Date: 21 Feb 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter! Yes, I agree with Edward that Charanal can't be held responsible for what Norex manipulated him into doing. I love that he is the one whose newly restored brain figured out a way to track the Remans. Your impressive use of Star Trek-isms here is just wonderful!
Date: 18 Feb 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella should never feel bad about her uncle's death
Date: 18 Feb 2015 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Good thing Nirabella has been chipped!
I think everyone should have access to a Holodeck!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG I HATE you for leaving it there
Date: 17 Feb 2015 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh snap what will happen to them will they make it out in one piece and what will happen to everyone will they find out who is behind it all
Date: 16 Feb 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
another gripping chapter! Rose's intuition proved to be true! Jakob, that p'tak, has Bella! thanks for the reassurance that she won't be harmed. I wouldn't mind if you killed him off! Can't wait to see how Charanel is when he wakes up! Very exciting!
Date: 16 Feb 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
At least she has that tracking device on her. But it's that same lesson, always listen to your gut instinct. Now where is the red shirt?
Date: 16 Feb 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter, even with the cliffie!
Date: 16 Feb 2015 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
Is it because she's already pregnant????? However, if Prince Jakob is truly evil that wouldn't matter, would it?
Agh!!! Update soon please!!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Who is it??? I have no idea.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope Caius exposes his connection in the plot to overthrow the ruling family by acting irrational after the beheading of Norex.
What is in store for the parties heading off to the unknown coordinates?
Date: 11 Feb 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love this!!! More, more, more!!! ;)
Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow why didn't he give them the name is it really Caius or someone else how will the put a stop to them
Date: 11 Feb 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
I think Edward is right. Caius seems like the likely suspect....the beheading was brutal!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oooh! Pictures of the execution? With spurting blood? Just like Game of Thrones? Kidding! This is a great story. Keep up the great work!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
Soudns like they need to put a tail on Caius.
Date: 07 Feb 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you thank you thank you is that enough you are such a brilliant writer are you going to see 50 shades next week? I am watching every you tube available and I have my grey tie heeheeyou are so wonderful for still posting and I voted for you on twifictionator, keep up the amazing work.
Date: 05 Feb 2015 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think Aro and his brothers are behind the acts of treason.
Date: 05 Feb 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
I loved it will this be the key to unlocking it all and puting a stop to them update soon I need more
Date: 04 Feb 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wowsers Norex is only a puppet. Wonder who is pulling the strings. Some one in the Federation perhaps?
Date: 04 Feb 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
This is my favorite story of all the ones I am reading(37) at this time. I have missed it so much and am happy to get this chapter at long lase. Thank you - Xanath
Date: 04 Feb 2015 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad he decided to help even though he thinks it's useless it's not. He knows he's going to die either way. Why choose to help Bella? That was the nicest thing he's done so far. I have no idea who it is!!! I can't wait for more.....but I don't worry, I'll wait patiently.
Thanks for the update!!!
Date: 04 Feb 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
God, I've missed this! Can't wait for more!!! ;)
Date: 04 Feb 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
It's so nice to get a new chapter of this particular story! I love the Star Trek/Twilight hybrid thing going on here, as I've told you before. I like that you will pick just one story to concentrate on finishing, then go on to another. What happens, though, when a new plot bunny smacks you in the ass? How can you help but follow it? Good luck here. I will keep reading those stories of yours that I am currently following until you finish them before I go on to any of your others, if that is OK with you. It's easier for me that way...
Date: 27 Dec 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for the mating ceremony.
Date: 27 Dec 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
That Jakob is one evil dude.
Date: 27 Dec 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
First let me say I have NEVER been a fan of Star Trek. It could never hold my interest but all that change with the Star Trek movies starring Chris Pine. To me he is Captain Kurt. Anyway, I have been passing this story up because the whole Star Trek/Twilight connection did not sound appealing. I was completely wrong. You had me at chapter 1. I am so excited about this story. Fanfiction is slowly going downhill with one crappy, spelling and grammar error fill story after another. I am so happy to find a story that is so different than all others. Well on to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words and willingness to branch out into my Star Trek/Twilight world. I also understand your frustrations with some stories that show promise but lose it with grammatical errors up the wazoo...(being an English teacher makes me kind of anal about grammar...some things do slip past, but I'm human *snorts*). I'm planning on continuing this after the first of the year. RL has been crazy and yeah...Thank you again! *Hugs*
Date: 17 Oct 2014 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 17 Oct 2014 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
It sounds like the council is wanting to put in place a new ruling family. Even Norex seems to have fallen from that position of possible leadership.
Edward is right, D'Metri cannot be trusted at this time.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
this was such a beautiful chapter!!!
Date: 07 Oct 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
This story just keeps getting better and better! I share your love of sci-fi in general and Star Trek in particular. You are doing a marvelous job combining the two here. I suspect that the traitor is someone we don't expect to be a traitor. At all! Thanks for the new chapter!
Date: 07 Oct 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hmm Wonder how many betrayers there are? Stupid Norex and Alphans
Date: 07 Oct 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am still a bit worried about Kunaan, the healer. maybe I am off base, but it ha never set right with me that his 'treatments' for Edward seemed to not do much... maybe even make him worse. It wasn't until he was away from those treatments, and alone with his mate, healing their bond that he truly seemed to get better. I doubt nearly everyone In the castle, and believe it or not... I almost doubt Charenel. Is he TRULY as mentally challenged as he leads everyone to believe??
Date: 07 Oct 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loving this SO much! Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 07 Oct 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
Sorry for the writers block I really love this story!!
Date: 07 Oct 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow they did get a lot of information but still more questions will the find out who is in charge of the trators of Forx update soon
Date: 09 Sep 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad bella got Edward out of his funk. Jacob is pure trouble. I don't think Bella's uncle is the traitor.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
I have 2 theorys on who the traitor is, for very different reasons.
My first guess is Ciaus. Because, well, he is always a creep and seems very hostile to his empress whenever they have to interact. He also has the access to drop the shields to allow attacks and would not be considered a threat at first glance due tobeing a memebr of the council.
My second guess is Charanel. He is a guess because he is so simple minded and kind hearted that he would not realize it if he was being decieved and used. He would gladly speak of his sister and her mate. Such as where they are and what they are doing simply because he loves them so much he would be proud to talk about them to anybody who asked, ecspecialy if he trusted the person asking about them.
So there are my guesses.
Great Chapter
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Marcusi was correct in his prediction that the emperor would heal once the bond was reestablish with his mate.
I've speculated in previous reduce that norax is not working alone and that it's possibly Caius or even maybe Aro. But, I believe there is definitely someone from the council scheming with Norex to remove Nerabella from power.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
hmmm wonder who else besides Norex is the traitor. My brain is going crazy.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
So instead of helping/talking Edward through his pain all Bella cares about is mating. How is that fair? If the situations were reversed Edward would have been called an a** or a pig and been yelled at.
Author's Response:
It's more than just 'mating.' They will die if their connection fades away. Mating and time solidifies that connection. Edward's injuries from the gas were exacerbated by his walls that he put up after Victoria was pronounced dead. He was hurting from the gas and hurting from pushing Bella away. If you noticed, he got almost immediately better once they bonded. Additionally, Bella was hurting, too. Not to the extent of Edward, but she was experiencing pain and was unable to maintain focus.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Originally I thought it was Norex, which I still do, but I also believe that he's working with someone else. Maybe one of the counsel members?
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!!! Keep it comin'!!! ;)
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow poor Bella will they find out who it is before it's too late thank goodness they reconnected but what is next
Date: 08 Sep 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
I actually think it's NOT the uncle. He's a jerk and jealous but I do think he loves his people he's just so jealous he can't see straight. He is being used as a puppet by someone much smarter. I think it might be the other council meme era but I'm not sure yet. I can't wait for more clues.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
I suspect either the doctor that treated Edward, or one of the counsel members. Not Marcusi, but someone as high ranking.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
I bet the traitor is nobody we now suspect....I love this story and am happy to get a new, and very lemony, chapter!
Date: 31 Aug 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm speculating that Caius and Norex and a separate agenda to take over their planet. Norex made some sort of an agreement with Prince Jakob to hand over Nerabella. But I'll bet anything that all of those evil minds have under estimated Charanel's ability to learn and eves-drop on the scheming conversations of the traitors to Empress Nerabella and Emperor Edward.
Will Captain Data's physical form be repaired?
Date: 31 Aug 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
It would appear that there is a traitor in the midst of the palace! Bella's uncle perhaps? He is the most likely candidate. Or possibly his wife.
Date: 31 Aug 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Picard was a nice touch! ;)
Three whole days before the trouble of the galaxy come crashing down on their private party.
Date: 31 Aug 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
Will Norex become a threat to the throne?
Can Maralice feel commander Whitlock's feelings for her? Will Rosalie be able to help Ali heal?
Date: 31 Aug 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good thing Marcusi is on the side if the Empress.
I think his brothers will need to be convinced of the merit behind the Empress imprinting and completing the mating process.
Will Miralice be allowed to complete the imprint with Whitlock?
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow they fight dirty but will the federation and forx be able to put a stop to them once and for all will the find out why this war began update soon
Date: 22 Aug 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
rest well victoria, i hope that whoever was behind that crap on the ship and also the planet will pay for what they did. and i agree with jasper all of the council members seem suspicious. along with norex. i just hope they find the one who helped betray bella's people. keep up the good work
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
So sad about Victoria. I HOPE the Alphans get what they've got coming, & then some! >:(
I'm also so glad that Edward made it. I can't wait until Norex is interrogated. I hope Jasper makes it extra painful for him. Lol
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Work. Blah!! Why must we work. Lol. I understand, friend. Thanks for the update I can't wait to figure out more stuff.
Date: 21 Aug 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm really admiring how well you are blending the 2 genres her to make this story. As an avid Star Trek fan as well as a Twilight FF reader, you give me the best of both worlds. Thanks. I do think Norex is in on this, although he is the obvious choice. Maybe a not so obvious person might be a better choice to pick here, but I can't think of who that might be. My daughter is a HS teacher, so I know how hectic the start of the school year can be. Thanks for giving us what you can....
Date: 21 Aug 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
Appreciate your wonderful story so m. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 21 Aug 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love Data in the story!
Date: 21 Aug 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Omg, so sad! Poor Victoria and Edward. He has a tough road ahead, they all do!
Date: 21 Aug 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
I do!'t know if I trust the medications being administered to him on Forx. It may be making him temporRily able to do things, but if every time I mr wears off he feels as though he is starting from scratch, I'd say it isn't healing him..
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
WOwsers. Caius and Naxon are both involved I bet. Aro too. Poor Victoria. And I liked her for a change.
Love your mixing of Twi/Star Trek/original universe stuff
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
I must admit I'm only a fan of the original Star Trek. This calls to mind "Search For Spock" where Kirk set up the ship. I've seen burn victims and my lungs often feel this way. Not pleasant.
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
I just love this. You even brought in Data and Janeway. It's wonderful.
Date: 17 Aug 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
I've always found it amazing how some writers can create totally new worlds with different languages and different names for everything. You are an amazing writer!! Btw are you published? If not you should be
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Could Norex have done this from his cell?
Date: 13 Aug 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Norex. He needs to answer for his crimes against the Cignarian people! He orchestrated this attack. He is either in collusion with the Alpjans, or has been a part of whatever faction started and keeps perpetuating the war between worlds.
Date: 13 Aug 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
I keep falling behind, because TWCS isn't adding this my my faves list when I click it! 😠
I LOVED the ceremony and the mating. You weave such a tale.
Date: 13 Aug 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Had to post this first before reading. I am so not a Star Trek fan but those banner are awesome!! The bottom one is hands down the best I've ever seen! Ok on to read because of course you're amazing and even though I'm not a Trekkie you make it to tempting to refuse
Date: 11 Aug 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
And the plot thickens, good story.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
will maybe the guy that is in jail right now did that?
Good story.. So Victoria had the hots for the Captain.
Date: 09 Aug 2014 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter!
I bet the culprit is Norex!
Date: 09 Aug 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love how this story is progressing. I am getting lost in it and am a real Treckie and just have a great time following the story. It is so trut to star treck that I feel emersed when I read the chapters. Thanks for your hare work - Xanath
Date: 08 Aug 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
I bet Norex is a traitor, working with the Alphans. Hell, he may even BE an Alphan who has been surgically altered! Wonderful sex, fight training, and just being regal from our Edward and Bella. Have I told you how much I love this story? I sent the first 3 chapters to my daughter, thinking she might enjoy it as she is as much of a Star Trek fan as I am, but I'm rethinking sending more. She is a religious person and might object to the lemons. Her loss....LOL! Sorry....