Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
Another awesome chapter. Lol for overprotective E
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sounds like an awesome holiday
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Think it was a reasonable first meeting
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aww Em is such a cutie. Sounds like a good plan for meeting the parents.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well you know the egg and sperm donor would eventually show up.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Nice that Jasper is taking time to get to know him.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ugh men like creepy Aro are always around.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Em is such a trip.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sounds like the perfect summer.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Aww little Em has his first crush.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Lol what a way to find out.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awww Em is such a sweet little bro. Love that the fans sent her the link.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Pooh Em is a schemer. Go Em.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aww for Alice and Rose in B's life.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
Glad Charlie allowed E to talk to him.
Date: 13 Dec 2019 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh Emmett. Silly kid. Hope E can get her back
Date: 28 Nov 2018 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved it all of it so sweet
Date: 29 Dec 2015 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
Very cute story! !
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reading! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 04 Oct 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
excellent story i can't wait for the sequel ;) thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D
Author's Response:
We're so glad you enjoyed it. Being that we're both Southern ourselves, it was so much fun to write some southern characters. It almost felt in some ways like writing about home. We'll definitely be working on the sequel, but it will be after we finish up Witness Seclusion. Thanks so much for reading and letting us know you enjoyed it. It's great to see people still enjoying our work. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 18 Aug 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awe. Sugary sweet and I loved it!
Author's Response:
Yay! We're so glad you enjoyed it. I'm a fan of fluff so this story was pure joy for me to write. Thanks so much for reading! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 19 Jul 2015 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
it was a wonderful story and I would love more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! We will be doing a sequel since these characters have so much more to say and do. :) We're so happy you enjoyed the story and hope you join us when we start posting again. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 28 Jun 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for sharing
Author's Response:
It was our pleasure. We loved writing this story and sharing these characters. We're looking forward to sharing the sequel. ;) Thanks so much for reading!!! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 17 Jun 2015 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great Story. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! And we so appreciate that you took the time to stop in and let us know, it means so very much :)
Fyre
Date: 01 Jun 2015 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
This was a very sweet story and I can't wait for the sequel. Love Emmett and Rose!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. We love Emmett and Rose too... much more than we ever expected when we started. We're definitely looking forward to the sequel and hope everyone likes it. Thanks so much for reading and for the review! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 30 May 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
good
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for following us on this journey and your support. We hope to see you when the sequel starts. :) XOXO
Lissa
Date: 30 May 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ringing in a new year, full of hopes and plans and family! Great way to tie up this part of the story, and I'm looking forward eagerly to the sequel!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you plan to follow us and these characters. We have some big plans for them and we hope you guys like it. ;) We love them way too much to say goodbye forever yet. Lol. Thanks so much for reading and for the support you've given us. We're looking forward to seeing you when we start the sequel. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 30 May 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading the sequel
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. We've enjoyed having your support. I'm looking forward to the sequel too and am so happy you plan to read it. :) XOXO
Lissa
Date: 17 May 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really enjoyed reading this whole story tonight. Sweet.
Author's Response:
Awww we're so glad that you read and enjoyed it and even more so that you decided to let us know. There's one more chapter to post and we'll hit the complete button for this one. Thanks so much for your kind words :)
Fyre
Date: 16 May 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yes, I can see you are winding down and I will miss these guys when you come to the end. That was a really great Thanksgiving, by the way! See you next time!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much and yes we only have one more to go, but don't worry, we intend to move thesee guys up a few years and pick them back up to see how everything plays out. We intend to wait until it's written to start posting though, so posts will be weekly or less!! See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 16 May 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
:)
Author's Response:
I can always count on your smiles to brighten our day. Thank you :)
Fyre
Date: 16 May 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
good
Author's Response:
Yayyy, so happy you liked it! See you next time for the final chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 02 May 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Kind of sad to hear only two more chapters, but I guess all good things must come to an end!The get together with Carlisle and Esme went better than I thought it might. I suppose they could really be ready to clean up their lives. The furure is looking pretty good for all of them!
Date: 18 Apr 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh yay! Good to hear there will be a sequel to Smoke, I've enjoyed these characters , too and look forward to where their lives are headed! I hope the guys are not too disappointed when their parents show up. Emmett's campaign to win Rose was darling, and pretty romantic, considering his age.
Author's Response:
Emmett did do good, who could ever resist that? Yay for the sequel. We have much more in store for these characters, we just need to move a little into the future to implient those ideas. We'll have it written before we start posting so we can bring it to you weekly! Thanks so much for your kind words, we appreciate it so much! See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 18 Apr 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
:)
Author's Response:
:) Thank you sooooo much for ALL of your reviews!!! See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 18 Apr 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
How sweet!
Author's Response:
Thanks you! Emmett is a doll and who could say no to that? We so appreciate you taking the time to leave us a though. See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 18 Apr 2015 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
good
Author's Response:
Thanks you so much for reading and leaving us some love. We appreciate it so much! See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 06 Apr 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
children.
Author's Response:
Lol. They are. Thank you so much for all the feedback! I've really enjoyed your reviews. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
it is a sweet story.. Does not seem finished.
Author's Response:
Aw thank you. This story is pretty much intended to just to be a sweet, feel good story. I'm so glad you seem to be enjoying it. We definitely have a bit to go before we wrap it up. ;) XOXO
Lissa
Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
the line she delivers is I got mixed up and scared because of how she loved her mother. I think, well I think it is she got mad that he used something like that to get close to her. Not mixed up and scared..
the rest of the chapter is great. Of course Emmett has a crush.
Author's Response:
I'm sure Bella had tons of mixed emotions, but mad was definitely up there. And yep, Em has a big ol' crush. Lol. Thanks! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
it worked.
Author's Response:
It did! Yay! Good job Em. Lol. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
he recorded it. Em trying to make it better for his bud.
Author's Response:
He loves his brother and definitely has his heart in the right place trying to make things better. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 05 Apr 2015 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
good
Author's Response:
Thank you! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 05 Apr 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
Sure, since things are goping along so well, there has to be a fly in the ointment. Chances are, Edward and Emmette's parents are going to try to stir up trouble. I'm counting on the bond the guys and Bella have being strong enough to make it through.
Author's Response:
We'll see. I definitely don't see Edward letting anyone get close enough to hurt Emmett or Bella, but you never know what's going to happen. We'll find out, though. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for the review! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 04 Apr 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks bb! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 11
good
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! We're glad you're enjoying it. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 21 Mar 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Having time to talk to Jasper has opened some lines of thought to Edward. Bella was pretty persuasive telling him about how she wants to help him better himself. To help her man realize his dreams would make her really happy!
Author's Response:
It would make her so happy. She loves him and wants him to have everything he's ever wanted. Let's hope he goes for it. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving us your thoughts. We appreciate them more than you can imagine. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 21 Mar 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Debslmac!!! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 01 Mar 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for all of your support. It really means a lot!!
Fyre
Date: 28 Feb 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
wonder what he'll end up doing
Author's Response:
I know! we def have some ideas for him. Let's see how all of this plays out. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Fyre
Date: 28 Feb 2015 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
It sounds to me like Edward needs some more schooling or training of some kind to get a better job. It might make Bella happy to have him around more, but this guy obviously needs to pull his own weight. It will be interesting to see what the future holds for them.
Author's Response:
He does need to make a decision and go for it. He wanted to be with her and didn't consider what he might do or hopw he would feel not pulling his weight. Definitely something for him to work on and I think he'll make some choices coming up soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter, we appreciate the support so much!
Fyre
Date: 14 Feb 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Typical! Emmett wanted to impress Rose, thus he makes a mistake and ticks her off! I figured it wouldn't be a hard sell to get Em to move to Nashville. Looking forward to chapter ten! Oh yes, waiting anxiously for the next Witness Seclusion, also!
Author's Response:
The next chapter is with the Beta. I'm guessing if Rose hadn't been there it might have been harder to persuade Emmett. Lol. But he has no family there other than his brother and I would imagine there's been negative talk and stuff stemming from his parents arrest so a fresh start might sound good. Especially when there's Bella and a cute blond. ;) Poor guy def didn't make the best impression with Rose, but he's sweet and adorable so how long can she really resist him? Lol.
Witness Seclusion cahp 2 is with the Beta so hopefully it will be up soon.
Thanks so much for reading or work! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 14 Feb 2015 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you dearest! We are so beyond thankful for your support! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 14 Feb 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
poor em. that didn't quite work out for him =)
Author's Response:
I know. Poor boy. He didn't mean to upset Rose. Lol. At least he's sweet and cute. Surely that will win her over eventually. ;) Thanks!!! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 01 Feb 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
It will be great to see their future unfold, so I'm happy with whatever you do, continue or sequel! Looking forward to whatever you have on deck!
Author's Response:
It's a tough decision. We just KNOW these characters have so much more to say and do. ;) Thank you so much for the support. It means the world. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 01 Feb 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
:):)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your constant support! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 01 Feb 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
glad your continuing :)
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the support! These characters have so much more to say. ;) XOXO
Lissa
Date: 23 Jan 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
lol . . . e almost gave em a little payback without even realizing it
Author's Response:
He really did. Emmett has a huge crush and his poor brother is clueless. Lol. Maybe Bella took all his brains in the truck earlier. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for the review!!! XOXO
~Lissa
Date: 23 Jan 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! Mwah! Mwah! Mwah! XOXO
~Lissa
Date: 23 Jan 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
Things have sure changed for the better, for Edward, anyway. For Emmett too, since his b rother isn't upset at what his little brother did! It's funny that Edward is so wrapped up in having Bella back in his arms, that he can't figure out why Em is getting all dolled up! It will probably come to him soon!
Author's Response:
Edward really was clueless about Em's little crush. Lol. Overall both of the guys have had a good day I think. ;) Hopefully they'll have a good summer too. Thank you so much for reading and for the review! XOXO
~Lissa
Date: 14 Jan 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm thinking , if Edward is smart, he'll thank Em for doing what he did, imnstead of giving him what for! Again, if he's smart, he will listen to Bella first, then talk! Following this advice will most likely gain him his heart's desire!
Author's Response:
Very good points! I'm sure it was very lucky for Emmett that Bella showed up before Edward could make it home. Lol. Now we just have to hope their talk goes well. I'm sure that how things go with them will go a long way in how he feels about what Emmett did. Thanks so much for reading and for your review. I love it!!! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 14 Jan 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
cant wait to see !!!!! lemons,lemons i hope to seee . lol
Author's Response:
Hmmm... that's a possibility. We shall see. ;) Thanks so much for reading and for the review. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 14 Jan 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
:):)
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! <3 XOXO
Lissa
Date: 14 Jan 2015 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
good. lucky timing for em
Author's Response:
Yes very lucky timing. Lol. Thank you so much for reading and for the review. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
good :)
Author's Response:
Awe thank you for giving it a try and for letting us know your thoughts. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
hope his plan works but that is going to be pretty embarrassing for e :)
Author's Response:
It was a good plan, but no doubt Edward won't be too thrilled to find out about it. Lol. Thank you so much for reading and we appreciate your reviews. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
good that alice is there for b and to push her along.
rose . . . same age, same situation as em . . . already making a connection between the two
Author's Response:
Alice is a good friend and Bella is lucky they met. And that is really good thinking about Emmett and Rose. We will have to see where the future takes them. ;) XOXO
Lissa
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
thhinking the message just might help e a bit. maybe even charlie - seems like he can empathize with having to raise a kid on your own
Author's Response:
It just might. Charlie is a good judge of character and I'm sure it will mean a lot to him that Edward was man enough to come to him like he did. Thank you so much for reading! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
good
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 10 Jan 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love this story! I just found it recommended by another story and decided I would check it out. So glad I did. Thanks
Author's Response:
Awe I'm so thrilled to know you're enjoying it. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you gave it a try too. Can I ask which story you found us from? I'd love to know. Thanks so much for reading and for the review. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 08 Jan 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
I LOVE THIS STORY UPDATE SOON
Author's Response:
Aww thanks so much!!! We won't keep you waiting too long. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for the review!!! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Alice and Rose sure have Bella's back! Em was pretty brave to make that video, so I hope Edward won't give him hell for it! Probably not, since it seems to have served it's purpose!
Author's Response:
It was very brave to make that video. Let's hope for Emmett's sake Bella makes it there before Edward finds out about the video. Lol. Alice and Rose are like her family now and they are good people. Thanks for reading and for the review. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh Emmet what are you doing whatever it is I'm sure it will be hilarious
Author's Response:
Let's hope whatever it is makes things better, not worse. ;) Thank you for reading and for your review. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I see where Emmett is going with this one! He must be planning to send that awful video to Bella so she can see how much Edward is missing her! Hope it works out!
Author's Response:
Maybe? ;) Let's just hope whatever he has planned helps to make things better instead of worse. Thank you so much for reading. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 29 Dec 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
OH PLZ UPDATE SOONNN..... LOVE THIS STORY
Author's Response:
Aww you're so sweet. We definitely won't keep you waiting too long. Thanks so much for reading! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
:):)
Author's Response:
Thanks as always. You're so good to us. :) XOXO
Lissa
Date: 27 Dec 2014 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love the story!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much. We're so glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for giving it a try and for the review. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 25 Dec 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad she told Alice what transpired between her and Edward, and about Emmett's hurtful lie. It made an impression on her that Edward went to her dad. I hope she makes another trip home, soon!
Author's Response:
I'm sure she's trying to go as fast as she can. And now we see why it upset her so much. Thanls so much, one more time. We'll see you next week :)
Fyre
Date: 25 Dec 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
It was pretty smart of Edward to go to Bella's dad and lay out the whole story, minus the mind-blowing sex, of course. The truth about Edward taking care of Emmett is just as affecting as Em's lie about having cancer, in my book. Bee interesting to see if the gesture works for Edward!
Author's Response:
Well letr''s hope it does and Charlie seems to like him, so that's always a plus. We have a little scheme we've cooked up we're excited to bring you, should be the first of next week in the next chapter when it starts! Thanks again!
Fyre
Date: 25 Dec 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Now we know why Emmett all but shaved off all his hair! Kids really do the dumbest things sometimes, just like the rest of us! It's a shame that Bella was so upset over the lie, especially since she set Edward's heart on fire! That was an amazing session in the kitchen! Can't wait to see what Edward is going to do about her!
Author's Response:
Yayyy! So glad to see you've joined us for this one! Thanks so much for leaving us the love on every chapter, we appreciate it so much. Yres, Emmett's a sneaky little guy, let's see what these two do to get it together :)
Fyre
Date: 23 Dec 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmm.. Same. She did not do anything wrong she was blind sided.
Author's Response:
She was completely shocked since she had dealt wiith that personally. Now we know that and also that she wants him too...Let'ssee what happens next! Thank you for leaving your thoughts, we love them!!
Fyre
Date: 23 Dec 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
he made an effort. Now she has to decide.
Author's Response:
She does and we all know what she'll do ;) Thanks so much!!
Fyre
Date: 23 Dec 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well that was interesting.
Author's Response:
Oops, I missed this one yesterday, sorry! Thanks so much for catching up with us. Next chapter should post first of next week :)
Fyre
Date: 23 Dec 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yeah!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 22 Dec 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! You are amazing!!! Your support is invaluable. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 17 Dec 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you again!! Up next we'll hear from Bella and see what she's thinking :)
Fyre
Date: 09 Dec 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to reading more of this
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. We are going to try to have another chapter out within the week. We appreciate you giving it a chance and also leaving a review. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 09 Dec 2014 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds good! I'm ready to read more!
Author's Response:
Awww thanks! It's going to be a rather short story, but we definitely couldn't leave it there. Lol. Thanks for giving it a try and for the review. XOXO
Lissa