Date: 11 Jul 2018 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love it and good job
Date: 20 Mar 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
thank you so much for sharing this WICKEDLY AWESOME!!! little story with us ;D
Date: 18 Nov 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow.. loved this story! !!!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved your story!
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love you guys thanks much for another wonderful story you make me happy
Date: 26 Dec 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
Swweet ending. TY for writing and sharing ladies.
Date: 26 Dec 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad they are talking things out.
Date: 26 Dec 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
what a wonderful christmas.
Date: 25 Dec 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
It was a pretty tough story, in spots, but well worth the angst, to get to the happy ever after. You guys did great! Have a wonderful holiday and new year!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
He finally got it all out and maybe now can work to put it in the past where it belongs. They had a really nice first date, on New Year's Eve. Looks to me like they will have a great new year!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
The Swans are such good caring people, it's nice that Edward has come to recognize that. It's even better that he and Bella are slowly growing closer. It was a sign of how tenderhearted he really is, that it shook him at his mom reliquishing all rights to Morgan.
Date: 25 Dec 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
The conversation between Edward and Renee almost made me cry. This will definitely be a Christmas to remember, for everyone!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
It was a real revelation to Edward spending the day with Bella and Morgan, then Renee and a bit with Charlie. It sure touched his heart to find out how Bella treasured his long ago gifts.
Date: 25 Dec 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm really happy for Edward and Morgan both, they deserve a break, if anyone does! What a stroke of luck that Aro saved Edward's pay for him. Those rotten people supposed to be parents would have blown it on booze! I wish Charlie and Renee could be the loving parents Morgan craves.
Date: 25 Dec 2014 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yes, Morgan is a doll and has been telling them all that Edward and Bella would be friends and get married. They should have listened! That where babies come from, was hilarious and very sweet, also.
Date: 25 Dec 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
May we please have a hideously painful death for James? Throw in Jake too and I'll be thrilled! Poor little battered Bella, she's suffered so much at the hands of that bastard! Human scum is what he is!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
I want so much to smack Edward, spirit or n ot! How can he keep protecting James and Jacob when they murdered Riley and tried to kill him too? With Charlie on the trail, maybe now they will find him!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
This sounds like it may not be fixable and that would be heartbreaking! Bella's illustration of broken crockery was spot on!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think Bella's brother abused her and that's probably why Charlie and Renee adopted her. She's had as bad a time as Edward had when he was a kid, no doubt about that! It sounds a bit more hopeful since he's seen Alice again.
Date: 25 Dec 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ghost, spirit or whatever, I'm about ready to smack him upside his stupid head! How could he be so cruel when all she's trying to do is help him? I hope he listens to Alice's warning and saves Bella from being killed!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
Good to know there is not going to be a funeral in Edward's immediate future. It was a stroke of genius for Bella to sort of buy Morgan from her mom. The more I read about their shared past the more I want to know! This getting really good!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
It is kind of like Ghost, where only one person could see him. As for why Bella can see him, I would imagine it's whatever causes her to take those pills. She must be psychicor something. This doesn't look good for Edward, how are things going to turn out well if he's dead?
Date: 25 Dec 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
He sure sounds like a hardass in this story and it kind of hurts to read him badmouthing Bella the way he does. Right now he's got a lot more problems than bad attitude. If those thugs he called friend haven't killed him, I'll be flat amazed! What about little Morgan now, is what worries me!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sure isn't the usual fluffy, happy Christmas story, is it? These people have had a tough life, and I admire Edward for wanting to save his sister from more of the same. It's a shame he thinks he must resort to criminal activity to achieve that goal! That will just end up with him in jail if things go south!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great job
Date: 24 Dec 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
It was perfect! Thank you for taking the time to write & share. Happy Holidays!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
:) loved this story. Merry Christmas to you too
Date: 24 Dec 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
What a wonderful wrap up to this story! It truly touched my heart that Edward changed his name to Swan. I think that it the first time I have read this in a story and I really love it!
Do you guys post your stories on any other site besides TWCS. It seems that this site no longer works to download stories from fanfictiondownloader.....
Date: 24 Dec 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Fabulous holiday story! Loved it! Merry Christmas! :o)
Date: 24 Dec 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love the story. Merry Christmas!!!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
BRAVO!!!! You have done it again!!!! Thank you for this wonderful story!!! Merry Christmas to both of you and a Happy New Year!!!!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
I loved it that was very special. I'm glad he talked to her telling her how he was feeling
Date: 24 Dec 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
THAT WAS SO SWEET,I CANT BELIEVE ONLY ONE MORE CHAPTER LEFT!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
very nice ending. i'm sorry i ever doubted you guys and even thought Edward was dead. i should have known that, even through all the angst, you would give me a HEA. thanks very much for this story!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
He gets it all I love the swans
Date: 23 Dec 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
This is the kind of holiday story I really enjoy! One that turns out well. Thanks!
Date: 23 Dec 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Such a warm touchy feel good story..... Love happy endings. Looking forward to next chapter and epi, but not end of the story. Thank you! :o)
Date: 22 Dec 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOVE IT! AND TODAY PLZ...
Date: 22 Dec 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 22 Dec 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Everybody got what they deserved. I would have hope for Ed and Elizabeth, but I know too many people for whom that life is all they wanted. I'm glad that Bella, Renee, Charlie, Morgan, and Edward all have each other!
Date: 22 Dec 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
Renee really has a tough job. Glad they were able to get some shopping done.
Date: 22 Dec 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 21 Dec 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
was Charlie playing the part of Santa or when Bella went to the bathroom she snuck and talked with santa?? It is the small things that make Christmas special
Date: 21 Dec 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ok so i like Edward better now. lol I love this Charlie and Renee!!!
Date: 21 Dec 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
Nice..... :o)
Date: 21 Dec 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
WHEN ARE EDWARD AND BELLA GETTING TOGETHER?
Date: 20 Dec 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Morgan is such a sweet girl. I like that Edward wants to pay his way. Very nice they are letting E stay there too. That was really nice of Aro too.
Date: 20 Dec 2014 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
good riddance to Ed Sr. and Elizabeth! I'm glad they're gone, even if the price was all of Edward's savings. I knew Renee and Charlie would offer Edward a place. I'm really happy to see this all working out! it's a good story for this time of year! or any time, actually...
Date: 20 Dec 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
The Swans know he has a good heart and care about him because Bella does and now that they know he is a good guy.
Date: 19 Dec 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
LOVE THIS SO MUCH, THANK YOU
Date: 19 Dec 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Morgan is just too cute. Glad Charlie is helping E out
Date: 19 Dec 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! Great story! How sweet is that Morgan. Glad Edward finally pulled his head out.... :o) Next...
Date: 19 Dec 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank Got they're all better now. Looks like everything will work out....I do love Morgan. Kids have no filter. They haven't learned that yet. It's too bad anyone has to learn to have that filter.....
Date: 19 Dec 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love Morgan she is adorable I have had that talk with my 6 year old still not sure how that worked out lol.
Date: 19 Dec 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 9
IS THIS BASED ON THE MOVIE WITH REESE AND PAUL RUDD?
Author's Response:
No, I've never seen the movie you're speaking of. The only movie we said it had a likeness to was Ghost, because Edward was able to communicate with someone. I have no idea what movie you're speaking of, but I may have to check it out.
Date: 18 Dec 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
Now they just have to find James and Jake so they can be punished for what they did! I didn't guess about Riley and Edward being mixed up, but it is very clever of you to do that. I know Bella will eventually be OK. I trust in your promise of a HEA.
Date: 18 Dec 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
That was a cool twist about the wallets. Poor Bella did end up getting hurt. What did Charlie do to force Edward back into his body??
Date: 18 Dec 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
Another great chapter post soon
Date: 18 Dec 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Defintely different. Guessing James and Jake are the snitches to Aro? Hope they pay dearly
Date: 18 Dec 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love this story
Date: 18 Dec 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am with you even if I would still like to kick E in the head.
Date: 18 Dec 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
He still has done enough to redeem himself. I hope Bella sticks to her guns about him and gives mike a try if only for Edward to truly appreciate what he did.
Date: 18 Dec 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
He is going to have to rat out James and Jacob, before one of them or both of them hurt Bella!!!
Date: 17 Dec 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
So glad they believe her now and Edward gets what he has to figure out how to make her his.
Date: 17 Dec 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
aaaaaaaaawwwwwwww i love it! they finally kiss :)
Date: 17 Dec 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
I STILL DONT UNDERSTAND WHY ONLY BELLA CAN SEE HIM!
Date: 17 Dec 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I don't think he is in a hospital somewhere. I don't know where his body is but that flashback he had has to mean something! good mystery!
Date: 17 Dec 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
Post soon
Date: 17 Dec 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well Im glad Charlie believes her.
Date: 17 Dec 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wowsers. hell of a back story. Wonder what Renee will say
Date: 17 Dec 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like they both had crappy growing up times. But doesn't excuse his assholeishness
Date: 17 Dec 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
BELLAS LIFE HAS BEEN HORRIBLE,I HOPE THINGS GET BETTER SOON.
Date: 17 Dec 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sad story for B. I am glad she told him off.
Date: 17 Dec 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Don't give in Bella. He was so hurtful way too often. He is James in another body.
Date: 17 Dec 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
I certainly hope you are not going to get mad when at the end of this story, I still hate Edward. He is beyond mean to her.. Way beyond.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 16 Dec 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
She has so much pain how will she move on from that. I think Renee and Charlie love and believe in Bella .
Date: 16 Dec 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Edward is right, that they will think she is delusional. I hope not, but most people will react like that!
I have noticed that in a lot of your stories, Bella is severly abused. There is a lot of violence associated with that.....makes me think that you know about this kind of thing on a personal level. Sorry, j/s
Date: 16 Dec 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is such a great story! Incredibly sad, but ohhhh, so very compelling!
Date: 16 Dec 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
GOD I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR AMAZING, THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US! LOVE YA.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
James is Bella's brother and Jake is just an ass.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
He is getting it love Alice
Date: 16 Dec 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 16 Dec 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
James is Bella's brother who hurt her.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
This chapter had me choking up
Date: 15 Dec 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, I must say this is perhaps the most compelling story I ever recall reading! There are enumeral stories I have loved and followed, and read otime and time again. However this story OMG, it is beyond awesome! Just saying! The emotions you invoke in the readers is amazing!
I'm thinking James is her brother!
Date: 15 Dec 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
her brother!