Date: 09 Jan 2020 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would love a sequel to this story
Date: 09 Jan 2020 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
Yes I would love a sequel.
Date: 09 Jan 2020 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
Yes I would love a sequel.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2019 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
O how I wish to be a fly on the wall after that chapter
Date: 14 Mar 2019 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 36
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
Date: 02 Mar 2018 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
HHmmm so both Alice and Carlisle are plotting against Jasper. Interesting...
Date: 02 Mar 2018 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Interesting story set up. I am totally hook!
Date: 29 Mar 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 37
What's the sequel name?
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 37
That was good. I was wondering what happened to Leah. She was given a raw deal in Twilight.
Now, a little fun here didn't turn out so well for her either. At least she didn't kill her baby. She very well could have. Or killed herself when she was pregnant.
I'm glad she went to Esme. Maybe she can die with some peace knowing Esme will take care of her daughter.
Good story!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 36
Jasper is SO going to get his ass kicked.He's got some s'plainin' to do!
Carlisle still in the dungeon and his daughter right in front of him.
Esme raised her. Esme would have only told Jade good things about Jasper. I think it's good Esme raised her.
Did Leah die at the birth? If not, she's the last shifter. Unless she had more kids.
You'd think she would have left La Push and never gone back. there wasn't anyone left alive there. Well, almost nobody.
I wonder if Esme took her in?
Oh gosh.
Enjoyed your story. Got totally pissed off at parts of it, but it worked out. Mostly.
Like I said before, if you got a sequel, I'd like to read it.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well, well, well. Charlie's been taken care of. Wraps that problem up.
WTF? Leah's pregnant? Jasper didn't use that protection he told Esme about?
Leah is having Jasper's FIRST baby.
Right before Bella pops one out.
He just left her. He didn't kill her. He couldn't kill his first baby.
I was wondering about that. If Alice thought that Jasper's first son was going to be her mate, and Alice is dead, then Jasper's son's mate has been killed.
Doesn't mean he couldn't find another one. Unless you go for that only one true love thing.
But Leah ... if she has a boy ... Jasper killed his son's mate. Good riddance. He won't miss what he never knew about.
And a sequel would be cool.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 34
Glad Alice is dead. She thought Jasper's "first" son was going to be her mate?
"First?"
Jasper is crowned, Tanya's got her eyes on him, and he just up and leaves Bella to go back to Forks? I hope he told her.
What happened with Charlie? That legal stuff takes months, though. Hope he's been sitting in jail for a good part of that.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 33
I can kind of sympathize with Jasper a bit here.
Carlisle was his "sperm donor", but Caius is his father and his sire.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 32
I hope all his memories have come back.
It might not be such a bad thing to lose some memories though.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Yeah. Get that little bitch Alice. I gotta know what the hell she was thinking.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 30
Holy shit! What next?
Newborn Jasper is running loose with Bella.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 29
I gotta say I will be so pissed off if you kill Jasper.
I HATE it when he dies.
Oh *gasp* he lived! (Good damn thing.)
But he doesn't remember anything!
ARRRRGH
Date: 04 Dec 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh DAMMIT!
No, Jasper! Don't die!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh, God. I hope it's Jasper's baby.
If it was Edward's, I can't see how they both could keep from hating it.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yeah, I guess Jasper would take over in Marcus' place.
Edward-sick fuck. Same with Carlisle. They would have just killed Esme.
Athenodora is going to rip Jasper a new one.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
Alice wants Jasper dead? What the hell for?
Not surprised Carlisle was up Edward's ass.
Oh, no! Marcus!
Aro and Caius have Carlisle! Aro will hear all the shit rolling around in Carlisle's head. They'll know everything.
Of course Alice took off. What the hell was she trying to do? Why kill Jasper? What's the point of that?
Date: 04 Dec 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
No damn way did Jasper just give up!
No fucking way!
and he couldn't jump up into a tree?
Thank Christ! Caius!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
*whew* glad Bella's okay.
Garrett?
Peter's just a little jealous there.
How could Jasper just run off and leave Bella alone? I hope he's back soon.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
Paula? Mated to Peter?
Alice was babbling about not meeting her mate? did she honestly think she had a chance at Jasper?
NO FUCKING WAY DID EDWARD JUST DO THAT!
Why the hell didn't Jasper hear Bella screaming!?!
WTF?
Oh, gee. Now Carlisle is going to be really mad at Jasper for killing his best boy Edward.
I really hope Carlisle fucks up right in front of Caius.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
*whew*
Good! Edward knew she wasn't his mate and the perv is sitting outside listening to them.
I wonder what Carlisle would think of that?
Date: 04 Dec 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward being a devious little bastard.
I am real glad that Bella didn't just run off and not speak to Jasper. (I hate that.)
He bit her! Yes! Pump her full of venom!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
More shit is being piled on.
Alice is Malice and Edward is coveting something that isn't his.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
Jacob! On Cullen territory and threatening Bella!
That crazy fucker deserved to die.
And Carlisle is worried about him!
(Okay, here, I don't think Bella would know about Carlisle being Jasper and Peter's biological father. Jasper had said his last name was Volturi. He never mentioned the Cullens.)
Carlisle is screaming at Jasper?
Usually, I can't stand Edward, but thank goodness he stood up and told the truth. Jacob was trespassing anyway.
Carlisle would have let him take Bella to keep the peace?
Holy shit! Caius is here!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
Welp. Charlie is as big a douche as Jacob.
GOD! What total fuck!
I can't wait to see what Jasper has in mind!
Hot damn! When Carlisle showed up, I figured he'd draw the blood, but then *lose* the results.
WHOOT! Jasper's lawyer is in town, taking names and kicking ass! YEE HAW!
It's be nice to have that kind of money, huh?
But, Jasper did behave himself!
Too many witnesses to that breathalyzer for Carlisle to screw with the blood test. Jasper won't be in jail much longer. He can step out while Charlie is stepping it!
Carlisle thinks he knows something. Asshole. He probably thinks Charlie caught Jasper in bed with Bella.
Bella's right. Charlie practically tried to throw her into Jacob's bed. Fucking pig.
Hate to say it, but there's going to be trouble with Bella being only 17 and at the guest cottage. I hope Caius shows up and buys a house or something.
He'll be shocked about Peter! I hope Jasper remembers to mention that little bit of info.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well, now. They've gone and had a fight. He said he was sorry! Bet he doesn't do that very often
Jesus H. Christ. Carlisle is manipulating Peter. Jasper saw right through him.
Holy shit! Charlie's gone to Billy's. So Jacob knows Bella is alone. That fucker. What was he going to do? Rape her?
What a piece of shit.
Thank goodness the pizza boy showed up when he did!
I really hope Charlie isn't a total ass.
Date: 03 Dec 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
I still think Carlisle is being a douche. Where's all this compassion? He's got some for everyone except Jasper. Of course he likes Peter better. Peter hasn't given him any shit yet.
So Bella runs into Peter at the books store. I guess she would be confused.
Now Carlisle is preaching at Peter about what he eats. Fortunately, Peter and Jasper will be 18 in a while and can leave that dogmatic bullshit behind. Peter is old enough to make up his own mind, but Carlisle is pushing it.
Jacob slapped Bella!?! Yeah, that'll make her want to be his girlfriend. Stupid dick.
Jacob's lucky Jasper didn't kill him.
Yeah! Right to the bedroom. We can only hope Carlisle doesn't walk in and stare at Bella's goodies.
Or any of them, for that matter. Christ. Have these people never heard of knocking?
Very nice. And no interruptions!
Yes, might be a good idea to know each other's names.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
Peter!
I'm so glad Esme didn't give up on Jasper. He made a promise and kept it. Carlisle was being a shit.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Now Jasper is going to have to remember that he's had a family all these years and his brother was all alone and missing him.
And Jasper and Bella meet again! HELL of a meeting!
How the hell did she just get up and walk away?
Should be interesting when Edward gets a whiff of Bella on Jasper.
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
Date: 02 Dec 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
Leah!?! And would the other girl be her cousin Emily?
LOL
Oh, my! I wonder how many little Jaspers there might be running around?
Lucky Esme gets to have The Talk.
Seems to me, Jasper's smart enough to cover his tracks, so to speak.
and Jasper and Bella have finally met. Hell of a meeting.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, my God! Jasper is going to drive Carlisle insane. And Edward right along with him.
Yes. It would be nice to have a King as a father.
Yep. I'd say that if Carlisle tried to raise a hand against Jasper now, he'd draw back a venomy stump.
Jasper won that round.
Esme may schmooz the boy right back.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Jasper had no problem schmoozing Esme, but Carlisle is going to be watching him very carefully.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Okay, I gotta wonder why, when Caius first took Jasper back to Volterra, Jasper didn't tell him about his brother.
They had a deal to keep quiet, but Jasper had to see that he was being treated well and taken care of. Wouldn't he have wanted the same for his brother?
And the Cullens are known for descending in a horde. It wouldn't matter how old Jasper was.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Jasper is going to be so pissed. Carlisle is overstepping his bounds here.
Oh!
Jasper has a twin.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
I bet that guard was having fun directing Carlisle to the elite Guards common room.
And who the hell does Carlisle think he is trying to tell Jasper what to do?
Minor son? Really, Carlisle?
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Enjoyed his teasing of Edward. Ha ha ha ha ha.
Jasper had his ass kicked.
Well, we have to assume that somehow Jasper decides to go to Forks. At least he won't have the red eyes.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well, now.
Seems as though Jasper is learning all the "manly" arts.
And Tanya's right on him.
I thouht he didn't want the Cullens to visit? What the hell are they doing there?
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can't believe Carlisle beat him!
I'm amazed.
Out in the wild - kill or be killed. Jasper had no one to hunt for him or help take care of him. He had to be vicious in order to survive.
Now Caius has him.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 37
Ahhh poor poor jasper... Lol not sure how I would like to see this go, but I'm defiantly interested...
Date: 11 Nov 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 37
wow. i actually have a little more respect for Esme now.
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Leah, what a tough break. I loved how Esme instantly took them both in. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2014 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 37
Love it so much. I can't wait for the sequel. You always seem to have the best ideas for your stories.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 36
Hope for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! So happy you enjoyed the story. There will be a sequel, but first I'm going to do a couple of outtakes to expand upon some parts of the story that were left a bit vague.
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 36
OMG, I really need to read what happens next. I do hope you get to write that sequel.
Author's Response:
As always, thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it greatly!
There will be a sequel, but I got a suggestion to do a series of outtakes until I can get to the sequel, and so I'm going to do a couple just to flesh out parts of the story that were merely touched upon.
Thank you again!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 35
Wow, I would def want to read a sequal. Great stuff.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 36
Please write a sequel
Author's Response:
I will. :-)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 36
How mean of you to end with a cliffie1 Yes Yes I want mor PLEASE. Thanks for a great story - Xanath
Author's Response:
You're very welcome! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Will be doing some outtakes first, and then a sequel.
~Spudz
Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 36
Sequel Please!!!
Author's Response:
Very soon, with outtakes first! :-)
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 36
More, more, more! Please and Thankyou. I for sure want a sequel to this fantastic story. You can't end a story on a cliff hanger if you don't do a sequel. I swear it's a form of torture. Thank you for sharing this story anyway.
Author's Response:
There will be a sequel, but thanks to the suggestion of a wonderful admin. lady here at TWCS, I will be doing some outtakes first.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 08 Nov 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 36
You have to do a sequel!!! I'd pre-favorite it if I could!
Author's Response:
I appreciate you and your readership so much! Thank you!
There will be a sequel, with some outtakes coming first.
~Spudz
Date: 08 Nov 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 36
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO i cant believe you did this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sigh* i need to get off your story of addiction but will there be a sequal?
Author's Response:
There will be, with outtakes coming first. :-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 36
Please please do a sequel. You can't leave it there. How will Bella react? How will Lucca react to what he has found out? Please follow on and get these questions answered. I've lived this story and really hope for more.
Author's Response:
There will be a sequel, but I will be doing a couple of outtakes prior to it, at the very least. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 36
oooh Evilness. You really need to give us a sequel. Too many unanswered questions now. Please and TY.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your readership and your fantastic suggestion of doing some outtakes! I appreciate that greatly, along with all the help you render tirelessly. ;-)
~Spudz
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 36
Sequel prerelease, that was a horrid cliffy
Author's Response:
I won't leave you hanging! ;-)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 03 Nov 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 35
Uh oh. Wonder if that Leah thing isn;t going to bite him in the arse later.
Author's Response:
Um, maybe? LOL <3
~Spudz
Date: 03 Nov 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 34
Buh Bye Malice. Skankya eying her man huh?
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
Stupid. Jasper should have taken her back to Italy with them and kept her around untill she had the baby and then kill her and give the baby to one of the other couples if Bella didn't want the child. But I reckon she would because the baby is part jasper. Still love the story. Not to mention you're a fantastic writer. So please continue giving us stories because we love them.
Author's Response:
LOL Don't be too hard on Jasper. He's still pretty young and inexperienced! And besides, I'm setting things up for the eventual sequel. Glad you still like it though and thanks so much for reading and reviewing! <3
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
Awesome and yet a little sad.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 33
I was SO excited to see this update in my inbox :) I loved it, and I loved how you described him getting his memory back!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 33
Poor jasper. Glad he didn't push B away at the end.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it and would love a sequel.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
I'm really loving this story as soon as it updates any others get left for me to read one. I wonder what happened then to bring Jasper back to himself. Looking forward next update.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loving it. Fantastic story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 32
Glad B talked him into going back. Yey Jasper is back in more ways than one.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 32
Jaspers back:) yay
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 32
Gah!! I really hope he doesn't do or say something cruel to Bella. Can't wait for the next chappie!
Date: 10 Sep 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love this story, and i cant wait to read more. Hopefully soon
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 31
Good, as always!
Date: 06 Sep 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 31
Glad Jasper is still himself even without all his memories. Can't wait fro Demetri to find Malice.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2014 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 31
Even all wild Jasper is sweet to Bella. I loved it.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 31
I'm happy that he still loves and is mated to Bella. I was happy he handled all of her news well. As ever, I can hardly wait for the next update even though you are doing a great job updating.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Very, very sexy times! Sensual chappter.
Date: 29 Aug 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
Please update asap! Love your story
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
SO exciting, I can hardly wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh no, he has forgotten everyone! Awesome chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 30
Goodness gracious, I love you. Thanks so much for the update. You're still leaving us on cliff but you are updating so quickly! Thnk you, thank you and thank you. I love this story more sceach chapter is added.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oooohhh, very good chapter! Love this story!
Date: 29 Aug 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 30
Someone should have mentioned she was pregnant. At least he remembers bella
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 29
You have got to be the Queen of the cliff hanger. Another amazing chapter. Please put us out of our misery soon. Thanks for your excelcent work.t
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 29
Fantastic. Loved it. Want more. Never enough.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 29
Gah! Nail-biting over here!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 28
You don't know how glad I am that there is another chapter! My heart practically stopped haha!
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 29
ack no memory. Thats not good, esp for Bella.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow! That was not what I was expecting. Please don't make us wait to long to hear what happens next. I was really hoping to find out about Bella telling him about their baby. Now, I am worried he won't make it!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 28
Biting my nails here.
Author's Response:
Don't worry. I won't keep you hanging for long. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ack ya killin me. Poor Jazz.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and all the reviews! Hope you enjoyed it. :-)
~Spudz
Date: 25 Aug 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 27
Truly hope its Jaspers and not E's. You aren't that cruel are you?
awww Momma Dora is just too sweet.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad Esme and Peter have their true mates. They need to grab bella and get back to Italy. No point in staying now
Date: 25 Aug 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
yey Bella for not fainting and putting Carlisle in his place.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Sounds like time to kill Malice and Scumlisle. hope Caius et al get there quickly.
yey for Esme finding her true mate. wonder where Em and rose are? Bet they have a house or something somewhere. Or maybe up with the Denali's?