[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2020 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting storyline
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2020 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting storyline
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2020 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting storyline
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2020 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting storyline
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved it! This was so great! I need more like this
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2016 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
A great story.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2016 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful story. Loved it.
Date: 09 Aug 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
I bet Tanya was the girl who tried to include Bella too.
Date: 09 Aug 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
OH MY GOSH!!! Charlie is the Twins' father!!! Bella is their SISTER!!! Now what she said to Edward makes so much more sense.
Date: 25 Aug 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awesome story! !!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this story and all of your stories.
Date: 25 Aug 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Lol, Jacob got put in his place.
Date: 25 Aug 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
Rose is a real bitch. I am glad that the town is coming together to help Bella and the company.
Date: 25 Aug 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love that Edward takes thw kid's to talk to their moma. The Blacks ate horrible people.
Date: 24 Aug 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, I discuss not see that. So Bella is the twins sister. I can not believe that Edward just cut her hair. Lol.
Date: 24 Aug 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
I knew she was not living the high life like everyone thought. Glad Edward went and got her.
Date: 24 Aug 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok, how did Edward not recognize Bella when he wad dressed ad Santa but then after his stiff he recognized her in the parking lot?
Date: 24 Aug 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
O am really starting to feel sorry for Bella. I have a feeling that her home is either very small or it is large with nothing in it. I also have a feeling that the company is close to closing their doors and she is trying very hard to prevent it.
Date: 24 Aug 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Sounds like Bella had a very sad childhood. Hopefully Edward and his kids can bring her some joy.
Date: 24 Aug 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
WHybrid is Bella so cold heart? What has happened to herin the past? She did seems to be a little warmer to the kids but not much.
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2015 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
okay, i'm spending my free day reading/re-reading stories from my fav authors list. this story, yeah i'm sniffling like a baby. you girls have so much talent. thank you for sharing it with the rest of us
Date: 28 Jan 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
loved you story. thanks for posting it.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Just finished your lovely heart-warming story. Loved it! Thank U. :o)
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
You two are just great, and you write wonderful, happy ever after stories! Doesn't get any better than that! Looking forward to all the good stuff in 2015!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved seeing Aro walk in to the meeting and put Jacob in his place! Smart of Edward to call and ask for his help! Looks like a good year coming up for Swan's and all the employees! Even a better one for Bella and Edward and the kids!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
It's really nice that the folks all pitched in to help as soon as they knew the truth. Seems they were goodhearted, just misguided! Boy do I love stuff like this, everyone pitching in and helping out!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
There are going to be some shame faced folks when this all comes out! Bella has tried to be fair and hold on to this all by herself. She sure wasn't rewarded for it, either! A whole bunch of people owe her a huge apology!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad Edward has convinced Bella to stay with him and the twins. It was a small surprise to find out they are her half siblings. When Edward saw the picture of Bella as a child and noticed how much she looked like Corrine, I wondered. I hope now he can talk everyone into helping get out that special order and save the company from Black Corporation!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
What a time that girl has had, trying to keep the company going! What is it that lets Black Corporation pull money out of Swan Plantation? There must be some legal hold they have over her. If people really knew what was going on, they would be mighty ashamed of themselves for all the crap they have spewed about Bella!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
There has to be some deep dark secret about where Bella is living, but I'm not getting any ideas about where it might be! I can't believe Edward didn't recognize Bella in the mall when he sat at the same table with her!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
How do rumors like that get started, do you suppose? The workers and townspeople seem to forget there's always two sides to every story. Carlisle was wise enough to look for the truth.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
The more that Edward finds out about Bella, the clearer I'm seeing her, why can't he? She seems to be trying her best with the information she has. He ought to be helping her, not trying to sabotage her ideas.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Something is a bit off here, and may not be what it seems. Maybe there is a good reason for what Bella is doing? Hope so, because otherwise, it will be a sad Christmas.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awwwwe that was cute. I loved it. Glad rose and Jessica was fired and they had a second set of twins.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
Jacob got taken down I love it. Yay the town is saved.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful, I love that they finally got together. Oh gosh rose is such a bitch. Glad Edward put her in her place. Glad the town came together.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Her grandfather was a wonderful man. To bad her father was such a asshole. I can't wait to see Alice's reaction to who Bella really is.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow I had a feeling they were realated how much Corrine looked like her. I am glad she will be staying with them chance for Bella and Edward to get closer.
Date: 01 Jan 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
Another lovely story, you guys rock! Happy New Year!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor thing is sick she needs Edward to take care of her.
Date: 01 Jan 2015 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
There isn't anything better than a dirty talking Edward on the dance floor!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
This was a great Christmas story! I was worried you wouldn't make your self imposed deadline, but as usual you all knock it out of the park!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh I loved it just what I needed to read thank you have a wonderful new year
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
awww sweet little story. Ty for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
congratulations! Happy new year!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad Aro came through for them.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
sad it is over but what a great little story I loved it. I cant wait for the new year and new storys from you. Thanks so much for sharing your talent.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks for another GREAT story!!
hope you both have a wonderful NewYear, looking forward to more stories next year!!!!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
heartwarming.
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for a most heat warming story. I look forward to the 2015 endeavours.
Have a very Happy New Year.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love the story. Happy New Years to you guys. As for your stories that you are donating. I want to thank you as a wife of soldier and a mother to 2 autistic sons for supporting the causes. I hope 2015 blesses you with many great things.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading more of your stories in 2015. Happy New Year
Date: 31 Dec 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Black needs to be out of buisness but he is out of Bella's life thank goodness. I am so happy the town is behind her now
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor B, she probably lives there and .. she works when they go home to add to production. The Chinese work for pennies and long hours. The value of their currency aids them in exporting. Our government does not aid all the manufacturers only the ones large enough to hire people to lobby in Washington.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I been there, on the other side of this story. Now I am Christian so no to that. We always gave to our employees and not to ourselves. They never understood, until the layoffs and no work.. Hello China and the undercutting they have done to our factories.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Please say she has a home and not staying in some crappy motel or something. I think he is finally seeing her and she really is trying to save the town.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well sometimes these decisions are hard to make and not made to hurt. We owned a company for 32 years and even though we made sure our employees got the holidays off sometimes it was not with pay. If we did not have the money. Our market as was all the toy markets comsumed by China and they don't care if you die on the job.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad Aro came to help out. Ugh Rose is such a snot
Date: 31 Dec 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love it... I love it... I LOVE IT!
constantly checking for updates!!!
Absolutely a great story!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loving your story!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love it ! That's some fabulous christmas spirit !!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well I was only hoping for a kiss but I got WAAAAYYY more than that! Thank you, thank you!!!!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am so happy that how and what she is its out and the town is helping her. Edward is in love
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella has done so much for the people and town she is the best
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well Rose is a bitch and needs to know how ugly she looks but wow now that everyone knows the truth they understand and are helping them it's beautiful
Date: 31 Dec 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story!!! I think Rose got off to easy!!! lollol
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow Rose is a real biatch. and in front of the kids too? I would have thrown her out then and there.
Yummy lemony time before that though. Happy Dance
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am so crying over Bella's life and how she was treated. I'm so long ving this story to pieces
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm ready for them to kiss!!!! I know I have I wait it out. I'm glad that they talked more. I hope on Christmas Eve when Mary sleeps over Bella will sleep with Edward in his bed. :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella. I hope everyone hates themselves after they realized what they've done to her. She's such a good person. They should all be ashamed of themselves. Can't wait to see how people are going to react when they realize that Bella is the same person that they knew as children.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Bella should sock Rose and Jessica in the Nose!!! lollol
Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
wowsers. Alice is going to feel really bad too. Dunno if anything will make Rose feel bad. Although losing her job would be a good start, esp after the furnace stunt and being a slacker.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
Now everything is coming out....rose needs to be scrooged
Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
There is so much to be done but Edward is going to make it happen!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Happy to hear about the companion story. I don't often review as I read later than most. I do follow you guys and I love your stories. Thank you for the entertainment.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
I feel sad for Bella. I think she stopped lunch because hearing how Edward's Christmas is made her feel bad.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cutte start, nice little holiday twist.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
How is he going to get everyone behind Bella and get the orders done with no heat
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Kinda guessed Bella would be related to the kids as Corrine looks like her, but sister was unexpected. Edward should insist Bella borrows money from the kids to buy out Black.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh poor poor poor Bella is is giving everything she owns to the company to save the whole town will Edward open there eyes to the real Bella