Reviews by ahommel
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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268790
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I've gotta take a break from reading this morning and get some things done, but I really wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying your story. Now I know it's fiction, BUT I'm a mom who gave my daughter up for adoption when I was 18 - the circumstances were VERY different than what happened in this story, BUT it's really given me another perspective to consider. My daughter just turned 15 and I'm still in her life as an "aunt", and ever since she found out she was adopted, I've been waiting for them to tell her who I am, but reading this story (again I know it's fiction) I realize that the reactions that the Cullens are all having are all very well the reactions her different family members could have. I later married and have two wonderful children, and I worry about their reactions as I read about Garrett and Angela, and so this story has really had an emotional impact on me. Anyways, thank you again and I cannot wait to keep reading a little later. :))

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: ahommel Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am so hooked on your story and was so excited to find this mid-week update. I hope you spoil us with two updates this week! :) 

I wonder, if since she already knows Edward - well human Edward, how this change their relationship moving forward? Will it develop the same way as in Twilight or will it change completly? Why did Tanya and everyone stay away while she was in Forks? Argh so many unanswered questions, keeps me coming back for more. :)



Author's Response:

Not to worry!  I will be updating soon!

Bella had nothing to do with the Cullen's high-tailing it out of town.  They left because of the "missing" campers.  They had help going missing, if you catch my drift.  More on that later.

Vampire Edward is coming in chapter 20 which I will be updating shortly, but I'm afraid you'll have to wait for your answers a little longer!

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: ahommel Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

WARNING: I'm leaving you a long review, because I know just how good reviews feel, so since you are currently my favorite author and this is my favorite story of all my favorite stories, I'm leaving you an extra long review. :)) And because you're pretty awesome. :)

Ahhh! Darn you!!! In a good way of course. Today my husband and I did some belated spring cleaning in our kids rooms - several boxes and bags later, I sat down to relax. I had seen the update come in earlier and put off reading it as a little treat when I finished their rooms. Just put my feet up and read this chapter and gosh darnit - I want more! I worked really really hard today ... ;-)

This was a great chapter, but I kind feel this was a filler chapter as we didn't really learn that much more. Don't mean this in a bad way, it just wasn't as meaty as the other chapters, but I still enjoyed it as much as the other chapters, and this for sure moved us closer to Edward and Bella (I hope). 

So here's my musings ... I wonder if Carlisle will go into Bella's room and recognize the desk. Of course, I can't recall if Carlisle ever saw Edward's desk, so maybe I should re-read from the beginning while I wait for next Saturday. ;-) Or perhaps, Edward will make a decision to go to Bella before they leave and Alice will have a vision which will give Edward more clues about who Bella is to him. Can't wait to see what happens! Awesome writing as usual. Have a wonderful week! :)



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm your favorite!  Thanks!  You're pretty awesome yourself! 

I've given up on cleaning my son's room.  Now, I just hire professionals.  They've got Hazmat suits.

Not so much of a learning chapter, more moving from point A to point B.  "Point B" being Forks!  The next chapter we will learn more.  Dots will begin to be connected, but I'm warning you, it comes at a price.  Chapter 22 ends with a bit of a cliff hanger.

As for Carlisle and the desk, no and yes. 

Thanks for reviewing!  See you next Saturday!

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I went and voted before I even read the chapter. I hope you win! :-) Another excellent chapter, but booo with the cliff hanger! Saturday just can't come early enough now! Thank you so much for the special treat. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the vote! 

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I'm being greedy I know, but since you published this on Friday do we get a Labor Day weekend goodie and chapter 28 tomorrow? Please oh please with a kiss from Edwardn top?



Author's Response:

Sorry, no.  I'm switching to a Friday update rather than Saturday because I found two new sites to post the next chapter's teaser on, and one of them posts on Saturday.

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I just realized it was Saturday and there was a new chapter yesterday. I do hope everything is okay. I re-read this chapter just to feed my habit, hahaha. Can't wait for the next chapter. Have a wonderful day! :))

 

PS - I hope she re-reads those earlier letters so she can connect the dots. Are we going to see more of Charlie interactions now that he knows and they know he knows?



Author's Response:

New chapter is up!  Sorry for the delay.  Everything is fine, thanks for asking.  Yesterday was just one of those days when you feel like you're running on a treadmill.  No matter how hard you run, you just don't get anywhere.  Enjoy!

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

What a treat! I cannot wait for the weekend just to read the after math! You're writing is fantastic and really captures the emotions and feel of situations within this story.



Author's Response:

Hopefully the next chapter will be satisfying for everyone.  I've gotten so many "She should...." comments from opposite ends of the spectrum, I hope you'll all like what I did with it!

Ginnungagap by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 165]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Ginnungagap Banner: the castle, the servant, the Queen, and the land.

Forced into a marriage with a man she fears, Izabel must choose between changing him or falling in love with a stranger. 

 


Ginnungagap has been

  • Nominated for the TwiFanfictionRecs Top 10 Completed fic in May. Vote here! Polls close on June 30th!

 

  • Rec'd by The Other Realm.


  • Featured on Fic Central as an "Under the Radar" fic.

 

  • Listed on TWCS under "Featured Stories"

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149484 Read Count: 42210
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 23 May 2016
Reviewer: ahommel Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Servant

The newest teaser for Chapter Seven has been posted in the Twilighted forums under shameless plugs. :-) I'd love for you to go check it out and let me know what you think!

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

“Good heavens, boy.” Jack Sparrow drawled as he leaned back in his chair and looked at her, “Are you blushing?” he asked with narrowed eyes and Josette shifted in her chair while fixing the hat upon her head. “No.” she mumbled as she avoided looking at her captain and his latest conquest. Jack studied her face before he smirked, “You’re not a virgin, are you?” his eyes danced with mirth and she scowled.
No, I am. But what I certainly am not is a boy. She thought as she remained silent.

 

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Categories: Pirates of the Caribbean, Alternate Universe
Characters: Captain Jack Sparrow/Other Character
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113819 Read Count: 12215
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2012 Updated: 01 Nov 2012
Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

How does this story not have more reviews? What a great story, I'm loving it so far. I even put off my morning walk to sit and read it. Can't wait for more. :-) Is there an update schedule?



Author's Response:

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Ahhhh cliffie! I think the source is Adele - that woman is no good. Excellent chapter can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Throw Adele off in the middle of the sea, evil skank deserves it. >:(

 

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Night I Will Never Forget

I want to know whatnots like the morning after!



Author's Response:

The morning after is in the works.

Summary:

BannerFans.com This is the sequel to O Holy Night. Excerpt: She smiled but it was full of malice. "Have faith, Alec. I have a feeling that Aro won't even know what hit him." He pulled her to a stop. "Isabella, please," he pleaded urgently. "I've searched for centuries for you. I can't bear to lose you when I've just now found you. Don't do anything foolish." An AU Twilight story...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Alec
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5012 Read Count: 781
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2012 Updated: 25 Dec 2012
Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait for the confrontation!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814068
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

Come on, just a couple more for tonight. Please? :))

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella’s life takes a horrible turn after Edward leaves her so she makes a call to the one person she could always count on to be there for her. Through him, she meets a whole team of heroes and eventually crosses paths with a god with a chip on his shoulder… Bella/Loki.

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Categories: Avengers, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Loki/Bella
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I love
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 112335 Read Count: 25672
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2014 Updated: 19 Sep 2020
Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Suit Up

I both love and hate it when you update. Love it because I cannot wait to read what happens next, hate it when I reach the end. I'm really enjoying this story and am eager to read what happens next! It's very well written and I can tell you put a lot of time into it. 

The Promise by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

In desperation, he made a promise... one he had every intention of keeping… but could he, when his life was no longer his own, much less any kind of a life?  Only decades of time and unseen mystical forces would hold the answer.  New Moon AU Vamp/Human Time Travel, Rated for eventual lemons


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55191 Read Count: 8742
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2014 Updated: 28 Dec 2014
Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I had just finished reading the WHOLE story that I stumbled on this morning and was beyond delighted to see the update this evening! I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next! Can't wait for the next chapter! :-)

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I literally screamed at the screen when I reached the end of the chapter! No! I don't want the chapter to be over! Can't wait for more! 

Summary:

After a series of deaths in Forks, the Winchesters come in to investigate. Not the best synopsis, but read to find out more.


Categories: Supernatural TV Series, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9674 Read Count: 1602
[Report This] Published: 10 Jan 2015 Updated: 25 Jul 2015
Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I decided to take a risk on this story, despite the very brief summary. I've read some pretty amazing Twilight and Supernatural cross-overs and am admittedly spoiled. So, I was a little nervous, because I wanted to like the story.

And I love it. Very well written, the story already has me hooked and I'm hoping the updates will come more often than once a month, but I understand how it sometimes goes. I cannot wait for the next chapter and to see where Bella is since we know she was there when the Stanley's were murdered and how she will interact with Dean and Sam. This fic won't fly under the radar for long. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, you have no idea how much I needed this review, I was actually starting to have some doubts about this story. So Thank You so much for your review. I am actually trying to update twice a month, but lately it seems like I only have time for a monthly update. Reviews like yours help inspire my muse. Once again Thank You for taking the chance and for your wonderful review.