Reviews by brown2eyes
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373175
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

I don't know who disgusts me more Lauren or the King. I am glad Edward didn't 'bed anyone here he might have caught something. ick.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

Charlie is a hypocrite.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

I enjoy the story though I find it very sad that he died so long before her.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

very sweet story.

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2671354
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

I find slightly amusing that Alice wanted Bella to be Carlise's goomah, but had a  thing against Edward giving her money. If was Bella I would be upset with Alice getting me into a set up like that with Carlilse behind my back. It will be interesting what Bella thinks. Especially when she shows up at the wedding.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

Oh I think I love your Nanny. But I do wonder if she just played Edward.  Either way she is smart old lady.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427836
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I don't think Edward should pay Jacob a cent. Bella owes him nothing and I doubt Jake wants to mess with Edward.

Sure they can call the police, but no offense to a small town police force I am not sure if they can handle it. Edward might need to go higher up and he does have connections.

I am glad she told him. Instead of trying to take care of it on her own.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Hmmm. I am interested in his reaction.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

My guess Bella talked in her sleep and he heard her. That is why he said what he said. I am thinking he will be okay with it. At least I hope so.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Run after her! You just mentioned babies yourself in the last chaper.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I have been wrong so far, but perhaps Rose thinks Edward did something. What kind of friend is Alice not going back for her or at least sending Jasper if she doesn't want to see Edward?

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Down with the witch. Poor Edward.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Please tell me she didn't kill the baby. Witch needs to be found and hung. I understand why Edward is not so hppy with Tanya.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I hope it is Bella but I am trying not ti get my hopes up. It could be Alice. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Sounds like someone is dragging her back. I wonder who. Sounds like Rose r maybe it is Red hmmm

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Hmmm Tanya or Alice.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Now maybe they can talk so they can kiss and make up.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

together? maybe you should talk first.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I hope things turn better for them.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I really hope he used the sink or the tub.

Tick Tock by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She wanted a baby, but didn't exactly go through the conventional way to have one and now she has to deal with the family, including Edward. Written purely for laughs.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34998 Read Count: 69585
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How can Em be a OB/GYN and make a comment like the pain isn't that bad and still be alive? Where is ROse to smack him on the head when you need her too. lol.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You know what I find funny. They tell you to drink all that water. But at my first UltraSound with my first born the tech. told me it wasn't neccssary to drink all that water. A half bladder would do. I did that for my second and third and the tech never noticed the difference.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

If I remember correctly Bella was ready to kill more than the nurse the first time.

Triplets five punds each poor Bella. No wonder she went early.

Summary:

Bella is working for a catering and event planning company. She has just about pulled off the reception of the year when she's introduced to Edward Cullen, mafia boss. Can he show her that even bad guys can be good


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30285 Read Count: 21982
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love the start to this story looking forward to more.

People Change by kuntrygal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was the bane of Bella Swan's young existence until her mother unexpectedly moves her away. What happens years later when she moves back? Do people really change?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82271 Read Count: 32257
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Why would Bella let him do that she should have just walked away and out of the club.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ineresting but Bella can now just throw Vicki in jail for hacking, slander and extortion if she tried anything. James should already be rotting in a cell.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yes, she finally smartens up. Way to stick it back to them.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So much in this chapter I am not sure where to start.

First love the sex party idea. Although I would be sketched out by Sue too if I was Bella. Esme should have been invivted to even things lol.

I don't blame Bella for her intial reaction to Edward after he admitted that he had cheated on Tanya.

If they can't make the drugging charges stick there is always the tape. It is clear that James and her need to go away to jail since they are not going to do it on there own.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I had a feeling the jerk side would resurface. He deserves what he is getting.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I think Rose is a bit wrong. Bella had forgiven Edward up until he acted like a jerk at the reunion. His own actions made her see the old Edward and bring back painful memories. Being bullied can really scar and while it is something you can forgive you still dont forget.

I am not sure if I am just reading it wrong but it the section where Bella snarls "Excuse me?"  seems like either a line is missing or Edward should say Excuse me.

I am glad they made up.

 

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I have enjoyed this story, but I don't know what you could do for a sequel unless Vicki and James kiddnap their baby.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it. This was my first fan fic I wrote about 6 years ago.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Baby here, yay! Good chapter.

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I haven't decided if Bella is going to be offended or find it funny that he thinks she is a porn star.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I don't know if I would use the word selfish.  Gone into self protection mode is better word. She probably terrified what would happen if he knew the truth. She still very young and naive.

Speaking of young if Edward thinks she porn star yet only eighteen doesn't he find slight bit wrong that she would've been under age filming?

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Poor Jasper.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Poor Jasper.

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 660778
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 15: Bella

It is snakes for me. Ever since I was little girl and thought I was reaching for a sticking not paying attention until it hissed. I have been scared since.

Good story so far.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 22: Edward

Loving the start to this. Looking forward to more.

 

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 30: Edward

These two are so cute and they haven't even met yet.

Are you going to have Tanya's reaction to all the photos Edward sent her? I thik it would be funny not to mention well deserved.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 32: Edward

Hmm does she have a picture of him yet. I can't remember.

 

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 38: Edward

It funny I was about to ask about when he was due back. You must have read my mind.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 50: Edward

I can't wait for October.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 58: Edward

Yay! Hopefully Bella will be allowed on base on Edward off.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 61: Bella

yay! I hope she get to meet him.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 62: Edward

She is probably worried about the local girls wanting him.

 

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 66: Edward

I am glad you guys updated everyday. It makes the feel of the upcoming meeting so much closer.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 67: Bella

Wow not all girls talk so willingly about their period. I wonder if Edward is comfortable with it. A lot of guys get weirded out.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 72: Edward

Yay. Can'twait for more.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 88: Edward

Is the surprise that he is going to knock her up, so that they look at her finding a school close to the base so that they can be a family?

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 106: Edward

I don't blame for being a little freaked out. She is human and acted normally you can't expect her to react perfectly in every situation. She did hold her own against Tanya.  I am glad Edward told her off rather than the gentleman apporach.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 119: Bella

I am glad Charlie spoke to Jake.

About KStew and RPatts. I totaly agree with you. It is their buisness, who are any of us to comment on what they should or shouldn't do next or what they have done.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 120: Edward

So do the guys get any weekend leaves to travel to Seattle or meet them halfway?

Don't have any pick up lines to share all though when I was younger a guy tried to pick me up when I was working he was about twice my age and had his children with him. Freaked me out a bit.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 129: Bella

Like the panites sayings.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 131: Bella

yay a month left.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

Yay. I am glad he is taking leave.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

Sweet reunion. The best line I think though had to be from the little boy that army came to get her. snicker.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 154: Edward

So I totaly misinterpeted the trimming the tree part. All I could think is October is too early for Christmas lights. I then realized that you meant as in pruning. Silly me.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 169: Bella

Did you know that they are coming out with a Christmas Story II? I can watch it once during the season, but not contiuously.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 171: Bella

I rather take an animal from the shelter too. The commercials kill me each time. Thankfully my kids are too young to understand that they are abused.

I am glad  they went that way too.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 172: Edward

Cute proposal

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Perfect way to end for them. I enjoyed the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am enjoying your story so far. I like the fact you seemed to research the era well for it too.  I am not sure if I missed it but hold is Charles?  My guess is about ten. I am not sure if I missed or if it wasn't mentioned.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh no I hope she doesn't lose Charles too.  I am assuming Edward would come rushing back if he can.