Penname: LillianBroderick [Contact] Real name: Aileen Grey
Member Since: 04 Sep 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Avid reader and great admirer of quality fan fiction. I love where various writers take the characters of Twilight.  I am in awe of the creativity, vision and generousity of the writers sharing their work here for us all to enjoy. 


I have now become a fanfiction writer and am having a wonderful time.  I am working on my fourth story now and couldn't be happier.  


I am still an avid reader of other fanfiction writers because i love it. 


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Reviews by LillianBroderick
Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 228224
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Such a complex and emotional situation.  No one is right and no one is wrong. 

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Thank you for sharing this emotional story.

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 534]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 92536
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Ruling

Thank you for this story. I enjoyed it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 297295
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout

Awww.  I am all caught up and must now wait for updates like everyone else.  Loving this!

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation

How lovely to have an update - I love this story.  

I want her to finish that score.

Watching You by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Edward's been watching Bella for three years during college and now graduation is only one week away! Will he finally man up and ask her out, or will he be too late?

 

watching you


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1971 Read Count: 1838
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Watching You

Gorgeous

Summary:

Bella Swan, a quiet librarian who always has nose buried in a book and a knitting fanatic, is addicted to anything that is related to Christmas. She’s a walking encyclopedia of useless Christmas facts. Edward Cullen hates Christmas. Every Christmas, he’s had something terrible happen to him. So, he treats like a regular day, ignoring the festivities. Bella is determined to get Edward to love Christmas. Will Bella’s over-zealousness drive Edward away or make him begin to enjoy the Christmas holiday again after many years of tragedy and sadness?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11194 Read Count: 2623
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2013 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Save a Reindeer, Ride a Cullen

Had to re read this - I loved it.... Again

Summary:

 

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Bella is a twenty two year old mother of three and a widow. Her husband Emmett gunned down in a shootout with the DEA during an undercover raid. She vows to take her children away from the life, to let them grow up normal but then she meets the new Underboss Edward Cullen who falls for her and her children but refuses to play second to Emmet's ghost. Can she let go of her past?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25290 Read Count: 7281
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2013 Updated: 13 Jan 2014
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Just love this story so much

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Gutsy move walking in Sal's together.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

Go Esme 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 278955
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Fabulous update.  How can Phil stay w renee?  Huge leap forward for Edward and bella relationship - cannot wait til the next chapter. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It is hard to believe a father could be so cruel.  But there are so many real life examples.  My own father was a wonderful man and it breaks my heart to think of a man like Charlie treating his own daughter so badly.



Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great wedding. Pity Renee tried to spoil things.  Nice Seth / Edward telationship. Thx for the update.



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love their growing intimacy.  Renee is awful and I am sorry love may be blind but in Phil's case love is bloody stupid as well.  Great update just sorry we have to wait another wee.  But I will try to be patient



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother.  With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise.  Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should.  Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well.  Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself.  Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths.  I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance. 

A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing.  Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood.  Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them.  I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents.  This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know. 

As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.

“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.

“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.

Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this.  Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”

I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”

“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.

“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.

“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.

“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awesome chapter - love how striong bella is getting. Well done Edward.  Tanya is a worry.  Mix up Jane ? Is that the kind of mix up that will lead to a pregnancy???? 



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am very proud of bella. Also proud of Edward he was very human in this chapter. I liked the proposalsnd of corse Esme was wonderful. Thx but no more cliffies ok?



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well Charlie's family is awful but we knew that already.  Sue is weak but we knew that too. I am excited about the pregnancy. 



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wedding next! Yay!



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Epic chapter. So much has happened. I am glad bella is seeing that justice is being served but I feel for her. She must be so tired of all the drama. Thx for the update



Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 87994
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

To bella!  I am glad her brothers are on board. Do you think Edward suspected the danger?  Bringing her family early, telling her something was happening and that he loved her w his whole heart?  Coincidence? 

 

Great update.  Loving it

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter - well done bella!

Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awesome as always 

All's Fair by Greytosteele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 138]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Christian Grey has proven himself in the business world. At thirty-one, he finds himself bored with life. The world of mergers and acquisitions no longer holds the same thrill. He wants more. Frustrated with government red tape and corrupt politicians, he decides to run for the Senate. Enter Anastasia Steele, an up and coming star in the political arena. AU fanfic.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134663 Read Count: 22641
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 30 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Lillian Broderick Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.

Oh dear. Should have nipped that 'date' in the bud but to stay she'd be in his bed - oh dear he got that all wrong didn't he.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

i am sorry to hear this has happened to you.  i have had a look at Wattpad and cannot find it but it is a very difficult site to navigate.  i hope tey are made to remove your work and are censured in some way for theft. 

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

svo

I was having a really bad day. Boys are persistent, and Edward Cullen is laughing at me. A little daydreaming never hurt anybody. AU BPOV


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 175228 Read Count: 54208
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 24 Sep 2016
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer

This is fun. Sounds like it is going to get interesting with the wolves and Edward better not try - end of discussion - again. I don't think Bella will like that.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 ~ Deductible

Lmao

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 ~ First Lessons in Relationships

Perfection

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 ~ Step Into The Light

So sweet

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ The Tour

I periodically wean myself off coffee only to start up again when things get busy at work.  The first few cups make me chatter like crazy - very funny.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 ~ Over the Holidays

Loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 137031
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Lovely, thanks

Summary:

 

She didn’t have a choice, to save her children and herself she needed to listen to the man who just put a gun against her lower back and said: “Turn around and hug me like I am your man.”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31722 Read Count: 49280
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2014 Updated: 31 Aug 2014
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

All going to come to a head now. I am glad jasper and Alice are okay, if a little battered.



Author's Response:

Yeah, i think they were lucky, well a little lucky.

Nothing time will heal

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have never seen snow. It would be expensive to dress warm enough I imagine.



Author's Response:

never seen snow? that i can't imagine hahaha

it is expensive to buy winterclothes, Bella even has to buy for two children and herself...

 

 

thank you for reading and reviewing

love to hear your what you think about each chapter.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ninja skills :)



Author's Response:

hahaha can you see him do it?

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

How frightening for her.



Author's Response:

yes it is and she needs to stay calm for her kids at the same time... very hard thing to do

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

She is probably operating on adrenalin



Author's Response:

yes, i would think so too.

 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A natural reaction to danger but not useful :)



Author's Response:

hahaha not usefull at all i would say.

now see realy is in trouble... she can't see where he is taking them

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Baby can smell really really bad



Author's Response:

hahaha I KNOW hahaha

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Basic cabin - ugh.  I don't do well in rustic - I hope bella fares better



Author's Response:

i think i will go crazy.. i need to be able to get out... to move around...

 

 

ps you can read fast

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Safe but trapped in a cabin with a stranger.



Author's Response:

is she realy safe? or is he just telling her that to keep her calm?

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sleeping next to him each night must be .... Teasing



Author's Response:

hmmm sleeping with temptation....

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Distracted by 'only a towel'. ... Oh my



Author's Response:

hahaha ..... how to sleep next to him now without  attacking him in your sleep

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I feel sorry for the couple living in Bella's house.  This guy is a mean one isn't he!



Author's Response:

he is a real nutcase yes...

 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh my, I need a cool down... Yes the towel incident is my favourite



Author's Response:

hahaha no time to cool down... read... hahaha

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

well me oh my wasn't that a treat!



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

thank goodness for Edward's miraculous control... yummy update 



Author's Response:

glad you liked it

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Sexy update. They are so comfortable w each other.

hope you had a good Easter too



Author's Response:

Hi, thank you

 

Our easter had a black note to it...  (grandma passed away the week before easter) but we had fun too

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Silly Edward.  There are plenty of ways to enjoy each other without full on sex but it will be hard... Lol.

great that the kids are having a lovely Christmas. Lovely that are sharing care for the kids and they are feeling more and more for each other too.

wonder if she is preggers ... Only takes one time.

thx for the update.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

They were so desperate and needy for each other.... Very hot



Author's Response:

Two weeks is a tiny space....with no sex but a lot of time and sexynisss

I feel for them hahaha

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh dear. I fear for Alice 



Author's Response:

let's hope she and Jasper will be ok....

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Mister jerks sounds scary but he's on our boy's side I hope.



Author's Response:

yes mr. Jenks isn't someone you want against you...

in their world you don't know who to trust anymore...

so let's hope Edward trust the right people..

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I don't like the idea of Alice and Jasper being tortured by Caius. Caius always freaks me out.

 



Author's Response:

Keep fait.... 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Fascinating! Nice update, thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you :-)

Summary:

fvwl

A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 111986
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

He's found the magic key to unlocking Isabella!

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Such a pair

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Tempestuous

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Impulsive much. 

 

Well this is so damned fabulous I just want to read it again.  I hope you can update soon.  Awesome!

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Let the games begin - yeah!

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oops!

awesome update, thank you.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

why does he think she'll do what he told her to... what precedence does he have for hoping that... lol.  thx for the update.

End of Innocence by pappy73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary:

They say what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger. Being an Italian Godfather will not stop a Sicilian Principessa from murdering him, it will only make her more determined. We love hard and fight harder that's just who we are, but when faced with the largest obstacle of our life, can we come out of it togther or will it tear us apart?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106618 Read Count: 13672
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2014 Updated: 10 Mar 2015
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It is one step forward and two steps back for these two isn't it

geat update, thx

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Long night.  Glad they are talking

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Not an Update

all the best.  I am sorry for your trouble and thank you for writing and sharing with us. I hope you return and i hope you finish if for no other reason if only to prove that hate doesn't win.  

god bless you too sweetie.

 

Aileen/Lillian Broderick 

Going Down by Redtini Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 679]
Summary: Past Featured Story

redtini

 

Bella Swan was recruited to The Cullen Firm as the new Managing Director of Global Relations. Unbeknownst to her, she never remembered applying for the position. Yet, luck was on her side, and the offer was too great to pass up. Through one strange encounter and a series of events, Bella realizes that luck had nothing to do with it. Drama/Romance/Angst/Lemons/mild BDSM.    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133702 Read Count: 186031
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2017
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

edward did the wrong thing it seems

but bella did too

if edward was visiting and seeing his ex Bella would have a fit yet she continues with jake - i've never understood this about bella.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

dramatic much Bella?

i suppose i am too harsh on her but she always wants everything on her terms.... 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  sexy.



Author's Response:

Thanks Hun!

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i don't think she knows what she's dealing with when it comes to Mr Cullen



Author's Response:

That could be true.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

an exciting night... very stimulating visit to the Club

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i love that he keeps saying that



Author's Response:

Thanks Hun!

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Masen?



Author's Response:

Maybe?

 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

he certainly keeps his cool

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so he has a dominant nature and in the past has been a Dominant.  now he wants a vanilla relationship with Bella (like his ex) but wants her to know that he had preferences.... is that about it? 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

he is proving to be a very patient man... i am glad they got that sorted... 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

that was tense... james huh?!

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i agree with Edward - she is holding back.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

distant relative? 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

so james is either screwy or edward is telling us everything... or both.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Oh dear, more secrets.

glad Carlisle has taken the sting out of James tail but sounds like Edward may still have a secret or two.... 

 

Thx for the update - love your writing. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

One and Only

 

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 88080
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella

So nice

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love

So sad

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13

Oh dear - I am guessing it is mr king

Summary: Past Featured Story

hh

Bella Swan hates Valentine's Day, and everything about it. Her past experiences in love have left her with a jaded view on relationships. After quitting college, she gets a job at a diner, where she makes friends and finds herself in a new job. What happens when the CEO gets under her skin, will she open up to what she really wants from him, or run off and hide?  all human/olderward - w/a smidge of daddykink. 

Banner by the talented Christag Banners.

fs


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47353 Read Count: 87395
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2015 Updated: 18 Feb 2015
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am just living this.  Excited for epov

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Edward beat Paul. Interesting. I like his protective nature.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh Edward 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good to have his side of things.  I love that he made the cake himself.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, perfect fir.  I mean they are a perfect fit.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Another fab chapter

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Fantasy-filled weekend they are having

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Feel the same way about valentines as bella

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

top ten

Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 422643
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A great first night together

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 30 May 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Fab. Loved Emmett and Rosie.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The sexual build up was amazing, I am not surprised she had an emotional meltdown afterwards - love the ring.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I loved this chapter too.  Bella needs to control her jealousy though, she is engaged to one very sexy man

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Taking Control

what a great update - thanks

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Action packed - loved the backstory conversation and to hear if Bella's lineage.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Awesome

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 23343
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jun 2015
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it

Summary:

 

Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 107421
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think what I have thought all along. :)

thx for the update - loving this story.

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love it.