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Reviewer: Angelsoultaker Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2021 5:22 PM Title: Brewing Storms

Cool story.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:45 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Another awesome chapter.  Lol for overprotective E

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:37 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Sounds like an awesome holiday

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:30 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Think it was a reasonable first meeting

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:25 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Aww Em is such a cutie.  Sounds like a good plan for meeting the parents. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:14 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Well you know the egg and sperm donor would eventually show up. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:06 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Nice that Jasper is taking time to get to know him.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:02 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Ugh men like creepy Aro are always around. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:58 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Em is such a trip. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:54 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Sounds like the perfect summer. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:49 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Aww little Em has his first crush. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:45 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Lol what a way to find out. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:42 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Awww Em is such a sweet little bro.  Love that the fans sent her the link. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:39 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Pooh Em is a schemer.  Go Em. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:37 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Aww for Alice and Rose in B's life. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:33 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Glad Charlie allowed E to talk to him. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:31 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Oh Emmett.  Silly kid.  Hope E can get her back 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2018 4:48 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

I loved it all of it so sweet

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2018 6:34 AM Title: Southern born, Southern Bred, Southern girl till I'm dead (one-shot)

Needs a better ending. Good read.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2018 3:19 AM Title: Southern Star

Loved it. Great one shot.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2018 11:28 PM Title: Southern Star

Loved it. Putting on alert just in case you might decide to expand it.

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2018 4:15 PM Title: Southern born, Southern Bred, Southern girl till I'm dead (one-shot)

Haha, this was funny. I hope one day you add more :)

Reviewer: lovesurfer Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 2:16 PM Title: Southern Star

I can't believe I haven't read this before!!!! 

I loved it! I love southern men. And this story was so sweet.

Thanks for sharing it with us.

Big hugs and Bisous.R.

Reviewer: pinay_samurai Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:14 PM Title: Southern Star

This is such a cute story! I really enjoyed this one. 🤗

Reviewer: WIX Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2017 7:26 AM Title: Southern born, Southern Bred, Southern girl till I'm dead (one-shot)

Very fun.  Enjoyed this one.  ~Christy

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2017 12:25 AM Title: The Trouble with Coming Home

The only negative here is that she will be living in the same town as her mama.  Thanks.

Reviewer: pendemon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2017 8:29 PM Title: Home

ye ha

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 12:20 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

Very cute story! !



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reading! XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 10:03 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

excellent story i can't wait for the sequel ;) thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D



Author's Response:

We're so glad you enjoyed it. Being that we're both Southern ourselves, it was so much fun to write some southern characters. It almost felt in some ways like writing about home. We'll definitely be working on the sequel, but it will be after we finish up Witness Seclusion. Thanks so much for reading and letting us know you enjoyed it. It's great to see people still enjoying our work. XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 1:26 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

Awe. Sugary sweet and I loved it!

Author's Response:

Yay! We're so glad you enjoyed it. I'm a fan of fluff so this story was pure joy for me to write. Thanks so much for reading! XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: elenalena Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2015 1:42 PM Title: Wild, Wonderful West Virginia

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Thanks for reaing and reviewing!

Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 10:29 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

it was a wonderful story and I would love more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! We will be doing a sequel since these characters have so much more to say and do. :) We're so happy you enjoyed the story and hope you join us when we start posting again. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: Merrycain Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 5:16 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Thanks for sharing 



Author's Response:

It was our pleasure. We loved writing this story and sharing these characters. We're looking forward to sharing the sequel. ;) Thanks so much for reading!!! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 9:36 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

Great Story. Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! And we so appreciate that you took the time to stop in and let us know, it means so very much :)

Fyre

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 12:19 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

This was a very sweet story and I can't wait for the sequel. Love Emmett and Rose!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. We love Emmett and Rose too... much more than we ever expected when we started. We're definitely looking forward to the sequel and hope everyone likes it. Thanks so much for reading and for the review! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 11:35 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

good



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for following us on this journey and your support. We hope to see you when the sequel starts. :) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 9:50 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Ringing in a new year, full of hopes and plans and family! Great way to tie up this part of the story, and I'm looking forward eagerly to the sequel!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you plan to follow us and these characters. We have some big plans for them and we hope you guys like it. ;) We love them way too much to say goodbye forever yet. Lol. Thanks so much for reading and for the support you've given us. We're looking forward to seeing you when we start the sequel. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 7:07 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading the sequel



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. We've enjoyed having your support. I'm looking forward to the sequel too and am so happy you plan to read it. :) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2015 3:38 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

I really enjoyed reading this whole story tonight. Sweet.



Author's Response:

Awww we're so glad that you read and enjoyed it and even more so that you decided to let us know. There's one more chapter to post and we'll hit the complete button for this one. Thanks so much for your kind words :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2015 10:13 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Yes, I can see you are winding down and I will miss these guys when you come to the end. That was a really great Thanksgiving, by the way! See you next time!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much and yes we only have one more to go, but don't worry, we intend to move thesee guys up a few years and pick them back up to see how everything plays out. We intend to wait until it's written to start posting though, so posts will be weekly or less!! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2015 5:23 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)



Author's Response:

I can always count on your smiles to brighten our day. Thank you :)

Fyre

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2015 5:00 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

good



Author's Response:

Yayyy, so happy you liked it! See you next time for the final chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 6:50 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Kind of sad to hear only two more chapters, but I guess all good things must come to an end!The get together with Carlisle and Esme went better than I thought it might. I suppose they could really be ready to clean up their lives. The furure is looking pretty good for all of them!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 5:09 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 4:23 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

good

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 7:43 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Oh yay! Good to hear there will be a sequel to Smoke, I've enjoyed these characters , too and look forward to where their lives are headed! I hope the guys are not too disappointed when their parents show up. Emmett's campaign to win Rose was darling, and pretty romantic, considering his age.



Author's Response:

Emmett did do good, who could ever resist that? Yay for the sequel. We have much more in store for these characters, we just need to move a little into the future to implient those ideas. We'll have it written before we start posting so we can bring it to you weekly! Thanks so much for your kind words, we appreciate it so much! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 5:27 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)



Author's Response:

:) Thank you sooooo much for ALL of your reviews!!! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 3:54 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

How sweet! 



Author's Response:

Thanks you! Emmett is a doll and who could say no to that? We so appreciate you taking the time to leave us a though. See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 3:32 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

good



Author's Response:

Thanks you so much for reading and leaving us some love. We appreciate it so much! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 2:25 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

children.



Author's Response:

Lol. They are. Thank you so much for all the feedback! I've really enjoyed your reviews. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:45 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

it is a sweet story.. Does not seem finished.



Author's Response:

Aw thank you. This story is pretty much intended to just to be a sweet, feel good story. I'm so glad you seem to be enjoying it. We definitely have a bit to go before we wrap it up. ;) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:36 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

the line she delivers is I got mixed up and scared because of how she loved her mother. I think, well I think it is she got mad that he used something like that to get close to her. Not mixed up and scared..

 

the rest of the chapter is great. Of course Emmett has a crush.



Author's Response:

I'm sure Bella had tons of mixed emotions, but mad was definitely up there. And yep, Em has a big ol' crush. Lol. Thanks! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:26 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

it worked.



Author's Response:

It did! Yay! Good job Em. Lol. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:07 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

he recorded it.  Em trying to make it better for his bud.



Author's Response:

He loves his brother and definitely has his heart in the right place trying to make things better. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 4:14 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

good



Author's Response:

Thank you! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 12:03 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

Sure, since things are goping along so well, there has to be a fly in the ointment. Chances are, Edward and Emmette's parents are going to try to stir up trouble. I'm counting on the bond the guys and Bella have being strong enough to make it through.



Author's Response:

We'll see. I definitely don't see Edward letting anyone get close enough to hurt Emmett or Bella, but you never know what's going to happen. We'll find out, though. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for the review! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 5:26 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks bb! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:05 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

good



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! We're glad you're enjoying it. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 10:38 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Having time to talk to Jasper has opened some lines of thought to Edward. Bella was pretty persuasive telling him about how she wants to help him better himself. To help her man realize his dreams would make her really happy!



Author's Response:

It would make her so happy. She loves him and wants him to have everything he's ever wanted. Let's hope he goes for it. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving us your thoughts. We appreciate them more than you can imagine. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 7:44 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Debslmac!!! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 12:43 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all of your support. It really means a lot!!

Fyre

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 11:31 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

wonder what he'll end up doing



Author's Response:

I know! we def have some ideas for him. Let's see how all of this plays out. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 8:17 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

It sounds to me like Edward needs some more schooling or training of some kind to get a better job. It might make Bella happy to have him around more, but this guy obviously needs to pull his own weight. It will be interesting to see what the future holds for them.



Author's Response:

He does need to make a decision and go for it. He wanted to be with her and didn't consider what he might do or hopw he would feel not pulling his weight. Definitely something for him to work on and I think he'll make some choices coming up soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter, we appreciate the support so much!

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 10:40 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Typical! Emmett wanted to impress Rose, thus he makes a mistake and ticks her off! I figured it wouldn't be a hard sell to get Em to move to Nashville. Looking forward to chapter ten! Oh yes, waiting anxiously for the next Witness Seclusion, also!



Author's Response:

The next chapter is with the Beta. I'm guessing if Rose hadn't been there it might have been harder to persuade Emmett. Lol. But he has no family there other than his brother and I would imagine there's been negative talk and stuff stemming from his parents arrest so a fresh start might sound good. Especially when there's Bella and a cute blond. ;) Poor guy def didn't make the best impression with Rose, but he's sweet and adorable so how long can she really resist him? Lol.

Witness Seclusion cahp 2 is with the Beta so hopefully it will be up soon.

Thanks so much for reading or work! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 10:15 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you dearest! We are so beyond thankful for your support! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 10:05 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

poor em. that didn't quite work out for him =)



Author's Response:

I know. Poor boy. He didn't mean to upset Rose. Lol. At least he's sweet and cute. Surely that will win her over eventually. ;) Thanks!!! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 8:55 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

It will be great to see their future unfold, so I'm happy with whatever you do, continue or sequel! Looking forward to whatever you have on deck!



Author's Response:

It's a tough decision. We just KNOW these characters have so much more to say and do. ;) Thank you so much for the support. It means the world. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 6:03 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:):)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your constant support! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 5:34 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

glad your continuing :)

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the support! These characters have so much more to say. ;) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 3:19 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

lol . . . e almost gave em a little payback without even realizing it



Author's Response:

He really did. Emmett has a huge crush and his poor brother is clueless. Lol. Maybe Bella took all his brains in the truck earlier. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for the review!!! XOXO

~Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 8:32 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! Mwah! Mwah! Mwah! XOXO

~Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 1:47 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

Things have sure changed for the better, for Edward, anyway. For Emmett too, since his b rother isn't upset at what his little brother did! It's funny that Edward is so wrapped up in having Bella back in his arms, that he can't figure out why Em is getting all dolled up! It will probably come to him soon!



Author's Response:

Edward really was clueless about Em's little crush. Lol. Overall both of the guys have had a good day I think. ;) Hopefully they'll have a good summer too. Thank you so much for reading and for the review! XOXO

~Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 11:07 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

I'm thinking , if Edward is smart, he'll thank Em for doing what he did, imnstead of giving him what for! Again, if he's smart, he will listen to Bella first, then talk! Following this advice will most likely gain him his heart's desire!



Author's Response:

Very good points! I'm sure it was very lucky for Emmett that Bella showed up before Edward could make it home. Lol. Now we just have to hope their talk goes well. I'm sure that how things go with them will go a long way in how he feels about what Emmett did. Thanks so much for reading and for your review. I love it!!! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 8:12 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

cant wait to see !!!!! lemons,lemons i hope to seee .  lol



Author's Response:

Hmmm... that's a possibility. We shall see. ;) Thanks so much for reading and for the review. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 6:23 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:):)



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! <3 XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 4:04 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

good. lucky timing for em 



Author's Response:

Yes very lucky timing. Lol. Thank you so much for reading and for the review. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:43 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

good :)



Author's Response:

Awe thank you for giving it a try and for letting us know your thoughts. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:40 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

hope his plan works but that is going to be pretty embarrassing for e :)



Author's Response:

It was a good plan, but no doubt Edward won't be too thrilled to find out about it. Lol. Thank you so much for reading and we appreciate your reviews. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:35 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

good that alice is there for b and to push her along.

rose . . . same age, same situation as em . . . already making a connection between the two



Author's Response:

Alice is a good friend and Bella is lucky they met. And that is really good thinking about Emmett and Rose. We will have to see where the future takes them. ;) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:51 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

thhinking the message just might help e a bit. maybe even charlie - seems like he can empathize with having to raise a kid on your own



Author's Response:

It just might. Charlie is a good judge of character and I'm sure it will mean a lot to him that Edward was man enough to come to him like he did. Thank you so much for reading! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:20 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

good



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 6:22 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Love this story! I just found it recommended by another story and decided I would check it out.  So glad I did.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Awe I'm so thrilled to know you're enjoying it. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you gave it a try too. Can I ask which story you found us from? I'd love to know. Thanks so much for reading and for the review. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:08 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 6:10 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

I LOVE THIS STORY UPDATE SOON



Author's Response:

Aww thanks so much!!! We won't keep you waiting too long. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for the review!!! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:35 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Alice and Rose sure have Bella's back! Em was pretty brave to make that video, so I hope Edward won't give him hell for it! Probably not, since it seems to have served it's purpose!



Author's Response:

It was very brave to make that video. Let's hope for Emmett's sake Bella makes it there before Edward finds out about the video. Lol. Alice and Rose are like her family now and they are good people. Thanks for reading and for the review. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: JDRAST Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 1:53 AM Title: Wild, Wonderful West Virginia

Hello.  Great story here!  I just love the "wild and wonderful" side of Jasper.  Such fierce, raw passion right beneath the surface, waiting to explode.  Whew!  Thanks, Suzan Noerr



Author's Response:

As they say, still waters run deep. His potential as a character was wasted on Alice.

Thank you so much reading and for your review!

Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:20 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

Oh Emmet what are you doing whatever it is I'm sure it will be hilarious 



Author's Response:

Let's hope whatever it is makes things better, not worse. ;) Thank you for reading and for your review. XOXO 

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:32 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

I see where Emmett is going with this one! He must be planning to send that awful video to Bella so she can see how much Edward is missing her! Hope it works out!



Author's Response:

Maybe? ;) Let's just hope whatever he has planned helps to make things better instead of worse. Thank you so much for reading. XOXO 

Lissa

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 8:41 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

OH PLZ UPDATE SOONNN..... LOVE THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Aww you're so sweet. We definitely won't keep you waiting too long. Thanks so much for reading!  XOXO 

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:24 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:):)



Author's Response:

Thanks as always. You're so good to us. :) XOXO 

Lissa

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 12:34 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Love the story!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much. We're so glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for giving it a try and for the review. XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 12:23 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

I'm glad she told Alice what transpired between her and Edward, and about Emmett's hurtful lie. It made an impression on her that Edward went to her dad.  I hope she makes another trip home, soon!



Author's Response:

I'm sure she's trying to go as fast as she can. And now we see why it upset her so much. Thanls so much, one more time. We'll see you next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 12:17 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

It was pretty smart of Edward to go to Bella's dad and lay out the whole story, minus the mind-blowing sex, of course. The truth about Edward taking care of Emmett is just as affecting as Em's lie about having cancer, in my book. Bee interesting to see if the gesture works for Edward!



Author's Response:

Well letr''s hope it does and Charlie seems to like him, so that's always a plus. We have a little scheme we've cooked up we're excited to bring you, should be the first of next week in the next chapter when it starts! Thanks again!

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 12:10 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

Now we know why Emmett all but shaved off all his hair! Kids really do the dumbest things sometimes, just like the rest of us! It's a shame that Bella was so upset over the lie, especially since she set Edward's heart on fire! That was an amazing session in the kitchen! Can't wait to see what Edward is going to do about her!



Author's Response:

Yayyy! So glad to see you've joined us for this one! Thanks so much for leaving us the love on every chapter, we appreciate it so much. Yres, Emmett's a sneaky little guy, let's see what these two do to get it together :)

Fyre

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 3:07 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

hmm.. Same. She did not do anything wrong she was blind sided. 



Author's Response:

She was completely shocked since she had dealt wiith that personally. Now we know that and also that she wants him too...Let'ssee what happens next! Thank you for leaving your thoughts, we love them!!

Fyre

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 2:59 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

he made an effort. Now she has to decide.



Author's Response:

She does and we all know what she'll do ;) Thanks so much!!

 

Fyre

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 2:52 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

Well that was interesting.



Author's Response:

Oops, I missed this one yesterday, sorry! Thanks so much for catching up with us. Next chapter should post first of next week :) 

Fyre

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 12:01 AM Title: Smoke on the Water

Yeah!

 



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 9:43 PM Title: Smoke on the Water

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! You are amazing!!! Your support is invaluable. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 7:57 PM Title: Home

Marvelous!  I do love a good western!!  This has all the charm of "High Noon".  Kudos!

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