Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hi, beautiful story, but I don't get a thing. Bella now is 22( from the auction house), she and Edward have not seeing each other for 10 years, so the thing I didnt undesten is......she was 12 when she lost her virgenity with Edward?
Hope to anser me.
Date: 21 May 2015 5:46 AM Title: Not an Update
SWEETIE... I was checking to see if I had missed any updates and I read your message OMG...I am so sorry that a hateful person came into your life and hurt you . I've kept you in my thoughts and in my prayers knowing your health has been problematic recently and to read this!!! It infuriates me that some deceitful person can betray your trust. You know what SWEETIE. .. FUCK THEM!!!!!!!!! If you need time to regroup your thoughts I promise to be patient and hopeful that in due time you will complete your story. Please! take care of your heart and your health everything else can simply WAIT. READ YOU SOON ♥ :)
Date: 10 May 2015 5:25 PM Title: Not an Update
Oh. Please update when you can.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 1:10 PM Title: Not an Update
You do what is best for you and don't worry about the haters. Hope all goes well for you and I know I will be waiting if you choose to finish this story.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 12:37 PM Title: Not an Update
What! This is my favorite story. I'll leave it at that so I don't add to your troubles. I don't know what you're talking about being a liar but most readers just want a good story which your was. Now I'm sad.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 11:15 AM Title: Not an Update
all the best. I am sorry for your trouble and thank you for writing and sharing with us. I hope you return and i hope you finish if for no other reason if only to prove that hate doesn't win.
god bless you too sweetie.
Aileen/Lillian Broderick
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
OH SWEETIE ... I HAVE MISSED YOU AND KEPT YOU IN MY PRAYERS. ...... FIRST LET ME SAY I HOPE YOUR DOING WELL I KNOW HOW MUCH SEIZURES CAN DISRUPT RL I HAVE A DAUGHTER WITH SEIZURE DISORDER AND ITS HARD ON THE ENTIRE FAMILY. NOW... LET ME SAY I RE-READ FROM THE BEGINNING AND AS ALWAYS IT BRINGS ME JOY. I NOTICED IN THIS VERSION EDWARD IS MUCH HARSHER WITH BELLA I HOPE SHE EVENTUALLY PUTS HIM IN HIS PLACE. ( lol ) AS ALWAYS I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE. READ YOU SOON. : ) : )
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry to hear that about your daughter. Any seizure disorder is extremely trying on the entire family, but when you have outside forces trying to create more problems, it only intensifies them. That is why I have stopped going to facebook. After what I went through on there...*shakes head* I knew people could be cruel, but I never knew it could be like that.
I cannot thank you enough for your kind words. End of Innocence is very sentimental to me seeing as it is the first real story I started writing thoroughly. I wanted to take my time this go around and really put my all into it so everyone can see what I see. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Much love to you!! <3 <3 <3
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well, no Carlisle interrupting the wedding service. So, the reception could have him appear? Bella has been reticent about the marriage. Edward to me was very unsure himself. He went from abusing Bella to making wild advances and promises. One thing is sure, with the Omerta and The Church approval, these kids are married.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
What a great afternoon I have had with 2 chapters. I know Edward's challenge was to show he could discipline the troops without flinching, but Bella's showed ability to function outside of HQ. The joint challenge was again demonstrative of Bella's courage. Carlisle is just sure to appear and disrupt the wedding. Until then, Bella would be wise to cooperate.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
I can't tell you enough how much I love the changes you have made to this story! I love Esme's back story in this & Rosalie not being such a witch! I am wondering if Alice & jasper have something to do with her kidnapping. She forgot to tell Edward about the tattoo. I'm also SUPER EXCITED that we will get another update at he end of the week! Hip hip hooray!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Don't worry the issue of the tattoo will come back up! I can't tell you how many stories I have read where Rosalie is the villain and Alice is always the "good" character. UGH! It's so overworked. I wanted to switch it up. I don't want to give it away whether my Alice is good or bad. So...
Thank you for reading and stay tuned in for this weekend. It's one HOT chapter!!
Date: 11 Mar 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Really great
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 Mar 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
Don't blame B. Seems like no one in her corner anymore. Sorry E. You haven't really shown her she can trust you.
Hope that she can back up her thoughts of being strong and independent. God help him if he touches her out of anger though.
Wow she doesn't even know her bridesmaids??? Yea the Obey thing would irk me too.
Jeez Edward you horny bastard.... She's still bruised and battered ya know. Goof.
Author's Response:
Isabella will show she's stronger than he ever thought to give her credit for. With Esme backing her, Edward will not stand a chance. Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Who kidnapped her? I would think they would have security camera's throught out that house! Seem odd that it is alway Bella getting the crap beat out of them...
Looking forward to more :D
Author's Response:
Time will tell...with momma Esme putting her foot down, they're not about to piss her off. Please remember, Isabella is not only Charlie's heir who other Mafioso families THINK she is to replace, but she's also marrying a Godfather. She's going to be a huge target. Thank you for reading. Next chapter to be posted this weekend!!
Date: 01 Feb 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward really need to bee taken down a few notches. He def is a chauvanistic arse. Can't wait to see he and Aro's talk though
Date: 22 Jan 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yes she would have kicked his butt! I'm excited about the wedding & of course honeymoon!
Author's Response:
LOL...You are so very right!!! I think the reason he stopped it bc he KNEW she would..LOL...
I'm hoping everyone enjoys the wedding and honeymoon!! It's time for a little aww between these two. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2015 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2014 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad they are finally getting the challenges done. I am ready for them to get married and stop second guessing each other. They are both acting like they are bipolar. Do they really love each other? It is hard to tell.
Date: 29 Nov 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
I do enjoy a good mafia story.
however, I am very much bothered and annoyed by edward's
behavior and words to Bella. And Bella, she seems to just forgive all
the things he has said to her esp about his past conquests
and Tanya. Wish Bella would play hard to get and not give in
so easily no matter how much she loves him...
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
Damn Bella means business, lol. I'm cheering her on, wishing that was Jasper she interrogated, lol. As usual I floved it and you left me wanting more. Thought I'm kinda nervous about Bella's next challenge.
Sherry
Date: 25 Nov 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
LOVED THE FIRST ONE AND THIS ONE! I HOPE YOUR FEELING BETTER, LOVE YA ALSO YOUR RECS ARE SOME OF THE BEST AUTHORS ON HERE!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Nov 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
There is always that annoying cliffie! It keeps us hanging on. I can't figure out jasper for the life of me. Thanks for the update!
Date: 24 Nov 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
He def needs some reigning in before B cuts his nuts off. Wonder how long till be find out what Jasper's issue is.
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2014 9:02 PM Title: End of Innocence Chapter 7
You have some fantastic recs pappy.
Tanya's involvement has me baffled, can't wait to see what she's really up to.
Edward and Bella have a steep hill to climb. Carlisle needs to bite a bullet. I wonder what exactly Jasper is doing by setting up a meeting for Edward like he did, any questionable reason why he did it?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2014 3:58 AM Title: End of Innocence Chapter 7
OMG,love your story glad you are feeling better and your back to posting,can't wait for more.As far as Tanya I am sure she will want Edward (LOL)WHo wouldn't .
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:25 AM Title: End of Innocence Chapter 7
Oh snap well I am not sure that meeting went the way he hoped it would and will Carlisle force Bella to take him out
Date: 03 Nov 2014 3:48 PM Title: End of Innocence Chapter 7
I think that they need to watch Tanya. Why is she working for Edward when she is married to the boss of another family? I dont' trust her or Jasper for setting up this meeting. I also question Aro for wanting Tanya in this position.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 8:44 PM Title: End of Innocence Chapter 7
wow so much going on. At least E is trying. Sounds like Tanya has been playing both sides.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 10:47 PM Title: End of Innocence Chapter 7
So Tanya is using her status with her husband to infiltrate the mason's or vice versa. Jasper has some hidden info here. I wonder why he didn't tell Edward in advance? I have to say you write Edward beautifully! In one paragraph I just want to punch him in the nuts & then the very next paragraph I can honestly say all is forgiven! His charm is remarkable!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2014 9:08 PM Title: End of Innocence Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Can't say I'm happy about Tanya's appearance or her designated position with Edward by Aro. What the hell was Aro thinking? For someone that was openly glaring at Tanya, he certainly was a bit too cheery with her boarding the plane.
I like how Edward knows he can trust Bella, but he really needs to treat as an equal, and open up to her about everything.
I'm thinking it was Peter that walked into their room. He gives me the creeps.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
It's good Edward and Bella are talking things out and piecing together what happened to their lives while apart. Some of the revealations couldn't be easy to hear. Especially the things Carlisle said and did. Again, I can't wait until Edward kills his sorry ass.
Sherry
Date: 25 Oct 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
I LOVED THIS STORY THE FIRST TIME YOU WROTE IT,I THOUGHT IT WAS PERFECT. THIS TIME EDWARD IS TOUGHER AND BELLA WEAKER. I LIKE THE STRONGER BELLA MYSELF,BUT I LOVE YOUR WRITING NO MATTER HOW YOU WRITE THEM. IHAVENT A CLUE WHO WALKED IN OR WHEN YOU WILL UPDATE. I ONLY KNOW YOU ARE VERY TALENTED WRITER, THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US. LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Trust when I say Bella gets tired of playing the "weak" woman. She gets her feel full and blows. Thank you so much for reading, I am so glad you're enjoying this. I love writing it. Love you too! <3 and HUGS!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
I loved it wow well with Edward opening up helps me to understand why he is doing but will they make it past the test and who came in
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!! The test will be a HUGE challenge. !
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
loving this
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: 21 Oct 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yes the godfather is coming around! With all the ways he is secretive with her it explains some why he is the way he is. Constantly on guard with his own people & not sure who to trust but Isabella.
Why in the heck is he all giggly with Tanya on the plane? I hope it is just the stupidness he got from Carlisle or hopefully Edward is setting her up. I'm wondering if it is Peter, Jasper or Aro that walked into the bedroom? It could be Tanya? This is a big cliffie!
Author's Response:
Edward has to STAY on guard.
Thank you for reading. See you soon! :)
Date: 21 Oct 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Has he redeemed himself??? Not by a long shot. Like Em said, he has no filter and doesn't care to think about how his words hurt. B does need a backbone, if only to tell him off.
Author's Response:
Edward will find out soon enough that there are just so many buttons of Bella's he can push. He's about to push the very last one. ;)
Date: 21 Oct 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
i cant decide peter i think
edward is hot and cold all the time
why does tanya always have to get her skanky face involved
great chapter looking forward to more
Author's Response:
This Tanya will hold a few surprises. Keep in mind, Edward is use to the control. He will be hot and cold. He doesn't know any other way. He's not willing to give up the control and possessive ways he has over Bella.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am glad that they are talking. The air needs to be cleaned, if they are going to survive.
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Long night. Glad they are talking
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:02 PM Title: Prologue
It is one step forward and two steps back for these two isn't it
geat update, thx
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
I AM ENJOYING THE CHANGES YOU HAVE MADE.ITS LIKE READING A COMPLETLY NEW STORY,ALTHOUGH I LOVED THE ORIGINAL ALSO. I DONT LIKE WHAT A PIG EDWARD APARENTLY IS IN THIS VERSION THOUGH! PLZ,PLZ UPDATE SOON, LOVE YA
Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow Carlisle has lot to answer for. Poor Esme stuck with that arse
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love your story, glad your let Bella have green eyes,love it can not wait for more.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
Finally they talked! I hope Edward gruesomely makes Carlisle pay for everything he has done to Esme & Bella. Maybe Bella will get to give him some punishment too. Something so terrible that will make Edward realize she really is a tough cookie & can hold her own. Maybe they catch Carlisle and Bella attaches jumper cables to his testies starts to fry up some of his sperm. ;)
Date: 04 Sep 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
So whats Edward going to do now that he knows that Carlisle is the reason Bella got shot?
Author's Response: “Have any of you seen or heard from Carlisle?” It was a stupid question, especially if he had become aware of what had happened. How had he not? New York City may have over eight million people, but Carlisle was not a jamook (idiot). I looked over at Emmett, who held a silent conversation with me for a few moments. “You have to call this, bro,” Emmett thought loud and clearly. “I never thought it would come to this,” I sighed, running my hands through my unruly hair. “No, but you did take an oath, famiglia before anything,” Emmett reminded, before shoveling half of a sandwich into his mouth and slurping on a coke. Hmmm, looks like our Godfather is in a hell of a spot. Wouldn't you say so?
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is certainly giving Bella an unpleasant welcome to the sit down. She will need more than Garrett to come to her assistance. I think Edward lost the fight with the shower stall. But Bella got points for caring for Edward. So much going on and it all is bad for Edward and Bella!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
A physical explosion destroyed the house, but the explosion between Carlisle and Edward may have established real family leader.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think it is time for honesty. They both love each other, but they are both not acting that way. They have been used as pawns, but they need to figure out their own moves. Edward can't be sweet to her one minute and call her a whore the next. He seems crazy when he does. Bella needs to know why he is acting this way. Bella needs to stop being angry at Edward. He did not control his past any more than she did. She needs to think about why he acts tough around these other bosses. She has to realize that they are not just going to accept her. She needs to prove herself by being smart, which means sometimes she needs to be quiet and listen. When they are alone they can talk and try to figure things out. They have to learn how to communicate with each other honestly.
Author's Response:
I appreciate your honesty and your um...bluntness. I've always said I can take criticism and I can. I use it to guide me and make me a better write, but you do realize that this is ONLY 4 chapters in, right?
Date: 25 Aug 2014 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
WOW THAT WAS DIFFERENT CHAPTER,LOVED IT!!! I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER, NOTHING TO SERIOS I HOPE. UPDATR WHEN YOU FEEL GOOD , LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the well wishes and for reading. Love you too!! :)
Date: 25 Aug 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT!!!!! ILOVED IT THE FIRST TIME TOO, LOVE MOBWARD.
Date: 21 Aug 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
HERE I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE DEALING WITH HEALTH ISSUES AND UNFORTUNATELY A RECENT DEATH IN THE FAMILY. REAL LIFE SUCKS!!! BUT WE'LL GET THROUGH IT. I LIKE THE LONG CHAPTER IT WAS ENLIGHTENING TO SAY THE LEAST. UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN. AS ALWAYS I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry Bobbysgirl! My thoughts and prayers are with you always! RL does suck, that's why I'm glad I do have this one outlet, ya know? Pushing through is the only option I guess. LOL Thank you for reading doll...
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really wanna junk punch Edward right about now. He certainly has alot to learn about women, especially Bella. I can't wait for Carlisle to meet his demise.
Sherry
Author's Response:
You had me LOL'ing so loud, Sherry...Junk punching one man while killing another...LMAO... I REALLY love you.... :)
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
That boy has a lot to learn. Hope B makes all the children that were in that room along with Carlisle pay and pay dearly
Author's Response:
Oh, B gets her time AND proves what damage she can do.. :)
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well hopefully they are going to really talk. As much as you continusly have me on the edge of my seat I love where you have taken this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!! I'm glad to hear to you're enjoying it..
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
I like the rewrite. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
I was afraid the rewrite would scare people away. It's taken more research and time, but this time around I'm really happy with it. Thank you for reading and sticking with it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
can't wait for the next ch well done
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow I was hoping she was going to kick his ass but now that her past is out will he back off and will she prove herself update soon
Author's Response:
It's not over yet! Thanks for reading!
Date: 20 Aug 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow
i really wanted to smack the shit out of edward everytime he called her a whore
maybe he will redeam himself in the next chapter
Author's Response:
Maybeeee...*evil grin* Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Um holy shit can't wait for more
Author's Response:
:) Thank you!! :)
Date: 24 Jul 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
I understand now why Edward was being so rough with Izzy, but she should have been in on the plan.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
I loved the flashback, but I didn't like how Edward was so cruel to Izzy. I could see him being a tough guy to everyone, but her.
Date: 16 Jul 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
WELL DONE! I LIKE THE DIRECTION YOUR TAKING THE STORY SO FAR. I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE HOPFULLY IT WILL CUM MUCH QUICKER SINCE IT IS A RE-WRITE. ( ONE CAN ONYL HOPE... RIGHT???) LOL READ YOU SOON.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can hardly wait for you to get back to where your posting was on FF.
Carlisle is an ass. Edward needs to show him who the Boss is.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm confused. I thought Bella was a virgin being auctioned off as a sex slave, but here she and Edward did the deed.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
If I remember correctly wasn't there some heavy making out in the limo between Edward and Bella? Nonetheless, I enjoy reading a badass Bella and a possessive and demanding Edward.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hello I am liking this one I want to know what is Carlisle really up to and what did Charlie find out before he died and what will Edward tell Bella and who is really on their side update soon
Author's Response:
Mercy, you're full of questions. All of which I can't answer....of course. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Hope you stick with us as we continue on this bumpy road.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Carlise is a Cullen & is Edwards dad, but Edward is a Masen. I kind of dont understand? Did i overlook something?
Author's Response:
All will bw explained VERY VERY soon.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
I dont understand why Edward would talk to her that way after he looked for her for years? He was nice earlier?!
Author's Response:
He feels an obligation to Charlie...Please just let the story get going and you will understand a bit more.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 8:00 AM Title: Prologue
Found this rec on FB. Great start! :)
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it!!!!! Honestly, when you said you would be rewriting this I didn't think you could make it any better. You have knocked it out of the park & we are only on chapter 4. I can't wait for you to update! Every chapter gets better & better!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I really flattered. I have so much planned for this story! Hold on to your socks doll! :)
Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
I LOVE IT! I LOVED IT THE FIRST TIME I READ IT,BUT IM EJOYING THE SMALL CHANNGES! THANKS FOR REPOSTING AND UPDATE SOON PLZZZ!! THIS WAS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES EVER. YOOR A WONDERFUL WRITER, AGAIN THANK YOU!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for this awesome review! So much is about to happen, I really hope your prepared!! ;)
Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward was so vicious! I am wondering if what he said to her is what Carlisle drilled into his head. I really liked the original story but I LOVE this one even more already! The warehouse scene between the two of them was so sweet & perfect! The fight with Makenna was awesome!
Author's Response:
BINGO!!!!!
Date: 05 Jul 2014 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
OOOh Carlisle really doesnt know when to shut up huh? We know Jake is in on it....wonder who else is...aside from Caius and crew.
Author's Response:
Hmmm, time will certainly tell. Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ido like where this is heading. I'm interested to see how Edward has changed. Great update.
Author's Response:
Patients my sweets!! Hopefully you'll like where it goes!! :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ahhh can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thr next chapter has been sent to my beta. You'll LOVE it, it's well over 10,000 words. I'm a wordy bitch aren't I...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing... :)
Date: 04 Jul 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmm wonder what Carlisle is going to say about b being back. E is being a wanker .
Author's Response:
One of two things is going to happen; 1) He's going to wait for Edward to be out of the picture OR 2) he'll make her life hell. Which one do you think is going to happen. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Jul 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
NOW I UNDERSTAND WHY YOU REMOVED THE SEX ACT IN THE LIMO FROM THE FIRST CHAPTER. IT'S BECAUSE THIS TIME SHE'S NO LONGER A VIRGIN AND YET SHE WAS SOLD AS " IN TACT " MEANING " A VIRGIN " I'M A LITTLE CONFUSED HERE. HMM!! CALL ME CRAZY BUT I'M MISSING THE ORIGINAL VERSION. I'M STILL LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
If your confused about her being sold as a virgin, I REALLY wish I could explain that part, but sadly it's part of the story. I've had a lot of people tell me they miss they original version, but they think I've outdone myself with the rewrite. IDK, I'm satisfied with the rewrite I guess.
Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more Edward needs a wake up call lol
Author's Response:
Thank you! Edward will get what's coming to him soon enough. ;)
Date: 30 Jun 2014 1:19 PM Title: Prologue
Oh,I really like the beginning. Answers some lingering questions. Is she still going to be bad ass Bella? I can't wait for more. Great first chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much...Bella will seem more in charge, but will have to fight to be there. Make sense?
Date: 27 Jun 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice this chapter is already less violating to Bella!
Author's Response:
The reason behind my omitting that part was to show that not ALL mafioso's were demons, but back in the ealier years they were dominating, controlling, and possessive. That's where this stems from and that's where it starts. Hopefully that is coming across to my readers the way that I have meant for it to.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can not wait to read it again, Thank You
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for reading and reviewing!
Date: 26 Jun 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
So glad you brought this back.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: 26 Jun 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'M A LITTLE DISAPPOINTED YOU REMOVED THE ORIGINAL VERSION I REALLY LIKED RE-READING IT. AS FOR THIS VERSION I SEE YOU REMOVED THE INTIMATE ACT THAT OCCURED IN THE LIMO... CALL ME CRAZY BUT I KINDA MISSED IT (LOL) SINCE YOUR RE-WRITING THIS STORY MY HOPES ARE THAT YOU WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE THE LONG CHAPTERS I PREVIOUSLY ENJOED IMMENSLY AND I HOPE UPDATES WILL BE MORE FREQUENT SINCE IT IS SOMEWHAT PRE-WRITTEN. INOW AS FOR THIS VERSION I LIKE THE SUBLE CHANGES I HOPE YOU KEEP THAT SAME FEEL AND NOT BE SOFT ALL THE TIME CAUSE I ACTUALLY LIKED THE ROUGHNESS THE ORIGINAL HAD. DON'T DOUBT YOUR MAGIC YOU ARE AMAZING AT WHAT YOU DO.SOOOOOO!!!!!! WELCUM BACK! GOOD LUCK! AND I LOOK FORWARD TO READING YOUR MAGIC THIS TIME AROUND. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. NO! SOONER!!! ( HE HE HE ) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your lovely and engouraging words. As you probably know the main reason why I did pull it was the hate I was getting from the original version. I do plan on keeping the rough, possessive and controlling Edward,but Isabella will also have tendencies of being the same. I do hope you enjoy the new version of End of Innocence as much as I have enjoyed re-writiing it.
Date: 26 Jun 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hope Caius et al all get whats coming to them. Sold a sex slaves to amazon's maybe? hee hee.
Author's Response:
LOL...I was thinking the Gargareans. If you don't know who they are, they're an all male tribe who live close to the Amazon's on the foot-hill's of Caucasus mountains. It's believed that they kidnapped, raped, and murdered the Amazon's if they didn't have relations willingly. Sounds brutal enough. ;)
Date: 26 Jun 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really excited about the way you are starting this one out!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking foward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 1:05 PM Title: Prologue
Good to see the story back
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's sooo good to be back!
Date: 26 Jun 2014 12:52 PM Title: Prologue
Are you rewriting this
Author's Response:
Yes ma'am I am!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
My only question is will this Edward be different?
Author's Response:
As in? If you mean by, will he still be the assh*** that he was before?
He will still be controlling, possessive, and show his ass at times, but make no mistake Isabella will be sure to put him in his place as well!
Thank you for reading and sticking with me doll!! :)