Date: 17 May 2022 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
This ending is a real disappointment.
Date: 17 May 2022 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
This ending is a real disappointment.
Date: 29 Feb 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
It will 13 years for me this year. I'm still not ready.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
God this was just so sad to read. It made me tear up because it was just so real. One of the best stories I have ever read - and that counts for something.
Extremly good story, which ended just the right way - with Edward moving on.
Date: 01 May 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Time to Fly
I don't normally review stories, but for this I just had to!
Wow! This is such a fantastic story. Even though its quite short its just got so much too it! Stories don't usually make me cry, but this had me crying from the very beginning, right up until the end. You've portrayed how everyone was feeling amazingly! Absolutely brilliant!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Time to Fly
this chapter made me cry like a baby
Date: 08 Jul 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
OMG!! I love your story!!! It gives me the chills. You're really a great writer. Keep writing! :)
Date: 20 Jun 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
Oh my God.
here i sit tonight and think to myself: Okay, go on and read this. it can´t be so bad.
i have to say i was so wrong.
the first chapter had me crying so hard i had to stop reading. and the other four were the same. i don´t think i ever cried so hard while reading a story. i had to take so many times to stop i really didn´t believe i could go on. but i forced myself to do so.
you´ve written a beautiful, very emotional story and i want to thank you for sharing it with us.
Bye CullenFlocke
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CRY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? This story was so depressing. But i still liked it.
Author's Response:
Lol, sorry I definitely wasn't trying to. Yeah, it's not the happiest story out there. I'm glad you liked it though.
Cheers for reading!
Michelle
Date: 28 Apr 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
you made it a supernatural story. like bella comes back from the dead and has a second chance in life but there will be some risks and consquencs. like bella is not human any more. like she gave up her humanity to come back to life. when you write more please email me at edward_heart204@yahoo.com. can't wait!!!!! can't wait to see what happens next. but pretty please with cherry on top bring Bella back to life.
Author's Response:
Hate to say it but this story is finished. There will be no more. I'm just going to leave it how it is. Sorry about that.
Thanks for reading though, and for reviewing.
Michelle
Date: 05 Apr 2011 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
A trully beautiful story. Thank you for writing it :)
Date: 30 Mar 2011 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
very well written but now i feel like throwing myself into oncoming traffic lol jk...
haven't cried like this over a story in a long time.... and if i knew i would cry reading it before i started, i still would have read it.
Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
great ending !
Date: 30 Mar 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
Oh my goodness I cried. Not that I ever thought that a story like this could be anything but sad, still it was tough to read. Amazing job. Thank you for writing, and sharing this with us.
~Jessi
Date: 29 Mar 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
Dang, you made me cry again.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Hallucinations
Dang, you made me cry.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
That letter brokw my heart. This was a great ending. i feel you left it full of hope for Edward. This was a good story!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 4: Learning to Laugh Again
great chapter.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Time to Fly
Bloody hell ..give me a second to get myself sorted..I sobbed through this,my kids actually came over to see if i was ok.lol
brilliant writing,
im going to be a blubbering mess through this arent i?
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Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 4: Learning to Laugh Again
I think for anyone who has ever lost someone close to them this story hits home. I love it and I think it's truly beautiful.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 4: Learning to Laugh Again
Oh my goodness! This was perfection. I cried. I'm not going to deny it, I cried. Big fat tears rolled down my face. Of course that was after I had this huge grin on my face when I got the e-mail this story had upated. Fantastic chapter. It was breathtaking.
~Jessi
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Time to Fly
So sad, but beautifully written!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 4: Learning to Laugh Again
This story makes me cry with every chapter. I cannot imagine the pain of losing someone I love so dearly.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 2: Alone
Oh, my goodness. This is so terribly sad. I can't read this all at once. I need tissues. Now I know what everyone is talking about in their reviews to my story (Tortured Sole on FF) This is so sad. I want to cry. The way you convey emotions is so real. I can't wait to read then next chapter you have uploaded.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Time to Fly
Wow. I will have you know I am crying right now. I couldn't hold them back. I don't know how anyone could. Excellent beginning. I can't wait to continue reading... no matter how sad it is going to be and how many tears will fall from my eyes.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 3: Hallucinations
God these few chapters have made me cry real bad!
Your an amazing writer, keep it up!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 3: Hallucinations
I absolutely love this story. It is extremely rare that a story or moving will move me to tears, and this has done that.
Date: 08 Feb 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Time to Fly
Wow, I just lost Bella to cancer in my story (on FF)....you hit the sentiments so much better. I'd love to see their life before she passed. I hit on Alice knowing how he felt because she was her best friend...weird. Great job...heartbreaking.
Date: 31 Jan 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Time to Fly
Great story. I can't to read more. Although I think I'll go through tissues like crazy reading it! LOL!
Author's Response:
LOL sorry about that. I didn't really mean for it to be that sad but I'm happy you enjoyed it nevertheless. I'll try and post the next chapter as soon as possible.
Date: 30 Jan 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Time to Fly
Okay, so I am a complete mess now.. How sad.. this will be tough to read...
Author's Response:
I'm very sorry you were a mess after reading the first chapter. That was not my intention. Thank you for reading it though, and for being willing to carry on despite the fact that it may be tough to read. I really appreciate it.