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Reviewer: smurff88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2019 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

I have to tell you that I always love your story’s they are always different and exciting,but sadly you never seem to finish them! It’s very disappointing! Good luck!

 

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2018 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

Looking forward to the continuation of this interesting triad. Probably the only Alec story I've ever enjoyed.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2018 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oohhh ... I forgot about this subplot involving Charlie. Been way to long since I read this wonderful story! So happy to find it again m

Reviewer: silversimon Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2018 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 4

Very happy to find this story again. Even if it doesn't include all 12 chpts. previously posted on ffn. Hope you'll post it on Bella Mac's sites soon in its entirety and daresay even write more chapters! !!

Reviewer: jackieo38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2017 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

I hope you finish one day? I really enjoyed so far.

Reviewer: jackieo38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2017 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

I hope you finish one day? I really enjoyed so far.

Reviewer: Sassy_jj_101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

Woah.

Reviewer: ILoveAnime89 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Keep going.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

Kidnap and dismember your nephew.  great way to build trust....morons

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love this story.  So many exciting twists and turns! 

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it update soon 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

My thoughts?  God help Stephan and Vladimir!  Bella is a newborn - the Major's newborn!  Just think of the havoc she and Alec could reek when they want their mate back!   Excellent twist there with Charlie and Peter!!  I have to admit, I never saw it coming.  Kudos!

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

Of course Jasper had to run....sigh.  Poor B being the odd ball still.

Reviewer: kim67255 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 6

OMG I did not expect that ending.  Wow that is a shock.  Great story I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

Well that was a huge turn of events. I loved it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh wow  So bella is already part of the V family.    Interesting backstory!!!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

Come on let Charlie be in Bella's life and allow him to get to know Peter. That was an interesting twist BTW.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

oooh yummy triad time.    Esme is really delusional  Wonder when Rose will explode.    oooh so Charlie knows..... Peter is his dad???  Really???  Interesting twist.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 6

OMG what a twist

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

hmmm seems like Esme is just as delusional as Malice.   hmmm Love the God of War coming out to play.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

OMG  Eddie on his knees.   Too funny of a pic in my head.   Hmm now what is Jasper up too I wonder.  yey  Peter's coming.  Love Peter.   Your strong B is cool

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

OOOh Bella is manifesting some cool powers already.   Alice doesn't seem very happy huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

LOL  you love Marcus and Eddie.   

 



Author's Response:

At lease Eddie is in love in this one!  LOL  I've already killed him in a couple of other fics and I thought this was much more fun!  Needless to say I'm not exactly team Emoward.

~Spudz :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

oooh Like that Bella is a little more bad ass than the submissive wimp we all know and loathe.



Author's Response:

I can never seem to write a wimpy Bella.  LOL  It just doesn't work for me!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Spudz

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

Interesting occurrences!  Bella, here, is a real enigma!  She smells blood easily, stops curses...  I look forward to more.  Something tells me  she has a connection with Peter?  Thanks for the hard work!  Kudos on an original!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I decided to have some fun with this story and hopefully keep people guessing along with being entertained.

~Spudz

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

I LOVE this submissive Edward!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I thought it would be fun to have him like that. LOL

~Spudz

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have found most Alec stories disappointing.  So far this is interesting and well written AND a lemon to boot.  Looking forward to this story



Author's Response:

I'm happy you're liking it!  I have always wanted to read a good story with this pairing and like you, I was disappointed.  So, I decided to write my own.  LOL

Thank you for giving it a chance, and for the review!

~Spudz

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