Date: 29 May 2019 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 31
Hi, is there going to be more to this story , it is sooooo good and I hope to see more soon. Yorrr a great writer and I hope you continue. Loved it and hope there is more to come.Tammyr :-)yr
Date: 29 May 2019 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
Hi, is there going to be more to this story , it is sooooo good and I hope to see more soon. Yorrr a great writer and I hope you continue. Loved it and hope there is more to come.Tammyr :-)yr
Date: 29 May 2019 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
Hi, is there going to be more to this story , it is sooooo good and I hope to see more soon. Yorrr a great writer and I hope you continue. Loved it and hope there is more to come.Tammyr :-)yr
Date: 12 May 2018 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 31
Please update!!! I have been waiting for sooo long!! I love your story
Date: 21 Sep 2017 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMG. I didn't realize your story wasn't finished when I started and you characters sucked me in. What are the chances of you posting again and finishing it? Pretty please 😢😢😢
Date: 23 Jun 2017 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wish you wpuld update and finish the story
Date: 20 Oct 2016 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
I absolutely love Bella!
Date: 20 Aug 2016 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
Hope you will update soon and finish the story. Would like yo see hiw it ends. Hopefully with Bella and Edward together. Enjoy your stories
Date: 25 Apr 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great fic! Hope you're going to continue!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 31
It's not nothing....someone is about to die or something is gonna happen soon....something big!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2016 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
It seems like your setting up Bella to either die or at the very least be hurt. After all Edward was warned about losing the love of his lfe right at the beginning of the story.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 31
thank you for the update..who is watching them? Bella should have told Edward what she saw..even if it seem unimportant....until you post again
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 31
Was it a goon from ESMe?
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
She should have told him anyway. His paranoid ass would have tracked that car down.
Date: 05 Feb 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 31
I don't blame Edward. I don't trust that man. Bella will do everything and anything to make Edward angry.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 31
What a stressful meeting for Bella. She should've told Edward about that strange car. Something tells me she'll live to regret not mentioning it.
Sherry
Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
Who is in the car are they going to try to get to Bella to get to Edward. Bella is going to make her dad and husband get along lol
Date: 04 Feb 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
Excellent chapter, thank you for sharing.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm glad she's giving Antonio a chance. Maybe he and Edward can keep each other in line! then again, maybe not! LOL! I wonder just who is in that silver sedan...thanks for the chapter.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
hmm not sure I would be able to forgive a parent for doing what A did to her. Aww for them hiring Charlotte.
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2016 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
Bon chapitre.
Qui était dans cette voiture?
Date: 04 Feb 2016 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 31
she should have told him
Date: 04 Feb 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
Lol, Edward and Antonio are too funny! ! ! ! ! Who was watching the cafe? Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2016 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
Ahh need more loved it
Date: 04 Feb 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 31
Another good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2016 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
She should tell him
Date: 03 Feb 2016 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
this story is good why did u stop!!!!!!!!!! i would love to read the updates plz come bck soon
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
I wouldn't trust Antonio either.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 30
hmm Elizabeth is def suspicious with the hit thing. Antonio just wants to push B&E's buttons
Date: 26 Jan 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 30
Love it as always. More please. THANK YOU
Date: 26 Jan 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my....what next? First it's Liz...now swan? Can't wait to see what he has to say!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 30
Fantastic chapter.
Can't blame Bella for her concerns about a baby. Looking forward to them learning how to deal with everything that comes with pregnancy and babes.
I still don't trust Elizabeth, she's up to something. Antonio has some big balls, showing up like that.
Date: 25 Jan 2016 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 30
What does Antonio want? Glad Bella and Edward are talking to each other and not keeping things from one another. What is Elizabeth's deal?
Date: 25 Jan 2016 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 30
Edward will not let anyone hurt her mother or father. He is very excited to be a dad.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2016 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 30
she has to at least hear him out.
Date: 25 Jan 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
thanks for the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks for the update! Elizabeth is a piece of work! I don't trust her at all! Antonio I'm still not sure?
Date: 25 Jan 2016 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
thinking b may want to give antonio a chance. he'll probably be able to easily protect her from elizabeth if she has something planned
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 30
Cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 29
I'm on the fence in my guess as to his reaction. It could go either way. But probably shocked.
Date: 15 Jan 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 29
Ok so i was browsing the other day and found this story...... Now that im all caught up on it...omg... Hope ur not one of those random updaters..... Live the story line so far and the fact that its not the normal couples either lol.... N e ways.... Love the cliffie...please update soon
Date: 15 Jan 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 29
Bella drives me crazy. I don't know how Edward puts up with her. I can't imagine a hormonal Bella. Edward is not going to have any hair left.
Date: 15 Jan 2016 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 29
There should be and alert here to let ppl know about new chapters
Date: 14 Jan 2016 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
haha she winds daddy with a gun ;p
Date: 14 Jan 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
Like father, like daughter, eh Bella?! You go, girl!
Date: 14 Jan 2016 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 29
He should be careful about what he wishes for......
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh no his reaction is not going to make her happy....
Date: 13 Jan 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh ! Indeed ! I understand that he can be surprised. But I think it's a good Oh !
Great chapter, thank you for sharing.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 29
thanks for the chapter. i wondered where this story went. glad you're back.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 29
thank you for the updcate..Now Edward can be as happy as Carlisle...lol..I'm sure Edward is happy..don't know what he will do with his father-in -law
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2016 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
Je aime ce chapitre!
Enfin de bonnes nouvelles.
Exactement Edward voulait un fils.
Baisers.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 29
That would explain some of her mood lol. So happy for the update Thanks
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 29
So happy you're writing again! I love it
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 29
So happy to get an update! Hope she is pregnant, i love a pregnant bella :P
Date: 13 Jan 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 29
You left it there,how could you? You have not updated in years. All of your stories are great. Thank you for updating and next time DO NOT take so long. LOVE YA
Date: 13 Jan 2016 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 29
oh, indeed. wonder how protective e will get
Date: 13 Jan 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 29
Be careful waht you wish for, you just might get it.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 29
Just...Oh? I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 29
Sadly I don't think Swan is going away till he gets to say what he wants. The cafe is a nice touch
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 29
*fist pumps*
Sherry
Date: 13 Jan 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
It's about time she thought she was pregnant! I'm really hope she is
Date: 13 Jan 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2016 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 29
More please need more loved it
Date: 08 Dec 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well well well! !!!!!!!! I glad that Bella is standing up to her "daddy".
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
You go, Bella! Yup, being with E is good for her.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
What now Carlisle is all "Oh, shit!"
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
He should set his mom up for his dads death. She probably wants to put a hit on Bella.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Shit I hope they don't check the blood under his finger nails.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
It's still nice to hear
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh, wow! I hope he doesn't freak out on her.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2015 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
Bella put him in his place!
Date: 26 Nov 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
You are so welcome back, thank you for this great chapter. Happy Thanksgiving !
Date: 26 Nov 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 26 Nov 2015 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 28
Always so good! Please update again soon .
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
Damn, Bella has some fire in her when need be.
Sherry