Date: 25 Oct 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Cleaning Up
Thanks luv, I'll head over to ff! Keep up the good work!
Date: 25 Oct 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 18: A Well-Made Suit
I'm loving and hateing this story at this point! You may wonder why? First hate... I have to read on a kindle! Scrolling through the web page is unusually hard with this fic as one wrong tap or swipe and it loads another page with a picture and nothing else, pressing the back button means starting at the top of the page again! I have given up reading using the 'print story' link that I usually use as I'm bloody fed up with spending increasing amounts of time scrolling to get back to where I was (and if I slip AGAIN having to reload once more) but I am almost as annoyed with scrolling through chapters now too. I have reloded this one three times! I don't mind the occasional picture but this is ridiculous!!
Rant over. I love the way you are fixing the total cock-up that was season 5 and look forward to a happy ending for our couple... IF I ever reach the end that is.
Author's Response:
Hello, I hate to hear you are frustrated. On my WordPress site, I have made a complete .pdf version of this story on my .pdfs page (californiakat1654.wordpress.com). I know that many Kindles users have gone with that. I'm sorry that the pictures are not working on your system. I know that lots of people don't like ff.net, but if you don't like the pics, you might try my stories over there
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:17 PM Title: Epilogue: Done Running
Yea she def was a running in the books and show
TY for writing and sharing
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 50: Facing Demons
Thank GAWD the canon is over. I so hated everything after S4 and even a little before. Great job on your part
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 49: Ready
Jason is just too funny
Date: 16 Apr 2015 8:04 PM Title: Epilogue: Done Running
Awesome job...now I'm on pins and needles for part 2....
Date: 10 Apr 2015 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 48: Name-Calling
Jason is such a goober and a follower. Cant wait for the sequel and the diversion from the TB story lines
Date: 10 Apr 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 47: Relative
Nora was def not a fav of mine either. Such a snot
Date: 10 Apr 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 46: Roots
ugh her and her obsession with Scumbill. At least she was sweet with her father comment.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 45: Red Light / Green Light
I always thought Cavanaugh had something off about him anyway.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 44: What If . . .
yea I didn't care much for the entire Nora story line..... I really wish I quit watching after S4. AB ruined TB just as much as CH did SVM. Sigh
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 43: Award-Winning Performance
Someone should have staked his arse a long time ago. Stupid Scumbill, and his whore women
Date: 27 Mar 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 42: Sacrifice
Always hated that scene. Scumbill should have been killed off long ago. Nora didn't deserve anything from Eric for all her betrayals.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 41: True Torture
Sadly I could see the scene happening. Scumbill always was a pussy following whomever would want or listen to him. Ugh I hope you kill him, Salome and the rest soon. plzplzplz
Date: 21 Mar 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 40: Thwarted
He should have killed Scumbill for that betrayal alone, not to mention all the others. Yea that whole sweeetie/pig thing was stupid as hell
Date: 19 Mar 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 39: Maneuvering
Ugh Scumbill is such a flip flopper. Hate that Eric gets betrayed again
Date: 17 Mar 2015 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 38: Chosen Paths
I sooooo wish he would have just killed Nora for betraying him to the "cause".
Date: 14 Mar 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 37: Can't Be Unseen
Ugh Nigel is such a creepo
Date: 14 Mar 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 37: Can't Be Unseen
Show us your tits, Eric!
Flove this!
Date: 12 Mar 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 36: Smashed
I agree with you. AB decided early on who he wanted to be the villians (no doubt colored by CH inputs)
Date: 11 Mar 2015 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 35: Existential Dilemma
Likey likey! Loved the final sentence! Can't wait for drunken debauchery!
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 35: Existential Dilemma
Great chapter - next update is going to be crazy! Thank you!
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 35: Existential Dilemma
Yea Scumbill does go off the deep end. Love the fart comment.
Date: 07 Mar 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 34: Losing My Religion
Sadly any religion is twisted to meet the skewed vision of those wishing to be "right"
Date: 05 Mar 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 33: Connecting Dots
For too long AB had CH whispering in his ear about Eric I'm sure. Can't wait till you kill off all of these betrayers
Date: 03 Mar 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 32: An Excellent View
The finite power thing was such a stupid think IMHO. So long as she can be in the sun to recharge, she shouldn't lose it. Stupid Alan Ball. I was so happy Chris Meloni was on the show. I was pissed when they killed him off so quickly.
Loved hearing Eric's inner monologue though
Date: 28 Feb 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 31: The Reveal
Ugh I so hated the hole Nora plotline. sigh.
Date: 26 Feb 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 30: As the Authority Turns
soap operas indeed. Hmm are going to kill Russell or not? hmmm Just wondering when you are going to deveate from the debacle that AB created.
Author's Response:
I'm deviating at the "Run!" at the end of S5, so Russell is--indeed--going to be killed. Kind of sad about that, but there are plenty of villains to deal with...
Date: 24 Feb 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 29: Scrappy Doo Glamour
lol loved Eric glamouring of Alcede. Scumbill is utterly pathetic
Date: 22 Feb 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 28: No Damsel in Distress
ugh Scumbill had to ruin everything again.
Date: 22 Feb 2015 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 28: No Damsel in Distress
Hi Kat, I do Iove this story! I am always desperately awaiting the next installment! Thank you for all your incredible hard work and dedication. Karen
Date: 19 Feb 2015 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 27: Scooby Doo & the Haunted Hospital
OMG the Scooby Doo was just freakin hilarious and inspired
Date: 17 Feb 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 26: Her Way
aww Poor Doug. Scumbill is so pathetic
Date: 16 Feb 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 25: Reason Why
Love that one line Must be Thursday
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 24: Bad Dog
I laughed so freaking loud when she puked on him
Date: 10 Feb 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 23: Equal Footing
Can understand his reasoning.
Date: 07 Feb 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 22: Shoulder Slump
Wow glad Ulf helped him out.
Date: 06 Feb 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Cleaning Up
Lovely, nuanced writing. Thank you! XO
Date: 06 Feb 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 21: Paradoxes
Great as always. I just really dislike Pam. She still needs to be told that she did betray Eric.
Date: 05 Feb 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 20: Surety
I agree that Tara never should have been turned. I hated TB Tara and I wasn't fond of Pam either. Sigh.
Love hearing Eric inner monologues
Date: 04 Feb 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 19: Piercing
Unfortunately I never liked TB Pam so I wouldn't have turned her. Like he said, he had no real pull
Date: 04 Feb 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Well-Made Suit
Ugh Scumbill....sigh
Date: 04 Feb 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Madame
Too bead Eric didn't just kill Whorena and Scumbill back then
Date: 29 Jan 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 16: Man in Black
Great as always seeing his POV.
Date: 29 Jan 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15: Abandoned
Yea I never really understood how Skanky Salome et al figured out where Russell was. Scumbill is and always will be a douche.
Date: 29 Jan 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 14: Sloppy Seconds
Ugh Salome was such a skank. would love to think your Eric thoughts were the real ones.
Date: 29 Jan 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 13: Harnessed
I really liked Molly too. Too cute in a guinea pig kinda way. lol. tara being turned was just stupid if you ask me.
Date: 29 Jan 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 12: Perfectly Scripted
so many of the same thoughts I had going through my mind in these episodes.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 11: Ritual
Since they'd gone way off the book path by this point, I'd always hope they'd of staked Scumbill there.
Date: 13 Jan 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 10: Masochism
Hated that Chris Meloni was killed off so quickly.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Enhanced Interrogation Techniques
Salome always was a stupid skank.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 8: Torture
Loving this story!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 8: Torture
Scumbill was a douche before he went on his Billith quest and after. Sad that when Sookie staked him, that it didn't work.
Date: 01 Jan 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7: Ike Applebaum
Lala would have been the better choice. Tara was annoying alive and undead.
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 5: Blood Flow
Hard hearing Eric's inner thoughts but I don't blame him. AB totally screwed him over.
Date: 25 Dec 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 6: Best Laid Plans
Never did like Nora much. But of course I dispise Scumbill and how self concious he made Sookie feel.
Date: 18 Dec 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: Nora
I hated the idea of Nora but they'd gone so off the books by this point anything was possible.
Date: 18 Dec 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Trunk
Just cant see him and bill talking together. Ugh AB and his crap.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: Silver
Great work!
Date: 16 Dec 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Cleaning Up
Loved the rules! About to start reading. Kxxx
Date: 11 Dec 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 2: Silver
Love seeing his thoughts even if I don’t like them. ;-) Stupid authority and thier nets.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the responses, ma'am!!! :)
Date: 11 Dec 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Cleaning Up
Don’t blame him for being pissed. Sookie is a coward (thanks to stupid AB). Can’t wait for more.