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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 8:30 PM Title: Dominated

Hot hot hot. Is this the end of the story??????  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 7:41 PM Title: Dominated

Hot hot hot

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2021 3:51 AM Title: Dominated

I am glad that Edward did not let Bella punish him. They were not in a scene. She was definitely crossing the line.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2021 2:37 AM Title: Dominated

Oh my, outside sex on the balcony!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2021 8:06 PM Title: Dominated

Wow, 2 weeks without sex. That is cruel.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2021 3:00 AM Title: Dominated

I don't blame Bella for being upset with Edward being so late. Domme or girlfriend,  I would be pissed. He should have called her.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2021 2:02 AM Title: Dominated

Love how easy Bella is handling Esme. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2021 10:22 PM Title: Dominated

Hot hot hot chapter!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2021 6:23 PM Title: Dominated

Love what Bella did!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2021 2:21 AM Title: Dominated

Oh my!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2021 12:43 AM Title: Dominated

Ok, I have a question.  In one of the chapters you wrote that Edward and Rose were brother and sister but did not share the same blood. What did you mean by that? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 1:19 PM Title: Dominated

Oh wow. Bella is having feelings for Edward and it is scaring her. That is my theory. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 3:39 AM Title: Dominated

Lol. Edward's family is hilarious!!!!!!! Is Dizzy Izzy Bella??????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 3:38 AM Title: Dominated

Lol. Edward's family is hilarious!!!!!!! Is Dizzy Izzy Bella??????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 3:26 AM Title: Dominated

Bella also wants a regular relationship with Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 2:27 AM Title: Dominated

Lol!!!!!! Oh my gosh!!!!!! Poor Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2021 8:30 PM Title: Dominated

Love your long chapters.  That was intense. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 11:09 PM Title: Dominated

Hot hot hot!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 11:08 PM Title: Dominated

Hot hot hot!!!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 10:02 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

glad to read they contected on a personal level.  But INCOMPLETE here. so not cool.  Sort of wasted my time.  Kudos for writing - but not so much for the abandonment.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 10:00 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Yep some strong dom Carlisle is - pussy.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 9:56 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

poor sweet man

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 9:55 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Well that was painful to read.  Statistic bitch

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 9:49 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

I held on to this fic for a long time.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 3:03 AM Title: Dominated

W/ as many errors.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 5:01 AM Title: Play With Me

The best Edward enternal dialog, and the best freaking Emmeet.  Aswesome  So well written.  I would not have reviewed this mush on completed fic if it didn't move me in some way.  This one hit my funny bone.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 3:30 AM Title: Play With Me

Oops baby.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:42 AM Title: Play With Me

 I LOVE EMMETT

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:23 AM Title: Play With Me

In the beginning she said she was a silent partner.  Even with stealing they ususally stay in the background.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:11 AM Title: Play With Me

hahahaha Charlie a porn and a nudist. EPIC

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 1:04 AM Title: Play With Me

Whew...

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2018 11:05 PM Title: Play With Me

Humm, he has feelings for her and maybe she has feelings for him.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2018 9:53 PM Title: Play With Me

So this has been in my list awhile.  I don't read over here much, but I told myself i needed to work on my TBR list.  Soooo.  I love the fact she "made" him get his dick pierced.  Good boy.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 6:51 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

Loved it!

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2017 2:30 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Oh come on?! Why have you stopped updating? I would absolutely love to see how things would develope between Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: twilover24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2017 4:22 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Oh so good 😁 can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 3:23 AM Title: Play With Me

Loved it! 

Reviewer: bookworm83628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 4:04 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

are you going to update this story ??

 

Reviewer: forzashibas Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 5:45 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Please please finish this story! I love it!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:31 PM Title: Play With Me

So sorry about reviewing I read in reader view on my iPad and it doesn't give a review option all the time. Anyway, I think Edward's inner voice is the shiz for real! This is so funny and often so sweet in their cray.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:31 AM Title: Play With Me

Yeah Bella girl is all a mess poor thing. She didn't even give aftercare post punishment and we know that's a no no. Too bad her confidant is big mouth Rose. Hehe

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 1:50 AM Title: Dominated

love doesn't make you soft

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 1:32 AM Title: Dominated

did you get there

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:08 PM Title: Dominated

yes just a little

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2015 6:59 PM Title: Play With Me

wonderful

Reviewer: Straarup Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 2:10 PM Title: Anonymous Meeting

Hello. 

Love your story. Hope you will write more

Reviewer: MaraJadeblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

This is pretty enthralling so far-- I'm a Domella virgin, and I'm enjoying my first time!

Reviewer: TriMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:23 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

I love this story. Your grammar and spelling are immaculate!!! I don't know if there are so many BDSM stories or what but of all of them yours is by far superior.  I can't wait to read more so I better scoot and read but I couldn't leave this chapter without telling you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me that you took the time to review the story. I whish I could publish more chapters in this fanfic right now, but I haven't had the time neccesary for long. However, I'm working on a one-shot fanfic in another fandom, not sure if it will fit in this library :)

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:04 PM Title: Dominated

I've had your story on my favorite list for a while now to hold my place, but I've just gotten a chance to read it. It was sexy, funny, and sentimental. Another home run from you.

Thank you for always being a sure bet! (Yes, my husband is playing the horses today because American Pharoah is in the Travers Stakes - and guess who is being left to her own devices?) Haha. See you next time.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:09 AM Title: Dominated

i loved this story!!!!! ;) please can you add some more D/s time ;x btw in chapter 1 the e-mail from bella to edward said his name was masen? and can you put them at a play party? as you can tell i really hope you can add to this story although you've pressed complete ;D

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:32 AM Title: Dominated

This was a quick fun read. Thanks!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2014 7:33 PM Title: Punishment

i LOVED this o/s ;) i'm looking forward to it when its chp2 of aa ;D will there be epov? ;D

Reviewer: Soccermom101113 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 11:43 PM Title: Play With Me

Out takes PLEASE!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 9:13 AM Title: Dominated

She is going to keep him happy for years and years lol.  I think Edward is going to have nightmares about his parents for years lol.  I want more of these two when are they getting married and kids.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 8:06 AM Title: Dominated

They needed to get that out of the way to find the love that is truly there.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:39 AM Title: Dominated

To go from tied up having sex on the balcony to getting a puppy and moving in wild crazy lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:20 AM Title: Dominated

He will be a good boy from now on lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 1:53 PM Title: Dominated

Now the family knows but Esme.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 1:45 PM Title: Dominated

That was a great first meeting lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:44 AM Title: Dominated

Its love Its love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:42 AM Title: Dominated

Love it Angela just thought she was going to have him take her back love Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:40 AM Title: Dominated

Happy times making up for lost time may kill him lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:31 AM Title: Dominated

So glad he didnt let her get away and so glad she told him how she was feeling about him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:28 AM Title: Dominated

She has just confused the shit out of him poor guy.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 9:17 PM Title: Play With Me

This was a great story loved it the way through

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2014 5:17 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

OMG!!!! PLEASE COME BACK!!!!!!! ;D i have some ideas if your interested in using them ? how about having edward get a weeping pheonix rising from his foot up his calf to cover the branding from tanya to show that he has healed? (get it heeled/healed) ha ha and have edward make bella his pa so she is his equal at work? ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:53 PM Title: Anonymous Meeting

i just read your reviews after reading this story your last one was this year and you still havent been able to continue ;( i really hope you can find the time and inspiration to come back because domella and subward are a MUST!!!!!!! ;D

Reviewer: tamwhit Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 2:01 PM Title: Dominated

i love this story and cant wait to read more 

 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

thank you for completing this absolutely AWESOME story ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

i cannot believe you broke his dick!!!! how cruel are you ;) please dont let him end up with a bent penis ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

oooh!! im so glad that the first chapter was a dream ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

awesome ;) when she mentioned that she wanted edward to accumpany her to the dungeon on weekends i thought she wanted him to watch so he could learn ;) im so happy we got some imfo on bellas past and what james was to her ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

i LOVED this chapter i read it twice!! ;) i love how he has to get a 'brazilian' its such a refreshing change from bella having one i hate it when she does ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

this story is so cool so far ;) btw robert for his middle name? and 5yo twin brothers? cant wait to read the rest ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:11 PM Title: Play With Me

Awesome story I read this when it was on ff.n I reviewed then also ;) BTW where are the o/t ? Thanks so much for posting it here ;D

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 10:21 PM Title: Anonymous Meeting

Would love to read more of their developing relationship.

Reviewer: ARC Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:22 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

 Bad Tanya! Awww Edward and Bella..... Please update....... Oh and can we still be spanked just because?

 

Reviewer: WindWhisper Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:21 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

its sad that you didnt continue this it was actually intoxicating

Reviewer: cuteandcreative Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 6:03 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter! Well done!

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 7:05 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

So good to receive an update on this story.  I love it.  I'm glad it's getting past the hurt and anxiety for Edward and hope all goes well for him.  I have a feeling that Bella will make damn sure it does.  Looking forward to the next chapter. :-)

Reviewer: eamc1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:43 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

So glad that this story got updated!!  Love it and keep it coming soon!!!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 11:33 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Freaking love it! I have to say your story is by and large one of my faves especially with BDSM. Can't wait to watch Subward and Domella play!

Reviewer: sazza Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:29 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

So glad that this story has come back to life. I love this version of Edward and Bella!! Thank you xxx Sara

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 6:10 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

soooooo glad you are back!!!   Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Spank you very much!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 7:59 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:06 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

Loved it!

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 12:49 PM Title: Anonymous Meeting

Really hit:)

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 10:08 AM Title: Dominated

Hope he really can trust rose:) pls do continue love your story:)

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 9:55 AM Title: Dominated

I think he knew her a long time ago. She was the girl near the truck

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 9:42 AM Title: Dominated

Oh god poor Edward. But this Dom is easy going if she doesn't cintrol his orgasms during the week. So he should be able to hold out just for the weekend

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 4:25 AM Title: Dominated

Yes it was fun:) 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: Dominated

I think you left us hanging. Damn.  But Izzy and Mistress Isabella are the same person.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 11:14 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Loved it!



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:-*

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 9:53 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 9:38 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:28 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:11 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:27 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 10:55 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!

Loved it!

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