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Reviewer: lazygirl89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

So happy I found this as I love stories, hope you have an update in the works. Hope you'll eventually add your other stories as well. 

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love this story sorry to see it pulled from ff but found it here and hope you will be continuing this story xx

Reviewer: Goldielover Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this one - it is quite different than most other Bella/Carlisle stories I've read.  I know it hasn't been updated in awhile, and it seems to have disappeared from FF as well, but I'm hoping it hasn't been completely abandoned. 

Reviewer: Eclipse3 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

Baby jasper is sooo adorable

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

awww hope they decide to stay

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

Argh! More soon, please!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 15

Glad they are all doing well.   Hope the visit goes well

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

awww new baby.   Glad they soothed Jasper/

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

she is so sweet with jasper.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

yey for Alice!!!   We need to get her a mate now. lol     Glad Jazz will have Bella.  Sulpicia is such a good lady.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Jasper.   Carlisle needs to get his head out of his arse before he screws everything up beyond repair. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love that Bella isnt a mouse.   Carlisle is gonna have his hands full with her.  ROFL.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love B telling him off.  ROFL for the Demetri comment.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

B is such a good mama.   LOL for Jasper protecting her from Demetri and Carlisle.....or trying to at least.  LOL.

woo hoo  Lemon Dance

dl

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 7

awww Bella is such a sweetie.   Glad she's the one to find him.   Wonder when they're going to find her and Jazz.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh wow.  Glad Esme and Edward are going to be destroyed.   How dare they. Glad Rose was protecting him as much as she could.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

wow  not liking Esme more and more

ROFL for DirecTV.  Love my DVR and season passes.

hey now.....true blood was good till Alan Ball screwed it all up with his love affair with Scumbill and Hookie.

Wow  Esme is really pathetic.  So not fair to Carlisle.  And you know Edward is going to be obnoxious about it

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow.   Poor Jazz.  Esme is being a snot.....probably being goaded on my Edward too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

wow  So much for my nice words about Esme.   Alice really needs to warn them about Edward.  Poor Jazz

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Glad Esme is happy now.   Ugh Fuckward is gonna get himself killed if he's not careful.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow  Edward is a wanker.  Wonder what Esme will want to do?  

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loving it!

Reviewer: Micci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

yay a brother or sister for baby jasper

Reviewer: annoyingpixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

I really loved this chapter! Started out sad, but ended happy - Jasper was the total 'scene stealer' in this chapter! I love how he's gotten so attached to and protective of Bella - their deep, instant bond is amazing to read about! And Bella's discpline of Emmett made me laugh so hard! I can't wait to see Bella's reaction to her and Carlisle's joyous news! Great job, as always! :)

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loving it! More please!

Reviewer: annie boo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lol, little jasper is everything, I can just picture him in that suit case. Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  Glad you are enjoying it!

~Spudz

Reviewer: cmallbritton Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

I haven't kept up with this one as I have your other stories, but I'm glad I read it,  Just as good !



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you like it!  Thanks so much for reviewing. :-)

~Spudz

Reviewer: PixieOK Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

You'd be wasting yor talents weaving. This is perhaps one of the best Twilight FFs I've read! Please continue. I just discovered this story and couldn't stop until I read all chapters. Looking forward to how it continues.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and your kind review!  I'm glad you like it so much.  I have a partial chapter done for this so it won't be long until I update. :-)

~Spudz/Laura

Reviewer: frggystyl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 9

no underwater basket weaving.... i like your updates far too much



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you.  I'll keep on with the updating then. LOL

~Spudz/Laura

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love this unique story.  Amazing spend you've put on it.  I can't wait to see if she gets pregnant.  I love little Jas too!  You go Dr. C!  Keep you woman.  I love this side of the V group.  You've done good!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thank you for your kind words.  I appreciate them very much!  I am glad you are enjoying it too. :-)

~Spudz

Reviewer: Kittyinaz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love this!!  I had been saving it for a rainy day!  Thanks again!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Spudz

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

I'd hold off on the basket weaving for now if I were you.  I loved this chapter!  Bella has sass and you gave her one of the best after sex lines I have ever read!  "Well for one thing you've just taken my virginity spectacularly.  For another, you did it without even telling me your name, but I understand that introductions aren't what they used to be."

Brilliant line!  I love her whole attitude and Carlisle's sense of first obtuse understanding and then later, wonder and amazement.  Thank you for all the smiles and fun!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

Very very nice!  Funny though, Jasper seems to have better instincts than his father right now!  The picture of tiny Jasper growling down Demitri is more than a little funny.  Go Jasper!  Thank you for another wonderful chapter!



Author's Response:

You're very welcome!  It's my pleasure.

~Spudz

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

Absolutely the sweetest relationship and chapter!  Jasper is relaxed around Bella and she with him.  He couldn't ask for a enter, more loving and protective mother.  And how about Rose?!!  I knew she would rock protecting Jasper!  She put her own life on the line to buy him extra time.  I'd say that's devoted!  I look forward to Carlisle meeting Bella almost as much as Alice!  Thank you for the extra chapter.  It was marvelous!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for sticking with me!

~Spudz

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

I really love this story.  Bravo!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Spudz

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wonderful!  The Italian section was right on point and so very much like a young child out of his element - human or vampire.  Esme and Edward?  Now that was a surprise!  I knew Rose would protect Jasper with her life I just kept hoping Emmett would get back soon!  Now to find Jasper!  Does he perhaps meet a very young Bella in the wood?  Again, wonderful and thank you so much for the update and your hard work!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Sorry I haven't responded until now, but I have been typing like mad on this story.  I am glad that you are enjoying it so much.  I kinda like it too!  Just posted the next chapter, hope you like it too.  I'm so close to bringing the two together!  Next chapter, which I'm off right now to work on!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Spudz

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

My heart is breaking for Carlisle and the others!  Esme needs to put her child first and look past any title Jasper may give Sulpicia!  The simple fact that the only place she feels peaceful is the garden should tell her the most important thing.  This chapter was outstanding.  The emotions, feelings, and difficulties described here were handled exceptionally well.  By the way, kudos on the conversation about Aro and his flat screen!  It cracked me up to think of him DVRing Maury Povitch and the like!  Where is Oprah when we need her?!  Again, thank you!  You made my afternoon!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Carlisle's inner dialogue is quite telling.  His not wanting to tell Esme his true feelings and thoughts does not bode well for them - whatever the reason.  Slow destruction of a once happy marriage is always sad!  Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

Have carlisle raise baby jasper with the help of emmett rose and alice.  kick out esme and edward.  hope the baby is okay?  like how the volturi are family to carlisle.

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is interesting is little Jasper mate to alice.  Cannot believe how evil you are making Edward I love it.  Great story.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting!  I have to wonder though, which one is the most horrific?  Jasper or Edward?  At this point,I think it's Edward. He could have a positive effect on Jasper as he grows but he chooses instead to follow " his mind".  I look forward to reading future chapters.  Thank you.

Reviewer: bwaygirl0521 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love a good bella/carlisle story. only non-cannon i'll read.  can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  Even though it's Carlisle and Esme for now, Bella will be with us soon, so hang in there.  LOL

~Spudz

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