Wow!  This Christain is very messed up!  I am addicted to this story and I just started reading it a few days ago!  I can't wait to read what happens next!  Please update soon!

I've very much liked your story thus far.  I'm only hoping Christian will stop before raping her further and steeling her virginity.  Not sure how she could recover or forgive him or herself from that.  Perhaps it's time for him to have a moment of conscious. 

hey anee,

i just read 'claiming' and have fallen in love with it. frankly speaking, i like such type of storyline alot but cant find this type of fictions. can you please tell me the date or the day you plan to update new chapters. i am looking forward to reading this story and knowing what happens. i would like tp congratulate you on writing such an amazing story.

your story is amazing-this Christian is so much more powerful and his actions more understandable than the real 50 shades-well done!

Good one

Wow!  This is so good, sorry you gave up on it.  You wrote so well.

I am anticipating for the rest of this date!

We all have our own issues....

Holy HYMEN

wow

naughty christian 

loving this story

Waiting for another chapter!! Would love to see how it turns out!

I discovered this story and read it within a weekend.  I have noticed that it has been a while since you posted a chapter; I hope you are doing well, and real life is not interfering with your writing. 

I love the darker turn you are taking with this story.  I have fear for Anastasia's welfare in this Christian's hands.  Normally I do not side with Kate, but the last couple of chapters makes me think Christian may actually abduct her for a TPE.  I have not read a story with that distinct possibility before.  I am beginning to wonder how she will get out of the restaurant.

I know you promised that this was a darker story, but after 27 chapters, even I am tired of Ana's virginity.  I only hope that she gives it away willingly, not have it taken from her.

I was hoping they would have a hot one night stand.  Then Ana would leave, not wanting to be clingy while Christian continued to pursue her.

Please come back to this story.  Your fans are waiting with baited breath.

OMG!!  I just whipped through the first 27 chapters. I sincerely hope you will continue this story. It's absolutely fabulous and delicious. I can see Ana is going to send him over the edge.  No way is she going to agree. I hope John is up to the task.  And, hopefully before he rapes her.  I sincerely hope Taylor won't let that happen.

tgankbyou for sharing your amazing talent!!

OMG ! LOVE Your story can't wait next chapter soon I Hope . 

Thank you! That'll help! T

This is amazing! I want more lol!

Thank God you are back.  I am now sitting at the edge of my seat waiting to read what will happen next. 

Great chapter. 

Happy Birthday to you :) 

I was worried something happened, thank heavens you're well and good.

Having anxiety crisis, is like breathing to a writer, which I fully understand, it is a bit scary to write and wait for reviews, and wait...and wait...and all sort of bad ideas goes into ones mind ;) 

Thank you for updating!

A very complex  and tense chapter as I felt it , -maybe your anxiety influenced Anastasia :) - but definitely worth the long wait.

The dialogue IMHO is somehow foreshadoing what might and could happen in the near future.

But what do I know?! You're the writer :) 

Again very hilarious moments were inserted at the right moment to break the tension, though Mr. Grey finally  and unaware started his trip into possessiveness ( I think it's early to call his reaction Jealousy) 

Thank you again for the really brilliant and well written version of 50 shades of grey :) 

Take care and again best wishes on your Birthday :) 

Thank you for taking the time to respond, and yes we are a couple, I smiled knowing you understand me, oh yes I am a proud loony :D

As you said that is the only way to be one ;) 

Please don't feel obliged to reply :) I 'd rather you spend  the time writing your splendid and excellent version of 50 Shades of Grey. :D 

I might offend some readers here, but IMHO, your version is way, I mean WAY better than E.L.James, ( my appologies to those offended)  :) 

I laughed so hard and loud at " Pepper spray and condoms!"  Indeed it is a war, of a different kind, and the boon is more than worth it, Mr. Grey's heart, but until that time comes, we will see battles of wills and tears and pain, and whips and chains and,welts...

I hope so :D 

I love love love your creativity, your flowing writing style, the dialogue is absolutely riveting, and witty. The humor and subtle sexiness, mingled together, is simply incomparable.

I was checking every day to see if you updated, yep you got me addicted !

Please, please do not make us wait long, us poor readers ( implores with puppy dog eyes) lol.

I again thank you for sharing the fruits of your hard labor, to give us the chance to read this "story-gem".

Take care :) 

Please update soon, it's been a very long time. 

Another good chapter, thank you.

Incedently, I thank my wife for introducing me to your story, though I still reserve judgment on her looniness ;)

Your story thus far has been very enjoyable.  keep up the good work.

very good stuff, im really enjoying the story. dont keep us waiting too long

I laughed so hard reading the last 3 chapters that my husband said "Honey...you're a looooney " lol.

I cannot believe how much of a spolied brat CG is and to ice his cake he's in denial! 

What he told Ana at the end of chapter 22 is true, she's conflicted, her intuition/ ( mind?) tells her to stay away from him, while her body pulls her towards him.

The conflict goes deeper because she sure as hell is liking every minute of him chasing after her, though knowing there won't be "hearts&roses" puts a damper on her attraction, her submissiveness is still latent, and waiting for his Dominant, but he's going about it the wrong way....well we can always count ...on this tiny margen of hope....

But I really really don't envy her, if in the near future we're going to read about him putting into action what he's thinking about....( shivers) lol

Again a wonderful well written story, absolutely putting me on pins and needles, with baited breath, on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter!

Thank you for sharing this gem :) 

What can I say ?! 

Your CG is a total basket case, that you have captured and layed bare, whether by his thoughts, actions, reactions, or blatant unshameful spoken words. 

Ah the dialogue ! LOVE It, love how it sounds sexy despite being almost vulgar, or    "unorthodox" as Anastasia have phrased it :)

The man craves affection, but channels it into sex, hence being a sex addict by habit, by nurture not nature, and his BDSM tendencies are blurring his sight to real problem. 

But with Ana coming into the picture, I am seeing him relinquishing bit by bit his solid and structured sex life ( going bareback as a first step ) wanting her to be only his, though he didn't care for his other submissives if they weren't, and her virginity, rather than putting a damper on his attraction/ obsession, to the contrary it is fanning his flames. Let alone the Master / slave relation ( in his own word) is deeper than a Dom/sub. He never collared a sub, he is seriously thinking about training ana as his slave, his sub, and soon his everything :) 

Sorry I am just speculating lol you are the writer and you know where this story is heading and what's going to happen, I guess I was thinking aloud/ in writing lol. 

The storyline is unfolding at the exact right pace, I love your writing style. No unecessary delay, no uneeded details, and you hit the nail on the head every single chapter !

Again thank you for sharing this excellent work, and another thank you for the fast chapters update, please keep them coming ? :) 

Heavy Mist 

O my goodness,  what a chapter!  I am sitting on the edge of my seat!!

Lol, after an incredibly bad day, this made me laugh!!! 'oh now you remember' well done!!!

I am loving it !! keep those updates coming!!!! LOL.

I absolutely loved the car/kiss scene and the dialogue in all chapters.

I want to really congractulate you on how you wrote and described  the dichotomy between CG thoughts vs actions, his control vs. lising control. And how seamlessly you navigated your way between his thoughts and the real action taking place, his "attempted rape" and his excuses. 

The male that is starting to feel and the veast that only wants instant gratification! 

Although deep down he knows he's corrupted, and he knows he's bad news to Anastasia, his cruel intentions for the girl are a natural result of his conflict, like fever :) 

I also absolutely love how you are keeping the same standards for every chapter, whether the style, cadence, suspense, actions/reactions of the protaginists, every single time, no faltering or taking the easy route.

fantastically well written, I even dare say, maybe it is how E.L. James tried to write 50 Shades of Grey, ( I have read the Original trilogy, "Master of His Universe" before it was published as 50 Shades ) :) 

Yes you did indeed say clearly that it is going to be a dark story, and am loving it even more, and will definitely continue reading your intelligent, sexy, psychologically rich ( yes because with CG it is not only about sex ) and wonderful story.

Thank you for the updates, please keep them coming :)

I don't know.  This Christian is kind of inept and although Ana thought she wanted to be donminated, she doesn't seem too receptive to it. We will see what the next chapter brings.

I am definitely happy with this development although I much prefer Grey's point of view rather than Anastasia. Regardless thanks for a quick update. Look forward to reading more.

Not what I expected from the summary. I like it so far!

I'm loving your story! I like this Christian; and I love that Isabella has an secret love of erotic literature. That makes the situation even more fun. Please keep writing. You've got :)