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Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Wow... I'm glad I wasn't chosen.

Aro is an example of what happens when mental illness is left untreated. He needs some psychotropic drugs, a padded cell, a lobotomy... a few hours alone with Charlie and Carlisle when they find out what he has done to their children. I know Aro is to have fathered the first born of most of his flock but I am still holding out hope that he is sterile and none of them are tainted with his genes.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

How scary is that at least they are together.  Please tell me it is Charlie come to resuce her????  Happy holidays and I will be wishing for more before the new year.

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Damn Aro... I know I get repetitive saying it, but it's true! I love that Edward called him "Aro. Just Aro" - he doesn't deserve the title of father. Let Charlie get in and get them both out! And I certainly won't say no to a New Years present... ;)

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Omg these two are in bad shape especially Edward. Hold on Edward don't die on Bella she needs you and damn it I want you to make you brave man. Those guards were punks that's all. Thanks for the update ladies and don't forget about another fic Daddy's Little Girl hello I miss that fic so much I'm just saying. Until next time.

Reviewer: ickaren Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Well of course, we need more!  At least they are together, they have talked and Chief Swan is on the case.  Other than that, things are pretty bleak.

Happy holidays to both of you and I really hope you can give us a New Year's present soon!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

I hope it is someone that is going to help them!! Hopefully Esme? Jas? Carlise? Oh Maybe Charlie got in there?!!! I can't wait to read!!! Merry Christmas ladies!!!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

loved it awesome cant wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Wow....very powerful. If they die, at least they are together!
Thanks....happy holidays!!

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

OM FREAKING GGGGGGGGGGGGG

 

seriously you guys are geniuses :D

 

MERRY CHRISTMAS ty for this lovely present :)

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

I'm surprised that Aro left them together. Great job though, thanks for the present. Merry Christmas and Happy New Years! ;)

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Thank you for the great update! Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: Edwards_Love_101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Thank you so much for our Christmas Present - I love it. All I can say is GULP!!! I'm anticipating the next installment. Have a Safe & Happy Christmas & New Year.

Reviewer: mylittlebakersdozen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

thank you for the xmas treat!  a little bit of sweetness to temper the horror. 

looking forward to the next update, whenever it appears.

happy ho-ho, you guys!

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

That is a lovely moment the two of them shared - minus Bella vomiting of course!

What a nice present to get on Christmas Eve - thanks.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

:)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Happy Holidays! Thanks for the cool xmas gift ;) !

Reviewer: lala43 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

EEEEK! I have a hate/love relationship with cliffies. Sigh.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year's. Go off and be with family and friends. Your loyal readers will be here when you get back.

Reviewer: katstooldforthis Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

oh please we deserve a New Year's present too. sometimes I wish I didn't read this every time you updated so that I had more than one chapter to read at a time. it is so hard to stop at the end of each chapter like this. thank you for this christmas gift you have made my Christmas eve a very good one.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Thank you for the nice pressie! Had a nice Christmas eve and now this! Love it.

 

Reviewer: padalf2510 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

They are together!!!! Love them!!! Find them Charlie please!!!

Reviewer: snix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

I loved it!!  A New Years prezzie too?? Fanks guys. :D

Poor Edward, saturated in his own blood... if he survives this the outside world will take some getting used to.

Come on Charlie - do your stuff man.

x x

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

creeptastic as usual.  love ya ladies

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

ahh! that better be Charlie and co. coming to rescue them! oh man. really great chapter, can't wait for the next one :)

Kristi

Reviewer: JessiCllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Did I love it? What an insane question. Of course I loved it! I couldn't get enough of it. I'm here biting my finger nails off. Can't wait to see what happens! Who flicked on that light?! Thanks ladies for writing such an amazing story!
~Jessi

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

damn ya'll and ya'll cliff hangers

Reviewer: dkpatton Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

A conversation in the dark between Bella and Edward... very comforting but very distressing at the same time. Have a very merry Christmas.

Reviewer: nicoleaj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

aro is so sick in the head for what he did to edward. can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Mother effer! Why didn't E bust out and beat him to death?! I'm sure he could have taken him!

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

wow that is so awefull :( I hope they stop him in time :/

Much love!

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

oh god no what the hell is going to happen now!! cant wait to read the next chapter I hope they get out!!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Holy crap!!!! Will Charlie get there in time??!!! Will Carlisle help them?!! Will someone please put that lunitic down!!!!!

I NEEEEEEED more!!! PLEASE!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

He's one twisted cookie, father is.  I love what you're doing!!!

Reviewer: chacha Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

this story is way messed up but i gotta keep reading

this story is soo i have no words

 

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Poor Edward & Bella, Aro is a cruel, insane demon. I just hope you have Felix and Charlie busting in their soon. I truly hope you didn't have Aro rape her.

Reviewer: nicoleaj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Wow Aro is severely twisted in the head. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Holy crap! Dark is an understatement! I felt a little sick reading this, truth be told! Aro is really off his rocker! I hope Bella's dad gets there in time to save them!

LindyP :)

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

OMG epic but he is truely sick seriously i teared up & was gagging at the same time...i really hope edward is going to be ok as well as bella cant wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Jeebus! Just when I thought Charlie was going to come storming in, Father Aro gets his way again. *sigh* The light at the end of the tunnel just went out...damn.

Great chapter, and congrats on the publishing house! I just might buy myself an early Christmas present.

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

What is he????!!!!

Oh Lord! there seems to be a long way to salvation...

What a bastard! And who the fuck is birthed this creature?!...

Can't wait to hear either Edward or Bella/Elizabeth....

Happy Holidays to girlies...

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Edward called Charlie, but he never hung up the phone.  In chapter 31, Edward was entering the closet when he heard charlie talking through the receiver.  Aro did not hang up the phone.  He just sae that the box was open.  Charlie heard the entire encounter.  All of Aro's crazy words.  I would love the next chapter to be in Charlie's POV.  I have re-read the chapters twice.  The phone was never placed back on the receiver.  If it was, it was never written.

I know that Charlie heard all of it! 

Thank you for the update.  Can't wait to see what is next.

Reviewer: Marie Wears Prada Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Loved it:)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

;D)

Thanks for the update

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

First of all, thank you for all of the work you both put into the sites. I've seen so many food things happening, you should be very proud of yourselves.

Now, the chapter. Dammit! This isn't good! Edward didn't fight back? Aro is one sick, twisted, evil bastard... As always, I love it. Great job, I look forward to seeing where you take it from here.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

omg i so want aro dead. dead is too good. i want him to suffer. i am not sure how but man he so needs to suffer the way he makes his people. he is such a sick fucker. man oh man charlie where are you. i expected or wanted edward to be a little more physical. but i guess he is still under his power and couldn't protect himself or bella. poor bella she has been through so much. god renee if you thought about others happiness besides your own maybe you guys wouldn't be in this mess. oh my blood is boiling i can not see straight. i can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens to out favorite couple and Aro.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Love Aro, his insanity is really pretty fun... hope something truly awful happens to him soon.

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Wow, Aro has definetly gone off the deep end.  Poor Edward and Bella.

Merry Christmas and Happy New year.

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

ahhhh nooo not. enough. must. read. more... YOU TEASE! lol

Reviewer: twilightluvr001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

holy shizz!  Aro is cookoo!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Why didn't Edward fight back?  Aro needs to die NOW.  I hope Charlie gets there quickly.

Reviewer: FluffyLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Crikey, a dark chapter indeed.  It's a pity Edward didn't fight back, but then I guess that, despite his dawning awareness of how wrong things are at the compound, his programming is still such that he wouldn't be able to strike his Master.  Their only hope now is Charlie and Felix - I just hope they don't have to go through too much more, because right now I don't think Bella's got much life left in her.

So hope you can update soon.

Reviewer: JessiCllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

WHAAAT?!! NO! This just is SO wrong on so many levels. Is is also wrong that I love this story?! This little tale you have woven is amazing. I can't wait to see how things go from here. 

~Jessi

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Magnifique!  J'ai hâte de lire le prochain chapitre.

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Oh holy fuck! Well, Aro was clearly rejected by a woman in a fomer life and has a serious little-man complex, in addition to his sadistic and masochistic issues. I hope they put Edward and Bella together. Also, I like that Aro lied about Edward taking Bella's virginity because Carlisle can confirm her hymen isn't broken. (I'm assuming Aro didn't break it just then, it didn't seem like it.)

 

This story is so distubingly, disgustingly wretched, and yet I'm hooked!

Reviewer: mylittlebakersdozen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

well, so mr psychopath won this round, but charlie is on the way...

i'm very happy that you updated, but i wish it could have been a teensy bit longer.  yeah, i know, i'm greedy that way!  guess i'll have to go back to reading TTSS to get my sicko fix!!!!!!!!

merry HO HO, you guys!  thank you for the xmas present update!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

:)

Reviewer: brighteyes22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

I still LOVE this story, but it is so sad that it takes so long for a very short chapter :(

Reviewer: snix Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Oh my life, Charlie needs to get in there fast.  These two are going to be seriously screwed up if they get out alive.

Congrats on no longer having a life...

x x

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

he is bat shit crazy!!! wow! Poor Edward and Bella!! I hope Charlie and Carlise can help them soon!!

Reviewer: ammNI Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Yet another truly amazing chapter. I love getting a glimpse into the mind of Father Aro. He really is a nutcase! Poor Edward and Bella. I hope somehow they can beat Father Aro and at least now he won't take Bella...hopefully.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Thanks for the update. It was fabulous as always. I can't wait for more ;)

Reviewer: Linn from IA Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

oh, boy, Aro's head is a scary, scary place to be.  The world is full of unsuspecting girls indeed!  Probably Edward & Bella are safer in the reeducation center than near Aro, although the upcoming darkness and pain does NOT sound good.  Thanks so much for updating this story!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

i still have hope that aro will get his just desserts at the hands of Edward Bella and Charlie as well as others.  I REALLY hope that some of these people get out alive.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Hurry up, Charlie and Felix, before it's too late!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Crazy! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

MERCI

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Yep, Aro's cheese has gone and slid off his cracker.

Is no one going to question why Elizabeth was in Aro's room in the first place?

I hope Charlie and Felix can save these kids soon.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

*** MERRY CHRISTMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU & YOUR FAMILIES ***

                  *** WE LOVE YOU TSO & FOOTROZA ***

I cannot believe you have left us hanging like this after the last chapter with Charlie & Felix!!!!! OMG... now we have to wait until AFTER Chrissy - so not fair :(

I so LOVE the review at the top - that reader rocks :)

Perfectly written about Aro - just perfect!!!

Love you guys... enjoy the holidays (& please post again VERY soon!!!)

T2M x

 

P.S. TSO - I'm back down on the Central Coast for Christmas - if you're around... we could meet up for a coffee?!?!

 

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Why can't these people see how sick Aro is? I hope Charlie gets there quickly.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

"I thought he would unselfishly relinquish his rights to her once my plan was made known. ..... Ew.....Aro is evil and we love him!

Why didn´t Edward fight back? Fight for his love??

Merry Christmas and I wish for an update.

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Wow!! that was not at all what I was expecting...ummm....geez...I don't even know what to say, Dark? that is an understatement, that was like pitch black...I'm glad you got a chapter up, because I missed this little group of brainwashed sicko's... if you don't get up another one ...Have a Merry Christmas....

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Aro is fucking nuts and those around him are not very stable either.  Please hurry Charlie and Felix.  Aro thinks he is God I hope the elder relize he is the devil.  I hate to say this but I am so sad that you write such good stories because I miss you so much when you do not update lol.  I know you guys have to so bussy so thank you for sticking with the story. 

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

ooohhh grafffffffffffiiiiiiiicccccccccccccccccccc i loved it. *pouts* i want more* :(

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

wow.. Father Aro is sick..poor edward got his face bashed in.  Hope charlie gets there soon.... Blessed Be.

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Great chapter.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Aro that bastard I hope Felix and Charlie save our couple soon! 

Reviewer: Shante17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

EW!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

awww eddie.....   wish he could've fought back.  

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Ummm....has anybody checked for escaped mental patients lately? Cause the boy is off his rocker! ;)

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

oh man oh man. Charlie is going to come to save the day now right? right? PLEASE update soon! 

Kristi

Reviewer: mkystich Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Are you kidding me? ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME RIGHT NOW?!?! You're leaving me this way? And at the same time, Charlie was listening to this the whole time, wasn't he? OMG. I know you'll update... *goes to the back wall and slides down*... they said they will update... *pulls knees to chest*... they promised they'd update... *starts rocking back and forth*... I live for the next update...

PS: Sorry for shouty caps... and small breakdown.

Big Hugs, Kris

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Pure evil! Can only hope Charlie & the Calvary can get their in time to rescue them!
Thanks for the updates....still is an excellent story!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Sorry I'm so behind in reviewing, just trying to actually live in RL and not in fanfiction. Crazy, I know. Anywho great chapter, I can't wait till Charlie busts in there and knocks the crap out of Aro. ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Another cliffie... your chapters are too short... must know what's going to happen next!

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Frangipani Dreaming Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

This story has been killing me but I couldn't stop reading becasue I needed to know what happened. This last chapter has finally given me hope it will turn out ok. Dying to read the next installment :)

Reviewer: elb1881 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

congratulations on the publishing house... you guys have kicked open the door of opportunity for the writers and the readers of the lovely world of fanfics... Keep up the good work... untimeliness is understandable when u are as busy as u guys are... i can't speak for other readers, but I'll be here patiently waiting and cheering u guys on...

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

I knew Felix would be the key!  He broke the rules of brainwashing for Bella just to keep her alive.  I can't see him wanting her dead now.  Father - maybe, but not Bella.  Great chapter with a couple of great twists. Personally, I'd like to see Felix get a hold of Father...my, wouldn't that be a treat!  I loved that review, by the way.  Whoever wrote it should be given a job reviewing movies and TV shows.  She'd be great and make a fortune!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Great chapter! I am so proud to have know the strories of such talented and ambitious ladies!

Reviewer: SallyThePumpkinQueen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

<3

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Omg I was tearing up this whole chapter but here is the start of the water works: “Where are you baby girl?”  I whispered. Omg Charlie! I feel so bad for you. Charlie you fight for your baby girl damn it to hell. I hate Aro his bitch ass needs to go down with the ship. Okay that was off but I'm mad. Felix better have a very good plan to get Bella out of there or Charlie bust a cap in his ass lol. Until next time ladies I apologize for being over dramatic but it had to be done lol.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Great chapter, I'm hoping even though you ladies are busy you don't stop writing these great stories.

Reviewer: anira4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

I looove it!

Reviewer: Marie Wears Prada Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Love it!
cookie shower:)

Reviewer: SkittleE Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

This is really interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!

Reviewer: silver Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

WOWWWW!!! This is insane!!! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This chapter was one of your best!

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Congratulations on getting the publishing part of your enterprise up and running! 

Now to business. Please, please, please, just give me half an hour with Aro. Don't forget the bucket of hot tar!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

superb chapter, thanks tracy

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Tjank God! As much as I love watching Aro torture eve3ryone he comes in contact with I can't wait to see the shit storm that is going to happen when Charlie sneeks in there. I wonder what is going to happen to Edward. I'm sure the whip and chains will be a major part in this.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Superbe!

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