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Reviewer: goddessmoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 30

greats story.  I was hoping for more magic stuff, but it was still good and a quick read



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I have several more supernatural stories if you care to look.  I also have a Facebook group called Dinia Steel Fan Fiction.  All of my completed stories are uploaded into the groups files as pdfs - some with pictures toon - come join us and download the stories for your convinence.

looking forward to hearing from you again.

hard hugs

Dinia Steel

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2016 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 30

Sweet tale!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Everyone loves the HEA.  :)

Hope you'll read more of my stories and let me know what you think.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 12

I don't think he can be considered her "true love" because of her spell.



Author's Response:

Nope not if a "spell" was used.  However sometimes things can evolve that will allow the spell to have been a type of karma.

Thanks for reading!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

They're immortal?



Author's Response:

Yes.  :)  

thanks for reading

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 30

Glad Angela got her HEA too.  Ty for writing and sharing

ty



Author's Response:

Thank You!  You Sneaky Lady!  

Huge Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 29 - New House - New Friend

Glad they got the house. Sounds like a wonderful place to live....if only I had the $$.  LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 28 - A Heritage House

House sounds heavenly

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 27 -To Write or Not To Write

Can't blame Victor for wanting his family covered. His mom too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Four Weeks Later

The book idea sounds pretty cool

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 25 Rosalie and Emmett's Day

Yea I don't think I could ever be a wedding coordinator.  Way to much stress. Rose's dress sounds lovely.  awww for Angela

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 24 Alice and Jasper's Day

ROFL for Pepto comment. Don't blame Angela about the heels.  Never wear those death traps myself.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 23

awww for Angela. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Weather Warnings

Glad they got to make reparations in their own way.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 21 Hawaiian Dream

Sounds like Angela is doing a great job

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Planning

Yey  angela is in the story.  I've always loved her character.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 19 - YES!

Awww for happy girls.   

 

PS This is Kelly from the TWCS Twi Facebook group.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Realizations

Glad he came back.  Three ladies are too cute, 

 

No I don't mind you not answering each review. Your job is writing, my job is reviewing. :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Loyal readers are a blessing!  Hope you'll read others of mine.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told

Well at least he knows now.



Author's Response:

I am so happy that you're enjoying my story!  I suspect that perhaps you know and understand about the Craft a little, as do I.

Looking forward to reading the rest of your comments.  Ihope you don't mind that I'm not commenting on yours for each chapter.  Having problems with my shoulders - I am an old woman after all.

If you haven't found me yet on Facebook, please come find me by my name Dinia Steel.  I have two groups, my author/book page and a Dinia Steel Fan fiction page with I've put all my finished stories in pdfs for the reading enjoyment of those who like to read what I write.

Let me hear from you again, please.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Just A Matter Of Time

hmm Bella is overthinking things I think.  Glad A and R are happy with their guys.  I think she does have to admit to it at some point.  If not, it will come out at the wrong time and she'll lose him completely.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 - And Then, There Was One

Kinda sucks that they lose their magic.  They had it before the curse so I wouldn't think it would go away becuase of it.... but what do I know....LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

Not surprising for the Tarot reading.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 13- It's a Blue Blue Night

The shop sounds heavenly

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

Interesting talk about the bathroom.  While I don't do frufru either, love me a long soak in the tub and reading.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 11 Revelations

Sounds like a nice dinner.  Wonder if she sent the dream or if maybe he's a little precognitive.  hmmm

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Three Sister's Curse

Interesting back story.  Can't blame renee and charles for being suspicious about a stranger just assuming he could have one of the girls.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

I've never understood spending so much on clothes.  Ah well to be rich......  Glad B is letting E see the real her tonight. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

hmm sounds like Bella is quite the naughty sister.



Author's Response:

thank you for your review.  I just saw this and I'm so sorry I didn't see it before.

I hope you enjoyed reading the whole story.

Once again, thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 7 First Date Part 2

wow  ALice moved fast.  Hubba Hubba

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

Woo Hoo.  Gotta love women who know how to shoot.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 First Date

hmmm  Don't know that all the boys are going to like the manipulation.....be we'll see.  Hope Rose like Em :-)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

hmm  B should let things grow naturally unless she wants things to backfire on her sooner or later.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

oooh Sounds like the girls are having a little too much fun at the boys behest.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Naughty Jasper give E info on the girls. :-)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

Dayum.  Hawt dream!!!!  Can't wait to see where you take it.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  There waon't be anymore for this story line.  Sorry.

Hope you read something else of mine and let me know what you think!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

really cool little story thanks for sharing ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I have a PDF of it complete with pictures if you'd like it.  It's in the files of my Dinia Steel Fan Fiction Facebook page, as well as PDFs for all the completed stories I've written.  Almost all of them have associated iamges included with in the PDF.  Enjoy.

I hope to hear from you more on other stories that I've written.  :D

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: babecullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

Really great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  If you'd like I have a pdf with pictures for the story.  If you'd care for it, please either find me on Facebook as Dinia Steel or email me at gardiniasteel@gmail.com and remind me what it is you require.  There is a third option which is on Facebook I have a group called  Dinia Steel Fan Fiction.  In the files of that group are all the pdfs for all my completed stories.  

Please let me hear from you again.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 30

great story

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

Lovely ending. Looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  The next one is several moths away I fear.  I don't want it to start posting until I'm almost done.  Just stay tuned same bat channel same bat time.  :)

See you then.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: julie_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 30

Fantastic 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have a special pdf made for this story entire including pictures that I used for the story.  If you'd like it, please give me an email address and I'll get it to you.

Again, thank you for your support and I hope you'll read other of my stories and like them too.

See you soo!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 30

Fantastic! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I hope you'll be able to read more of my stories that you haven't read yet.  I'm writing a new one now but I won't be publishing it was several more months.  Want to have it almost finished so I don't suffer from too much pressure to have to meet a dead line.  :D

Hoping to see you soon.

Hard Hugs!

dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 30

You wrapped this up with a big bow on top! Thanks so much for a really fun story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I like the HEA if I can get it to come out that way!  I hope when I start posting the next new story that you'll follow that one too.  It won't be for a couple of months since I want to have it almost finished before I start posting to ease the stress of deadlines.  I've got 5 chapters written so far.  It's going to be the gang from the Down On The Bayou so there'll be lots of things that go bump in the night.  *snicker*  

So thank you again for being such a loyal reader and reviewers.  There were times I wanted to throw the towel in - didn't think anyone was reading my work.  

Hopefully I'll see you again soon.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 30

Great ending  



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love HEAs!  

Hope you'll follow my next story.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 30

:) loved this story 



Author's Response:

Thank you my friend.  I loved your smiles.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 30

Love it! I think that this was the perfect ending for them all. :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  

I hope to hear from you again.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 30

Thanks for this lovely story, dear girl!  With a bun in the oven, there would seem to be more to the story to tell at a later time, but I think you will leave that to our imaginations. I am so honored to have had a very small part in your wonderful story and would love to keep this one for myself. I'm going to download it from AO3, if you don't mind....



Author's Response:

Thank you Judy!  Mind you downloading?  I'd be an idiot to say I would!  LOL.  I'm am going to do a pdf with pictures if you'd care to have that one too?

Thank you again dear lady for all your support, and I just might use your name and face again some time, if you don't mind!

See you next story?

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

Interesting storyline



Author's Response:

Thank you.  The last chapter will probably be published this coming week.  I hope you'll enjoy it and will want to read more of my work.

I look forward to hearing from you again.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 29 - New House - New Friend

Sorry, yes I did enjoy it and am enjoying the rest of it too.



Author's Response:

Don't be sorry.  Just needed some ego stroking.  :)

I am so happy that you enjoy reading what I write.  I don't hear too much about my writing, so it's wonderful when I do.  <3

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 28 - A Heritage House

Good one.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2015 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 27 -To Write or Not To Write

:):) Sorry it took so long to get around to reading this chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Did you enjoy it?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 29 - New House - New Friend

How lovely to see Gabby included in this story also! you are a living doll, including us in your story! love the aura stuff and have always wondered what color mine is...



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Gabby is an actual paid psychic ( in case you didn't know ).  We compare notes actually also.  You and she were labors of love as far injecting a character into the story line.  She's returned the favor by adding me in her current WIP "Knock Me Up, Please" as a reconizable character if you know anything about me.  LOL.  You might enjoy that story if you've not been reading it.  Harry and I are going to New Orleans next week end to have dinner with Gabby and her family.  We've already been there once, but we've been trying to figure out when it would work again for all of us.  :)  I'll be taking pictures while there that I'll be sharing.  

I would be willing to bet your aura has a great deal of blue, but I don't really know you that well, and I actually suspect that not many people know you "well" - which is no crime, but inorder to guess what an aura looks like it's better to meet someone and actually see it.  :)  when you your birthday?  Do you know your time of birth ( should be on your birth cert ).  If you can get that info for me I could probably do a chart that would give me a better idea too.  To be honest, I prefer to actually "see" the aura.

Well one more chapter to go, or I should say the Epi to go and TW&TW is finished.  I'm working on an other supernatural/occult story right now that I"m calling "The Down On The Bayou Detetive Agency - Case Files.  Gonna try and have at least two, maybe three different cases to write about.  The first one was/is inspired by "Killing me softly".  Remember it?

Well, gotta run.

Talk to you later

Hard Hugs

Carol O'

 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 29 - New House - New Friend

Great chapter  



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 - New House - New Friend

This story coming to a close soon is kind of sad, Ive sure enjoyed reading about the three sisters and their long lives. Now that everyone is happily married I wonder if their long lives will end as do everyone elses?



Author's Response:

That's something I may at some time in the future explore, but for now I'm ready for their saga to come to a close.  :P

Thank you for your support and I am working on another supernatural story but it won't be published for a while.  Want it all writter first I start posting.  That will take some pressure off me.  

Again, thank you for your continued support and I look forward to hearing from you again.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 29 - New House - New Friend

:) 



Author's Response:

;)  <3  :D

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 28 - A Heritage House

Oooooh I'm thrilled to see my name in this chapter! Thank you so much for incuding me!  I got to sell Bella and Edward their dream house!  And.....I got to go inside alone with Edward! What more could a girl want!!!



Author's Response:

Well he could havae held your hand I guess. LOL.  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Only got a couple chapters to go with this one too.

Working on starting something new already.  Want to haave it almost finished before I start posting it though.  

So, See you next chapter?

Huge hugs

Carol O'

 

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 27 -To Write or Not To Write

Geez it is taking me a long time to catch up on my reading!  Not sure if I already commented on this chapter or not. I think the Kui is being very fair with the sisters. Now if Edward only agrees to fictionalize them..... 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2015 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 28 - A Heritage House

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Almost done with this one too!

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs 

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 28 - A Heritage House

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 27 -To Write or Not To Write

This is great! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

See you next chapter!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 27 -To Write or Not To Write

Cautious but accepting, that's a pretty good way to be. I think Bella and Victor have it correctly, Edward will do a good job on this book without revealing what needs to remain hidden! It will most likely be a really good read that most will believe to be fiction!



Author's Response:

You know, I'm sure, that there is an Esoteric maniumn that says, roughly, "The deepest secrets can be yelled from the roof tops, and only those who have ears to hear will."  I have in my extensive library books that are just that type of "yelling" within their pages.  One author, Dion Fortune, presents a great deal in a book of short story fiction.

Yes, I think that if Edward works with the limits he'll have from Bella and Victor, he'll have some additional "help" with the books flying off the shelves.  :D

Thank you again for your support.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 27 -To Write or Not To Write

Good chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 27 -To Write or Not To Write

:) 



Author's Response:

:0  :)  ;)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 27 -To Write or Not To Write

Yikes!



Author's Response:

"Yikes"??  What's got you alarmed?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Four Weeks Later

Surfing is a scary sport not only rocks but those nasty sharks. Lol. 



Author's Response:

I totally agree with you.  I won't wade above ankles in the ocean and not fond of lakes either.  I can't see the bottom I"m not interested.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 25 Rosalie and Emmett's Day

Ok what does until the last dog died mean!  I never heard of it. Lovely wedding and even a lovelier ring. 



Author's Response:

"The last dog died" means simply the very last to do what every was being talked about.  Just an old expression.

Thank god I've got the weddings over with.  They are hard to write and do them right.  I spent more time hunting for images to offer for the 3 weddings than it took to write the chapters.  :D

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Four Weeks Later

Good chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :D

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Four Weeks Later

Probably because of how much in love they all are with their mates, Edward, Jasper and Emmett haven't really grasped the big picture quite yet, right? They will, in time, I'm sure come to be a bit more aware of who exactly it is that they fell in love with and married!I suppose Edward, being a writer was more attuned to the differences and perhaps the supernatural. I always thought writers are more open-minded about most things!



Author's Response:

Yes, I think you've hit the nail on the head.  Emmett thought it was really cool that his girlfriend was a Witch, and Jasper accepted it, then Edward had to really think about it, but realized he loved her and that was that!  In one of the later chapters, it really comes home to Edward.  He is just begining to understand.

I always enjoy your comments.  You're so understanding of what I'm writing.  I'm sure you're going to love the next chapters a great deal.  I just got chapter 30, the Epilogue off to my "team" and a great deal happens before it's all over.  :D

Thank you again for your support.  I'm going to be greedy and ask if you've been reading my trilogy Parapsychology 101, Keeper of the Flame, and Carrying the Torch?  You'd probably enjoy those.  I honestly can't remember if you've ever said anything about those.  If you like the Supernatural you'll like those.

Gotta run, again. Thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Four Weeks Later

:) 



Author's Response:

;)  <3

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 23

So happy for them ;-) even if it was a crazy begening 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Realizations

Awww yay!! He came back & asked her to merry him X)



Author's Response:

:)   :)

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told

oh no...i really hope Edward is not walking away from Bella, guss ILL find out in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes!  :)

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 - And Then, There Was One

Oh dear, sisters are losing the powers. 0_o



Author's Response:

This happens in fairy tales all the time with the magically inclined loosing their powers if they fall in love, or have sex.  Don't dispare they don't really loose their powers, they're just going to be more "human".

Thanks again. 

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 11 Revelations

I think Edward just might get lucky! X-D



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved the chapter and i trying to follow each chapter with your facebook page for this story so i get a visuals. Loved the Girls outfits in this chapter. And the answer to a previous about the story Edward FBI agent. I have to read those once i'm caought up on this one ;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your feed back!  It pleases me that you're enjoying this story, thought I have to confess that "romance" in not my thing.  I have to work at it very hard.  :(

Looking forward to your action to the FB page too.  This much involvement with this type of romance is something very new for me.  

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

I really enjoyed the back story on the sisters. 



Author's Response:

thank you!  I always want to understand characters in stories, you know what motivates them.  :D

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 First Date Part 2

Yes I would say that went well too :) I loved it when Edward and Bella danced ;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love that they are getting along so well. And is nice to see the Girls as sisters for a change.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I like to try and mix rolls up a bit.  Don't always succeed once the story starts.  The characters usually wind up with a mind of their own.  LOL.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

Seems like Bella turned up her mental magic in this chapter LOL 



Author's Response:

Yes she did.  :)  Hope you continue to read.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love that she was sitting on the porch ;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

WOW! I loved it! Witches, Ley lin, Palm and card reading! This is going to be an interesting story to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  It gets a bit more interesting, I hope.  Looking forward to more of your comments.

If you like this one, I just bet that if you haven't already read, Edward Cullen, FBI Special Agent and Psychic and it's sequel Edward Cullen & Friends - Down on the Bayou, you'd like it more cause there are more things that go "bump in the night" in those two.  :D  Please let me know.

See you next chapters.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 25 Rosalie and Emmett's Day

Now all the Swan sisters are married and quite beautifully so! It's great that Angela has met her forever in the process! It all has sounded so romantic, too!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  To be very honest it was so very hard to write those/these three chapters.  I honestly think I spend more time looking for pictures than I did on the writing.  Yes Angela and Victor - they were not planed.  I'm suspecting they may have more to say at some point.

I will say again, that Romance is not my thing.  Always been very practical.  *smiles* 

I may have a couple of mild surprises before I put this group to rest.  *grin*

See you next chapter and my Friend, thank you so much for your very welcome continued support.  Means a great deal to this ole woman.

Hard Hugs

Carol/Dinia

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 25 Rosalie and Emmett's Day

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank ye Mate!

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 25 Rosalie and Emmett's Day

:) 



Author's Response:

:')  8']  <3

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 25 Rosalie and Emmett's Day

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 25 Rosalie and Emmett's Day

Fun chapter! Great details! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  You have no idea how hard I looked for those pictures that I have on the Facebook page so I could describe the three weddings.  I have never had to work so hard to get 3 chapters done.  LOL.

Thanks for sticking with me

Hope you'll read other things I've written - Romance is not really my things.

May I suggest that you read:  http://www.twcslibrary.net/viewstory.php?sid=9472&chapter=1

 and  the sequel:  http://www.twcslibrary.net/viewstory.php?sid=9940&chapter=1

I would really like to know what you think of those.  

See you next time

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 24 Alice and Jasper's Day

I love me some pink but too much is nauseating.  I can see Alice over doing though. Roses weddings up next?



Author's Response:

Yeah me too but we all know Alice can be a little nauseating too.  As for Rose's wedding, I give you a clue, roses are red...

Thanks for reading and for review.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 24 Alice and Jasper's Day

Marvellous chapter to a great story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Having fun with this part.

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2015 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 24 Alice and Jasper's Day

Great chapter. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Two down and one to go.  LOL.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 24 Alice and Jasper's Day

Good chapter  



Author's Response:

Thank you!

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 24 Alice and Jasper's Day

I can only imagine how Angela felt about all that pink! It's not my favorite color, either, but what the heck, it's the bride's day, after all! Angela must be relieved to hace only one more weddig to get through, before she can relax and enjoy Victor!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Weddings and sex are not my thing to write about but that seems to be what the readership wants.  Occult and metaphysical things are my bread and butter!  I'm so happy you're sticking with me.

See you next week. 

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 24 Alice and Jasper's Day

:) 



Author's Response:

;)  :)  <3

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2015 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

I love the sisters letting the air out of Mike newtons ballon and the background on the girls life. Thanks. 



Author's Response:

thank you!  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well.  Looking forward to what you have to say.  :D

Big Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 23

Story moving along perfectly.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yes it is.  Only 2 or 3 more chpters ( unless I get inspired to add a couple more :)   )

See you then.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Weather Warnings

Beautiflly dine, the turn in the story as well as the addition.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  We have 2 and possibly 3 more weddings to go as well as honeymoons on the beaches of Hawaii.

Thanks for being here.

See you enxt week?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved the chapter! It was a really fun read! 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.  Have you been to the Facebook page for the story and looked at the actors I've chosen for the characters?  All the wedding day festivites are there as well as the attire.

The next two chapters deal with the wedding of other two sisters.

See you then!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 23

How exciting and what an honor for Bella and Edward to be married by the Nui! Plus, Angela has met her future, if she consents to marry Victor Kamamalu! How convenient to have a mother who envisions your future bride! Well, one bride down and two to go, and all three Swan sisters will be wed!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  

Yes we have two sisters left to go, and maybe even Angela's.  Have you been to the facebook page for this story.  Please do.  You'll love the actors I've chosen for the characters, and the wedding attire.

See you next chapters.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 



Author's Response:

:)   :)  :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Weather Warnings

I love it!! I am dying for more!! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I finally got over my writers block.  They're talking loud and clear now.  :D

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Weather Warnings

Awesome!  Loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Weather Warnings

Great chapter  



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Weather Warnings

:) 



Author's Response:

;)  :)  <3

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