Date: 13 Apr 2021 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 24: Gotta Have Faith…
i adore this story. i think it may be my all time favorite fanfiction. i hope you finish it soon! great writing by the way. i love all your stories but this one is my favorite
Date: 09 Dec 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 24: Gotta Have Faith…
Are you writing more
I've become to attached for this to end:(
Date: 06 Aug 2020 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 23: My Lady
Love this story so far
Date: 03 Jun 2020 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 4: Falling
Tom Hiddleston, yum! What the hell was he thinking dating you-know-who? Taylor Quick was it? heh..moving along, I can't wait for Bella to meet Loki!
Date: 03 Jun 2020 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 3: Meetings
I miss Firefly soooo much! it was almost too good...I'm liking this story almost as much. Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 20 Oct 2019 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 23: My Lady
Awesome chapter. Glad Bella got to say her peace.
Date: 31 Aug 2019 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 22: Five-Ever
Nice seeing some of Clint's memories.
Date: 18 Aug 2019 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 21: Kneel
Ah Marcus awakens. Love B getting to have her say
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2019 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 2: With A Heavy Heart
How have I never seen this story before??? It’s great, and the only thing I don’t like is knowing I’ll have to wait for an update soon haha! Love this!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2019 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 20: Unsuspected Harmony
I love this story!
Date: 23 Jun 2019 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 20: Unsuspected Harmony
Aro is def creeptastic. Hope B will be ok
Date: 21 Jun 2019 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 20: Unsuspected Harmony
Thanks.
Date: 20 Jun 2019 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 20: Unsuspected Harmony
Great chapter, I love that you had him realize His acceptence of his Mother. Thanks for continuing this story, I really like it.
Date: 08 Jun 2019 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 19: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Whoa Boy this is gonna be interesting. Aro, Loki and Edward yeah this is going to be real interesting.
Date: 15 Feb 2018 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 19: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
aw damn so want to see this updated loki need's his lemon and cant wait to see what she does to the culluns and aro oxoxox
love brandi
Date: 27 Jul 2017 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 19: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
when is this going to be upated
Date: 29 Jul 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 19: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Loved the chapter! I wonder if things will go further with Isabella and Loki? Updat soon!
Date: 25 Jul 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 19: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
So excited for the update!
Date: 23 Jul 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 19: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Wow she it's def a challenge to Loki isn't she. Hmm wonder how they will thwart the V.
Date: 03 Mar 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 18: He Who Fights and Runs Away
I love this story. For being such different plot lines of books you have brought all of it together incredibly well. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02 Mar 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 18: He Who Fights and Runs Away
Yea Fury is a bit of a wanker. I love Tony's quips. Clarice is so classic
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 18: He Who Fights and Runs Away
annnnddddd....WELCOME BACK!!! loved it and i want the chapter for this story AND Gamma Love :D
Date: 07 Feb 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 17: Promises to Keep
Cannot wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 14 Dec 2015 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 17: Promises to Keep
so hope you update soon 😊
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 17: Promises to Keep
Oooh Loki is such a naughty boy. At least Bella survived Clint.
Date: 15 Sep 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 17: Promises to Keep
Loving this pairing! i love how you have written this story and the detail, cant help but re read! please keep unpdating! :D
Date: 09 Sep 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 17: Promises to Keep
Really enjoying this story!! Keep chapters coming please.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 16: Game Changer
Yay an update! Loved it! Keep it up!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 16: Game Changer
Pretty please with a cherry on top update really soon I really want to know what happens next so if you could make some time could you please finish the story I really really have to know what happens next, I can't wait for more chapters!!!:)
Date: 18 Jun 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 16: Game Changer
oh man lol cant wait for more
Date: 17 Jun 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 16: Game Changer
Love that Steve, Dr B and Tony are protective of her. Not liking Natasha much. hmm Guessing Loki is making her "sell her soul to the devil" for Clint?
Date: 09 Jun 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 15: Blizzard
Please more!!
Date: 22 Apr 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15: Blizzard
Fury is such a wanker. hmmm now what does Loki know.
Date: 09 Apr 2015 10:19 PM Title: Prologue: A Desperate Call
i am so glad that you updated. I love this Bella/Loki pairing. Keep up the excellent work!
Date: 09 Apr 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 15: Blizzard
im so excited for another chapter and i love loki being more loving towards her so sweet :)
Date: 11 Mar 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 14: Hammer Time
aaaww i love this side of Loki so much i cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 11 Mar 2015 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 14: Hammer Time
hoping for an update this is good love it from brandi neri
Date: 03 Mar 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 14: Hammer Time
Hope B can get her brother back soon
Date: 30 Jan 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Days of Thunder
I so love Tony.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Days of Thunder
:)
Date: 30 Jan 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 12: Eye of the Storm
Sounds like Demetri needs to die along with Victoria. Wonder if she got away again abeit withour arms?
Date: 30 Jan 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 12: Eye of the Storm
i loved this chapter! i adore them esp Loki
Date: 29 Jan 2015 7:46 AM Title: Prologue: A Desperate Call
Good book please post more
Date: 27 Jan 2015 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Days of Thunder
Ahh as always, love your work and please update soon! I am anxiously waiting for your next chapter
Date: 26 Jan 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Days of Thunder
Can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 12: Eye of the Storm
I thought Loki would end up saving Bella at some point. I really like this story and the only thing I don't like is that I must wait for updates lol. Can't wait!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2015 3:07 AM Title: Prologue: A Desperate Call
I have seen this story before, but haven't read it until now. I've read your work before and when I finally noticed you authored this one, I jumped on it. I'm glad I did, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 19 Jan 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 12: Eye of the Storm
Great chapter! You are an amazing writer, the way you word and describe everything is just awesome!!! I loved the moment when Loki realized what was happening and he cried out for Bella. I can't wait for the next chapter. I check every day to see if you update the story and will continue to do so.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 12: Eye of the Storm
I am absolutely addicted to your story!!! I have not stopped reading since the very first chapter, I am that hooked. Please update ASAP!! This cliffhanger is great and I cant wait to read more
Date: 18 Jan 2015 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 12: Eye of the Storm
Loved it, can't wait to read more:-)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2015 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 12: Eye of the Storm
damn...that was awesome!!!!! thank you for the update :D
Date: 18 Dec 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Suit Up
Loved It can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 15 Dec 2014 6:18 AM Title: Prologue: A Desperate Call
Nice
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 4: Falling
This is really good! I like the serious mixed with the wit and humor! Can't wait to read more of this one!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Suit Up
I both love and hate it when you update. Love it because I cannot wait to read what happens next, hate it when I reach the end. I'm really enjoying this story and am eager to read what happens next! It's very well written and I can tell you put a lot of time into it.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Suit Up
Cool new POV change. Poor Bella. Hope Loki is hurting just as much.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Call to Arms
i as always loved it and cannot wait for the next chapter, i love how i can picture the movie running thrugh myhead of bella. awesome
Date: 28 Nov 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 9: Alight
the meeting was awesome and you did great with it :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 8: Who's There?
IM SO EXCITED YOUR STILL WORKING ON THIS!!!! you know how very few flipping awesome avengers fanfics are out there?! this is amazing PLEASE keep up the awesome work :)
Date: 01 Nov 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Call to Arms
love tony, Ugh for Clint being in that wankers hands
Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 9: Alight
I can't wait for the next update! Finally! some action!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 9: Alight
The chapter was FANTASTIC thank you. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 9: Alight
oooh love that B is untouched by crazy boy's spear. Poor Hawkeye
Date: 11 Sep 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 9: Alight
Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 06 Sep 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 8: Who's There?
ROFL Love Snarky bella esp with fury
Date: 04 Sep 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 8: Who's There?
I am really enjoying this story and can't wait until your next update. To see how Loki and Bella interact and how the plot alters from what happened in The Avengers.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 7: Knock, Knock…
Please tell me your going to continue with this story....... I love it :)
Date: 10 Aug 2014 8:45 AM Title: Prologue: A Desperate Call
can't wait for the update ... hope you update soon as your story is TERRIFIC
Date: 20 Jul 2014 12:47 AM Title: Prologue: A Desperate Call
Yes someone has finaly posted a Twilight/Advengers fanfic.....woohoo.....I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next....
Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 3: Meetings
This is sooooo good I love it!
Date: 12 Jul 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 7: Knock, Knock…
Update ASAP! God, i am so hooked on this!
Date: 12 Jul 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: Meetings
I have to tell you that I'm not really into crossover fics, but you have me by my figuratively speaking, balls. I CANNOT stop reading this, and I really, really, have a lot of things I need to be doing right now. Good God Almighty, this is one seriously tasty fic. *rubs hands together, smacking lips*
Date: 11 Jul 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 7: Knock, Knock…
oooh love seeing them all rally around B. Love to see Tony go up against Icky Vicky.
Date: 26 Jun 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 3: Meetings
I am so excited I almost peed! I just LOVE this! Im so lucky to have found you! How often do you post? Do you have other works in other sites? I love marvel and this is amazing truly. Please keep up this amazing talent going
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review and I'm glad you're liking the story so far. I'm a comic book girl so while this is my first one, I do have a couple others in the works. I try to post every other week at the latest and a new chapter will be up this weekend. I do tend to post on my wordpress first (http://bertiebottwrites.wordpress.com/) and there's a fan video for this story too. Thanks again :)
Date: 24 Jun 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Dream Collision
Love girls night. ROFL for the guys at the end
Date: 24 Jun 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 5: Connections
Love Tony’s interaction with her. Cant wait for next chapter.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4: Falling
So freakin loving this story. hmmm now who was messing with Loki there.
Glad B has clint and all around her. ROFL for Tony and his craziness. We all need a little Tony around.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 3: Meetings
Wonderful as always. I love Tony too. Glad they are being cool with Clint and her being there.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 2: With A Heavy Heart
loving how you are developing this. great job
Date: 24 Jun 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Taking Flight
WOW Loving this so far. Wonder if Director Fury knows about the Volturi? Can’t wait for more.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 3:18 AM Title: Prologue: A Desperate Call
Interesting start. Will give it a shot since I love your other stuff. Poor Charlie.