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Reviewer: Chocolover Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:02 AM Title: Breathe Again

Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you update soon

Reviewer: Inlovewithjazz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 11:04 AM Title: Breathe Again

Hi, I'm not a great reviewer, (I'm a reader not a writer) but I stumbled across this story by accident when fanfic went down. im so glad it did, cause this is a great story! I've loved watching there relationship grow and look forward to reading more. thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2015 7:16 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

An infection in one ovary = total hysterectomy ??? I think I missed something here.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2015 6:19 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I'm hoping Jacob gets a lap dance he can "fully" enjoy at some point.

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 5:49 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I'm Hoping Jasper gets some peace, he's been through enough.

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 5:18 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I stopped reading anything on FF because I was sick of stories getting pulled, it's irritating as hell. Now I only look for my favorite authors here and on Twilighted, at least then you know you are not going to get screwed halfway through the story and need to go looking for it somewhere else. So thanks for making yours available on a site that doesn't censor, your readers will get the word out and you will get more traffic.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 5:24 PM Title: In Love with a Stripper

Sounds like trouble......

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 8:55 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I realize that when I review I tend to make comments to the characters.....I guess that tells you how much I get into the story. So, Bella.....tell him already.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 2:28 PM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I love this story, especially love Jacob.  Having said that, no Paramedic -ever- would advise, or even allow an unconscious patient to be taken anywhere other than any Emergency Room for an evaluation. At the very least Jacob should have been monitored until he regained consciousness and then given a complete neuro exam. If he was hit in the head with enough force to knock him out he could have a concussion or a bleed, people have died from less. So.....public service announcement, Head injury with loss of consciousness = go to the Emergency Room. Do not pass go, do not collect $200 dollars. Do not take an unconscious person home - call an ambulance.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 9:21 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

Nothing good comes from lies.....nothing.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 7:31 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I would hope if she had been living with a raging STD for 10+ years she would have some clue, and and if she passed it on to Dickward he should have some idea as well. Granted there are a few that have some subtle symptoms, but I can't believe she could be that clueless.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 4:19 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

Huggles for Paul and baby Alex

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 3:00 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

She is making progress, but she has to stop lying.........

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 8:03 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

So Edward's going to be okay with his brother's taking the fall for this?

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 6:52 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I get that Jess was hurt, but they were not dating...... at all. She should cut him a little slack.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 12:38 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

No, don't break my Jake's heart.....you stupid, stupid bitch ! Ughhhh I'm totally hating Bella right now.

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 12:06 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

Damnnnnn!

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 11:39 PM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I just love Jake

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 9:10 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I really want Bella to find out that Eddieboy is screwing around, maybe that will help her see him for who he is.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 9:09 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

He's making progress, God I love Jake !

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 5:19 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I love my Jake.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 2:34 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I don't get how Bella is suppose to be a IV drug user and a stripper....and no one notices the track marks? If she's using on a regular basis in addition to starving herself, she is going to have track marks and a delayed healing time. She should be looking like shit about now. Perhaps when you have barely dressed women grinding in your face track marks don't really matter, but the addicts I've seen don't continue to look "perfect" for very long.  Having said that.... I am happy that Leah has found Sam, I hope things work out for them.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 12:16 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

It's okay Jakey, I will make you feel all better.......

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 10:04 PM Title: In Love with a Stripper

I wasn't sure about this to start with. A story with the Cullens as the assholes and all. I am not team Edward, but I do love my Cullen men. You have gotten me very attached to Jake and Paul lately though. I was worried that Bella was going to be very unlikable as a drug addicted stripper, but I'm feeling suprisingly sympathetic at this point. Can't wait to see when you take this.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 7:07 PM Title: In Love with a Stripper

Okay, so at this point we are suppose to rip Edward's balls off and feed him those for dinner - ugh

Reviewer: shadowinghope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 7:32 PM Title: Breathe Again

i have to tell u for ur first fanfic, this is pretty damn good! i've read up to ch. 66 (even tho i'm leaving this on ch. 1) at least more than 10 different times by now. This isn't the usual Jake and Bells AU NM story like u said and i love it all the more for it! this is definitely one of the best fanfics out there for this fandom for all Jake and Bella lovers! your takes for both characters are exquisitely realistic and i daresay that Stephenie herself would be proud if she read it =D

please keep up the good work. i've been following this story for a while now and (sorry for not reviewing before, still kind of figuring out this whole site, i only recently found out how to respond to reviews if u can believe that lol) i can't wait to see what happens next with Emmett and Alice in town. Poor Jake =( but we all know how much Bella loves him ;-) and he should know, too lol

p.s. i also just wanted to say thank you. "Breathe Again" was one of the first stories i read among "ONIAT", "Another Definition", and "A Downright Disgrace" when i started on here and i say it in all honesty when i say that you four authors really turned me into a fanfic nut, making me obsessively in love with Jake and Bells more so than I already was and you guys have inspired me to write my own story for them. so thank you! =D

Reviewer: Deenohh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 5:30 PM Title: Breathe Again

Jacob didnt screw up, Bella did. SHE started it. Bella needs to wake up and get over herself already. Bella is not broken but she is selfish, self centered and is using Jacob and sending him a lot of mixed signals to keep him dancing on her string. That is the worst sort of cruelty. The relationship with Mr Sparkles lasted a few months at this point.  She needs to get a clue and stop thinking like love is a story in bronte book. Edward was a dishonest, manipulative, obssesive creep but Bella's behavior towards Jake is not much bettefr 

Reviewer: BabyDollKisses Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 12:28 PM Title: Breathe Again

All at once :D 

This fic is pretty good! Still trying to get used to the different POV's of the same scene. I think I'm just impatient and used to a fast pace :) 

 

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:11 PM Title: Breathe Again

love your story!!!!!!!!! just spent the last 3 days reading it al!

Reviewer: BubblesLove13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 3:26 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

Haha Jacob can be soo clueless!Awesome Story!!

Reviewer: reading4fun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 10:43 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

All the love for this memorable journey!! I don't review much, but am a regular reader of this piece.

Really quite an effort on your part to make this idea of 'Cullens- the Villains' work. Although I'm a big Twifan of all characters(Edward, Bella, Jacob, Cullens, Wolves etc.) alike, I'm a hardcore Edwardian. So, it was hard for me in the start. But, you managed to gain my hatred towards this Edward. Finally, I know what a menace Emmet can be, were he not a 'teddy bear'!

Only thing I didn't like in your story was Jacob's long hair, for I prefer short hair on him. But, since its your story, I'm gonna stop right here.

Now, I only am waiting for a suited ending for this well-crafted piece.

<3<3

Reviewer: jassi82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:13 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

wow. that was great. how i like a good drama chapter. i really thought jacob will badly end up in the hospital. but now bella is hurt as well. and jacobs feeling, when she was hit. i love that. i am evil, i know. i really hope  the next chapter is not the last. need more. 

Reviewer: rosegirl-16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 11:30 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper

when is chapter 35 coming out??

Reviewer: reading4fun Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:06 PM Title: In Love with a Stripper

updates please!!! some of the fans are really dying of suspence......

 

 

 

P.S. love your piece......<3

Reviewer: twilightrose0372 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2012 10:30 PM Title: Breathe Again

Such a great story!  Please tell me you'll be finishing it?!?

Reviewer: bb120 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 7:40 PM Title: Breathe Again

WOW ! ... totally loved this storyyy ! ... IT'S AWSOMEEE !!! :D

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:53 AM Title: Breathe Again

Well ... I had a couple of hours to kill and this filled the void quite nicely.  Enjoying a little J/B.  Looking forward to reading more.  :) Lea

Reviewer: Lead69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 1:34 AM Title: Breathe Again

Edward who?

Reviewer: Cooky Crumbla Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 4:37 AM Title: Breathe Again

I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: SmallTownGal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 3:56 PM Title: Breathe Again

I LOVE EMILY!!! I LOVE THE STORY I LOVE JACOB!!! I JUST LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM REALLY FREAKING HYPER AND YOUR STORY IS JUST AGGGHHH GREAT!!!!!!!! YAY!!!! BYE!!

Reviewer: raeluvs Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 1:24 AM Title: Breathe Again

i dont think it needs to be in two pieces but that would follow the rerest of the book, on the other hand i cant wait for two different chapters! i want to know whats gonna happen right now!! lol thanks so much for this chapter i cant wait for the next one!!! and the sequel! <3

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Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 12:24 PM Title: Breathe Again

    Well, my opinion is that the more, the better, so I'm for separate Bella and Jacob POV's! I always enjoy hearing what they each think, and how they interpret what's going on.

    It was really nice of Jacob to go with a Quil when he was upset, though I wasn't surprised. Jacob's just a good guy, and his friend was hurting. I do think it was interesting for Jacob to get more of a firsthand look at imprinting. I'm still wondering if that's going to happen to him. He's pretty sure Bella's it for him, but who knows? I'm surprised he hasn't thought about that specifically.

    I also enjoyed reading about his shopping with Emily and the subsequent mess he made in the kitchen! I don't know if all men are that way (messy), but my husband sure is! Not that he can't cook like Jacob, but he sure makes a huge disaster when he does! It was nice of Emily to clean it up for him, though. I think she could tell he was getting a little freaked out about it all, and she wants his dinner to go well with Bella. Oh, and it was really sweet what he did when they were in the grocery store and the people were staring. He has a good heart.

    I can't wait to read the sequel and see where this all goes. I've really enjoyed it. I think I've told you I've never really read a Jacob/Bella story and liked it before, but I'm glad I've read this one. It's actually made me like Jacob more, though I never disliked him before, I just believe Bella should be with Edward! But it's still been interesting to read, thanks to your great writing, and I'm looking forward to more.

       Debbie

Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 12:08 PM Title: Breathe Again

    Curiosity? Hmmm... I would think she'd be a little annoyed that he'd lied to her, but I guess not. I only hope the surprise comes off as planned. I've missed this story, and am looking forward to their little dinner date. I do feel for Bella, though. Spending a day shopping like that is not my idea of fun, but at least she got to know the girls a little more. I would've felt pretty awkward talking about Jacob in front of either of them, though, so I'm glad she didn't answer their questions, though I guess there's not a whole lot to tell yet, anyway!

    I'm really enjoying this story.

       Debbie

Reviewer: raeluvs Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:49 AM Title: Breathe Again

i just read your entire story in one day!!!! i love it!!! its amazing i found you  on twilighted and i am hoping you will post more soon, on either site!!! i can not wait for the end of this story and for more in the squel! thanks so much, hope to read more soon!!!!!

Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:46 AM Title: Breathe Again

I've missed these updates.. any clues as to when there will be an update?

 

Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 9:11 PM Title: Breathe Again

   Okay, so I have a confession to make. Here I am, on chapter 70, for god's sake, and this is my first review. I'm very ashamed to admit that, but I had to stop and do it now. I normally review on every single chapter of any fic I read, but I didn't on this one, and here's why. First of all, I found myself so caught up in the story, I couldn't stop, which, I know, is no good excuse, but true. Also, I guess I was a little surprised at myself that I was loving this story so much. Not that I had any reason not to, except that I'm pretty much a diehard Edward/Bella lover, so the fact that I found myself so caught up in a Jake/Bella story was very strange to me. I guess I should also say that I was thoroughly prepared to hate it, and very surprised when I didn't! That would be due to your incredible writing talent, by the way. You had me from the very beginning. Your take on Jacob is pretty spot-on, which impressed me so much. While I'm firmly on Team Edward, I've always liked Jacob, too, and it was refreshing to read a story from his viewpoint. 

    I originally found your story by browsing through the stories available on the site, and for some reason, I decided to give it a try, and I'm really glad I did. Like I said, I love Edward, and to tell the truth, I was reading this story and finding myself enjoying it in spite of that, but I really keep waiting for Edward to return. This far in, though, I really like Jacob, and hate the thought of what it would do to him when/if Edward comes back, which, I assume, is going to happen at some point, since you've alluded to it more than once. It's going to be a tough thing for me, though, to hope that she chooses Jacob. I mean, I adore Edward, and we all know why he did what he did, even if we don't agree with it, so I'm really still on his side. But after reading this story, I'm the closest to hoping she chooses Jacob that I've ever been, which is pretty astonishing to me! That is all due to your talent. You've managed to portray a Jacob that I can root for, that I can see Bella with in the long term.

     So, I'm really looking forward to the sequel. I still have that hope that Edward will come back and she'll realize he's her true love, and while I know it would devastate Jacob, I still hope that's what happens, though I won't be mad at you if you write it otherwise! I do think there will come a time when Jacob will imprint on someone and Bella will be left out in the cold like Leah was, so in that sense, I hope she chooses Edward. But I hate the idea of Jacob getting hurt. Just thoroughly hate it. Even moreso than when I read the books, now that I've read your story!

  Okay, I'm off to read the last few chapters, and then I can look forward to the sequel. I'll try to be better about reviewing.

       Debbie

  

Reviewer: tracy-edwardssexkitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 7:15 AM Title: Breathe Again

I love Jacob, but I have always had a thing for vampires, I am 34 and have loved thim since I was 12....the Lost Boys with Jason Patrick..."sighs".  I will always be forever Team Edward.

Reviewer: WriteOn70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 9:53 PM Title: Breathe Again

Just looking around at some of the series at The Writer's Coffee Shop when I stumbled across your name. It sounded familiar cause either Teambella 23 or Vampish Vixen had mentioned you on the notes of one of their stories. Thank goodness for word of mouth. It would probabably have been winter before I got to yours.  

Reviewer: WriteOn70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 9:30 PM Title: Breathe Again

I think you are doing a great job on this story & people have to remember this is your version/POV. They just need to read on & save some of their comments. OR better still write their own story.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 6:08 AM Title: Breathe Again

awww. that is georgous

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 12:59 AM Title: Breathe Again

Jake is so normal it is so good to read this...  I love it

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 12:03 AM Title: Breathe Again

LOL that is fun.... way to stir up trouble Jake..

Reviewer: WriteOn70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 11:38 PM Title: Breathe Again

Thank you so much for writing a real relationship for these two. I think your fans (that includes me) respect what you've done here.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 1:23 PM Title: Breathe Again

OH this is greatness

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Date: 28 May 2010 12:52 PM Title: Breathe Again

LOL Love Embry.... idiot...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 12:39 PM Title: Breathe Again

i like emily....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 12:34 PM Title: Breathe Again

lol i sort of dont want edward to come back....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 12:26 PM Title: Breathe Again

lol Jake is alot of fun.. I personally think he is like my husband.. and I want to kill him daily!!

Don't do it bella!!! RUN!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 12:17 PM Title: Breathe Again

lol ha ha ha ha ha ha that is funny......

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Date: 28 May 2010 12:07 PM Title: Breathe Again

LOL go Mike!!! NOT LOL...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 11:59 AM Title: Breathe Again

Oh yeah he is a boy.. rolls eyes LOL

I love that it is so realistic..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 10:02 AM Title: Breathe Again

Nice.. and how true.. LOL 16 year old boys often screw up big time!!

this is great!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 9:53 AM Title: Breathe Again

awww... that is so hard that type of love.. been there.. done that..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 9:04 AM Title: Breathe Again

Nice first chapter! I have been meaning to read your stories for awhile now.. can't believe I waited so long this is a great start!! Wouldn't expect anything less mind you LOL

Reviewer: 420bmx Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 4:44 AM Title: Breathe Again

please continue.... :(

Reviewer: JaspersMum Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 3:53 PM Title: Breathe Again

Just re-found this story (how did I manage to lose it?) and am really enjoying it.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

(I found it via the 108.9 category)

Reviewer: eitak Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 2:35 PM Title: Breathe Again

I happened to stumble upon you're story, and I just had to tell you that I absolutely love it. It is very well written and well developed, and it feels so possible, had Edward not return in the book's reality. It just feels like something Steph could have written. I love how you have every chapter in both POVs, too. You're doing a great job.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 2:29 AM Title: Breathe Again

Do you have a FF.net account?

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Date: 03 May 2010 5:00 AM Title: Breathe Again

can't wait for the next chapter.. hopefully soon :)

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:51 PM Title: Breathe Again

can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:34 PM Title: Breathe Again

Well I already know that it doesn't involve Jacob either haha, because i read in your table of contents, so, I'm glad, because otherwise i would be freaking out haha, hopefully Jacob never has to imprint, but i guess that's just wishful thinking, but hey, it is a story, not real life, so you never know what will happen

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:08 PM Title: Breathe Again

haha, loved that ending. I was wondering though, what does YSAR stand for? Is that your real name? Is it an abbreviation for something? I just thought that as i logged on and went to read your story haha

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 6:06 AM Title: Breathe Again

It's in the topten most favorited section.. so usually those story's are the best, I always read some story's from there.. and I'm a big Jacla fan so.. this one really caught my eye, espectially when you have the part about, Edward leaving, Bella forgeting, and her and Jacob in bed together haha, I think it might even be in the topten most reviewed.. but I'm not sure..

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:51 AM Title: Breathe Again

Oh, really? I kind of liked reading what both their thoughts and everything were for the arguments and all the events that happened. Ah well, I didn't notice the sequal up, is it up? Or are you still writing this story?

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:35 AM Title: Breathe Again

Oh great, I don't even know what detail your talking about from chapter 2 or 3.. now I'm curious.. and I'm probably going to have to go back and read to find it.. Thanks a lot!! haha

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:15 AM Title: Breathe Again

oh good haha... it wasn't Edward, you really had me convinsed though.. Jacob, don't be so stupid.. god! I hate these parts of storys.. they make me so fustrated

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:09 AM Title: Breathe Again

GOD DAMNIT!! EDWARD JUST GO AWAY!!! Well.. I'm guessing it's Edward that's looking around Emmett.

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Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:25 AM Title: Breathe Again

gotta love a mad Bella lol.. wonder what the howl was for.. hmm, guess I'll find out soon enough

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 6:05 AM Title: Breathe Again

haha, can't wait to read the next chapter, but that'll have to wait till morning, which sucks, but iim tired and i don't think my eyes could take staring at the computer screen for much longer. Loved the chapter though, and your writing. Ever think of writing your own story? That you created? I think you would be good at it. Just a thought

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:50 AM Title: Breathe Again

JACOB!!!!! always! but yea, I know, he still might imprint on someone, I'm guessing thats how it ends, him imprinting and Edward 'waiting in the wings' for when he does.. I really wish it didn't have to be that way though. Anyway, I wonder why Jess is looking for Embry, haha, she probably thinks their dating or something and has turned into a clingy girlfriend or something, wouldn't that be hilarious! Poor Embry.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:00 AM Title: Breathe Again

GO JACOB!!! I can't wait until he finally catches up to and and kills her.. even if i felt sorry for her before.. she wanted to die right?? God, it's so fustrating, your story is like one of those good books, you can't seem to stop read or put it down. I know I'm going to regret this in the morning, when i have a massive headache from staring at the computer screen for so long.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:10 AM Title: Breathe Again

The silver figure is just her imagination? And the fire is because they finally caught the Redheaded Victoria leech and they're burning her sorry ass? Wishfull thinking? haha. Siver figure, Edward? And I have no idea why there would be a fire.. You know i really hate cliffhangers, and I have to read another whole chapter until I can figure out what it is.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:52 AM Title: Breathe Again

Frankly, I don't care how much she loves Jacob, or how much he loves her. She's throwing away so much by doing that. She could get good Scholarships because of her grades, to go to a good school, and she's giving it up for a relationship, that probably won't last due to Jake's Imprintee out there somewhere. But, this is a story, so i guess it really doesn't matter haha.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 2:16 AM Title: Breathe Again

Ha! I was right! On my first guess anyway. I'm so glad my last guess wasn't right :) love the chapter. Can't wait to see Jake's reaction.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 2:07 AM Title: Breathe Again

Yes, i think that would be nice haha. I really hope what happened to Leah won't happen to Bella. I sure hope he doesn't Imprint. If he does, Edward better be already back and 'waiting in the wings' as he put it in book three. But Jacob just better not Imprint. Who are you going to have as her Happily Ever After? Leah deserves one. She really does. Will she Imprint? I hope so haha. Because if she fell in love with someone who wasn't her Imprintee, then if she ever imprinted, she would feel so horrible, 20x worse than Sam ever did, because  she knows what it feels like. Anyhoo, Loved the chapter, and now i get to figure out who the man on the motercycle is! haha. Yes!

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:53 AM Title: Breathe Again

Embry? or Sam.. wait.. is it?  better not be! Edward? I can sincerely hope it isn't. Damnit! It sure as hell better NOT be!! Not yet. Not so soon. They JUST got together! :| Guess I'll find out after the next chapter.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:59 PM Title: Breathe Again

haha l love the endings to your chapters, they're so hilarious

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:36 PM Title: Breathe Again

wow.. the ending to that chapter was.. interesting lol.. wonder what Jake thought.. guess ill find out in the next chapter! :)

RYSS,

~Harmony is Ke

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 9:40 PM Title: Breathe Again

I want to know Bella's reaction to this imprint... Please I hope the next chapter will come soon !

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:39 PM Title: Breathe Again

Will they finally explain to Bella what an imprint is ?

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:25 PM Title: Breathe Again

I love the funny ending !!!!!

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:28 PM Title: Breathe Again

I was reading "The Perfect Wife" which come recently on this site. Then I just stumble across it on the site when I made a research for other stories! Your summary was intriguing & interesting !

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:52 PM Title: Breathe Again

YYYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS the Cullens are here !! Strange discussion !

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:48 PM Title: Breathe Again

interesting idea to make this stash apparate  !

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:47 AM Title: Breathe Again

I love Charlie...

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:32 AM Title: Breathe Again

I think the New Moon movie made me just slightly Team Jacob...This fanfic is great by the way- a really great way of distracting me from uni!

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 10:24 AM Title: Breathe Again

Will Jacob become an alpha wolf with his second pack? I think they are too many for only one.

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:16 AM Title: Breathe Again

I'm team Edward but I love this Jacob : I'm really torn between the two !

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Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:47 PM Title: Breathe Again

and the silver figure is ... a vampire? Edward??

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Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:51 PM Title: Breathe Again

They just forget that Mike's mum was here ! = problem because she a gossip queen.

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