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Reviewer: ann ly Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 15-Grandma Marie

Cuteness overload, lovely!

 

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 15-Grandma Marie

hope you come back soon

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 13-Art

Very good



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. It is a gift to see that some one has left few words in appreciation.

Aria.

Reviewer: frenzy4edward Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2015 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 11-Surprise

Such a cute story!!!! Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 11-Surprise

Loved it update soon 

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 11-Surprise

So so sweet! I'm loving this story! Thank you so much for taking the time to write for us!!!! *.*

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 11-Surprise

awwww she gave it to her daddy :) she has a secret admire 

Reviewer: vaganski vrh Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 11-Surprise

ummm,

Edw?

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 11-Surprise

Sad but cute

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 11-Surprise

     I bet it was Edward! So very sweet!  Sneeky little thing!  Does Bella know Edward?  She doesn't say anything about him.  Is he still off to himself alot? 

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 10-Special day.

Aww God so sad

Reviewer: Pox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 10-Special day.

 

Reviewer: brebre123h Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 10-Special day.

Love it another chapter please 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 10-Special day.

soon sweet

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 9-Friends.

looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 7-Only child syndrom

this is so cute 

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8-wish mommy would come.....

Go Edward haha, that'll teach those cows!

xoxox



Author's Response:

You caught that didn't you. I wonder if it was not obvious....thank you for all your lovely questions and comments.

Aria.

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 7-Only child syndrom

Oh snap lol he wants the duck back!

xoxox



Author's Response:

Eithere it is the duck or the girl lol.

Aria.

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 6-Red duck

I wonder how she got the duck lol

xoxox



Author's Response:

I know how she got it, I don't know how to put it here may be in future you will know how she got it.

Aria.

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 4-Love, Why does our boy have a girl name?

That is pretty funny lol

good thing the name isn't set in stone till it's written down haha

xoxox



Author's Response:

Carlisle will be horrified won't he....

Aria.

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 3-Renee, that brat is disturbing my baby.

I only have two problems with this chapter... First off, they would NEVER allow another mother to hold someone else's baby, and second all babies are born with blue eyes and they change colour over the next few weeks or even months....

apart from that I found Charlie very funny!!!

xoxox



Author's Response:

Okey I know you are right but this is fiction and I wanted to do an exception. Well babies are bone with blue eyes but some have really dark, eyes almost black and there is this color called lipochine or something I'm not exactly sure but yeah when you have it you get green eyes. Once again fiction my friend :o)

Aria.

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 2-Carly Antonia Cullen

Gotta love it! High blood pressure is a bitch, especially when a hospital is too stupid to not monitor it, lost my nephew because they refused to do a c-section cause they were trialing midwives. 

Glad its a boy ;P

xoxox



Author's Response:

Ah! I'm sorry to here that. You guys can sue the hospital can't you?

Aria.

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1-Baby Bella.

Looks great :D

xoxox



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Aria.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 8-wish mommy would come.....

Looks like Edward didn't approve of those girls making Bella feel bad



Author's Response:

You caught that didn't you? I thought you missed his sneaky ass sitting alone minding his own business....

Aria.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 8-wish mommy would come.....

  Poor Bella loosing her mother at such a young age.  It breaks my heart.  Edward is already defending Bella isn't he?  This story is wonderful!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words. I hope I won't dissapoint in the future too

Aria.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 8-wish mommy would come.....

Funny, she showed them!  LOL



Author's Response:

You might want to rethink again, she has already gone home so who did actually cut the hair?

Aria.

Reviewer: brebre123h Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 8-wish mommy would come.....

This is great another chapter please please 



Author's Response:

Lol, I can't promise but I'll try my best to post one more today.

Aria.

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 8-wish mommy would come.....

Omg. I love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Happy to here it.

Aria.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 8-wish mommy would come.....

Oh Renee passed away, that's sad..

Author's Response:

I'm pretty upset about it too but it was necessary evil.

Aria.

Reviewer: brebre123h Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 7-Only child syndrom

Ain't no mistakes but please another  chapter 



Author's Response:

Lol! you are giving me a complex. Just joking. Let me see what I can do hmmmm.....

Aria.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 6-Red duck

AWWW Eddie let Bella have his red ducky!  So sweet!  So maybe Edward will always have a softspot for Bella?



Author's Response:

That boy is too arrogant for his good, I think you may be right but I can't tell you if he will have a softspot for her or not.

Aria.

Reviewer: brebre123h Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 6-Red duck

Great chapter another one please 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and the next chapter is there.

Aria.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 6-Red duck

She got his toy

Author's Response:

I can't make up mind about it, whether he gave it or she stole it hmmmm....

Aria.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 6-Red duck

I love this chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Aria.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 5-Bella's first day on Day care.

Wonder who the other kids are



Author's Response:

Sorry, there will be other kids as they grow up, hope you will like them.

Aria.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 4-Love, Why does our boy have a girl name?

Loving it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like this.

Aria.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 3-Renee, that brat is disturbing my baby.

I like Bella already recognizing Carly lol voice



Author's Response:

That girl is smart what can I say (snickers)

Aria.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 2-Carly Antonia Cullen

Can't wait to read Esme reaction 



Author's Response:

You will see how she reacts as the story progress. lol

Aria.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1-Baby Bella.

I like it. Keep writing 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll try my best to update soon.

Aria.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 5-Bella's first day on Day care.

     I wonder who the babies are that bella will meet?  I just love this please update soon!



Author's Response:

I didn't mentioned the other babies cause I want them to grow up soon.

Aria.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 5-Bella's first day on Day care.

I wonder if Esme will be dropping little Eddie off also

Author's Response:

she is going to pick him up.

Aria.

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 2-Carly Antonia Cullen

Well maybe 34th week? 14th is just into the second trimester and no child would survive. I'll gloss over that and enjoy your story anyway. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Oooops! Did I say 14? It was suppose to be 40 I'll go and change it. Thank you for pointing out.

Aria.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 4-Love, Why does our boy have a girl name?

AGAIN, PRICELESS.  I love this story too.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'll try my best to update soon.

Aria.

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 4-Love, Why does our boy have a girl name?

Lol.
Angst you say? Yett its started off so funny.
We'll see how much you break my heart :-)

Oh and spell check, career not carrier. Keep up the good work and give me MORE!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for pointing out the mistakes. I really didn't have any idea about being funny when I wrote this. It is actually a romantic  fluff in my head, let's see though how it will unravel.

Aria.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 4-Love, Why does our boy have a girl name?

Yes she will be changing his name

Author's Response:

Yes of course, I don't think Carlisle will like it lol

Aria.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3-Renee, that brat is disturbing my baby.

Oh Renee she is such a sweetheart

Author's Response:

Yup she is, I love her too.

Aria.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 4-Love, Why does our boy have a girl name?

Very good

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you think so.

Aria.

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 3-Renee, that brat is disturbing my baby.

Lol Charlie. I hope you keep 4hem together (no divorce) they seem cute together.
And don't stop there, in fact uplaod the whole story lol.
Just the title alone brings out the romantic in me.

Author's Response:

Promise no divorce, but angst ahead, can't help it, I feel bad but it is necessary. I'm really sorry.

Aria.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3-Renee, that brat is disturbing my baby.

Oh, please change his name!  LOL



Author's Response:

Of course I will lol

Aria.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 2-Carly Antonia Cullen

LOL, a boy!!!



Author's Response:

He....he....Esme is kinda hilarious, I know.

Aria.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 2-Carly Antonia Cullen

Alright the baby is born ? (edward)

Author's Response:

All right I'm going to post the next chapter may be two chapters

Aria.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1-Baby Bella.

Loving the start of this, can not wait to meet Edward

Author's Response:

Hope you loved meeting him :o)

Aria.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1-Baby Bella.

So far I am liking this.  Never read a story from the beginning of Bella's birth.



Author's Response:

Thank you! This story hadn't been tweaked yet. I wanted to see how the readers will respond. Next is some one you like....

Aria.

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