Reviews by mistresselektra
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310958
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

Oh God, scary! This is so much scarier than the Training School Saga.

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Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

Oh, that was just as scary as the last chapter. And creepy!

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Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

I was so creeped out by Aro here. I don't talk about this often, but I was involved in a group that was cult-like. It wasn't this perverted, but it brought back all sorts of awful memories for me.

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Eep. That was creepy.

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Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

I almost thought Edward enjoyed that there.

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

I keep thinking of the movie The Villiage whenever I read this.

I don't see why Aro isn't using sex to emasculate the men of their wives and to control the wives- because who would turn down God incarnate if He wanted to have sex with you? Sexual abuse is a huge part of the mind control of a cult.



Author's Response:

You know in our minds... Aro truly believes that lust is BAD...but he can't help himself.  It is like he is dueling with his inner demons.  He really thinks that by keeping all the wicked thoughts away.. he will keep evil out...  HE IS A WEIRDO... what can we say.. But there is LOTS of story left.. so ... you never know.. hahahahah.. GOD WE ARE MEAN.. thanks so much for your review and for enjoying our story.

Have a great weekend.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514158
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

I really, really hope he's dead.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624471
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I think Edward should get Bella pregnant they should make a run for Georgia to take advantage of the shotgun wedding laws and then run like hell out of the country until Bella's 18 and have the bb! Fuck this give her to Demetri shit. And don't get start beating her ass again, Eddie! 

Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I hope Carlisle, Marcus and Demetri become fertilizer for Esme's garden.

I'm so glad Edward told her what and why he was doing what he was doing, finally. He didn't actually have to hurt her. Thank goodness.

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Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

I was wondering Esme's story. It makes a lot of sense, her garden. But, I wonder what will happen when Carlisle/Edward discovers Bella's journals. You've got me on the edge of my seat, bb!

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

I am so relieved that Edward tracked her down! Thank goodness!

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

make me bawl, why don't you?

The gate being torn down should have taken the place of the engagement ring, I think.

It was great. Thank you for writing this!

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19228
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great! Is this the end? I hope not!



Author's Response:

No this is not the end.  We haven't seen Jasper's transformation yet

Summary:

Bella's parents died just before her 18th birthday. She's devastated and doesn't know how to move forward. She meets a handsome man one night.  Could he be the best or the worst thing that's ever happened to her?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2591 Read Count: 410
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Was this supposed to be a one-shot? Because so much happened in such a short period of writing time, that's all, it just felt.... kinda rushed, that's all I'm saying. I feel like you could have fleshed it out some more over several chapters so we could feel Bella's angst.



Author's Response:

You are correct. It was kinda rushed but I literally wrote it as soon as I woke up and ya know the dream was way faster than what I wrote. It could be fleshed out and who knows what I may do! Lol

Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43561
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home

I liked it, but I felt a little off by Carlisle being Esme's brother.

The Sex Talk by Jennmc75 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Get inside Charlie's head and see what he was thinking during the "sex talk" that takes place in chapter 2 of Eclipse.  My entry for the Twilight Novel Novice Eclipse Fan Fiction Challenge.  Rated T.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Charlie/None
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2170 Read Count: 873
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Sex Talk - One Shot

Poor, poor Charlie! If only he knew about Vampire Sparkle Peen Sex, he'd be jumping out of his skin, sending Bella to a convent! I LOL-ed at a few parts!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, bb!  I know!  If Charlie only knew :)  I'm glad you laughed.  I was going for a bit of the humor

Thanks so much for reviewing!

~Jenn

Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37452
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
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Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The ER

Is Edward the John? What's the "unthinkable" thing he does?



Author's Response:

Edward is not the John in the bar. That is just some random dude w/ a prosititute.  The unthinkable thing will come out. Trust me.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle and Esme are the foundation of the Cullen Coven.  However, this love story started as a tragedy for Esme -- a loveless marriage, the death of her baby and finally an attempt at suicide.  This story traces how Carlisle and Esme eventually find each other and fall in love.  It weaves together Carlisle's and Esme's bio facts provided to Twilight Lexicon by Stephenie Meyer with some original ideas. Canon! Rated R for later lemon content.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49807 Read Count: 3984
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Sight

I love a good Carlisle/ Esme story. I hope you continue with this one! I did enjoy Esme's escape.



Author's Response:

Thank you Mistress E for the comments.  I so loooovvveee C&E (and I throw my love for young Edward in this one too).  I hope to have next chapter ready by next weekend (*fingers crossed*)

Blind Faith by rmcrms5 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Karsyn McKenna grew up, sheltered and loved, in a small Texas town.  Chase Carter is the local rancher who has secretly loved her forever.  Gabriel Thompson is the stranger who comes to town with secrets of his own.  Caught in a web of deception and lies that lead to murder, she must choose between the man she knows or the one who holds her heart.  Will blind faith be her salvation or her destruction?


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 683
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It looks like a good start to a good book. I definitely will be looking for it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

Separate Ways by Jennmc75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

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Ever wonder how Charlie and Renee met? Why they had a Vegas wedding? Separate Ways is what I think happened to bring Charlie and Renee together and eventually tear them apart.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Charlie/Renee
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4365 Read Count: 182
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 20 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Change for the Better

It's so funny to see Charlie as a rookie cop! I thought for sure the call down at the high school was going to be Renee!

Worried about Charlie's Mom, though...



Author's Response:

I'm having so much fun writing rookie Charlie.  We aren't quite ready for Renee to fully pop into the story.

The thing I hate about writing this canon is that Charlie does not have a happy story for most of it.  I love his character and hate having to write all of his tragedies but I want to keep the story true to the Twilight universe.

Thanks so much for taking the time to check this first chapter out and review :)