Date: 06 Jan 2022 5:01 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Love this story
Date: 06 Jan 2022 4:59 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Loved it
Date: 06 Jan 2022 4:46 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Loved it
Date: 06 Jan 2022 4:30 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
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Date: 06 Jan 2022 4:14 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
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Date: 06 Jan 2022 3:52 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
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Date: 06 Jan 2022 3:38 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
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Date: 06 Jan 2022 3:23 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
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Date: 06 Jan 2022 3:09 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
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Date: 06 Jan 2022 2:56 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
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Date: 06 Jan 2022 1:13 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Loved it!
Date: 16 May 2020 10:28 PM Title: Unyielding Love
This is too good to not finish, Please continue this story!
Date: 29 Dec 2014 3:18 PM Title: Unyielding Love
Update soon...luv this story
Date: 27 Nov 2014 1:22 AM Title: Unyielding Love
Thanks for the new chapter, however brief. It continues the story and provides several useful historical tidbits.
Date: 27 Nov 2014 12:59 AM Title: Unyielding Love
Yeah! Didyme lives! Hope their incarceration is brief ... please.
Date: 25 Nov 2014 12:52 AM Title: Unyielding Love
So great to have the update... thanks.
Date: 24 Nov 2014 7:43 PM Title: Unyielding Love
Oh my. The Wolves really need to pay dearly
Date: 24 Nov 2014 7:39 PM Title: Unyielding Love
Thanks so much for posting. Excellent, emotional and painful chapter. Short us okay, just post as often as you can manage!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2014 2:01 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
great story!! cannot wait to read the sequel!!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 1:46 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
loved it!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:53 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Loved it!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 4:49 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Loved it! Edward is a jerk!
Date: 17 Jul 2014 11:10 PM Title: Unyielding Love
The story I wonderful.
would you please update it. I have fallen in love with it.
Date: 24 Mar 2014 11:29 AM Title: Unyielding Love
great chapter! it will be very interesting when Marcus finds out that Didyme is alive!
Date: 20 Mar 2014 7:45 PM Title: Unyielding Love
Ahhh Di is alive. Oh ladies hold on and be strong.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 6:21 PM Title: Unyielding Love
Oh Wow. Can't wait for Caius and Co to kill all these sleezeballs.
Date: 10 Jul 2013 11:14 PM Title: Unyielding Love
Great update
Date: 10 Jul 2013 9:59 PM Title: Unyielding Love
ACK What a cliffy!!! Hope you post again soon. LOL for Aro/Picia getting in a quickie. hee hee
Date: 30 May 2013 7:12 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
ouch! that gotta hurt! I feel bad for Emmett, Rosalie and Jasper they didn't want to hurt her. Esme was to naive. Carlisle... well I guess I could call him coward? Edward and Alice... now these two are just vile.
Date: 30 May 2013 6:42 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Here comes the good part!!!
Date: 30 May 2013 6:13 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Awww... but who would have though that he was Julius Cesar!!! I laughed so loud that my mom jump in fright lol
Date: 30 May 2013 5:20 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Reeeeally good!
Date: 30 May 2013 4:50 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Who is that old woman? maybe Peter told her?
Date: 30 May 2013 4:20 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Holy SHIT!!! PETER? PETER WHITLOCK is her GREAT granfather???!!! GASP :O
Date: 30 May 2013 3:19 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I think he's going to be Daddy Marcus... Sweet! Alex Skarsgard as Caius... Hot! tsk tsk such a bad boy.
Date: 30 May 2013 2:54 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Jared was so funny here!! But I feel sad about her leaving Charlie....I love Peter...I actually thought that he was going to be her mate but then I realize that it was Caius!! Silly me :P It's nice that he got to help Bella revenge and her get flight... Jasper was PISSED with Edward in this! I think he was the only one who always told her the truth.
Date: 18 Apr 2013 11:44 AM Title: Unyielding Love
Hi
Just wanted to know if you intended to finish this story. Franckly I would be disapointed if you say no!
It's the second time that I read this story and it's prequel and it still amazes me how much I love it.
So please find it in your heart to find the time and inspiration to finish this sequel.
Thanks
Lynda
Date: 11 Apr 2013 2:08 AM Title: Unyielding Love
Just found this series.... Loving it!!! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:08 AM Title: Unyielding Love
oooh a grandma huh? Cool. hee hee for sneaking out.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:25 PM Title: Unyielding Love
looking forward to more
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:20 PM Title: Unyielding Love
B always was forgiving. lol for the women macking on the naked wolves. Hee hee for springing the wedding and being apart on them. Ha Ha
Date: 17 Jan 2013 5:16 PM Title: Unyielding Love
good, good.
Date: 17 Jan 2013 3:45 PM Title: Unyielding Love
Glad everyone is getting along. The image of peter in my head is hilarious.
Date: 11 Jan 2013 7:44 PM Title: Unyielding Love
awww I'm loving Picia. Glad Cauis made it up to her.
Date: 09 Jan 2013 4:37 PM Title: Unyielding Love
She sure showed them! I also love the lady in Florence. Hmmmmm.... By the way, props go to Jasper for being the first willing to fight Bella. Perhaps, he more than most, knows her true heart.
Date: 06 Jan 2013 5:52 AM Title: Unyielding Love
I have been looking forward to this, and you certainly didn't disappoint. Thank you!
Date: 06 Jan 2013 5:11 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Yes!!!
Date: 05 Jan 2013 10:51 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Yippee
Date: 03 Jan 2013 1:55 AM Title: Unyielding Love
Great start. Can't wait for more. Love your pic for caius.
Date: 02 Jan 2013 3:37 PM Title: Unyielding Love
I like it a lot
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:53 PM Title: Unyielding Love
Good start keep going
Date: 26 Dec 2012 9:09 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I loved it wish there was more chapters
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:34 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
OOOOH DO SOMEBODY ELSE WITH THE RULING IN THE CHAPTER PLZ PLLLZZZZ LIKE CAIUS OR WHATEVER HIS NAME IS!!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:59 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Maybe if B forgives him, Peter will relent eventually. Thank for the outtake hun
Date: 19 Aug 2012 5:54 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Wonderful as seen through Jasper/Major's point of view. His pain is visceral and oozes off the page. Nicely done!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:36 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I know what you did you lovely genious!! YOU LEFT AN OPENING TO CONTINUE ON, TO MAKE A SECOND PART OF THIS STORY AND WE LOOOOOVE YOU FOR IT!!!!!!!!!
OH AND RIGHT ON THAT SHE FOUND HER SELF SO SHE WAS COMPLETE AGAIN I WAS BEGINING TO WORRY IT WOULD TAKE FOREVERRRRRRRR AND SPICA WAS FUCKING AWESOME... HER MAMA WARRIOR-NESS LMAO
Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:08 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Ellie?? what are you doing?
Author's Response:
what do you mean?
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:16 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Ooh, what do you have planned? Please tell me it's not the end.
Author's Response:
There will be a sequel. :)
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:55 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
It doesn't say that Peter left the money and sundry in the safe at Chez Cullen; so who did?
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:20 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I love this story
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:07 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Intriguing cliffhanger you have there! Great chapter. It should be interesting to see how things work out for the remaining Cullen's. Bella and Caius are interesting as well.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 3:46 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Great end to this part. LOVE that Bella got to get her hands dirty. Hmm wonder if its Skankya wanting revenge for pussy boy?
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:18 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
haha, really good chapter and an excellent story.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:57 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
PLEASE UPDATE! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT EDWARD DOES! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:07 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I really like Jane in this story.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:16 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Ahh! So, so good.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 12:06 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Now that's a cliffhanger! I love the story. It has so many twists and is not the same old, same old! I'm looking forward to more!
Date: 08 Aug 2012 7:47 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
wow what a chapter I cant wait for more
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:59 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
loving it hope for a squeal
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:42 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
ahh you better hide. we just got to the point here. lol
Date: 08 Aug 2012 2:40 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
FUCK YEAH MAN PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:01 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
WOOT WOOT for Caius, the fucker is old dude!!!!! seriously!!! then again Marcus is even older, old moldys lmao.. oh yeah WOOT WOOT fo Caius, he got his kiss on with bella!!! YOU GO GIRL!!!
Whats up wth Corin and her studder?? and am I gonna hate Chealsea?? is she gonna Eff with Bella and not like her .. she is the bond lady lmao bond lady.. oh lord.. smh
Marcus and his back up books that made me giggle!! OOOH I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW PISSED PETER IS GONNA BE WITH JASPY AND HIS BAND OF CUTPIRES CALLED CULLENS! I HOPE BELLA FORGIVES NONE OF THEM!!!!! AND I HOPE SHE KILLS VICTORIA!
Date: 02 Aug 2012 6:36 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
well thanks Ellie..
Date: 02 Aug 2012 4:02 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I liked Caius and Bella getting to know each other, but I was disappointed when he revealed who he actually was. I was so excited, thinking of how you'd explain Julius Caesar's assassination; I thought it'd be really interesting, that maybe it was all a planned hoax or something. But then it ended up being Marcus biting him while he was in bed with two women.
I also thought it could be interesting if you had had Marcus be Marc Antony. That would've been really interesting, but I don't think it could've worked since he ended up dying much later.
Anyway, looking forward to your next update.
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:42 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Very good
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:24 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
aww for the kiss and liked the background info.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:49 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Like this story. I love Peter and Bella's relationship. Loosing Charlie was hard but gaining Peter is good. He will love her and be on her side of everything as a parent should be. Caius well that is coming along she says..
Keep writing Ellie and get us all through the bad time!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 8:35 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I LOVED IT ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!
though i think the cullens should pay severely for what they caused, what they did. Leaving Bella was wrong, no matter what. Carlisle is posta be a leader.. he's posta be the one that leads that damn coven and what choices they do. He's so very wrong for allowing anything like that to happen.
Being separated from the coven isnt enough punishment... Edward should be killed, as should Alice for being such a fucked up person that she is...Jasper... well he was wrong for keeping a vampire from his family.. he shouldnt have done that. he should have known peter wasnt going to hurt her.. they all just wanted to control bella's life.
i hope Bella kills victoria..
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:56 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Wow, that's some harsh treatment for the Cullen's! Did this story's Edward not leave her to protect her, or is she just still in the dark? Edward will be tortured enough knowing she a vampire and mated to Caius. I will feel really bad if the Cullen's are seperated, but maybe that's just me.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:32 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I like Peter; I like what you've done with him and his relation to Bella and her family. And I think that the gift of 'knowing' or whatever is interesting, too. Can't wait for more! Oh, and I really appreciate the picture of Alexander in the banner instead of Jamie. He really just isn't right, and I don't think I could read a story thinking that Caius looked like him...
Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:58 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
oooh Fuckward is going to regret messing with our girl.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 5:22 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
it was sooo worth the wait to see inside his head.. tell me is your caius the image of the name who plays eric northman??? if so he is FUCKING HOOOT.. He is the puuurrrrfect Caius, mostly the most perfect for Bella!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:36 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I think for her it he will recover and be a vampire better than has been hitherto.
Now that I'm very much and it is curious to know who this woman is old store in Florence. Yes, because it does not look human at all, is that she is a witch?
There's one more question, if Marcus told Bella to be his descendant, then it is what Peter, he or she is a descendant of the mother's side and not the father, if so .... looks alone would be a descendant of two vampires, Marcus by Peter and his mother by her father's side. You could answer me, or explain in a moment in the history of the line of descent Bella arising Marcus?
I'll be awaiting your answers to my questions. Please update real quick I'm super mega curious (laughs). XOXO
Date: 19 Jul 2012 7:14 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I love this update
Date: 19 Jul 2012 6:41 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Well the guest review business is new to me. I have done it without noticing that I was not signed in. Oh well, anyway.
Good chapter.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 6:30 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Oooh so we meet great grandpa. Cool
Date: 14 Jul 2012 6:55 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
PETER!!!! WOOOT, HELLO GRAND PAPPY!!! LMAO.
I LOVE YOUR BELLA SHE'S FUCKING BAD ASS.. AND MAMA4DUKES HAVING THIS STORY DEDICATED TO HER IS FUCKING AWESOME I READ ALL HER STORIES.. THIS ONE HAS GREAT POTENTIAL TO BE GREAT LIKE HERS ARE..
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE SERIOUSLY!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 11:24 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Peter Whitlock is her great grand father?
Date: 12 Jul 2012 3:52 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Really great. Can't wait for the next update
Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:14 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
wow Lots of cool twists and turns.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:40 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Is it Jasper?
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:54 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Hi Ellie
Caius sure doesn't unerstand why he feels like he does, does he? lol. Top read. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:30 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Shame about the missing words. It was good even without them. Thanks for sharing.
PS I'm new to this site and find it difficult to navigate. Is there a way to get put on a mail list for chapter alerts?
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:52 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I like it. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 3:00 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
previous chapter pW is.....Peter Whitlock.
So write Ellie.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:48 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
this is good I wonder will you keep this going. So many do not finish their stories. They make the mistake of not doing an outline and not knowing where they are going with the story.
thank you,
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:57 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Ohhhh! Can't wait for more!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:21 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Very very good