Date: 15 Aug 2021 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hi again been having this story as one of my favorites and came back to read it and I was wondering if you would be updating it pretty soon I love me a good Bella and Jasper story and this is by far one of my top favorites hope everything is well
Date: 15 Aug 2021 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hi again been having this story as one of my favorites and came back to read it and I was wondering if you would be updating it pretty soon I love me a good Bella and Jasper story and this is by far one of my top favorites hope everything is well
Date: 30 Dec 2019 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story!!!! It's one of my favorites in this website!!!
If you ever want to come back to it I'll be an eager reader!!!
All the Love
Date: 30 Dec 2019 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story!!!! It's one of my favorites in this website!!!
If you ever want to come back to it I'll be an eager reader!!!
All the Love
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2019 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story so much. I literally just read it again. I hope you come back to it!!
Date: 07 Apr 2019 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love all your Major and Bella pairing stories and I really hope you continue this one !!
Date: 07 Apr 2019 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love all your Major and Bella pairing stories and I really hope you continue this one !!
Date: 07 Apr 2019 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love all your Major and Bella pairing stories and I really hope you continue this one !!
Date: 03 Mar 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
More!!! We need more of this story!
Date: 03 Mar 2018 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great start to this story. I am sad to see that it is not finished and the last post was back in 2014 :( hope the story will end at a good place at least.
Date: 19 Sep 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Excellent chapter!
Date: 09 Sep 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope you finish the story, I have really liked it until now
Date: 18 Oct 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh no! I have to wait for updates now! Love this story, and I can't wait until Edward gets the tar beat out of him!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am so glad you updated this!!!!! Edward is on his own and that should be interesting. I like that mating is so instinctual, it brings an animal quality that I always enjoy. Please keep the chapters coming :)
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am not a J&B fan but this is an amazing storyline. GJ.
Author's Response:
So glad you're liking it despite the pairing! I'm honored by that.
~Spudz
Date: 01 Jan 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
So glad to see this one updated! :) can't wait for more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
I'm back on a regular schedule, so updates won't take long. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 30 Dec 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well at least Eleazar is smart enough to back off from Fuckward
Author's Response:
Right? lol Let Eddie hang by himself, for sure! Thanks for R&R!
~Spudz
Date: 12 Oct 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
So when are you updating this... I'm waiting
Date: 23 Sep 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Awww got to love jazz
Date: 20 Sep 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great story so far! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 11 Sep 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great story, I don't like un cannon pairings but there are a few Jasper/Bella ones that are readable, yours I include in this short list o mine. Well written, update soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad I made the list! lol
~Spudz
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great Story, Thank You!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
As always it qas fantastic. I hope she says yes.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
~Spudz
Date: 08 Sep 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Go Bad Ass Jasper.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting.....
Date: 25 Aug 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
awww for Esme. Ah the Major is gonna be a king. Coolness.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Thanks for posting the pic too! :-) ~Spudz
Author's Response:
Date: 25 Aug 2014 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really liking this story. Nice twists with Bella pregnant and changing. Looking forward to update.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2014 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love this story...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Still love this story. Really is my favorite. Marcus and Esme ???? That would be sweet. The almost lemon was a great addition. Love that Bella talked and we know she is understanding what is happening. On edge waiting for more. I know Im greedy.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :-)
~Spudz
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
hee hee for burning the house down. Ah the twins are gonna be protected by the twins. OOOh Marcus and Esme I assume?
Author's Response:
Picturing the house burning behind the Major as he walked to the SUV.......My favorite part as it played out in my mind when writing it. LOL
Marcus and Esme??? LOL Yep. Ya didn't think I'd stick poor Marcus with Eddie in a collar again did ya? LOL
Thank you again for reading my keyboard peckings.
~Spudz
Date: 09 Aug 2014 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
The Major and Aro.... Now there's a combination to put the fear in someone! Great work!
Date: 08 Aug 2014 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow what a fuckawesome story i was on the edge of my seat please please please update soon im awaiting with baited breath for the next chapter .did i mention its a awesome story an i love it ?absolutely brilliant
Author's Response:
Thank you for your awesome review! I'm glad you like it so much. I usually update pretty often, so you won't have too long to wait. :-)
~Spudz
Date: 08 Aug 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
I do so adore a pissed off Major. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2014 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
Smart decision on his part as far as safty goes. Loved the chapter and am exited to see how there traveling will go with the Major being so protective of Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you again for reading and reviewing! It means a lot to me and I appreciate it so much. :-)
~Spudz
Date: 07 Aug 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well at least Elezar knew not to mess with Jasper, although I don't think the kings are gonna give him a pass on what transpired before then. Buh Bye Carlisle, you got off easy
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it!
~Spudz
Date: 02 Aug 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the concept of mating in this story, it's amazing!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try to be different. I'm glad you like it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 29 Jul 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
More! I'm a sucker(haha) for the major!!!! I love the story so far
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love that they are having twins, and the character that is your Char Jasper and Bella. Wonderful story plot.
Author's Response:
Hi. Thank you for the wonderful reviews! I appreciate it very much!
Glad you are enjoying the story!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes yes yes Oh God Jasper! lol love the story plot!
Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it! Also, twins!!! Leave it to the Major to do things in a big way! I'm interested as to what happens to Emmett, Rose, and Esme. Will they stay with the Major or head out on their own? Aro will not be pleased to discover the plot that has been in hand for so long. I look forward to more from this story! Bella and The Major should have a whole new dynamic. I' anxious to read what it it like! Thanks again for another winner. Kudos!
Author's Response:
Hi again! As always, thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm so happy that you like it.
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
This has moved to one of my most favorite stories. I was afraid you were going to allow the Cullen to retrap Jasper with the hidden word and I hated thinking Bella wouldn't have him and Jasper would miss the pregnancy. I was wowed didn't see this story line love it. So if I understand...Emmett, Rose, and Esme are still living because they are innocent?
Author's Response:
Hi. Glad you're enjoying the story! Yes, Emmett, Rose and Esme are innocent so they get to live.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz/Laura
Date: 28 Jul 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
A little different from your normal vampire story but still good. It is well written too, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. As far as different goes, I strive to be different, so that's a good thing. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is an exiting story, one Im giddy to keep reading! Very well done, cant wait to see what the Voltori will say when they get there to talk to the Major and they find out about Bella.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it! As far as Bella is concerned, the Volturi will tread carefully. She's the Major's mate after all! LOL
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz/Laura
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOVED Peter getting to rip out Malice's tongue. Buh Bye Malice and PsychoDoc.
Author's Response:
LOL, yeah I found this chapter somewhat theraputic to write.
Shifting gears to write this one after writing UV is a bit tough though. LOL
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 21 Jul 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am hooked... great story. Love it.
Author's Response:
So happy you like it! Working the next chapter so I'll update soon!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love this story already! Granted I love most of your stories, but I can't wait to see more of this one. Badass Major, yum! Always a sight to behold, or well read.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is going to be fun :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 17 Jul 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
love it. I would love to see twins and Jacob smashed to bits. Hate that dog. Cannot wait to see the wolves reaction and need some more yummy major and bella time. Maybe have the major wipe out the Italian idiots. Awesome story.
Jukie
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 17 Jul 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love the angle this stpry is gping. I cant wait to see more heads roll when The Major finds Edward gone.
Author's Response:
Glan you are enjoying it!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 17 Jul 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Marvelous! It should be interesting! Somehow," uh, Major? I think we're missing a body.". Will NOT go over well with Jasper! I love the dynamic you are setting up between Major/Peter and Charlotte. His ot blaming them for giving up on him says worlds about their feelings for one another. Thank you for all the hard work! I look forward to more!
Author's Response:
It's my pleasure! Thank you for reading and enjoying my stuff and also for the wonderful reviews.
~Spudz
Date: 16 Jul 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jasper has a blackened heart, El? Really?? After what Malice and C did to him. Ridiculous. Wonder that Jasper will say when they find E gone.
LOVE Peter and Char.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the Major won't be happy. lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 16 Jul 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh yeah! More please!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 16 Jul 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
oooh Sounds like The Mutant Doctor and Malice need to be burned along with the house.
Date: 16 Jul 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well now, this is interesting. Hmmmm, more please.
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Chapter 2 is posted. :-)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
Date: 15 Jul 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm excited to read more :)
Author's Response:
Chapter 2 is up. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
can't wait to see were you take it
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and the wonderful review!
~Spudz
Date: 15 Jul 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love it!!! The wild exhilaration of the Major here is somewhat catching!! I found myself reading faster and faster. Carlisle and Alice's devious and appalling behavior made me feel no sorrow in their loss. Edward, well, I had to feel for him as they were using him as well. The Major's plan is fascinating and if memory serves, totally unique to fanfiction. Kudos on that alone!! I look forward to more of this new couple and their future progeny. I just know Peter knew it was all coming! Thanks for a great read!
Author's Response:
You're very welcome and I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Thank you for the wonderful review and for reading my stuff!
~Spudz
Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hell yes! I love The Major in his true form! This was fabulous! I love your stories and love J/B pairings especially when they are badass! Please tell me this is NOT just a one shot and is going to be a full story?! Please give me more especially if Peter is going to be involved lol! Loved it!
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and reviewing! Chapter 2 is now posted. :-)
~Spudz