Date: 04 Aug 2017 12:16 AM Title: CHAPTER 25 SHE’S ELECTRIC
I just read your comments about possibly doing an Oliver Queen/Bella pairing, and I can't wait to read that one. I adore all your stories. Even the ones with pairings that I wouldn't have looked for on my own, I find I still end up really just loving your story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 31 May 2015 11:25 PM Title: CHAPTER 16 DROPPING IN LIKE FLIES
This is in response to your author note...you mentioned that you were going back and changing the narrative to third person; you need to review chapters 1-4, especially chapter 3...I'm sorry but it's a hot mess! It switches between first and third person randomly and all the characters are Bella. I love your stories...seriously, I'm going through and reading them all!
PS - I think POV is fine ;-)