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Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2022 12:44 AM Title: Taking Chances

I don't know how I missed this one but I love it!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2022 2:02 AM Title: Moving Forward

Great story 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2022 11:41 AM Title: Taking Chances

Great story 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2022 11:40 AM Title: Taking Chances

Great story 

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Date: 25 May 2022 11:40 AM Title: Taking Chances

Great story 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 4:58 AM Title: Moving Forward

I have loved reading their story,  their journey.  Thank you for sharing it with us.  Great job.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 4:39 AM Title: Moving Forward

The house was finished in time!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 4:08 AM Title: Moving Forward

Love the girls name!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 3:58 AM Title: Moving Forward

Wow, they have really had a rough go of things.  I hate that Bella had to have a hysterectomy.  But I do not feel like she would be having any more kids any way. I don't think either one of them could take the stress of it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 3:46 AM Title: Moving Forward

Oh no!!!!!!! What is happening to Bella?  Is she hemorrhaging? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 2:19 AM Title: Moving Forward

I'm glad Edward decided to do the art show. I hate that Bella was not there for him. Oh no, her water broke

 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:31 AM Title: Moving Forward

I knew Bella was going to have a panic attack.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2020 8:25 PM Title: Moving Forward

Bless Bella's heart.  Being in bed that long has a suck. I had normal pregnancy with all 3 of mine. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2020 7:50 PM Title: Moving Forward

I would be pissed at that pizza place. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2020 6:07 PM Title: Moving Forward

Glad she is being honest with Edward and her dr. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2020 4:35 PM Title: Moving Forward

I dont blame people for getting on to Bella.  It is not just herself now but she is carrying 2babiez. Those 2 babies are depending on her to keep not only herself healthy but them also. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2020 4:15 PM Title: Moving Forward

Bella just thought Edward was a worrywart.  He will be up her ass all the time now. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2020 3:37 PM Title: Moving Forward

Oh no. Why did she past out? Edward is definitely going to have a stroke.  So glad I can ho straight to the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2020 2:58 AM Title: Moving Forward

I'm glad they had a good night at the ballet.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2020 2:44 AM Title: Moving Forward

I felt like that was what was going to happen.  When Charlie mentioned something a few chapters back about Renee and a lawyer. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2020 2:24 AM Title: Moving Forward

Very moving with Bella and Caius.  Leukemia is awful.  My cousin's little boy had a 2 year battle with at starting at 5 years old. To  become cancer free and them lose his battle. He battled it for 2 year . 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2020 2:37 PM Title: Moving Forward

I just wonder what is in Renee's journals.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2020 3:36 AM Title: Moving Forward

So the boys were right!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2020 4:29 AM Title: Moving Forward

Glad they are going to build.  I was just  wondering why they went just building back. I figured Renee had over dosed. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2020 4:14 AM Title: Moving Forward

What in the world happened to Renee?  Over dose????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2020 3:17 AM Title: Moving Forward

The decor of the house sounds horrible but I have lived in a house with olive green stove, oven and sink. Also olive green bathtub,  toilet and bathroom sinks. Lol.  Can't wait to find out what Edward said to Renee to get her to leave without throwing a  fit. Again you meanted Jude . But whose baby is it?????? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2020 2:30 AM Title: Moving Forward

Edward is so sweet to go get her cotton candy.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2020 1:34 PM Title: Moving Forward

O, I love that the boys were making a cradle.  How sweet.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2020 4:04 AM Title: Moving Forward

Love that Esme is trying to feed them. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2020 3:49 AM Title: Moving Forward

Anthony was right....twins.  I am guessing that Renee set their house on fire or was it the "project" that the boys have been working on???

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2020 3:16 AM Title: Moving Forward

When Edward said the car had Arizona tags I knew it was Renee. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2020 2:42 AM Title: Moving Forward

Oh my, I didn't even think about Edward being scared with Bella being sick because of what happened to Sarah.  Wow. Who the heck is at the door?  So glad I can go on to the next chapter right now.  Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2020 9:38 PM Title: Moving Forward

Glad Anthony was ok. I have a question...I believe in the 1st chapter were Bella and Edward picked the boys up from school you mentioned baby Jade. Who does Baby Jude belong to???  I thought maybe Emmett and Rose.  But you also mentioned that Angela and Kate were waiting there too. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2020 4:27 AM Title: Moving Forward

I have a feeling she is going to be very emotional during this pregnancy.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2020 3:54 AM Title: Moving Forward

Well, in the boys defense they did not tell them to NOT tell. Lol.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2020 3:33 AM Title: Moving Forward

Finally having a baby

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:52 AM Title: Moving Forward

I can't believe Lauren just left and hasn't made any attempt to keep in contact with Bella or Alex. That's just wrong.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2020 8:02 PM Title: Moving Forward

I can't believe Lauren just left and hasn't made any attempt to keep in contact with Bella or Alex. That's just wrong.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2020 1:53 PM Title: Moving Forward

I bet the boys have been hounding them for a baby sister or 2. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2020 3:01 AM Title: Taking Chances

Loved the wedding.  Now off to find Moving forward on your profile.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 11:26 PM Title: Taking Chances

I was afraid Bella was going to have a nervous breakdown before she gets to the park.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 4:31 AM Title: Taking Chances

Emotional chapter.  You did a great job writing.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 3:43 AM Title: Taking Chances

Love how Bella reacted to meeting the three men with Aro. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 2:33 AM Title: Taking Chances

Love this chapter!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 2:10 AM Title: Taking Chances

Perfect.  I knew he would adopt him. Love the boys plotting for a little sister or two or three. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2020 12:23 AM Title: Taking Chances

A little sister!!!!!!!! The boys always get what they want. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 8:07 PM Title: Taking Chances

Loved Brody's letter. I'm glad Aro shared it with her. Love what Marcus and Didyme did to the boys room. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 1:40 PM Title: Taking Chances

Awesome lemons

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 2:27 AM Title: Taking Chances

Esme just throw them out of her house. Lol!!!!!! And no dessert!!!!!! Lol. I guess they will get dessert when they get home. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 1:57 AM Title: Taking Chances

Perfect!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 10:25 PM Title: Taking Chances

Ooooooo!!!!!!! Edward!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 9:09 PM Title: Taking Chances

Sounds like they found their house.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 6:07 PM Title: Taking Chances

Wow, Tyler has had a horrible past too. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 2:28 PM Title: Taking Chances

Oh no, is Lauren going to cause problems now??? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2020 2:02 AM Title: Taking Chances

Very emotional chapter 

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Date: 29 Jan 2020 10:45 PM Title: Taking Chances

I'm so glad that Alex is ok. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 8:07 PM Title: Taking Chances

Love love love this chapter!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 7:54 PM Title: Taking Chances

Beautiful love scene between them. I am a little worried about Edward thinking he heard Bella's cell phone ringing.  Who would be calling that late?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 4:07 PM Title: Taking Chances

Lol. I love going to the spa. Of course I've never gotten waxed. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 3:35 PM Title: Taking Chances

Another great chapter.  I am really enjoying this story.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 3:09 PM Title: Taking Chances

Glad Lauren showed up at the park. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 4:36 AM Title: Taking Chances

Glad Bella's meeting with Lauren went good. Loved the end of this chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 3:47 AM Title: Taking Chances

Sexy times!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 3:08 AM Title: Taking Chances

Who is at Edward's?  Anthony's aunt???? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 2:56 AM Title: Taking Chances

They are becoming a little family.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 2:37 AM Title: Taking Chances

Wow,  alot going on in this chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 2:36 AM Title: Taking Chances

Wow,  alot going on in this chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2020 1:18 AM Title: Taking Chances

What the heck is Lauren Mallory doing at the party?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 8:44 PM Title: Taking Chances

I think that is about as normal as Edward's family gets .lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 7:56 PM Title: Taking Chances

I'm laughing at the end of this chapter.  Lol. Love it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 5:03 PM Title: Taking Chances

I knew he would send her flowers.  Loved that Anthony "whispered"  Dad you know what to do. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 2:33 PM Title: Taking Chances

I think Bella was a little harsh with Alice but at least she was honest. Love little Alex and his conversation with Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 1:57 PM Title: Taking Chances

Loving their date 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 4:03 AM Title: Taking Chances

Finally,  he asked her out!!!! 

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Date: 28 Jan 2020 3:48 AM Title: Taking Chances

I think the zoo was their 1st date.  

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Date: 28 Jan 2020 3:24 AM Title: Taking Chances

Anthony is wishing hard that Bella was his mom. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 2:22 AM Title: Taking Chances

Everyone sees it but Bella and Edward.  Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 1:09 AM Title: Taking Chances

Glad Bella talked to the girls about the uncomfortableness. Now maybe things will seems normal now.  Glad Edward offered for Alex to spend the night.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2020 12:22 AM Title: Taking Chances

Glad the girls included Bella in they night out.  Glad Charlie seems to like Edward.  

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Date: 27 Jan 2020 3:09 PM Title: Taking Chances

Everyone is trying to fix them up with each other,  even the kids. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 2:25 PM Title: Taking Chances

That was interesting and a little awkward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 1:45 PM Title: Taking Chances

Anthony is thinking ahead. 

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Date: 27 Jan 2020 1:24 PM Title: Taking Chances

Bella and Edward are falling into a easy friendship.  

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Date: 27 Jan 2020 5:12 AM Title: Taking Chances

Loved this chapter. 

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Date: 27 Jan 2020 4:59 AM Title: Taking Chances

I'm guessing Emmett helped Bella out. I am guessing from the conversation with Lauren is that Brody is the father of Bella's son, hence his name.  But is Lauren Brody's sister or who he was cheating on Bella with?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2020 4:39 AM Title: Taking Chances

Poor Edward.  So he lost his wife. I wonder how long ago it was. 

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Date: 27 Jan 2020 4:22 AM Title: Taking Chances

Sounds very interesting.  Can't wait to read more.  

Reviewer: vampyregurl09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2019 2:47 AM Title: Moving Forward

i always love reading your stories

Reviewer: mybabyblues Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2019 3:03 AM Title: Moving Forward

An amazing end to an amazing story. I've loved following Edward & Bella on this journey. Yes, I definitely shed some tears, but they were sometimes happy, sad or just from laughter. And that's what makes a great story. Thank you for writing this. I've enjoyed this story as well as Taking Chances very much. I can't believe I didn't read them sooner. You are awesome to share them with us this way. Thanks.

Reviewer: dlw5573 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2019 10:58 AM Title: Moving Forward

Thank you.  Loved it.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2018 4:52 AM Title: Moving Forward

This story was awesome, made me cry, laugh and feel happy at different portions. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2018 12:00 AM Title: Moving Forward

Yeah, bloody fantastic indeed! ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 9:04 PM Title: Moving Forward

I think beyond my love for your E&B relationship, I adore your Charlie. He is ever present, funny, strong and sweet and I know you can write him dark. Couldn’t finish that one. Anyway, I love the interaction between him and Bella it’s like my relationship with my Dad. Cheers and thank you!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 1:23 PM Title: Taking Chances

I loved, loved reading this story again. It was just what the fic-doc ordered after the ridiculous angst I got sucked into prior. You are a good writer. You took Moving Forward down?

Reviewer: Tcupples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 9:36 PM Title: Moving Forward

Loved this chapter 

Reviewer: Tcupples Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2017 10:12 PM Title: Moving Forward

Loved this chapter keep on writing 

Reviewer: NPattz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:17 AM Title: Taking Chances

So many tears.

such a lovely story.

Reviewer: Susan2e Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 7:32 AM Title: Taking Chances

My son got a pillowcase, too when he had his appendix out. We're in Santa Cruz, CA.  I'm happy to hear it's a common practice.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 2:36 PM Title: Moving Forward

Brilliant!

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 1:01 AM Title: Moving Forward

My daughter had twin boys a year ago.  She had a very low iron and the Dr. had her get an iron drip to bring it up.  The boys came 3 weeks early and one weighed almost 9 pounds and the other weighed 5 1/2 pounds.  They are now within 1/2 pound of each other and running around everywhere.  Thanks for the great stories. Loved them. - Zanath

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