ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh a cliffy!!!!!!!!!!!! unfair!!!!!!!!1 i was reading it all hard like there was more....then i reached the end lmao unfair lmao

merci, merci pour ce cadeau de Nouvelle Année!

oh my oh my!!!

I am so glad that Flex decided to go back and help Charlie. Can't wait to see what their plan is. Awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love it:)

Happy New Year!

Thanks for the update;D)

S.O. & Foot

Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! You stopped there!!! (Thud)

Off to the next chapter!!!!

Cory

I really like the fact that you showed us what's inside Felix's head :D Please, update soon :D

And Happy New Years :D

I loooove Felix... and good for Charlie-- cracking him on the jaw! Almost there....

Happy New Years! It tokk me forever typing this up... I might be a little tipsy...

:)

Omg Charlie about to kick Felix's ass and talking dirty was kind of hot. Yes now I'm shaking my head but its true. Anyway I'm so glad for the early update super yay. Now I can't wait for the dynamic duo to get to Edward & Bella they really need help Edward is in fucking bad shape and where are the rest of the Cullens? Until next time.

LOVE IT!! Thanks for the update & Happy New Years!!

I'm so excited to see how this ends! 

My god, this is such a tragedy! Please update soon.

Happy New Year. Thanks for all the emails and stories.

hope they don't get there too late for bella...and edward.

Hey, Happy New Year!!

Sure hope we don't have to wait long to find out what's next.

Thanks for writing

Oooh thanks for the New Years update... Fantastic!!!

x x

BEST NEW YEARS PRESENT EVERRRRRR :D happy new year guys :)

Thank God Felix had a change of heart!  Such a cool story.  

Thanks for all the great stories and the web site....You gals are amazing!  I get hours and hours of entertainment from TWCS  :)

Happy 2011 to you and yours!

Thank you for the fabulous update. I can't wait for the New Year and a new beginning for Edward and Bella ;)

man i can't wait until Bella and Edward are rescued! great chapter :)

Kristi 

Argh! That's not a new year pressie!! That's like, "here, unwrap it. A plain brown box? Ha! Now you have to wait just to see what's inside!!"

This is the slowest moving story.

Hello my sweets - it was with fear and trepidation that I opened this chapter. You two have put us through hell the last few chapters! (Just like you intended!!). Having said that, I am completely stoked over this chapter (that's a good thing)!!!!!! It is brilliant! I had hoped that Felix would help them, but will they be in time? That's the question, hey?

Thank you for putting this out today. You guys are so special and you are so supportive of us all.

Happy, happy, 2011 - here's to all the writers and their families - much love.

Michele (peoplelikeus)

Poor poor Charlie. I kinda also want to hug Felix but slap him upside the head for taking so long to find his conscience. A very good chapter. As always I'm already waiting with anticipation for the next one!
~Anna-Margaret
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Why did Edward not fight back???? When Aro was with Bella earlier when he beat her...did he take her virginity????? I don't remember. Awesome story!!!!!!

Lovin the story !!:D

But don't you hate it when you're reading a reallly good story , go to click the next button but , it's not there? Yeah i do :(

:L x

Ooooh please let it be Felix! He can dupe Aro into getting back into the camp! You can't go all tragic on us and let either one of them die after what those crazy kids have been through. I mean, they spent most of the story apart and...and...*lip quivers*

Okay, onto the next chapter to find out what happ...what the fuck?  Why is there no *next* button.  This is a joke, right?  NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!  You got me all hopped up on your fanfic crack and then the story isn't finished and I have to be left jonesing for more? You are evil, evil women! >=(

Jesus Aro is one sick fuck.  I mean, I already know that, but just the idea of all those pictures and the one of his peen tucked between his legs...yeah, you ladies really know how to fucked with my mind. 

Also, for some odd reason I pictured this mash up of Aro from the movie and Monty Burns from the Simpsons in those pictures.  Maybe that was my mind trying to shield myself from some of the horror.  I think you lot will officially give me nightmares now! How dare you make me scared of a playroom!  I'll never forgive yo...oh look another chapter...

You know what annoyed me about chapter, after the obvious 'EW' of course? Jasper and all his "We've been through a lot today" Um...I didn't see any large, pointy shafts being shoved into you to make you bleed today as you were spread eagle in front of the whole town buddy. You just kinda laid there.  I hope your two weeks in the cellar will help you rest from your trying ordeal. Men. *rolls eyes*

Also, I tried to check out the Not so Average --- by Thaigher Lillie that you rec'd but I get this message when I click on your link: "Access denied. This story has not been validated by the adminstrators of this site."

Wouldn't that be you? Get to validating! *cracks whip!*

EW ew and some more EWWW!  The whole thing is just ew. I mean, no matter what your age is, a gal never likes going to the gynecologist, but imagine if that was your frickin' DAD and he (and the rest of the family at that) was all up in your shit preparing your body to be a "vessel" after some ritualistic public sex that the whole town watches.  Oh, any for my next appointment can I invite my new BFF so she can see what it's like? GAH! And they all talk about it like it ain't no thang! Carlisle asked them both if they had 'read the material and prepared' like they were studying for a math quiz the next day. So creepy this is all the norm for them. 

I'm 30 and have been living with my boyfriend for 8 years and I know my dad and brother like to still pretend that I don't have sex and we are all fine with that arraingment (god forbid if they actually found out I'm kinky). Hell, I like to pretend my mom and dad picked me out of a cabbage patch. WE WILL ALL DIE VIRGINS TO EACH OTHER!

And it's okay that you aren't answering my questions, I know I'm jumping the gun early with these comments since there is so much story left. I'm a stream of consciousness kinda gal. :)

Ooooh come on Felix, have a little bit of guilt! And come on Charlie, follow that spidey sense and follow Felix! At least get his license plate!

Poor Charlie. :( I had a sneaking suspicious that Felix would meet up with Charlie. I hope it's more than just them passing each other in the bar or Felix making an anon phone call and Felix helps Charlie do a two man raiding mission to save Bells. I'd totally read a story just of the two of them teaming up Rambo style!

I hope my constant comments after every chapter aren't annoying. I can try to keep it all in and just make one comment at the end of the story so I don't blow up your email boxes.   I'm still kind of new to this fanfic thing and honestly never replied much to stories before (what can I say, you guys are the best authors I've come across!) so I'm not sure what's kosher or not. >_>

Oh snap!!!  It's like the Village only instead of monsters in the woods it's Michael Sheen! I would think that Carlisle is one of the people who has seen the outside world given that he's a doctor, unless he got his degree out of a Crazy Compound Ranch Cracker Jack box.  I just picture everything labled with generic white labels like the DARMA brand everything on Lost.  It's crazy to think these people have never seen the outside world. in order for most of them to have been born there, it has to have been going on longer than Aro has been around.  It would be interesting to see some back story on the place as a whole and how Aro came into power.  I'm also curious why they think he screwing and 'planting the first seed' helps the family so much.  How do they know it's his if he turns the girl over to her husband right away?

Also,

"2. You girls are demented and crazy to think up all this shit?"

You are no more crazy or demented than the real world is considering this happens all the time unfortunately.  Regardless, i like you crazy and demented! You are two of my favorite authors and you've combined your crazy, demented awesome talents for the sake of good and my kinky entertainment! Keep on keeping on! :)

It's weird to see Carlisle and Esme so loving toward each other, it makes them almost seem normal.  It's weird because they go from acting like two loving, caring human beings to being a-okay with what is happening to Bella and that there is nothing wrong with the lifestyle they lead.  Well, i guess "a-okay" seems to be a bit of an over statement however the fact remains they are going along with it and have done so for many years. They must know how new girls are taken from their lives and brain washed in a horrible fashion.  Religious fervor can make you do crazy things I guess.

I wonder what Renee is up to...

Yay Edward!  It seems he hasn't completely drank the Kool-Aid! There is hope for him yet! Esme too it seems. I love the tension you have set to build between Aro and Edward over Bella. Your writing is so amazing I can already feel the glimmer of it brewing in the air!

I want a mom like Esme, regardless of if it's the books or a fic you can always feel the maternalness (yeah, it's not a word, what of it!?) spilling out of her.  I never had a good relationship with my mother and I hope if I ever have children one day to be a mom like Esme is.

...hopefully not on the crazy compound ranch though. ;)

What creeps me out more than this chapter is the fact there are crazy religious sects that actually exists in this country that run like this place.  Life can truly be much scarier than fiction sometimes.

Also, I didn't know you kids were the ones that created this website.  THANK YOU!!!  I found while searching for The Perfect Wife after it was deleted from FF.  I understand their terms and conditions, no NC-17 blah blah blah, but what pisses me off is there is no review system before something is yanked and certain things are pulled while others remain.  They don't even check something before they delete it, they err on the side of the offended.  I read a fic that's been on there for years that has Bella being gang raped by wolves while still in their wolf forms, other acts of extreme non-sexual violence and yet any story with even the hint of BDSM (consensual or non) get pulled. It gets frustrating, especially if you've been following a story for a year and then it's suddenly gone while some other violent crap remains.  It reminds me of the news, they'll show bombings and other violence but any hint of sex (or god forbid non-mainstream sexuality) is shown then everyone has to freak out!!!!

Oh well, it's their site, I just wish more people knew of places like this so they can post their stories in all their goodness (better if it's kink goodness!) without fear of reprisal.  Thanks again for not only this story, but for creating this site as a whole. It's like the island of misfit fanfics! ;)

Holy cow! I still love this story. You two truly rock. Greetings from Denmark and HAPPY NEW YEAR.

I wanted a present of new year!!! and oh my god where is Charlie ????

I whish you guys have a great New Year:D

happy holidays to you too;)

AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!!! OH.HELL.NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.!!!!!!!!!!! I can´t believe you guys just did that!!! Fucking Aro - stupid psycho is smart ebough to sell it to the others that Edward wanted to rape BElla!!! WTF!!!!!And there is only a two-man-army outside of the gates consisting of Felix and Charlie!!!

HOLY SHIT!!!! What.the.hell.?!?!?!? That better be Edward and he comes along witha good plan to get them all out of there!!!    Oh god- you guys just sealed my downfall!!! I´m doomed with horroble nightmares for at least a month-A.Month.- with images of a naked *shudder* Aro in several states of arousal *gag*.......ewwwww.......Aro´s member...*vomit* ......GROSS!!!!!  The fucker is so delisional and sick!!! GOD- they need to get out of there!!! NOW!!!!

Motherfu****!!!!!!That little piece of shit!!!! This is soooo not going to sit well with Edward and the rest!!! And there it is again- the image of Aro doing the dirty...*vomit*  Poor Jasper and Alice!!!

Blessed be!!! ;D

wtf?  that is all i must say...blessed be.  LOL!!!!!

hhhmm who is at the door... glad bella is with edward

Oh hell NO!!!!!

Excellent chapter! Now I will be anxiously waiting to see what happens! Thanxs for the update! Happy Holidays!

LindyP :) 

I wonder who that could be....I cant wait to find out!

Wow, this is such a great story.  I can't wait to see what you do next.

Crap! How are they getting out now? Can't waito see what happens w the elders and how they react to Aro.

:) well at least they are still alive....for now.

I love you guys, but I don't know whether I love you or hate you right now - this suspense is driving me CRAZY!!!

HAPPY HOLIDAYS, LADIES.

love,

Michele (PLU)