[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 58
What a hell of a cliff hanger!! Very well written! LOVE the story & am eagerly waiting for the saga to continue!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 58
omg when r u posting the new story. I have two new favorite charactors Please start your story this is not fair you leaving your loyal reading hanging. How could you!!!! PLEASE
Date: 16 Jan 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow really good story
Date: 14 Jan 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 58
How long are they going to be kept apart?! Poor Olivia! I don't know what I'd do if I saw him with Bree. Hopefully Xander's mom & dad can keep gold-digger away this time.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 58
OMG, what a way to leave us all with a Clffhanger. I can't wait for Book 2 as this story is so good, I've been losing sleep to read your updates.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 58
Awesome job. I'm hooked and cant wait to read more.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 58
I found this story and read it straight through! I am hooked! Poor Olivia! Please let this have a happy ending! I will be waiting patiently (maybe) for the rest! Thank you for sharing your story with us! 😊
Date: 13 Jan 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 56
I think he will wake up soon, I hope his memory is intact
Date: 13 Jan 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 53
Silver lining - at least she hasn't got to go to Milan
Date: 13 Jan 2015 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 47
I don't want them to go home, is the you know what going to hit the fan?
Date: 13 Jan 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 45
He has to face all these people and all the things going on in his life at some point, it's time to man up Xander
Date: 13 Jan 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 48
Wow, so much has happened in all of these updates. I hope while Olivia is gone he doesn't fall for Bree's lies again. Love this story,
Date: 13 Jan 2015 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 48
Wow, this is a set up for the perfect storm!
Date: 13 Jan 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 48
I so love rapid updates bestill my heart:-). Loved the chapter btw can't wait to read more!!!!!
Date: 13 Jan 2015 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 47
Great chapter , can't wait to read more......
Date: 13 Jan 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 47
I love how blissful they are, I hate that their bubble may burst soon when they get back to Seattle.
Date: 12 Jan 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 44
Loved it!!!!!! Can't wait to read more:-)
Date: 12 Jan 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 42
:)
Is this the calm before the storm?
Looking forward to Livie meeting Brea
Date: 12 Jan 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 41
Thank you, I feel so much happier now....
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 39
I'm glad she didn't just give in, if I was her I'm not sure what I would need him to do so that I could trust him and his feelings but you have to take a chance on love sometimes
Thank you for writing
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 39
Good girl Grace, stand your ground. Make him work for it.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 39
So glad she didn't completely cave.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 39
All day I've been waiting!!!!!! Loved it can't wait to find out what happens! Happy Friday and writing
Date: 09 Jan 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 38
Loved it, I really can't wait to read more :-)
Date: 09 Jan 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 38
What a weak, weak man but Olivia is so strong, good for her. If I was her I would refuse to have anything to do with him and meet and marry someone else.... he has made me very angry, I'm not sure I could respect him after this debacle...
Date: 09 Jan 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 37
Am I bonkers? Don't answer that.... but I actually feel really narked at Xander here, surely after everything that he became after Bree did what she did, he would hate her and yet one look at her and he is panicked and maybe still feels something for her. Surely sleeping with his brother as well as him would have removed any feelings.
I feel so sorry for Livie, she deserves someone who is free to love her completely not someone who is contrasting and comparing.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 36
can't stand her already lol
Date: 09 Jan 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 35
Oh no, she didn't waste any time, I hope she isn't going to be a pain to our H and h
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 38
Go get your girl Xander!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 38
First of all, I found this story pretty late last night and didn't get any sleep as a result as I couldn't stop reading it. I was happy to see an update this morning as it is so good....I will be watching for updates.
If he goes back to Bree he is an idiot. I am so proud that Olivia let him have it as I total agree with her that he is being an idiot. Bree is a little gold digger who is just in relationships for what it gets her and when that ends she will be on to the next best thing. I hope Olivia makes him really work for it and doesn't just cave when he shows up in Atlanta.
Author's Response:
You stayed up all night reading? AWESOME!!!! Thanks...your comments mean a lot. Stay tuned to see what happens between Olivia and Xander!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 37
What a roller coaster ride of emotions Xander is on. Exellerating chapter.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 37
Man that was a lot, I will be so pissed if he picks Bree!!!! Can't wait to read more
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 35
It was nice to read Elise's perspective.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 35
ive been waiting all day for this!!! lol great chapter btw, cant wai to read more
Author's Response:
You made my day! Wish I could get the whole thing out there faster. There are still quite a few chapters to go in this book. Keep coming back for more!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 34
Well, she laid it all out there. I'm awaiting his response.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
loved it, cant wait to read more
Date: 08 Jan 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 33
Now that phone call is a great remedy for a good night sleep.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 33
Cant wait to see what xander has planned
Date: 08 Jan 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 33
Umm, steamy, witch is sucky because im at work!!!! Lol....
cant wait to read more
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 32
Absense makes the heart grow fonder.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 31
Dinner, that's good they need to talk
Thank you for sharing
Date: 07 Jan 2015 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 29
No condom or did I miss something..
So happy he let the light in
Thank you
Author's Response:
Ah very astute reader! No, you didn't miss the condom...he did. :( (or shall I say the author did...) Details, details. Thank you so much for all your encouraging compliments!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
She was bound to have triggers.
Thank you for writing
Date: 07 Jan 2015 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
That was hot, I hope he doesn't have regrets in the morning..
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
Phew, I hope this is a good idea....
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well, lots in this chapter. She really is too good for him at the moment but I hope the tears and the emotion is cathartic for him.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 31
Love it, can't wait to see what happens next......
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Uumm what to do, how will she trust him again, they both travel away a lot
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
I knew it, what an idiot he is and I'm so pleased with Livvy's reaction, she is such a strong character, I hope she makes him suffer
Thank you
Author's Response:
She is strong, but she still has her moments of self doubt and old feelings of worthlessness that were spawned by her ex. Being a survivor of abuse, I still have times when it's all too easy to fall back into the old traps, the old habits and become a doormat again. I have to really stay on my toes to keep myself pointed in the right direction. Livie is going through those same things. Xander's her first relationship post divorce and he's got his own fucked up personal life to complicate things as well. She can stand up to him, but sometimes she's a little too submissive for my liking...but that's real life.
Thanks again for all your comments. I really appreciate it!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
Her writing has possibilities for their future escapades ;)
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad he is changing his MO for her
Thank you for sharing this story
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
She is such a nice person, especially after all that she has been through
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm not sure about Xander yet, he is hot and hasn't deceived anyone but I'm thinking there are going to be a few bumpy bits on this journey
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad she is being true to thyself
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
This story deserves so many more reviews, really enjoying it
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so pleased she did that, she is knowing her worth now
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm glad that Olivia stood up for herself. Great chapter!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Livvy, not long before they meet properly I think
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Getting warmer....
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loving your story and the slow build up
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
So good that he is crushing on Livvy
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
so close and yet so far
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you for writing
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really enjoying your writing and your story telling
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Xander seems interesting
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Enjoying all the details
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like Olivia and Tess' friendship
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:01 PM Title: Prologue
I found this today and loking forward to reading it.
Thank you
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow, it just got really hot in here!!! " fans herself" lol, can't wait to read more.....
Date: 07 Jan 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 27
Umm yum, lol so so good. Can't wait to read more........
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 27
Awesome job. So happy that these two are finally connecting! Pun intended.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Forgive my ignorance...I'm new here. What do the coffee cups mean? Keep coming back for more!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
aww, sad, cant wait to read more
Date: 06 Jan 2015 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awesome story can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 06 Jan 2015 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved the 2 chapters, your a great writer, keep up the great writing. Can't wait to read more:-)
Date: 06 Jan 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
wow, now i really cant wait to read more. Now im spoiled and raring to read more...... great chapter btw
Date: 06 Jan 2015 3:26 AM Title: Prologue
Lol I totally agree!!!! Yay
Date: 06 Jan 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
loved it,cant wait to read more.....
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's starting to get hot in here... ;)
Date: 05 Jan 2015 6:24 PM Title: Prologue
Love it! can't wait to Read more
Author's Response:
Thanks! Give me a shout back later as you get more into it... Enjoy!
Date: 05 Jan 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Just wanted to say that I am enjoying your story, it's well written and a great read. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
So glad to hear you are enjoying the story. I'll be posting more today!
Date: 05 Jan 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hi! I'm new to ur story and was wondering if hat kind of schedule you have for updating??? Btw love it, I normally don't read original fan fiction but I am really enjoying yours... Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you are enjoying my story. I'll be updating with more chapters today, but probably not a lot until mid afternoon. It's back to the real world of work today after two glorious weeks off! :( Keep checking back for more!