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Reviewer: Elysetta89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2023 12:58 AM Title: Bound to the Family

Okay, so Bella is the oldest Grandchild.

Make scene. 

Looking forward to read what you have planned. 

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Date: 29 Dec 2023 12:40 AM Title: Bound to the Family

There are some twists and turns.

So James and Bella are half siblings...

And Aro and James are cruel and vicious people.

I hope Michael will live a little longer; Aro and James die so that Alex - who is like Michael - can be the next Don. Both families will be united through blood relationship. 

Reviewer: Elysetta89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2023 11:48 PM Title: Bound to the Family

One question, Edward is the next Don but where are his bodyguards? There has to be at least on person. He can't have his own back.

Reviewer: Elysetta89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:47 PM Title: Bound to the Family

And here is some drama and a promise from James that more drama will follow!

Great writing style.

Let's see if Emmet and Rose will also make an appearance in the next chapters. 

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Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:34 PM Title: Bound to the Family

It gets better and better 🤩

I hope there will also a lot of drama coming. 

 

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Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:16 PM Title: Bound to the Family

Hi,

by coincidence I found your story here.

I already read trust & obey on FF.net (and I'm wondering why you didn't posted these stories there).

I very excited to see where this story is going. 

And I saw there is also a second and third installment 😍

Bye!

By the way I love it that you included pictures!

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Reviewer: CPretty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:08 AM Title: Two Blue Lines

That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time

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Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:08 AM Title: Two Blue Lines

That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time

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Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:04 AM Title: Two Blue Lines

That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time

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Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:03 AM Title: Two Blue Lines

That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time

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Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:03 AM Title: Two Blue Lines

That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time

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Date: 11 Dec 2023 5:02 AM Title: Two Blue Lines

That is exactly how I got pregnant. And with the twins too! I just couldn't figure out how I got pregnant because I was on the pill. When my kids were about three years old I got a new flyer with some migraine medication I've been taking for years. And lo and behold it told me there was a new study done and that it could render your birth control ineffective. But no one knew at the time

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Date: 10 Dec 2023 4:23 PM Title: Resisting the Inevitable

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Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2023 3:56 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

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Date: 28 Sep 2023 11:44 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

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Date: 28 Sep 2023 6:29 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2023 5:57 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Again hilarious, scary, but hilarious. Loved it. And you'l probably be mad at me, but I've never seen more than a glimpse of Gray's Anatomy. :( 

 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2023 4:27 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

I thought this chapter was hilarious! I woke my husband up with my laughing out loud. I loved her reactions and they got even better when she took the meds. His proposal was just fine, (what does Carlisle know) and definitely so them. The only thing I'm wondering now is if as doctors they'll still remember that Antibiotics cause birth control to fail!?! Let's not remind them though.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2023 5:10 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

I am truly sad to see these stories end. I loved both of them and I feel like part of my life will be different without reading them every day! I'm going to read A Hard Day's Night next. Loved the STORM series too by the way. LOVE YOU! Reading on... 

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Date: 21 Sep 2023 4:44 PM Title: Instructions Not Included

Again this is wonderful! 

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Date: 21 Sep 2023 8:02 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

I thought she was preggers! I know everything will work out. CC is definitely pure evil, but very cute doing it! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2023 7:10 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

My goodness! That one was fun. He shoulda let Bella kick all their butts! She probably could have. Loved this chapter. I thought maybe Edward would invite Eric to check out Upstate and his practice to get away from Jersey. Just a thought. Reading on...

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Date: 17 Sep 2023 8:00 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

Wow! I don't necessarily think what EJ did to Roni was the correct way to handle the situation, but I get that he was really hurt and she manipulated Cecelia into hurting EJ for her own purposes. She did kinda deserve what she got - cruel and unusual punishment. He was correct in saying that he was always respectful with Roni and treated her really well-even tried and wanted to love her. You can't force that. You either love someone or you don't, it's that simple. Roni was very cruel to BOTH Cecelia and EJ and I have to say that I really don't blame him. Roni made him feel cheap which is something he never did to her. He is obviously tired of being "THE WHORE" around town. I think he really wants to find someone he can love, and Cecelia has that potential. I just hope Roni didn't ruin their chances. True colors can be UGLY. GREAT CHAPTER - very real. Some of your reviewers seem to think that the women are just victims and the men are heartless and whores. These girls are immature bitches.The act sweet and then show their true colors. Those boys have ALWAYS been on the level with the girls they are with - no deceit there, but with Roni, SHE was deceitful and cruel. These women (Sheila, Debbie, Roni) are NOT victims. They are just as much whores as those boys and they as JUST as responsible for their own behavior> I'm so sick of women taking the girls' side no matter what, just because they are women! Women can be horrible too- case and point- RONI!

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Date: 17 Sep 2023 5:20 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

What are you talking about? That chapter wasn't boring at all. It was actually great perfect filler chapter. Even if it's a set up for the next ones still loving the story after all these chapters and looking forward to more.

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Date: 15 Sep 2023 8:05 PM Title: Instructions Not Included

In 1995 I was raising my first child and working on my second literally bun in the oven at the time. You did great as far as the references go and once again great chapter I'm glad the kids aren't being rude to Jake because they really have no reason to even if they know what they know about his past everyone deserves a second chance. 

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Date: 14 Sep 2023 5:50 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

Wow! That was an unexpected twist. I have to admit I'm really surprised at EJ and his reaction. I truly thought he was in love with Roni and just didn't really know it. I hope Jake's change is genuine too. If he hurts them again that will not be cool, but then again he would go back to prison if he did. Very emotional chapter - I cried a lot reading it.

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Date: 14 Sep 2023 1:54 AM Title: A Working Title: Part One

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Date: 14 Sep 2023 1:34 AM Title: A Working Title: Part One

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Date: 13 Sep 2023 5:55 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

LOVED IT!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!

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LOVED IT!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!

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Date: 11 Sep 2023 6:42 AM Title: 3 Up...3 Down

This next chapter is going to be evil!

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