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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Unexpected Meeting

Oh my

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

Sweet story



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Romance is not my forte, but it seems the response has been pretty good.

Again, thank you for reading it and commenting.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

OMG you made me cry that was so wonderful and sad and happy I am just so confused.  I loved it thanks so much for a great story.  Waiting for more to come.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry your confused, but I'm very happy that you enjolyed the story!

This was the only romance I've done, but I do havae other stories.  Give some a try.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

Wow she was not expecting that lol



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

What an amazing story.  The ending was perfect. Thank you for sharing. 



Author's Response:

Thank you and thank you for reading.  I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

See you next story?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

It's over. Played out to the end. Love doesn't care about an age difference. Kids grow up and move on. Loved it. 



Author's Response:

Yes, you are correct.  Love knows only the boundaries we put on it in our hearts and minds.

Thank you so much for reading and I'm very pleased that you are happy with the short story.

See you next time.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

Oh I loved it so very sweet and beautiful thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I was crying while I was writing the ending.  I was fearful that my readers would be upset at the ending.  Thankfully 95% of the reviews have been happy.

See you next story?

Hard Hugs

 

Dinia

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

Oh my! *wipes tear* Such a beautiful ending! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I was crying while I wrote the last part.  :'(

Hope you're read my new fic when it's ready for posting.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

very touching ending. Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  The HEA that will last through eternity.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

Loved this :) 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

Thank you for a lovely story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it.

Hope you'll try some of my others as well.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

Pooch. How sweet.

Thanks for sharing your talents 



Author's Response:

Thank you and thank you for reading!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

So sweet!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So Happy you liked it!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

Thanks for the tissue warning, it was needed! A really beautiful wrap up to this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I was crying when I wrote it.  Had to give them an Eternal HEA. 

So happy you enjoyed it.

See you next story line.

Hard hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

Major hankie warning?   I don't think that would even cover it.  LOL.  Wow, I was not expecting that ending at all, but glad they ended up together in the end for their happily ever after!!!   



Author's Response:

Sorry but I had to have a major HEA, an eternity together!

Thanks for reading

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 13 - It's A Good Life!

When you killed Bella, I was ready to run. Then  you quickly killed Edward and made an ending so beautiful that it made everything mostly ok. I don't usually read stories where Edward and/or Bella die, but i hav to say that you did this almost painlessly and quickly, so I'll make an exception here. This was a lovely story and I enjoyed reading it.



Author's Response:

Sorry for any pain I inflicted.  But I just had to have a beautiful and endless love story end beautifully!  Not sure what's next for me.  I'm tired.  I'm sure something will surface as my imagination is never ever still for long!

Hard Hugs

Carol aka Dinia

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

Oh my...what will be the answer!!!????



Author's Response:

Of course it's gonna be YES!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

I am glad Connor came to his sense and made a life for himself as a mother that's one of the main goals. Will Bella say yes?  She promised herself she wouldn't get married again. Thank you so much for the birthday wish. It was sweet you thought of me. Hope all is well. I can't believe summer is almost over. At least in my home. My daughter is heading back to school on the 18th of August for her sophomore year of high school. It's going to be a challenging year. She has advance placement and honors classes plus she gets her drivers license in October.  Take care and be well. 



Author's Response:

Yes I experienced similiar with my daughter when I decided to marry again.  However, now that she's older she understands.

My oldest grand daughter has about 4 AP classes and she's only a sophomore.  Am I proud?  Hell yes!

Thans for reading.

Hard Hugs

Dinia 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

awww!  he proposed to her!  I love how romantic that is. Sorry I took so long to read teh chapter. It has been a hectic week!  Thanks for all you give us!



Author's Response:

<3  <3  <3

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

A lovely, lovely wedding, and looking like another real soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope you are not disappointed!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2016 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

Oh my goodness! I like the way Edward starts off his talk! lol
This is great! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  So glad you're enjoying it!

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

Oh how sweet her baby boy is married but hot damn Edward ask for her to marry him what will she say



Author's Response:

Yep got the boy married off.  Of course Bella will say YES!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

:) 



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

Yes please!!



Author's Response:

;)  <3  :D

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

Awe!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha ;)



Author's Response:

:)  ;)  :)

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

You write in first and third person is very confusing!!



Author's Response:

Sorry!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Redtini Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

So glad to see this updated!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

I'm glad Connor changed his mind.  He WAS being selfish.  I hope this retraction of attitude by him is enough to fix the relationship between B and E. Thanks for the new chapter!

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

Finally the boy has pulled his head out of his ass. Lol

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

Well he finally is making things right now will Edward and Bella try again 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

I'm so happy that Connor is trying to fix things - for both Bella and Edward.   

On another note, I was so happy to see the update!!   I have really liked this one from the start and am so excited it is being continued.   I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

Sweet son! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

So happy to hear from you.  I am so glad Conner pulled his head out of his ass.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

Glade to see you back😀😀😀😀

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

Hey there!!! How are you? So, I've been reading a bit. ;)
This is fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: debb8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

Yeah!! I missed this story so much

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

:) 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

Conner's epiphany was the perfect way to move this story along, and I loved it! He finally grew up, that last little bit he needed to! It's almost spooky to see this chapter show up today, I was just thinking three days ago that I would like to see this story again!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

So glad Conner grew up and tried to make things right.

So excited about the update!

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2016 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Oh thank goodness. I so didn't want the story to end there.

Reviewer: Redtini Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Finally he got his head out of his ass. I love this story and I'll wait until you are ready :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Darlin'!  Not sure when we'll get back to it.  As I said, I have two final chapters ready, but my Beta wanted me to continue.  *sigh*  

I'll see you mean while in your story land.

Hard Hugs

Carol/aka Dinia

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please keep writing this story

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Missex this chapter because I forgot tovadd the story to favorites  (forgot twcs doesnt send updates for each chapter of you fav an author)  great chapter , glad Conner managed to get his head oug of his rear and glad Bella finally called him on his bull.  Im with your beta I'd love to see this continued  



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I told her I had said all I wanted to say, but she wants more, and to get that she has to help me.  LOL.

Are you sure you can't notified for each update?  I think I do.  Ask Kelly on the Facebook TWCS page.  She can do anything.  :D

Thanks again

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

; )



Author's Response:

;)  <3  :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Glad the boy pulled his selfish head out of his ass



Author's Response:

Took falling in love to understand.  That's the way it seems to go with everything.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

I figured this would change his mind when he found out how love feels. Thanks Joan more on this one I feel it too.



Author's Response:

Yep that's usually the way it work!

She's feeling pretty smug about now.  LOL.

thanks for reading and reviewing.  

Lots of Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Praise the Lord the boy has seen the light!!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, it was only a matter of time though.  Bella rasied a good kid!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

thank you.  As soon as my Beta gives me her ideas for chapters, I'll get them written.  Right now, I'm tapped out.  I had it written and ending with chapter 13 and my beta didn't want it to end.  She's never asked me to continue with a story line before, so I decided to listen to her.  :D

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Nice can't wait for ur next post



Author's Response:

Thank you.  As soon as my Beta gives me her ideas for chapters, I'll get them written.  Right now, I'm tapped out.  I had it written and ending with chapter 13 and my beta didn't want it to end.  She's never asked me to continue with a story line before, so I decided to listen to her.  :D

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Thank you. JoanOfArt, since I feel just as you do! I felt so bad for Bella, when Conner made her cry! Thank heaven she raised a caring boy, so he realized what he had done and sought to make it right! See you next time!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  As soon as Jyl gives me her ideas for chapters, I'll get them written.  Right now, I'm tapped out.  I had it written and ending with chapter 13 and my beta didn't want it to end.  She's never asked me to continue with a story line before, so I decided to listen to her.  :D

I'll be sure to pass along your thanks.  Yeah Conner is finally starting to be come the man Bella hoped he would. :D

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Well, it's about time that Connor realized what an ass he's been about Edward.   And good for Bella for finally calling him on it, too!!!  

And I'm so happy that this will be continued as this is one of my favorite stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  As soon as my Beta gives me her ideas for chapters, I'll get them written.  Right now, I'm tapped out.  I had it written and ending with chapter 13 and my beta didn't want it to end.  She's never asked me to continue with a story line before, so I decided to listen to her.  :D

Yeah, Finally Conner is starting to be the man she hoped he grown up to be. 

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Finally Conner is a full blown grown up. Glad it's not ending yet.  



Author's Response:

Right?  Took him long enough to realize what he'd done.  

Thank you.  As soon as my Beta gives me her ideas for chapters, I'll get them written.  Right now, I'm tapped out.  I had it written and ending with chapter 13 and my beta didn't want it to end.  She's never asked me to continue with a story line before, so I decided to listen to her.  :D

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

I'm happy it will be continuing. :) now for Conner, it's about damn time that boy pulled his head out of his ass. Lol! I still think he needs a good ass kicking. I liked that Rose offered to talk to Edward first. :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Yep, I was glad that Conner realized what he'd done.  It's not in Bella's nature to kick ass, but allow and pray, that her bringing him up correctly will pay off!  Yes, Rose is a good friend and person.

Thanks for haing in there.  Not sure when the next chapter will be posted.

See you next time.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Oh I loved it and can't wait for the continuation 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  My Beta loves this story line so I'm gonna make her help me come up with additional chapters.  :D

See next time.

hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

at least he's realised how selfish he has been



Author's Response:

He's finally becoming the man Bella always hoped he would.

See you next time.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am glad she talked you into continuing. I love this story and will be happy to read more whenever you're ready :)

Love your sign off! I watched Batman faithfully.



Author's Response:

LOL.  Ok.  Just stand by.  

See you soon, I hope.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reunion

Well, I wish that the little  jerk had thought of his mom long before this. She has been heartbroken for a long time.  Of corse, he didn't come around until he had planned his exit.



Author's Response:

Better late than never, right?

You did see the Beta's note, right.  Not sure when more of this will be posted.  I had 13 chapters all together, with 13 being the end, but my Beta, Jyl, loves this story so much she begged me to wait and give my mind a rest.  So, stay tuned, same bat channel, same bat time.  :)

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: canyaceme Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

No problem.  Thanks for letting me know.

 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: canyaceme Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

Chapter 10 isn't showing up in TWCS. 



Author's Response:

I know.  Chpater 10 for MO will be posted next week.  Today was a mistake.  I posted the chapter for The Writer & The Witch to Moving on because I was stupid.  I'm sorry if this boo boo of my has caused you any problems.  Chapter 10 will be posted next week for Moving On.

Hang in there,

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love this story. I love older Bella with younger Edward. ? Though, didn't you put this chapter a while ago?



Author's Response:

I don't think I did, but anything is possible.  LOL.  I'm so happy your enjoying the older woman and young male.  I try to be as different as I can with my stories.  I get tired of the same ole stuff over and over.

Hope to hear from you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

I am here now. Love your work. I can't wait to see what is next to happen.



Author's Response:

Thank you so muh for following me here.  I appreciate your doing so.  I would love to hear what you think of my works.  Which story you enjoyed the most.  Why? Nosie aren't I?

Anyway, I look forward to hearing more from you.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 9

Interesting that Conner now how has a girl. Wonder how that will go when Bella meets her. 



Author's Response:

I'm sure that Bella will be a good mother.  LOL.  We can only hope that Conner see the light!

See you next chapter and thank you for your support1

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

; )



Author's Response:

<3  <3  <3

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 9

Looks like the shoe may soon be on the other foot! Makes me wonder if Conner is man enough to see how selfish he will be if he claims love and denies his mother the same opportunity!



Author's Response:

We can but hope that he'll get a clue sooner rather than later.

Thanks again for your support.  Means a great deal to me.

See you next chapter,

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh, so it's okay for him to bring his girlfriend home with him, but she can't be happy as well?    I really hope she nips this in the bud - and quick!!    I'm sorry, but she is his mother and as his mother she should be able to do whatever she wants and see whoever she wants.   Bella should not have to abide by her son's wishes   



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support for this story.  I never dreamed when I started it I would get so many people involved with it.

The relationships between mothers and their sons is very complex.

I hope we can resolve this before Conner is lynched.  

Thank you again,

See you next chpater,

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

Maybe he will understand that his mom needs someone



Author's Response:

We can but hope!

xo

Dinia

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

Bella should be able to choose who she is with instead of being alone



Author's Response:

So many of us - mothers - choose our children over our own personal happiness  - Been there, done that.

See you next chapter,

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)



Author's Response:

There's that smile I love!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

She has been through hell with her relationships but she has finely found happeness so sad she is willing to give it up.



Author's Response:

We do all sorts of things for your children.  My mother, God rest her soul, used to tell me, "You pays your money and takes your chances" I have found this to be with everything in Life!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

See you next chapter?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

You're a mean person post soon🌹



Author's Response:

Yeah but you love me anyway!  XOXOX  See you in two weeks with the next update.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh boy will her son ever give his blessing for Edward to date his mom and how will Bella get along with the new woman in her sons life



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review.  

Who knows what a possive son will do when it comes to his mama.  Maybe Bella will have a "chip" she can play with this new relation ship Conner has told her about. You know make an exchange.  The dynamics between mothers and their children is difficult to predict.  

See you in two weeks.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

; )



Author's Response:

:)   <3   :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

Loving it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, not sure what will happen here but look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

Poor Bella!  She has a right to date who she wants and to be happy!  Understandably she's had a bad track record and Connor has been there for her.  But Connor should want his mother to be happy. God knows after what we found out about husband #3 she definitely deserves it!  Connor needs to get his own head out of his ass and acknowledge the reason his mother "sounds sad"!  Hopefully he'll think about her response to his question if he was dating someone her age and he'll see it more in person how sad she is while pretending to be happy and make an attempt to at least get to know Edward!  Looking forward to next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Up Conner is acting like a spoiled brat and a shithead.  But we'll just have to wait and see how Bella handles it.  It broke my heart to write this part of the story, mostly because I've know of friends who've had this very problem in RL.

Thank you so much for taking the time read and review.  I feel very humble when people actually let me know, in a positive way, what they think of my writing.

I hope I'll be hearing more from you in the future.  Also, you might be interested to know that there is a Facebook page just for this story with images and links as well as being there for readers to discuss the storyline if they would like to.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

I want to punch Conner where it hurts. Lol! 



Author's Response:

LOL. Poor Conner.  I must have written him well because everyone hates Conner.  That means I've done a very good job!  *huge smile*

Thank you so much for sharing your, ehm, thoughts.  *very broad smile*

Hope to hear from you more in the future.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  They mean a great deal to me.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

That's a pretty selfish kind of love Conner is exhibiting, if you ask me! He's being a bit of a brat as far as I can see. He better watch out Karma doesn't come back and bite him in the butt! I hope there truly is a way for Bella and Edward to be together and happy!



Author's Response:

Yep, Conner was being a real shit.  However, something tells me he'll have an epiphany about what he's done.  You are so right about Karma, she may not bite right away.  It's like the revenge served up cold being the best kind.  *evil smile*

Thanks again, for being there, for reading and reviewing.

See you next chapter

Hard hugs

Carol/Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

Conner is so selfish



Author's Response:

Yes, he is!

:'(

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

I'm sad for Bella. I wonder which students get better geades-the ones graded before the wine or the ones graded while drinking the wine?



Author's Response:

Thanks somuch for taking the time to review.  I'm sad for Bella too.  I had tears in my eyes when I wrote this.  As for the grades, they were probably much improved after her second glass of wine.  *huge smile*

See you next chapter?  Please let me hear more from you.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Bella! She had the very worst luck with husbands, if Charles was any example! Good for her that she got him put where he belonged, too bad he nearly killed her for it! I hope Edward keeps pursuing her, she certainly deserves happiness. Conner better get his head in the game, too, if he wants to have a relationship with his mom!



Author's Response:

I jsut saw your reviews for this chapter and a couple of others.  I'm so sorry.  

I suspect Conner will come to his senses sooner rather than later.

Hard Hugs

Carol/Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Divisions

Too bad that boy of hers is too big to turn over her knee, because he richly deserves a good spanking! I felt so sorry for Bella and Edward, even Rose and Emmett!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Unexpected Meeting

I sincerely hope he won't judge his mother and make a big fuss over her choice in men! Besides, she is his mother and not subject to his rules, last time I looked!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 A Day at the Zoo

I guess Newton just can't help being a total jerk! I don't blame Conner for defending his mom from the slimeball! If he thinks a younger guy shouldn't have anything to do with his mother, wait until he meets Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 Edward's Point of View

Looks like Edward and Bella both had a powerful reaction to each other! It may get a bit dicey for Emmett, though, if Rosalie isn't ready to be exclusive.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Live is Good

I am curious as to what Conner will think when he meets Edward, which will probably happen tomorrow night. Also why Bella didn't tell her son about him?

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

; )



Author's Response:

:D  <3



Author's Response:

:D  <3

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Divisions

; )

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2015 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

Perhaps it is too many men in her life. Yes she dated but Conner is her child. He needed stability and he never got that from the men in her life. Too many in my opinion.

 

Edward needs to talk to Conner alone.



Author's Response:

Interesting point of view.  Perhpas too many men, but she is/was single, and she did try to do what she thought was best for Conner.  He's doing the same for her, but just going about it wrong.

Thank you for your input.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2015 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Divisions

This is a pretty normal response. If daddy dates younger women they might not like it but they wont be this upset. I take that back perhaps daughters might be



Author's Response:

Sorry MaryMary I just saw this.  I don't seem to get all the responses.  Yes, you're so right.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a great deal.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Bella has had such terrible luck with men!

SO HAPPY that Edward isn't giving up!

 



Author's Response:

Yep like so many of the friends I've had in the past also.  We can just keep our fingers crossed and hope that Edward will hang in there.

Thank you for your support in reading and reviewing.

I hope I can made this story come out with the HEA everyone wants.  I don't know what the characters are gonna do, actually I'm just the typtist.  :D

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad that Edward is willing to fight for her. :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yes, it appears that Edward is a winner and a keeper.  Let's just hope that Conner comes to his senses before Edward gives up.

See you next chapter?

Hard hUgs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Bella



Author's Response:

Been there, done that myself.  Hopefully things will impore for our Bella.

Thanks for reading, and for your reviewing - even if you ony have time for a smiley face :)  It all matters

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Divisions

Excuse my language but Conner was a dick. He's lucky he didn't get slapped. I think he's the one who needs to get his head out of his ass. 



Author's Response:

Please don't worry about the language.  I speak Swear fluently.  I servered in the USMC and learned to speak it there.  :D

Yes, Conner acted the spoiled rotten kid that he is.  Hopefully Bella's loving understanding will win in the end.

Thank you so much for reading and for responding.  I look forward to hearing more from you in the future.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Divisions

what a little shit he should be happy she is happy



Author's Response:

It remains to be seen how Bella and friends handle the unfolding events.

I hope to hear from you next chapter also.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read, and to review.  

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Divisions

Connor acted like a spoiled child not getting his way!  I don't know how I would feel in Bella's shoes (I've been married for 24 years), but my heart breaks for her. You shouldn't ever feel like you're being made to choose between you family/kids and someone you're dating. Edward is a great guy and treats Bella with care and respect. Connor didn't even give Edward a chance because of his age, which is just a number. And to talk to his mom like that, he should feel horrible. Bella didn't deserve that at all. 

Ill be anxiously waiting for next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reading and reviewing of my story. I've had friends who's children treated them this way.  So it happens.  Easy to say what we'd do, until it happens.  I personally would have chosen my child.  Not sure what Bella's gonna do.  I congradulate you on your lengthy marriage.  Not ever one is as lucky.

Hope to continue hearing from you.  You sound stable and I like that.  You're not some kid spouting off.  I will be 73 my next birthday.  When I was 40, age was a number, I still "feel" 40 until I stand up.  Then with all the "joys of my maturity" I experience I feel 120!  

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Divisions

poor Bella



Author's Response:

Yeah, been there done that.  It's not much fun being a single mom to be a good mother and to have a life most of the time.

Thank you my Friend for your constant support for my efforts.  You're smiling face is always so appreciated and I'm totally over the moon when I get words.  

Hard Hugs for my Friend

Carol/Dinia

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Divisions

I so would have put that boy on a time out! lol ;)

Author's Response:

LOL.  As a very mature (age wise) mother who had a teen aged daughter when I got my 3rd divorce, I have had to put my child first.  I found it difficult to have a Life and be what I felt was a good parent.  

Hope you continue to enjoy the story.  You've read some of my other stuff, right?  If not I'd love to know what you'd think of them.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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