. We really appreciate it! Wow what an awesome review...angain thank you so, so, so very much!
xoxoxoxox Ari & DLIR
It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324370
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks
Such wonderful angst! I love it! Brilliant, emotional chapter. Poor Bella. It must be tough for both of them, but I do admit to feeling more sorry for the situation Bella is in rather than Edward. She has done so much for him and when she needs some reassurances and a moment of his time, he shuts her down. Yes his work is crazy at the moment but it doesn't mean he has the right to take it out on Bella. Hopefully with Bella pushing away from him it will help him to wise up. I think it would do them both good though if Bella temporarily moved out. It would definitely make Edward rethink his priorities.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?
Smart girl! I think this is a very wise decision on Bella's part. Giving them time apart will allow them to consider if their marriage can work or not better than if they try to remain as they have been. Nothing would be resolved if she didn't go. I do feel sorry for Edward, but at the same time he needs to learn not to be so selfish and to be considerate of Bella. It will be a good learning experience for them both.
I look forward as always to the next chapter.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Yay Carlisle for metaphorically kicking Edward in the ass. Quite an emotional chapter. Brilliant work!
~Anna-Margaret
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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?
AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.
NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104501
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Moving On
A difficult situation for everyone to be in but I think you write it wonderfully. Had to laugh at Bella finding the condoms. Also seems like Esme would like Edward and Bella back together again which could be awkward when Tanya is introduced to the family. The Independence Day celebrations could also prove a helluva awkward situation.
Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the fantastic work!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener
A nice awkward first meeting. I was a little upset, like Edward, that Seth didn't speak with him but can also understand that it will take a while for all the broken bridges to be mended. I liked the mention of the Golden Globe only from Edward's point of view. It makes me as a reader wnt to bask his and Bella's heads together. Communication is key and had they had some then they wouldn't be in the situation they're in now.
Also the cracks are beginning to appear in Edward and Tanya's relationship. She definitely isn't as sweet and innocent as Edward seems to think, but at the same time she is having to deal with her boyfriend's ex living in his house with their two daughters, and now his parents, and all the above think Bella is wonderful and love her in some shape or form. It would be hard for any girl to compete with.
Yet another wonderful long chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
~Anna-Margaret
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