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Reviewer: Tribal Matriarch Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Cleaning Up

Thanks luv, I'll head over to ff! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Tribal Matriarch Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 18: A Well-Made Suit

I'm loving and hateing this story at this point! You may wonder why? First hate... I have to read on a kindle! Scrolling through the web page is unusually hard with this fic as one wrong tap or swipe and it loads another page with a picture and nothing else, pressing the back button means starting at the top of the page again! I have given up reading using the 'print story' link that I usually use as I'm bloody fed up with spending increasing amounts of time scrolling to get back to where I was (and if I slip AGAIN having to reload once more) but I am almost as annoyed with scrolling through chapters now too. I have reloded this one three times! I don't mind the occasional picture but this is ridiculous!!
Rant over. I love the way you are fixing the total cock-up that was season 5 and look forward to a happy ending for our couple... IF I ever reach the end that is.

Author's Response:

Hello, I hate to hear you are frustrated.  On my WordPress site, I have made a complete .pdf version of this story on my .pdfs page (californiakat1654.wordpress.com).  I know that many Kindles users have gone with that.  I'm sorry that the pictures are not working on your system.  I know that lots of people don't like ff.net, but if you don't like the pics, you might try my stories over there

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:17 PM Title: Epilogue: Done Running

Yea she def was a running in the books and show

TY for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 50: Facing Demons

Thank GAWD the canon is over.  I so hated everything after S4 and even a little before.   Great job on your part

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 49: Ready

Jason is just too funny

Reviewer: Wolflover69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2015 8:04 PM Title: Epilogue: Done Running

Awesome  job...now I'm on pins and needles for part 2....

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 48: Name-Calling

Jason is such a goober and a follower.  Cant wait for the sequel and the diversion from the TB story lines

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 47: Relative

Nora was def not a fav of mine either.  Such a snot

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 46: Roots

ugh her and her obsession with Scumbill.   At least she was sweet with her father comment.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 45: Red Light / Green Light

I always thought Cavanaugh had something off about him anyway.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 44: What If . . .

yea  I didn't care much for the entire Nora story line..... I really wish I quit watching after S4.   AB ruined TB just as much as CH did SVM.  Sigh

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 43: Award-Winning Performance

Someone should have staked his arse a long time ago.   Stupid Scumbill, and his whore women

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 42: Sacrifice

Always hated that scene.  Scumbill should have been killed off long ago.  Nora didn't deserve anything from Eric for all her betrayals.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 41: True Torture

Sadly I could see the scene happening. Scumbill always was a pussy following whomever would want or listen to him.   Ugh  I hope you kill him, Salome and the rest soon. plzplzplz

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 40: Thwarted

He should have killed Scumbill for that betrayal alone, not to mention all the others.  Yea that whole sweeetie/pig thing was stupid as hell

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 39: Maneuvering

Ugh Scumbill is such a flip flopper.   Hate that Eric gets betrayed again

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 38: Chosen Paths

I sooooo wish he would have just killed Nora for betraying him to the "cause".

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 37: Can't Be Unseen

Ugh Nigel is such a creepo

Reviewer: jillapet Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 37: Can't Be Unseen

Show us your tits, Eric!

 

Flove this!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 36: Smashed

I agree with you.  AB decided early on who he wanted to be the villians (no doubt colored by CH inputs)

Reviewer: drkraez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 35: Existential Dilemma

Likey likey! Loved the final sentence!  Can't wait for drunken debauchery!

Reviewer: Jadajuice Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 35: Existential Dilemma

Great chapter - next update is going to be crazy!  Thank you!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 35: Existential Dilemma

Yea Scumbill does go off the deep end.   Love the fart comment.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 34: Losing My Religion

Sadly any religion is twisted to meet the skewed vision of those wishing to be "right"

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 33: Connecting Dots

For too long AB had CH whispering in his ear about Eric I'm sure.   Can't wait till you kill off all of these betrayers

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 32: An Excellent View

The finite power thing was such a stupid think IMHO.   So long as she can be in the sun to recharge, she shouldn't lose it.  Stupid Alan Ball.  I was so happy Chris Meloni was on the show.  I was pissed when they killed him off so quickly.  

Loved hearing Eric's inner monologue though

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 31: The Reveal

Ugh I so hated the hole Nora plotline. sigh. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 30: As the Authority Turns

soap operas indeed.   Hmm are going to kill Russell or not?  hmmm   Just wondering when you are going to deveate from the debacle that AB created.



Author's Response:

I'm deviating at the "Run!" at the end of S5, so Russell is--indeed--going to be killed.  Kind of sad about that, but there are plenty of villains to deal with...

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 29: Scrappy Doo Glamour

lol  loved Eric glamouring of Alcede.  Scumbill is utterly pathetic

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 28: No Damsel in Distress

ugh Scumbill had to ruin everything again.

Reviewer: drkraez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 28: No Damsel in Distress

Hi Kat, I do Iove this story! I am always desperately awaiting the next installment! Thank you for all your incredible hard work and dedication. Karen 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2015 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 27: Scooby Doo & the Haunted Hospital

OMG the Scooby Doo was just freakin hilarious and inspired

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 26: Her Way

aww Poor Doug.   Scumbill is so pathetic

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 25: Reason Why

Love that one line Must be Thursday 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 24: Bad Dog

I laughed so freaking loud when she puked on him

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 23: Equal Footing

Can understand his reasoning.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 22: Shoulder Slump

Wow  glad Ulf helped him out.  

Reviewer: azucar69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Cleaning Up

Lovely, nuanced writing. Thank you! XO

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 21: Paradoxes

Great as always.  I just really dislike Pam.  She still needs to be told that she did betray Eric. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 20: Surety

I agree that Tara never should have been turned.  I hated TB Tara and I wasn't fond of Pam either.  Sigh.

Love hearing Eric inner monologues

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 19: Piercing

Unfortunately I never liked TB Pam so I wouldn't have turned her.  Like he said, he had no real pull

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Well-Made Suit

Ugh Scumbill....sigh

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Madame

Too bead Eric didn't just kill Whorena and Scumbill back then

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 16: Man in Black

Great as always seeing his POV.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15: Abandoned

Yea I never really understood how Skanky Salome et al figured out where Russell was.  Scumbill is and always will be a douche.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 14: Sloppy Seconds

Ugh Salome was such a skank. would love to think your Eric thoughts were the real ones.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 13: Harnessed

I really liked Molly too.   Too cute in a guinea pig kinda way.  lol.  tara being turned was just stupid if you ask me.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 12: Perfectly Scripted

so many of the same thoughts I had going through my mind in these episodes.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 11: Ritual

Since they'd gone way off the book path by this point, I'd always hope they'd of staked Scumbill there.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 10: Masochism

Hated that Chris Meloni was killed off so quickly.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Enhanced Interrogation Techniques

Salome always was a stupid skank.

Reviewer: drkraez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 8: Torture

Loving this story! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 8: Torture

Scumbill was a douche before he went on his Billith quest and after.  Sad that when Sookie staked him, that it didn't work.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7: Ike Applebaum

Lala would have been the better choice.  Tara was annoying alive and undead.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 5: Blood Flow

Hard hearing Eric's inner thoughts but I don't blame him.  AB totally screwed him over.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 6: Best Laid Plans

Never did like Nora much.   But of course I dispise Scumbill and how self concious he made Sookie feel.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: Nora

I hated the idea of Nora but they'd gone so off the books by this point anything was possible.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Trunk

Just cant see him and bill talking together.  Ugh AB and his crap.

Reviewer: drkraez Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: Silver

Great work! 

Reviewer: drkraez Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Cleaning Up

Loved the rules! About to start reading.  Kxxx

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 2: Silver

Love seeing his thoughts even if I don’t like them. ;-)  Stupid authority and thier nets.




Author's Response:

Thanks for the responses, ma'am!!!  :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Cleaning Up

Don’t blame him for being pissed. Sookie is a coward (thanks to stupid AB). Can’t wait for more.

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