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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

love this whole family!!!  esme rocks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love esme she is the bomb. Three baby's wow loved it now I am just sad it is over thanks so much

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

That was so cute and I loved his surprise 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sorry to see it end, really enjoyed the character you created.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 5

Triplet wow that's great the kids Edward always wanted. I love Carlisle the horny naughty doctor.   I love Esme telling Mary off.  Wonderful future. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love love love the ending.  Wow Esme is one Mama Bear when it comes to her children.  I am glad that she put Mary in her place. WOW, triplets. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. 

Reviewer: Rachael Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

Cute story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bella was right about God blessing her with six wonderful children before taking the ability to have more. Three of each is a perfect balance. This was such a lovely story and I really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

So perfect of an ending for a awesome story. Wonder what Esme has planned. 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 5

Amazing!!  I knew they'ed end up with 3 of each!

So.......any chance of their honeymoon outtake?  You know....when they finally consumate the marriage?  You ladies have it in you, I know you do!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 5

thanks for this lovely story! wow, triplets!  they doubled their number of kids in one fell swoop!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

It's great that therapy helped Bethany  get past her problems, and how wise of her parents to get her that help. The gift from the kids of adoption papers was inspired and sure awed Edward! Can't wait for the wedding, etc., and never want to hear from that nasty old witch, Mary!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

You guys are just terrific! And prolific! I love to read whatever you write!  good riddance to Mary with all her poison venom.....thanks for a Tanya we can love instead of hate!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

I loved this story to pieces, so glad you expanded it.  The end of this chapter I had tears in my eyes that was so sweet and loving that the kids wanted Edward to adopt them.  I'm sure Esme is going to be beyond thrilled.  So perfect that Esme end it all since she started it.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ohhhhh so cute.  He is more of a daddy then James ever was. Mary is a bitch and glad she is out of their lives.  

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love how you guys span the ratings.  Your stories are all unique!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

So hate Mary and her good for nothing son glad he is dead. 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

Excellent chapter and James is a pig.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bethany.  I hope Tanya can help her

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is excellent and adds a lot to the original story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

That is so sweet he could not love them more of they came from him. Mary is an evil hateful old lady that needs to stay far away from them

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

I think Edward is being way to kind about Mary's motives for being so nasty to Bella and her children! That woman strikes me as just plain mean, especially after hearing how she ignored the twins and trash talked Bella to Bethany! It's a real good idea to have Bethany talk to a therapist. Bella is such a goodhearted person, it hardly seems right that her former mother in law would treat her that way!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wonder family time.  Mary is a evil old troll.  I love that the boys want to call Edward dad. I hope therapy helps.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 3

My heart breaks for Bethany. I am glad that she is getting help. Can't wait to read about Bella's conversation with Mary.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

poor Bethany, having a bad dad that said those awful, selfish things to her. I'm glad he didn't molest her cuz that's where I thought you were going with this, at first. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 2

They are such a cute little family. The kids need a great dad like Edward.  I am happy they are waiting til marriage. I hope she is not to evil to Bella.  Wonderful story love it. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

She probably saw them and will be extra evil. That woman is already awful to them all. 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

; )

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh my word, why a cliffhanger right here, so not fair

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

They both are so responsible and loving with the kids, and with preparing to join their lives. I have my fingers crossed for this confrontation with Mary. I hope she won't be as awful as I'm afraid she will be. I could just picture Esme doing her little victory/happy dance!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

thanks for this lovely chapter! not many couples choose to wait for sex until they're married. it's quite refreshing that they have.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) :) :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm sure Mary is going to be nasty andverbally abusive.  She is where James learned it from.  Really enjoying this story. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

He is so perfect and loves them all.  Mary is a bitch and will stay that way she is unhappy so she wants Bella to be that way to.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

I enjoy your stories so much! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love that you are contoinuing the one shot. Can't wait to see more into their relationship and the relationship with Edward and the kids. 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Five thing in he works! WOW!  You all are writing machines! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

So loving this one filling in the gaps of where Esme's didn't. Lmao his dad knew what was going on and wouldn't tell him. Love it. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love d the original and I'm so happy you are giving there pov thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is just right to go with Momma Santa's Christmas Plan! I love that they have found each other, especially considering their pasts! They both certainly deserve happiness!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it so sweet and beautiful 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good

Reviewer: hrandrlover1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

You guys are a machine, whoa. How do you manage to write all these fabulous stories and maintain a home/personal/work life?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is very sweet and lovely. I love that he waited for marriage. Not many do, these days....

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh I love Edwards pov.  So cute getting to see thing we did not get to see.  

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