Date: 03 Jan 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Discloser
This story isn't difficult to believe because there are cults out there with extreme brainwashing practices. It's scary as hell. This story reminds me a bit of the movie The Village - but a lot more twisted.
Date: 29 May 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
Hey! i just finished reaing your story and before i started didn´t realiza trat you guys have quite some time without updating it... are you guys planning on doing so anytime soon¿? i would really apreciated it... its such a scking and addictive story... so much is let unresolve... hope to read you soon! best wishes!!!
Date: 22 May 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
Two nights of 3 hours sleep as i obsessed on this story to get to this point and noticed you have not updated for 2 years. Wtf!! Was loving it, but the next bit would be the best bit, where is the rest of the story?
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
Wow... this story is amazing... its so heartbreaking at times, but there is so much love too! I have loved reading it and cannot wait for an update! I need to know how Carlisle is, and how the rest of his family is. How do Charlie and Felix help more people? How is Aro eventually ended? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
Argh - 37 chapters read and you stopped?! I hope you are continuing this story! It really is too good to stop now. As dark as it is, I have to give you a lot of credit for taking the harder road and facing a lot of the horrible truths regarding cults. That you didn't shy away from writing the darker aspects - and that you did a good job in telling your story without making it seem too over the top - is impressive. So often people try to write something this dark but miss the mark when it comes to presenting their story in a realistic manner. Also, I'm amazed at how you were able to creatively and convincingly present Dr. Cullen's story, as to why he joined the cult and continued to serve in the community using his medical knowledge. Initially I was having a difficult time believing it of him, but you made me a believer.
I hope you're still writing this! I want to know what happens next!!!
Thanks for sharing - and good luck with any and all of your writing. I'm off to see what else you have in the works!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
I've read this story a couple of times, I really like it, despite how disturbing that makes me sound lol. Are you going to continue, or has it been put on temp or permanent hiatus? Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
This story is really interesting and has reached that gripping the edge of my seat stage. Cant wait to find out what happens. And I am impressed by twisted oh how I love to hate him aro. Cant wait to see him get his commupance. Snickers.
Date: 18 Sep 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
So it's been a really long time since you have updated and I'm hoping you are still going to finish this story, because I really would like to have closure on this one... PLEASE!
By the way I love your story, job well done.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
Wow. I feel better about Bella's rescue. I am worried for everyone else. I am trying to think of what might be happening on the compound. How will they find out they are missing? Who will find out first? Is there anyone else on that flipping compound besides the Cullens and Jasper that have doubts?????
Date: 07 Jul 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
Ugh. He's weird. Creeper.
So I am questioning how Carlisle can be ok with all of this. He was the first person to meet Bella when she thought she was going to boarding school. He knows that all these girls are not there by their own will. I guess he feels he is getting them to the "true" life or a better life than they know? He doesn't agree with all of though. He has shown this in this chapter.
And why did they need outsiders???? What's up with needing girls? How many people live among them? I guess they need fresh meat? The whole Aro's genes is in everyone? Weird.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
Ok, so the vitamins are probably to help conceive or become more fertile. Aro wants her to conceive their first night so that he has another pure chosen one.
Extremely odd. Why not just keep a harem of women and have his kids that way. Why does he need to make it seem like it is special and an honor? How did this all start? Man what happened to him for this whole way of life come to pass? How old is he???? I wonder if he like Hugh Heffner? Eeeewww! I know you posted a pic of Aro from the movie but i just don't see how he could have convinced Carlisle to let him take her virginity on the wedding night if they are close in age. Aro must have some power of persuasion.
Unless this all started even before Aro? Ok well maybe that is it.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Atonement
So I think I was taking Aro's words to literally? Edward was his but not all the "children" were conceived by him. I am still a little thrown off by the virginal conception thing. Maybe I read it wrong?
Well holy moley we are already walking on a slippery slope. I wonder if Aro will change his rules so that he can have Bella too. I think he wants to share. Well I don't actually think he wants to share but he knows that he has to "give" Bella to Edward so that is why I think he wants to share.
I wonder if he will just share without telling Edward?
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
Weird is an understatement. What the?????
So I thought Edward was Felix but I see I am wrong. Then I was like hold on how can his name be Edward if Bella's name is Elizabeth. Now I get though he is "pure" so never had another name he was born into the life. So I am thinking Esme and Carlisle are too since I am thinking they are who they are. They were never "evil and wicked."
I am wondering what it will be like when Elizabeth and Marie meet. I know they most likely don't remember each other but I wonder if they will feel a connection of some kind.
And the whole Aro gets dibs on the virgins is crazy! I am not sure I understand how they have virginal conceptions if Aro's cherry popping the chicks. Unless they get inseminated until they procreate and this done before they even marry and get devirginized? So they are pregnant at the wedding with another dude's kid? Super weird. I know I know, they actually want this. So weird. So Edward is Aro's spawn. Weird.
Are they not allowed to have their own kids? I guess I will find the answers to my questions as I read.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
Most stories that update with your consistancy...I end up deleting.....However,,, your story is soooo awsome, I've kept it on story alert.
I am asking you, as a faithful reader, to please be more considerate of your readers and update more often and to finish this story in a timely manner...
I know, how real life 'sneaks' up on you and takes over....but, the old saying goes..."Piss Or Get Off The Pot".....
This faithful reader really loves your writing, and is looking foward to a finished story from you sooner, rather than later,
Date: 30 May 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
Oh Edward! Poor Bella too. She knows she doesn't want to be like this, she just can't help her feelings though- especially her fear. Hope Edward's family is safe for now and that they are able to escape eventually. I can't imagine what Aro is going to do when he finds out they are gone.
Date: 14 May 2011 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
Great to see you back in the land of the living after so much going on...
I haven't been on here at all - too busy with kids, hubby & all the activities growing kids keeps us busy with :)
I didn't even get to see Mandy when I was in Sydney at Easter :(
Have to make sure we catch up next time!!!
I do hope the book is going well - sounds fantastic...
Take care both of you! I'm at the airport about to hop on a plane for the US.
Holiday time (without the kids too) Party time for us :)
1st time without kids in 13 years!!!!! SO excited!!!!!!
Date: 12 May 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
You've definitely gotten my interest with your teaser for Mistakes! Glad to see an update, and glad to hear you're both doing better in RL.
They've got a long haul ahead of them, and I know Edward is going to want to go after his family. I look forward to seeing where we go from here!
Date: 05 May 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
Finally an update!! I love it guys...as usual of course. Yall can't write anything bad! I'm actually in the middle of rereading The Training School Saga for the forth time! I soak in everything yall give me :) BTW, "Misery" sounds fantastic! I can't wait to start it. Yall are great...thanks for the update!
Date: 05 May 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
go charlie go. the protective father is coming out in him big time. i love that he stood up to felix. i am hoping that they do not leave edward behind. he fought so much for bella and protected her with his life. he deserves a chance to be happy and have a chance. protective servies will not help him he will be back on the premises and they will kill him in front of everyone to show how serious they are about there rules. love the update, thanx for writing. love it as always
Date: 04 May 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
They were talking about Edward may have to go to foster care.....How old is Edward????? For some reason I thought he was in his early twenties. I got so excited when I got your update notice. Thanks so much. I am sorry for all the illness and the hand accident. I hope things have settled down for the both of you. I REALLY hope you have more write!!!! LOL!!!!!!
Date: 04 May 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
please update this story more often. the chapters are so short and so far in between it is hard to keep excited about it. i love this story so don't get me wrong, I love any update you give, i guess i am being selfish but i want more. thanks
Date: 04 May 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 37: Exodus
Absolutely Brilliant Sadistic Fucked Up Story! I could not stop reading until I read all that was available! Writing style is perfect, I love the POV's, they cover all the right angles. I am easily able to visualize what is written, I love it! I cannot wait to see what is to come!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
woo hoo! I am so happy to see this story again. Can't wait for the update and to see if they get Bella and Edward out without too much trouble. Then poor Alice and Jazz...omg that is just to much, stupid Aro! I hate Aro!
Carlise just has to get his family out of that cult of death. I hope it all goes up in flames as soon as all the good gets out anyway.
thank you for your story and your update I will be waiting waiting waiting :)