Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm
This will forever be my favorite story. 💜
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm
This will forever be my favorite story. 💜
Date: 30 Sep 2023 3:56 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Wonderful Story. Loved it.
Date: 30 Sep 2023 3:35 AM Title: Outside the Box
You are a WONDERFUL writer. NEVER listen to the cyber trolls. They are TROLLS! You on the other hand are a QUEEN! I love you! Thank you so much for being brave and sharing your work with us. I feel privileged. I love ALL of your work.
Date: 28 Sep 2023 11:44 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Wonderful Story. Loved it.
Date: 28 Sep 2023 6:29 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Wonderful Story. Loved it.
Date: 25 Sep 2023 5:57 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Again hilarious, scary, but hilarious. Loved it. And you'l probably be mad at me, but I've never seen more than a glimpse of Gray's Anatomy. :(
Date: 25 Sep 2023 4:27 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
I thought this chapter was hilarious! I woke my husband up with my laughing out loud. I loved her reactions and they got even better when she took the meds. His proposal was just fine, (what does Carlisle know) and definitely so them. The only thing I'm wondering now is if as doctors they'll still remember that Antibiotics cause birth control to fail!?! Let's not remind them though.
Date: 30 Aug 2023 8:56 AM Title: The Story Of Us
OK love al even more now - he's a good guy. Not upset with Tanya, she's VERY hurt. She'll work it out. Hopefully James feels like crap and makes it up to her. And by the way, 5 years is WAY to short to be getting bored with his sex life. He's a douche nozzle.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2023 7:55 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Wow, I REALLY enjoyed that chapter way more than I anticipated. Getting to hear hisPOV was refreshing and it made me like him a lot more than I did. I mistook him for a creepy dude who was trying to steal Bella from Edward (even though I knew that could never happen), but now I see him as a really nice kid whom Edward and Bella could probably be friends with. I have to admit I'm VERY disappointed with James though. It's obvious that he still has feelings for Bella and always did and now he feels it's ok to cheat (even if it's an open relationship, it's fairly clearly defined) and if he'll cheat on his wife, who's to say he won't make another play for Bella, right? It's fair to assume so now. LOVE THIS STORY - can't wait for more and the next one. Good call on the name change too. This name has better 'attraction" than the name of the hospital where they work, especially since Bella only worked there for a couple of chapters.
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm
I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...
Thank you.
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm
I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2023 2:52 PM Title: Weather the Storm
"Keep my wife's name out your fucking mouth!" I stood from my seat.
Reading this line in 2023 is fucking comical🤣
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:54 PM Title: Weather the Storm
Of course, I really love every chapter you write, But I especially loved Bella, putting Esme and her place. I hope she tells Carlisle and Edward what she did, but I know that's not her personality.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:45 AM Title: Weather the Storm
I can't believe he'd tap that after Edward and Alec... Blech!!
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:04 AM Title: Weather the Storm
This time I'm reviewing your authors note at the beginning of this chapter.
Your story is GREAT, true to mob life (as far as we know) and your Edward is great just the way he is warts and all. Bella too! If people criticize you for what you write, they SHOULDN"T READ IT!!!!! It takes a lot of guts to make yourself vulnerable to criticism when you publish your words. You write your stories the way YOU SEE FIT!!! If someone don't like it they should stop reading and SHUT UP!! I hate thinking you as a writer are upset because some bigmouth doesn't like the water thing are being written. If they don't like it maybe they should give writing a story a try and see how they fair with the critics huh?
Just to let you know, YOU ARE DOING GREAT, WONDERFUL, STUPENDOUS!!! Love all of your work. Keep it up and don't let anyone tell you that you are not doing it right. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE you!! I can't say it enough. Great work, even the scary, angsty parts.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 7:41 AM Title: Weather the Storm
I'm kinda worried about Esme plotting to kill Edward or Bella or both! She seems spoiled rotten and hellbent on getting what she wants and getting away with murder literally.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2023 2:33 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.
Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee!
I may be in shock!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2023 8:43 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.
Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee!
I may be in shock!
Date: 29 Jun 2023 9:44 PM Title: Weather the Storm
I can tell you this from reading hundreds and hundreds of these fanfiction stories. Us readers we don't mind a monster word count. I love the longer stories I always read them first. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:19 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.
Date: 14 Jun 2023 8:47 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Two words... Amazingly insane! I absolutely LOVED it!
Date: 14 Mar 2023 11:22 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Not entirely sure why people were giving you such a tough time with this story (it's fucking stupid that they were so "offended" that they reported you but whatever)
I love it and I come back to your work like once a year. Maybe it's because I lived in Brooklyn for 10+ years and am from Jersey -- or maybe it's your writing style or maybe it's because I prefer this story over the original material *shrug* - I dont care - love your work and it hits a spot for me! Thanks so much.
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:34 PM Title: Weather the Storm
This dream was unbelievably grim but great
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm
This dream was unbelievably grim but great
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm
This dream was unbelievably grim but great
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:38 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:17 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:07 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it
Date: 10 Sep 2022 4:52 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 09 Sep 2022 8:41 PM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2022 4:24 AM Title: Sticks and Stones
Cute. Funny. A little too choppy and abbreviated for my tastes, but good overall.
Date: 05 Sep 2022 10:32 PM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:46 PM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:51 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:44 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2022 2:26 AM Title: The Mating Connection
Love love your stories .....
Date: 22 Jun 2022 2:26 AM Title: The Mating Connection
Love love your stories .....
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2022 5:50 PM Title: Quiet Storm
This is the sleaziest Carlisle ever but I can't help but love him.
Date: 08 Mar 2022 7:25 PM Title: Quiet Storm
I've been looking all over for this story and it was well worth the work. I'm already hooked on this story.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2022 3:16 AM Title: The Mating Connection
I have always loved this story, so very glad to find it on here, thank you for sharing your creativity!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2022 3:16 AM Title: The Mating Connection
I have always loved this story, so very glad to find it on here, thank you for sharing your creativity!
Date: 11 Feb 2022 3:15 AM Title: The Mating Connection
I have always loved this story, so very glad to find it on here, thank you for sharing your creativity!
Date: 07 Sep 2021 3:25 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Alice is a pushy bit*h in this.
If she wants Bella to stay away from Edward, maybe she tells her why? Instead of cryptic comments.
Date: 07 Sep 2021 3:25 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Alice is a pushy bit*h in this.
If she wants Bella to stay away from Edward, maybe she tells her why? Instead of cryptic comments.
Date: 28 Aug 2021 2:20 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2021 5:07 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
Date: 15 Aug 2021 12:51 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Love love loved this story. You are an amazing writer. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 15 Aug 2021 12:33 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Love seeing into their future.
Date: 14 Aug 2021 10:40 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
So glad they are back in the playroom.
Date: 14 Aug 2021 1:18 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
I'm so glad that the delivery went well. Glad everyone was healthy.
Date: 14 Aug 2021 1:18 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
I'm so glad that the delivery went well. Glad everyone was healthy.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 10:25 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
I am glad Esme finally decided to talk to Edward. It took her long enough. 3 babies!!!!!!! Wow.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 7:48 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Well, that was interesting. Carmen was jealous of Esme.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 7:18 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
What in the world was in that envelope that Charlie gave Esme?????? I can't wait to read Esme's pov.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 5:22 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
So much fun in the new playroom. Thomas was definitely having too much fun with his phone call to Edward. I can't believe Esme invited Tanya and her mother. I'm glad Bella was honest with them. Hopefully NOW Esme will see her mistakes and apologize to Edward and Bella.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 2:08 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
I hope what Emily said to her grandmother really opens Esme's eyes.
Date: 12 Aug 2021 8:13 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Their lives are coming together and they are closer to Happily Ever After.
Date: 12 Aug 2021 3:34 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Beautiful wedding!!!!!!!!!! Edward is the best.
Oh no, how did Esme find out they were returning from their trip. She didn't even know they went.
Date: 11 Aug 2021 1:03 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Boy Tanya and Esme both are a piece of work. Tanya I'm not surprised, but Esme, I definitely am. Does she not think Edward is lovable??? I just don't understand. Loved that Bella had Edward's back when it came to the school board. Also, loved the grocery store scene. Lol.
Date: 10 Aug 2021 2:02 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Wow, Esme must really have a problem with Bella even after her dad came and talked to her. Front page news. I would definitely say the cat is out of the bag now.
Date: 09 Aug 2021 4:16 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Who was in Bella's apartment and how did they get in?????
Date: 09 Aug 2021 3:32 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
So glad the kids were happy about Edward and Bella being together. I can't figure out what is Rose and Alice's problem.
Date: 09 Aug 2021 1:58 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Loved this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2021 9:19 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Wow, what a scary situation for the kids. Love little Evan. Glad Charlie was as understanding as he was.
Date: 08 Aug 2021 4:20 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
So much going on in this chapter. Loved Bella's pay back from Edward. Lol. Glad Edward got legal custody of the kids. Still don't like Tanya gets them 50%. The only reason she wants them is to hurt Edward. So glad Bella and Rose are there for Emily.
Date: 08 Aug 2021 3:50 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Loved Bella playing with Edward. I am worried that James is going to cause problems. Will he and Tanya help each other? That could be bad.
Date: 07 Aug 2021 5:00 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Love the cottage.
Date: 07 Aug 2021 2:38 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
I am glad that Emily feels so comfortable talking to Bella about those sensitive subject. Bella gave him very good advice about handling Tanya.
Date: 06 Aug 2021 4:33 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?
Bella had everything thought out.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2021 1:02 AM Title: The Mating Connection
good finish for Charlie
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: The Mating Connection
very nice
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: The Mating Connection
very nice
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2021 12:00 AM Title: The Mating Connection
If you truly love someone you choose them because ultimately parents die and leave you
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2021 1:36 PM Title: The Mating Connection
I love this edward
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2021 11:33 PM Title: The Mating Connection
me too
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2021 9:41 PM Title: The Mating Connection
some nice subtle changes from the original
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2021 9:41 PM Title: The Mating Connection
some nice subtle changes from the original
Date: 27 Mar 2021 3:27 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 02 Mar 2021 1:18 PM Title: Quiet Storm
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2021 7:59 PM Title: Quiet Storm
This is my FAVORITE story!!!!
Date: 01 Feb 2021 4:19 AM Title: The Story Of Us
My husband had a gem-pop in his upper left leg
Date: 31 Jan 2021 6:55 PM Title: The Story Of Us
So very sweet
Date: 29 Jan 2021 1:23 AM Title: Quiet Storm
i'm so happy i sought this fic out! these mob fics are always so fascinating to me, and god, this one has been such a ride. these last few chapters have been such a nail-biter. i keep skimming it just to make sure nothing happens between edward and bella, or that edward isn't unfaithful to her, and so far i'm just glad. i love their crazy asses so much. i'll be back near the end to review but holy shit, carlisle is so fucked here.
Date: 08 Jan 2021 6:17 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
If anyone read this chapter and didn't laugh their asses off, then they have no sense of humor at all. Because a couple of times I thought I was going to pee my pants!!
Date: 08 Jan 2021 6:17 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
If anyone read this chapter and didn't laugh their asses off, then they have no sense of humor at all. Because a couple of times I thought I was going to pee my pants!!
Date: 03 Dec 2020 11:57 AM Title: Sticks and Stones
This story has been a hoot to read and i loved every minute of reading! Thank you for writing it!
Date: 03 Dec 2020 11:57 AM Title: Sticks and Stones
This story has been a hoot to read and i loved every minute of reading! Thank you for writing it!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:10 AM Title: Uninhibited Wallflower
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:10 AM Title: Uninhibited Wallflower
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: Uninhibited Wallflower
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: Uninhibited Wallflower
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: Uninhibited Wallflower
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: Uninhibited Wallflower
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
Date: 05 Nov 2020 1:46 AM Title: Quiet Storm
This has been great! Can't wait to read the next one!