Date: 15 Mar 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
I'm kind of proud of both of them, her for telling him, and him for accepting the situation so well!
Author's Response: Many readers were afraid this would turn into the almost-stadard situation of Bella not telling Edward and him fingind out about his kids years later. I didn't want that. And I didn't want him doubting Bella or treating her bad. I thought, given his own family situation, Edward would be welcoming to the idea of having a baby.
Date: 15 Mar 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Crossing my fingers that she can find his apartment again, I really hope this goes well!
Author's Response: Although Bella probably wouldn't admit it, I'm sure she had no problems finding Edward's apartment.
Date: 15 Mar 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
I'm kind of like that bartender, sad that Edward can't find the girl he's so taken with! I trust you are about to get them back together, though!
Author's Response: Many readers suggested Edward should walk around Cinderella style, having random women try on the bra, lol.
Date: 15 Mar 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Sounds to me as if this scenario is not the norm for either of them!
Author's Response: It definitely isn't ;).
Date: 12 Jan 2016 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
that's the way I like it! simple no lies no confusions no doubts...responsibleward!]loving it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I only just saw I never replied. So, here I am doing it now. No, no lies. I don't like those stories where Edward only learns years later that he has a child. I wanted something different here.
Date: 03 Jan 2016 6:23 AM Title: Outtake - How It Began
Loved it! I am looking forward to the next story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Somehow I must have missed it earlier. I'm glad you liked it, though. See you over at Tie the Knot.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 4:49 AM Title: Outtake - How It Began
Cool prequel to the story. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. Now I finally feel like we've come full circle and I can leave them to their HEA. Hope to hear from you again over at my new story Tie the Knot.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2015 11:24 PM Title: Outtake - How It Began
Thanks for the epi, loved getting a bit more insight.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I could give you the last missing piece to E and B's story. Now I can say goodbye to them with a clear conscience. Now, maybe you already checked out Tie the Knot. If not, I hope to meet you again over there.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2015 4:15 AM Title: Outtake - How It Began
Thanks for the outtake. Nice surprise. On to the new story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I could give you the last missing piece to E and B's story. Now I can say goodbye to them with a clear conscience. See you over at Tie the Knot.
Date: 22 Dec 2015 11:21 PM Title: Outtake - How It Began
Loved the outtake!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I could give you the last missing piece to E and B's story. Now I can say goodbye to them with a clear conscience. Now, maybe you already checked out Tie the Knot. If not, I hope to meet you again over there.
Date: 22 Dec 2015 4:39 PM Title: Outtake - How It Began
Thank you so much for the outtake. I have missed these two so much.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I could give you the last missing piece to E and B's story. Now I can say goodbye to them with a clear conscience.
Now, maybe you already checked out Tie the Knot. If not, I hope to meet you again over there.
Date: 22 Dec 2015 10:00 AM Title: Outtake - How It Began
WOW it was too bad that she never remembered how good that first time was loved it Thanks so much
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I could give you the last missing piece to E and B's story. Now I can say goodbye to them with a clear conscience. Now, maybe you already checked out Tie the Knot. If not, I hope to meet you again over there.
Date: 22 Dec 2015 6:04 AM Title: Outtake - How It Began
I love everything you write. You are a very talented writer, I hope you continue sharing more with us. THANK YOU and LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I could give you the last missing piece to E and B's story. Now I can say goodbye to them with a clear conscience. Now, maybe you already checked out Tie the Knot. If not, I hope to meet you again over there.
Date: 21 Dec 2015 9:44 PM Title: Outtake - How It Began
I was excited to get this from you. I have missed these two. Thanks for sharing in more detail how they got together.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I could give you the last missing piece to E and B's story. Now I can say goodbye to them with a clear conscience. Now, maybe you already checked out Tie the Knot. If not, I hope to meet you again over there.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2015 9:13 PM Title: Outtake - How It Began
:) Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I could give you the last missing piece to E and B's story. Now I can say goodbye to them with a clear conscience. Now, maybe you already checked out Tie the Knot. If not, I hope to meet you again over there.
Date: 05 Dec 2015 3:45 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and letting me know you liked my story. You have no idea how much that means to an author. Maybe, if you like, you can read my other story, Puzzle of My Heart or my OS Tie the Knot which will be turned into a full length story some time this month. Take care.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2015 8:59 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved this story so much! Now on to read your other one! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a reaview. I'm glad you liked the story and I hope to hear from you again once I start updating Tie the Knot some time this months.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2015 11:28 AM Title: Epilogue
great job
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and leaving a review. I'm glad you liked the story and maybe you'll give my next one a chance as well.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2015 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
so good
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2015 3:48 AM Title: Epilogue
This was a great story. Thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. Maybe you'll like my next story too. I sure hope so.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2015 10:18 PM Title: Prologue
Absolutely captivating I seriously stayed up until 7 am because I couldn't stop reading!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really sorry about your sleepless night, but am totally excited someone passed up on sleep to read my story. Hope to see you again over at my new story, Tie the Knot.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2015 1:14 AM Title: Epilogue
The epi was absolutely PERFECT! It really was such a joyful ending! I won't be able to forget this Edward & Bella
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the epi. It was giving me a very hard time writing it. I won't be able to forget those two either. For us writers, the stories are like our babies and we have a hard time letting them grow up and leave eventually. But I had a new little "baby". It's called Tie the Knot and posted yesterday. I'd love to hear from you again.
Date: 07 Sep 2015 12:25 AM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful end to a great story. Thank you for sharing with us all
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful words and the flowers. I have no idea how you did that. Hope to see you again over at my new story, Tie the Knot.
Date: 06 Sep 2015 11:20 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story. Love it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. I really loved writing it. Hope to see you again over at my new story, Tie the Knot.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
I'm so glad esme got a divorce too!
Author's Response: Thanks for another review. Yeah, Esme got her divorce, although it cost her a lot, but she didn't mind ;).
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
I bet it's Alice's wedding. I wasn't sure if you were planning on getting her pregnant really quick again. It made me laugh.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Nope, no second pregnancy, yet ;). But I'm sure you know that by now.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
Beyond time sounds really good! I can't believe they finally did it again! Then to put the whip on top Edward says I love you! Woo hoo! I'm so excited for the next chapter!
i have a few recs for you...
WIP: The Faceless Man by Sande this story is only on TWCS
This writer is really young but her writing is so captivating! I love anything she writes!!
Summary:
From a most dramatic encounter unfolds a story between a man, whose identity is unknown to most, and a woman, whose identity is perfectly ordinary. Their attraction is instant, but forbidden by his secret life. If he chooses her, her life can land at serious risk. As a spy, he has no time for love. But he will soon learn the true power of such a force, and how merciless its hold is.
WIP: If This, Then by Bled Dry
this story has the best & worst teenage angst!
SUMMARY:
If you have chemistry, you only need one other thing: timing. But timing is a bitch.
Date: 01 Sep 2015 11:02 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved this story. Sad to see the end of these characters.
Thank you for sharing!
Date: 30 Aug 2015 12:18 AM Title: Epilogue
Its been a great ride looking forward to seeing what you do next
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 28 Aug 2015 7:32 AM Title: Epilogue
This epi was totally worth it and it was fantastic! I like how everyones' lives turned out, especially that Esme is happy again!
I like that the revealing of Rose's "accidentally on purpose" pregnancy has not harmed Em in a bad way - I think it was right that she learned it later on, since she was absolutely correct about her probable reaction at that time...
No Bella and Edward got their HEA and I'm totally content with this :)
Thanks for this wonderful story and I'll definitely keep myself posted on any news or alerts from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 27 Aug 2015 3:14 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 27 Aug 2015 3:42 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved it! The characters were great!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 27 Aug 2015 3:38 AM Title: Epilogue
There life is an adventure they are happy that is what counts. I am so sad it is over but I am looking forward to what you do next cant wait.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 26 Aug 2015 8:21 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it from start to finish. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 26 Aug 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
It was sweet and lovely. Thank you
Date: 26 Aug 2015 6:19 PM Title: Epilogue
I loved this story!! I will miss it. I am looking forward to the next one. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me.
All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place.
Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post.
See you then.
Date: 26 Aug 2015 5:04 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it!
Thanks for sharing your talents
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2015 4:27 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved this story. It was a whole heap of positive adjectives.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin aka Alia
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me.
All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place.
Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post.
See you then.
Date: 26 Aug 2015 4:12 AM Title: Epilogue
LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 26 Aug 2015 3:58 AM Title: Epilogue
Well I'm sad it's done but it was time. I will be watching for your next story as long as it is a Bella and Edward story. I hate when they put them others. I will read it if they are going to end up together. Till next time.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. It definitely IS EXB and there will be a HEA, but some drama and maybe even a bit of angst before that. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2015 3:16 AM Title: Epilogue
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 26 Aug 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
I have loved this story from day one. I also have loved and read all your rec's except E.U. it's at chap 9. LOVE YA and yor work. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving so many reviews. It's a wonderful feeling to know you loved my story. I don't know which story you're referring to by E.U. I looked through all my recs and just couldn't find anything with those initials. Anyway, I hope you'll be back for my next story once it starts posting. Until then, take care.
Date: 26 Aug 2015 2:16 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved it 😍
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 26 Aug 2015 12:08 AM Title: Epilogue
Awe what a sweet ending. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2015 8:26 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your enthusiasm for this story. Hope to see you again soon.
Date: 25 Aug 2015 8:21 PM Title: Epilogue
I have loved reading this story. You have done an awesome job writing it. Thank you for sharing it with us. I am sad that it is ending.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 25 Aug 2015 6:48 PM Title: Epilogue
Great ending
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me.
All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place.
Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post.
See you then.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2015 6:42 PM Title: Epilogue
Sad to see it end but great ending
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.
Date: 13 Aug 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
Glad Esme is doing what is needed for her to be happy. Glad Alice uninvited her sperm donor. yey for wedding too. Em and Rose are too funny
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Esme took her life into her own two hands and is making the best of it, gossips be damned. And her children are really helping her. It wasn't easy for Alice to make the decision to uninvite her father, but it was the right choice. There will be more of the whole gang in the epi. See you then.
Date: 12 Aug 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
I am happy Alice made the right chose not to invite her spearm doner and to have the ones she loves
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It wasn't easy for Alice to make that decision but in the end, she chose her mother and brother. Will Carlisle ever change? We'll see a bit more of him in the epi. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
They've all certainly came a long way.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, all their lives changed a lot over the past year, but they're all so much more happy now. In the epi, you'll learn a bit more about what the future has in store for them. See you then.
Date: 12 Aug 2015 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
It was a sweet wedding and I'm glad that Bella got to be part of it. I can see why Alice uninvited Calisle, I wouldn't want him there either. He would have made all about him. Can't wait for the epi.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the wedding, although it wasn't Bella and Edward's. You'll learn a bit more about Carlisle and his fate in the epi. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2015 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
Fantastic story. I love how far the characters have come.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm glad you liked the chapter. It was a kind of hard to get it right.
See you with the epi.
Date: 11 Aug 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. It took me a while to get it to meet my own standards. See you with the epi.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
So two more blue lines huh? (lol) READ YOU SOON♥
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, there will be more blue lines in the future. We'll see about that in the epi. See you then.
Date: 11 Aug 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
Love the story. I was interested in your rec Traing A Swan, but I don't see it under that author.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm sorry but I didn't check if ericastwilight has that specific story up here on TWCS. Apparently she hasn't. It is on fanfiction.net, though, and you don't need to have an account there to read. See you with the epi.
Date: 10 Aug 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
Perfect! !!!!!!! Everyone gets their happily ever after.
Author's Response: Thank for your review. Yeah, everyone gets their HEA. I'm just not sure about Carlisle. There will be more on his future and the others' in the epi. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
I am soooo looking forward to a sequel about this family. There is so much happening to them all now. Their future is going to be exciting - please write it.....
Thank you for the wonderful hours you created for me to enjoy.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I'm afraid there won't be a sequel. Their story is almost told, all major drama overcome. There will be a bit more on their future in the epi but after that, we'll leave them to their HEA. I can't rule out ever writing a futuretake or something but I'm a firm believer of not writing sequels unless the story has been planned as a saga from the beginning. Otherwise sequels rarely work :(. But I'm already working on my next project which will have a, well, rather different Edward. But I love him too. He's a lot of fun to write. See you with the epi.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
:)
Author's Response: Thanks :).
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Wedding Bells
Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Took me a while to get it to meet my own standards, lol. See you with the epi.
Date: 09 Aug 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Yay finally but Noooo it's almost over lol
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, it's almost over and it's really hard to let beloved characters go, although I'm already working on my next project. But there's still the epi left. See you then.
Date: 31 Jul 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Sad that this is almost over. Loved the chapter. Do you have another story planned? I would love to read more of your work.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm sad too, but I'm glad I did my best to do my characters justice. Yes, I do have another story planned. In fact, there's a big teaser out there somewhere but for now I'm not allowed to tell you where :(. Anyway, I just finished writing the epi for TBL and the next day, I started chapter one of the next story, but it's going to take a while before it'll start posting, I'm afraid. My Facebook group members will be the first to know once there's something to tell. See you Monday with the update.
Date: 29 Jul 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Well it took me a little longer to read this but I'm happy that she has excepted that Edward does love her. Can't wait for the next chapter. I've read Wisp and it was really good.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. There's no rush in reading the updates. My story's not going anywhere. Yes, Bella caved and she's glad she did. See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
LOL. Absolutely no complaints!!!
thank you!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Really, no complaints? Wow! Thanks! See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Finally they are back together!!!...Thank you for the update...Edward got his girl back..well she never left just felt bad...I hope she stays home with her child and writes the book...until you post again
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. You'll have to wait until the epi to find out if Bella stays home, and a lot more. See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Finally! Yes I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, finally, in deed, but good things come to those who wait, right? See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2015 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Love your story can not wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it that much. See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
I'm glad that they finally made it and then in such a good way ;-) I didn't expect that Bella would return the affection and statement of love immediately, but this is even better! Now they are ready for the furuter as a family!
So in the next chapter we will have a declined proposal?! But the answer you posted almost seems a bit too impatient ;-) But let's see what else is behind this and what you have planned for the final ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. No, no declined proposal. They're not there yet. Edward'S just making a precautionary statement ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2015 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
I can't tell you how thrilled I am they finally confessed their feelings and are coming together as a family.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, they finally made it. No more drama. See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Oh Sweetie. . Your probably having trouble writing the end because maybe in your heart there is no end. READ YOU SOON ♥
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, that could be part of the reason the epi is giving me a hard time. The other one is that I don't want to leave loose ends and have problems fitting all the info into one chapter. See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're happy with Bella's reaction. See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Are any of your story recs not on twcs?
Author's Response: Wisp is here, Watch and See is only on fanfiction.net. See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
That was awesome!!! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thanks! So many readers were frustrated with Bella for so long. Maybe she could win some of you over again ;).
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Fantastic story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
See you next chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
I am so happy for them to finely be a family
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. They'll be together from here on out. No more drama. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
:)
Author's Response: Thanks ;).
Date: 27 Jul 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Love the chapter.
Jw are we going find out what happen to Carlisle?
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. The epi will give you a little glimpse in what's going on with Carlisle but he's not part of their lives anymore. See you next chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Wonderful. Glad Carmen called him. yey fir lovin's
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I know it's against protocoll but Bella and his son needed him. See you next chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
It's about time Bella pulled her head out of her butt, and actually listened to Edward and her feelings. So glad Edward got to experience the beauty of breastfeeding.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I know you were more than frustrated with Bella at times, but I hope she could redeem herself a bit.
See you next chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Bella finally admitted that she loves him.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, she did. Now there's nothing left that could stop them. See you next chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Surrender
Oh I loved this so much!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked it. It hopefully made up for all the times you were frustrated with Bella. See you next chapter.
Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends
I understand Bella's reasoning, but I hope she keep spouting the same bs for long...
Author's Response: I'm afraid Bella won't be ready to let Edward in like that for a long time. But she will ... maybe Monday ;).
Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Not really liking Jacob, though I never really have.
Author's Response: Jake won't be much of a problem. He'll be mentioned again a few times but that's it.
Date: 24 Jul 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
I loved Edward's response, especially when he offered her a drink!
Author's Response: Yeah, Edward offering Bella a drink was hilarious. I loved that part myself. But he'll get over his shock ;).
Date: 24 Jul 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
New to your story. Like that you your not going to have Bella wait on telling Edward. It's a nice change.
Author's Response: Hi and welcome. No, I didn't want Bella to hide the pregnancy from Edward. They'll go through it all together.
Date: 21 Jul 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
yay they finally had sex !! But now want to kill Bella!!! Poor Edward!! I love your story! I just hate we have so long in between updates I am anxious to know what happens next!! Love...love...love it!! I can't understand why she's afraid that they'll be in a relationship will be bad.I know you explained it before but they're all but in a relationship now. Cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. Well, damn, they finally did it. And I'm glad you liked it :D. I was afraid that, after all these months, it wouldn't measure up to your expectations. As I said, I'm sorry about the cliffie, but I promise everything will be okay. See you Monday.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
Awe. I hope Bella wakes up sees what is right in front of her.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. What other option does she have now? If not, she'll have to leave. See you Monday.
Date: 18 Jul 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
Finally!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. I was afraid it wouldn't measure up to the expectations. See you Monday.
Date: 15 Jul 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
What is wrong with Bella? What else does he have to do to prove himself to her?
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella's scared but she'll come around. She doesn't have any other option now that Edward told her he loves her. See you Monday.
Date: 15 Jul 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
Oh happy happy day
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, happy day indeed ;). Next chapter you'll learn if he made them or broke them, but don't be too scared. See you next chapter.
Date: 14 Jul 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
How can she deni how she feels it was all good and now she is freaking out I hope him telling her he loves her will work.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella won't be able to deny anything any longer. You'll see. Until next time.
Date: 14 Jul 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Accidentally on Purpose
What a fantastic chapter! FINALLY -- both with Edward and Emmett / Rose! This story is so much fun to read, and this chapter was jam packed. Edward's poor mother -- she needs a do-over (and a ton of forgiveness from her kids)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Some readers were very upset.
Date: 14 Jul 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
Oh wow, a lot happened in this chapter! The two had their first "cirisis" with Chris and Em and Rose are married?! I'm really curious what happened between them and if they have talked it out - are we going to get some more details on this possibly? ;)
Now with Bella being emotionally overloaded, i expected a kiss or something, but that they would go all te way surprised me! I think Edward did the only thing he could do now, because who knows how long Bella would shut him out had he not taken this chance. According to your teaser, they are going to talk about this and this I like very much. Maybe Bella only thinks that she is not ready to make the official relationship inofficial as well, but I'm sure that she will eventually see that she really does want this. And that she won't get hurt with Edward by her side.
So - let's see what happens next time!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. So, little Christopher is fine again. I'm sorry but there won't be any inside knowledge about Rose and Em's wedding. That would have to be an outtake and, for now, I haven't planned writing one. Well, damn, they finally did it. And I'm glad you liked it :D. I was afraid that, after all these months, it wouldn't measure up to your expectations. As I said, I'm sorry about the cliffie, but I promise everything will be okay. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2015 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
OMG finally! They both got some. Hoping that this is a good thing for them, but we all know Bella is her own worst enemy, and Edward will do whatever Bella wants. Let's hope it's Edward she wants. Love this story. Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. It definitely is a good thing. Edward will find a way to make her come around ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2015 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
They did it!!! The carnel feelings gave way after such an emotional day with the baby's health issues. Man oh man, she doesn't need to run, she needs to embrace what Edward has to offer.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Bella can't run. She's naked, lol. No, seriously, Edward will make her see she can trust him. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Accidentally on Purpose
What the hell was Emmett thinking?
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. He wasn't thinking - much, lol.
Date: 14 Jul 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
Finally! Their both gave I to their feelings for just a little bit. I hope Edward wins her over and makes her see how good they aretogether.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Edward will win her over, you'll see. CU next chapter.
Date: 14 Jul 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
Great they had sex, I hope Bella relizes that is all in, and isn't going to hurt her. If anything she is the hurting him.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. Well, damn, they finally did it. And I'm glad you liked it :D. I was afraid that, after all these months, it wouldn't measure up to your expectations. As I said, I'm sorry about the cliffie, but I promise everything will be okay. See you next chapter.
Date: 14 Jul 2015 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
There is seriously something wrong with Bella! or she really has no feelings for Edward and sex is just an end to a means and nothing more. READ YOU SOON ♥
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Sex is not a means to an end for Bella. It's a lot more and that's why she reacted so extreme. She'll come around and soon. See you next chapter.
Date: 14 Jul 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Fever
Finally, but of course Bella has to ruin the moment. I still don't understand how she made it through an entire pregnancy without sex! She better get with the program and follow Roses lead.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella panicked. She'll have to come around, though. See you next chapter.