[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Superbe!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Blessed be..... what a nut case!!!
I so hope Felix helps Charlie get Bella & Edward out & soon!!!!
OMG - my heart is in my throat right now....
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Yeah, Charlie found her! Felix is going to help him get her out! Put a bullet betwen Aro's eyes!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
wow!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Yea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More please!! oh and keep up the good work ladies!!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Thank goodness Felix showed up I knew he was a good guy. I need to know what is going on with Bella and Edward did Aro find them together?????
Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
YAY... Charlies getting close...
YAY
Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
great chapter!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Arhhh Charlie's gotta get his plan together fast!! Thank goodness Felix stopped him diving right in.
The Publishing House looks good ladies, get yous...
x x
Date: 09 Nov 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Oh damn! I'm so happy that Aro didn't find Edward and Charlie knows where Bella is, sort of.
So, Felix is going to help Charlie, but how will they get to Bella and what state will they find her in? Here we go...
Congrats on getting the publishing house up and running!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Wow. This chapter was amazing. I wanted to keep reading, and cry and throw something. You have me holding my breath!
~Jessi
Date: 09 Nov 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
finally
Date: 09 Nov 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
oh my god!!!!!!! this is getting so so so fun!!!
I can't wait for soemone to cage dear ol' Aro in a cushioned room, soon!!
much love!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
:)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Oh I so thought you were going to leave us dangling with the end of last chapter and not address it in this one. Not that this chapter really tells us what is happening with Edward and Bella, but at least Charlie heard Edward talk and knows where Bella is.
Thanks for the update. We know you are busy, so it is great to have another chapter to read.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Such an awesome chapter. Hurray for Charlie the Attempted Rescuer! Hopefully along with felix Charlie will be able to save Bella from Aro's clutches before he fucks with her even more.
FANTASTIC!
~Anna-Margaret
xx
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
great chapter.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
oooooooooooooooo what a great chapter!!!!!! I can't wait for the next one!! Ladies you rock!!! super duper amazing!!!! I love it that Felix is going to help Charlie!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!! I hope Edward and Bella are ok!!!!!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
OMG!!!! Finally Charlie gets a break. Ok, from this chapter we see that it is Aro who comes in one Edward and Bella. At the time that Charlie hears, Aro has not noticed Edward being in the room. Hopefully Edward hind before Aro notices him. What is Felix doing there? I thought he left. Felix does have a little heart if he came back. I hope he helps Charlie get Bella out. Can't wait for more and more and more girls.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
excellent chapter ... and Charlie is going to be a force to be reckoned with I just know it
Date: 09 Nov 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Phew, great chapter....you left us hanging there!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
OMG epic loved it Charlie found her & Felix is helping so excited for Charlie but I have a feeling shit is gonna go down with Edward & aro & it's not gonna be good on the recieving end for Edward seriously epic stuf can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 09 Nov 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
That was so great! Yeah, Charlie found his daughter (well, at least her location). Looking forward to your next post!!! Congrats on the Publishing house! I'll have to check it out!
LindyP :)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
This was a great chapter. I am so glad that Charlie is close. Edward was so brave to find a phone.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Gah. C'mon Charlie. Get r done.
Thanks for leaving us on the edge of our seats.... again.
Eagerly awaiting the next
Date: 09 Nov 2010 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
well crap now thier in the shit
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
I can only imagine the time and effort you two have been putting into the publishing house. Congratulations on the first two books being published, that's awesome news!
Felix is going to help Charlie? Hell, yeah! And I hope Aro turned around and left without seeing Edward.... I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And I'll try to be good and not complain about the wait. The fact that you two are able to continue writing at all is pretty much a miracle, I think!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
AHA! Charlies smarter then he looks.
can't wait for MORE!!!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
an amazing story, lots of imagination. Your story very interesting, cant wait for the rest of it.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Why he didn't call the police?
Hurry to see what's next.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
my god.......
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
I knew Felix wouldn't let Charlie down. He wasn't able to shake his guilt over Bella. Let's hope Charlie lets him live so he can help rescue Bella.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Aw, you guys don't suck, you are wonderful. This is a great story and you are helping to expand the community!
A BIG THANKS!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
i mean it was not the last chapter, but the last chapter so far...
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
I hope the update comes soon. Thank God Felix was there to stop Charlie. And I hope you read the last chapter of my story that I published 2 weeks ago and which was pretty creepy...
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
wow charlie is where his daughter is. that is amazing. i didn't think it would happen. i am glad felix has finally made himself known. i know he felt something for bella. he knew she didn't belong. her dad loves her and wants her back. now these fools in this compound need to get their heads from their asses and help bring down aro. but we all know theay are so brainwashed. how sad to think this does go on everyday and their are people living this life. thank god not for me
love it
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Ugh! riveting!..at least Edward got to say that to him...
What the hell is with Felix?! Where does he stand?...
Can't wait to know whst happens next..!
Good luck with Publishing House I fully expect it to be great!..:D
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
S.O. & Foot
Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! You stopped!!!!!!!
Oh good lord. I have good feelings & bad feelings and I don't like any of them right at this moment. GULP!!!!!
Please, please, please, PLEASE tell me you have the next chapter almost done!!!! I'm begging you two!!!!!
Cory
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
I hope Charlie cuts Aro's dick off and slaps him across the face with it.
And to comment on the other girls comment... I read a story that said Courtney Love tried to do eHarmony, and it came back saying there was no match for her. Maybe Aro should look into it. :Shrugs: Just saying.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
heelllllsss yeaaaaaahhhhh we gonna get to the kick butt action arent we?!? hehehe ^.^ im so friggen excited.. lmao
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Thank you for the break from Aro's pyscho bullshit. I needed a little hopeful chapter to keeep me going til the next update. I love me some Charlie. I sorta wanted him to go in guns blazing though... Although he would have been outnumbered. It coulda been like fucking Scarface. (sans his death at the end)
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Excellent! Just hope Edward stays safe as well!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
OMG You're ALIVE!!! lol.
Great chapter as always.... At least Felix is gonna do the right thing. now call the FBI and all Daddy Charlie
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
ahh!!! thank God Felix is going to help him get in. hopefully Aro just went in and out so Edward can try to get Bella to Charlie. oh man you guys really have me nervous. great chapter, update soon! :)
Kristi
p.s. that review about Aro and eHarmony was hilarious!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
Aro is a fricken fruit cake. Send him out the back and shoot him now is all I have to say...
Date: 07 Nov 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved this story!
I normaly read on fanfiction(dot)net but a lot of great stories is being pulled, so I think this site is an awsome idea:)
Can't wait for an update.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 31
I hope you will update soon.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Good chapter.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
Good chapter.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Good chapter again.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Another good chapter.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Hope someone will save her.
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Salvation
wow! amazing story. very well written. also, I like the idea of Felix and Bella. I never thought about it before.
Date: 04 Nov 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
Love it so far! Can't wait to read more :) Very different from anything I've read so far. Great story
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
I'm trying to improve on my poor track record of not reviewing stories so here I am....reviewing. You two have some seriously twisted minds and I can appreciate that. I read the Training school so I was prepared. I like the plot on this one and it feeds my fear of cults. I read a short story on ff that was about cults where Carlisle was the leader and it broke my heart. I love Carlisle and it always makes me sad when he's an asshole so having Aro be the leader is much better...thank you. I look forward yet fear your next update as this story creeps me out. Keep up the good work ladies.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 31
ahhhh what noo i need more asap
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
OMG!!!!! What is gong happen??? Is Edward going to get caught? How is Edward ever going to get her out of there? Is Aro going to walk in and LOCK the door and then see Edward. If so, I hope Edward gets to him before Aro can unlock the door and then beats the hell out of Aro and then Edward leaves with Bella. After tieing Aro up and beating him with the cane that he used on Bella. Can't wait for more girls.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Desperation
This is a great story! I can see that a lot of work goes into it. Thanks.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
thank you for those wonderful moments.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
Great cliff hanger...
Date: 23 Oct 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great job thanks for writing.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
YAY!! I love it.. please update soon
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 31
My goodness you two - my heart is in my throat right now!!!!!
How dare you leave us there - the most terrifying cliffie I think I have EVER read!!!!!
NOOO - I do hope you have the next chapter written & ready to post tomorrow???
PLEASEEEEE......
OMG - my heart is still racing - like a bull in a china shop....
Love ya both :)
Blessed Be!
T2M x
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh, Edward! This is a rough juorney for him too and it shakes him to the core physcologically almost as much as Bella.
I'm really looking forward to Charlie tracing the call. I don't want Edward leaving Bella and her cuts while require medical attention soon.
Totally intense!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 31
This story is SO AWESOME!!! I love this so much!! Please update soon!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 31
Geez...Aro is just so ...yucky!....and gross! and Gay ( i knew he had homo in him ) and I was wondering where james was going to come into the story. I knew he had to be lurking around there some place ...ok waiting to see what happens, because that is all I can do...thank you ladies for the update...
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
Whoa, can't wait to find out what happens. Great job guys. ;)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
aaarrrgggg. need more need more
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 31
Their too close .... they've got to save her! Absolultely fantastic chapter!!!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 31
Charlie.... GO CHARLIE
Give Bella back to Charlie..
This was good... Cant wait for more..
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 31
Holy Shit! Holy Shit! Holy Shit!
*bites nails*
Omg! What happens next?!!!...
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh my goodness! I was about an inch my the screen of my laptop this was intense! I can't take this! I wanted to cry and yell and scream and murder Aro all in the same breath! I can't wait for your next chapter! ~Jessi
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter :)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
I happy to love the way you put my stomach in knots with no release Mistresses.....lol
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 31
Sorry this took so long! RL gets interesting! I just caught up with the last 2 chapters. Wonderful touch those pictures of Father on the walls! Creepy, but perfect. James is likely to get what he wants and you know what they say about that...be careful. You just might get it. Nice cliffhanger here too!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
I am going nutts!!!! I can't wait for the father to get what he deserves!!! You tooo are sooooooooooooooooooo evil!!! (but i love it!!) Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 31
Aahhhhh, another cliffhanger!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 31
Mother fucker!!! That's it?! Too short!!! Charlie has to help them! But how? Dun dun duuuuun
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
I can't wait for you to update! I want to know what is going to happen next.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 31
dun dun dun...oh my! I can't wait for more!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 31
oh my god!!! you guys want to kill me! lol I can't wait to know what happens now!!
Much love!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh crap! So close, so flaming close. Charlie we need you, come on man!!
Ace as usual you crazy pair!
x x
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
This is definitely a good cliffie. I think Edward should just knock Aro over the head with something heavy, take his keys, get Bella out and Charlie should be there and rescue them all. Yay!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 31
GAH!!! What a chapter. WOW WOW WOW. Thank you for sharing. YOUR BOTH ROCK. Greetings from Denmark... oh, and Blessed Be.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
Ohhhh I like it!!!!! I didnt realize that Aro was as demented as he is. Great cliffie!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 31
and the plot thickens ... hurry and update
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 31
Edward is so selfless - offering his life for Bella. Aro's mad. I hope Charlie can save both Edward and Bella.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
Everytime I see that there is another chapter I quake in my shoes at what the hell you are going to write next. Another great chapter!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 31
That was awesome guys! I hope Charlie is able to get to them in time! Thanks for the great update!
LindyP :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
Edward should not trust James. He should not throw his live away to him either. Bella would not want that because she is going to need him on the outside.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 31
oh crap!!!! I hope edward is able to say something fast to charlie or they are in a world of hurt from father aro..... blessed be...:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
It's 1:30 in the morning. I have to tear myself away for now. This story is very reviting and I can't wait to read more. :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Damn Edward might kick or kill Aro and I kind of like that possibility. Which your back Edward but kick Aro's ass when you get in the clear lol: Once again my body came to life with rage. What the hell had he done to her? I wanted nothing more than to grab him by the throat and squeeze until he had drawn his last breath.
Luckily, my mind had better control. I remembered why I was here, and realized that if he was talking to her, she was at least, still alive.
Damn poor James. Aro really treats him like shit more than others apparently but I hope Edward keeps his cool now that James caught him hiding behind the corner: “That’s good for you because if anything happens, I will take your life as payment. This is extremely important for me and the Family.” Aro grabbed James’s hair forcing him to look up. “Look at me when I speak with you. Are you a man or a woman? Why do you think it is that I have not mated you with someone before? I have always thought you to be much too feminine. Tell me James, would you rather I find you a male? Or is it my touch that you remember?”
He stepped closer still to James and grabbed his crouch, “You long for my touch do you not? Is it me that you dream of ripping into your hole? Do you remember that night with crystal clarity? Shall I take you in front of the Family? Is that what you desire?”
As if he were holding something dirty, he threw James’s head back and wiped his hands on his clothes. “Do something right for once in your life you pathetic piece of trash.”
For the first time, I actually saw James show true emotion. He looked ashamed and frightened, but he stood up and kept his eyes on his Father. “I will make you proud of me.”
Aro scoffed and stormed down the hallway.
I watched as James relaxed a bit and leaned into a chair to catch his breath. He must have thought he was alone as he spoke in hushed tones, “Why do I continue to let him get to me? It’s clear that he thinks I am defective. I will show him who’s a woman.”
Much to my surprise James straightened out his shirt and wiped the tears from his cheeks. “Edward, I know you are standing over there. I saw you when Aro was leaving. Come out now, or I will call him back and show him what kind of man he really wants me to be.”
OMG Charlie to the rescue if Aro doesn't kill them first. I loved it. Until next time and yes the cliffhanger was epic.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
It's so dark and twisted..........LOVE IT!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh God... I'm so curious about what's going to happen next that I'm literally shaking!
Please, update soon...
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Promises
This is getting VERY interesting....... :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
The easy way: Aro enters the room and has a little conversation with Edward. Charlie listens to everything, tracks the call and saves them all....the happily ever after show.
Considering your twisted, wicked brain: Aro opens the bedroom door and finds Edward halfway in his closet. He is not man enough to face Edward on his own and calls his guards for help. Edward loses the fight and has to face the consequences. (Unless someone believes him?) No sudden death for him though.. Once Aro is alone with Elizabeth his loving hands will be all over her.....to help her heal from all this confusion. Who the hell is Isabella Swan? And Charlie? It´s too soon for him to find her. We like to be tortured and we need more of this. Cliffies, weeks of not knowing what is going on behind closed doors. We managed 31 chapters with just little brain damage. Please…continue….
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
Good! Hope Charlie can save them all!