[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
I have to admit I wouldn't have minded Edward leaving the military. I couldn't handle all the separations and fear of my beloved one never coming back. I also understand that it's part of Edward's life and am glad Bella decided she could handle it. Her moving close is a great turn of events.
I'm happy for Anthony and Bree as well, and think it's great he finally connected with his own sexuality.
I'm so thrilled you're going to wrap this story soon, although that means I'll have less updated to look forward to and I'll really miss these four :(.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
I loved it, and i cant wait to read more. Love ya lady your doing great!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
Omg... YAY! I thought there for a moment she was rejecting him. I was about to kick some ass. :)
Date: 08 Mar 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
oorah! I love this story! In this chapter, we get to see both brothers' POV plus Bella's. We get to see Anthony submit, finally! I love that these two brothers are two sides of the same coin! I may love this story almost as much as Shhhhh...and that is really saying something! I have really missed your particular brand of storytelling and am ecstatic to have you back!!
Oh and one final parting thought....every time I write a review/comment and press that button at the bottom of the page, I am reminded of your stories. That button says "submit".
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
I loved it thank goodness they are back together and in love yea(I am doing a happy dance in my room I hope the kids or hubby see) I can't wait to see how they work out everything and how happy is Edward going to be when he finds out Bella is in DC to stay
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
So worth the wait you are amazing !!! THANKYOU
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
Holy snap he is willing to give up the military for her that is huge wow I love it more pretty please and soon please I need more
Date: 21 Feb 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
Please please finish this
Date: 15 Feb 2016 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
Please update
Date: 15 Feb 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
This is so good! Please don't wait too long to update. My poor heart can't take it!
Date: 15 Feb 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
I am going crazy with this story . I freaking love this story.
Date: 14 Feb 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
OMG!! I can't believe it!! I'm soooooo happy you're back!! Hope you are doing ok and life is getting a bit easier. Having recently suffered my own tragedy, I know you'll never "get over" your loss but life goes on, like it or not and we have to learn to live again. Hope that's where we find you now.
This was one of my favorite all time stories and I was heart broken, thinking it would be abandoned. I cannot tell you how glad I am that you are going to finish it. It is much appreciated!!
Love to you!
~cynthia24cat
Author's Response:
Me and my beta are working on it! promise this one will have a the end stamped to it as well as an epilogue and a couple of outtakes....
Date: 14 Feb 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
LOVE THIS! You're breaking my heart, though...I want them to be together again! I love this :)
Date: 14 Feb 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
Oh! I love that he said the words! Those words every woman wants to hear...at least this woman does! Will she accept his love? Oh I hope so. Thanks for another lovely chapter!
Date: 14 Feb 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 25 Return to Camp Pendleton 2
oh it is so good to get another chapter of this story. I was just wondering about it within this past week. It is so good to see your creative juices flowing again! Will these 2 get their HEA? Don't answer that, I'll just read to find out, but I certainly hope so!!
Date: 14 Feb 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
Thank you for the wonderful Valentine's Day surprise. I have missed this story so much and pondered where they would meet again. I'm so glad Edward manned up and told her how he felt. That was a huge step for him to admit he needs her more than his military career. Let's hope Bella can match his confession with a little honesty of her own. So wonderful to have you back.
Date: 14 Feb 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 25 Return to Camp Pendleton 2
good
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
Please, please, please, don't make her turn him down again. He basically laid his heart at her feet. She just has to be honest to him now so they can find a way to be together, find a compromise they can both live with.
Please, update soon!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
I can already tell you you've given me the very best Valentine I will receive today! You haven't lost a beat.
Love, love, loved it!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 25 Return to Camp Pendleton 2
First, let me tell you how happy I was to see this alert. Just a few day ago, LaPumuckl and I talked about how much we missed this story.
Okay, now on to my actual review. Dammit! Reading this the second time just hurt as much as it did the first time. Since we're about to get to the place where you pulled the story the fusrt time around, I'm excited to see what happens next.
Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
Oh my.... he would retire for her?!
I really hope she won't try to downplay her own feelings now, because I doubt any other person could be to her that HE is. And I so wish for them to get a HEA...
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
He's put his heart out there for her. I hope she is honest with him and gives him a chance
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 25 Return to Camp Pendleton 2
:)
Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 25 Return to Camp Pendleton 2
Thank you, thank you, thank you:-D
This was the best surprise I could get for Valentines day!
I knew things wouldn't be all hearts and roses when they would meet again, but I didn't think it would end even worse than the last time... I get why Bella doesn't want to fall for a marine, but it did happen and a Dom no less! Walking away from him twice must have killed her inside
And now, he's there:)
Date: 22 Dec 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
I love this story and miss reading it. I hope all is well with you. I hope you have not become discouraged and have abandoned the story. I hope you have a good holiday season.
Date: 27 Nov 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
Such a fantastic story. Wish you could finish it.
Date: 11 Nov 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story hope you are doing good .
Date: 29 Sep 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 23 Lock & Load
Hi, I followed this story on FF.net and was hoping you'd continue to update. I know it's been a long time, but please consider.
Date: 25 Sep 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
Dear friend. ... I was missing you and thought I'd let you know how much I have enjoyed your stories. I had hoped you would've come back by now but... I see you haven't : ( My time is short and I was hoping to finish reading some of my favorite stories before. ... well anyway I'd like to THANK YOU for the joy your stories have brought me. You are truly blessed to be able to make magic with words. ♥
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
This story is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens
Please update soon!
Date: 12 Jul 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
So excited for next chapter. Love your work.
Date: 02 Jun 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
Thank for the multiple chapter updates. What a wonderful surprise. You made my Memorial Day week-end. So great to have you back again.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2015 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
I hope the next update will be coming soon?
This has a unique beauty to it.
Date: 27 May 2015 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
Haha, yeah you go Edward.
Well he has finally gotten clued in. lol.
I think his and Anthony's bond has just gotten stronger.
Looking forward to more
Date: 27 May 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 23 Lock & Load
Good god, he is so stupid at times.
Antohony picked up on it.
Even Bree did.
I want to slap him and tell him to wake up. lol
Date: 27 May 2015 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 22 Recruit Training
Oh dear.
Date: 26 May 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 21 Reassigned
For two rather smart and educated people, they are both so dumb.
I may have shed the odd tear.
Date: 26 May 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 20 Marine Blues
My heart hurts this time, just as much as it did reading it the last time.
Date: 26 May 2015 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 Chain of Command
My heart is pounding now, cause I know what the future holds, before I get to the same point as before.
So loooking forward to it though.
Date: 26 May 2015 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 18 About Face
Hubby now realises whey I have been jumpoing him so much. lol
Date: 26 May 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 17 Lean, Mean, Fighting Machine
If Bella isn't up to the task I'll jump in. lol.
These two have me so hooked.
Date: 26 May 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 16 Crossing Enemy Lines
Oh Anthony you have no idea.
Mind you neither does Edward, haha.
He is in for a surprise too.
Date: 25 May 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 TARFU
Well now he knows just what Bella is into.
Looks like Edward was right after all. haha.
Date: 25 May 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 14 Oscar Fox Sierra
Phew, that was some chapter.
More!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 May 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 13 Prisoner of Edward's
I forgot how hot this fic got.
Date: 25 May 2015 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 12 FUBAR
Well he did warn you, you chose to ignore it.
Bella is willing in all of this after all. Anthony needs to remember that.
Date: 25 May 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
I was so happy to see all of these updates!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
Okay, now we're getting closer to new material. Thanks for the many updates yesterday. Please, update again soon.
Date: 24 May 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
ok i've finished the whirlwind of chapters you posted yesterday. i'm really happy that you are reposting and finishing this story! it's good to have you back with us!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 23 Lock & Load
I hated reading how Edward tried to play with another sub the first time. I was glad that he couldn't. Now, I thought the second time would be easier, but I was wrong.
Date: 24 May 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 23 Lock & Load
Hooray for Edward! I think he is immersed in a soul search that might surprise him with the conclusions. It happens to all of us, if we're lucky, and it's about time it happened to him! I really love reading this story and am sorry if any of my reviews came off flippant or wrong. I didn't mean to be like that.....I really enjoy all the pictures, gifs, you include in the chapters too!
Date: 24 May 2015 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 22 Recruit Training
This is different than before. I like it.
Date: 24 May 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
YES!!!!!!
Her Sass is one of the things he likes about her.
Date: 24 May 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
Wow.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 22 Recruit Training
At least Anthony gets to explore his new relationship.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 21 Reassigned
No matter how often I read this it stays heartbreaking. I'm so sad for both of them. I wish I could read on now until there's a conclusion but I know I'll have to wait for that.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 20 Marine Blues
I hated this the first time over. But add long as neither of them really knows what they want there's no way around what's coming next. And that after such a perfect morning.
Date: 24 May 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 9 Inspection
I had chosen before they even met, lol.
Sorry Anthony, but Edward all the way.
And holy Hell that pic, I think I just melted.
Date: 24 May 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
See Edward can be a gentleman sometimes, hell screw that, he just has his eye on the prize. lol.
Date: 24 May 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
Damn he is a cocky one.
But you gotta love him.
Date: 24 May 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 6 Camouflage
Hell yeah he is one sexy ass.
Date: 23 May 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
good
Date: 23 May 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 22 Recruit Training
good
Date: 23 May 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
What a great surprise!!! Thank you for reposting!
Date: 23 May 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 19 Chain of Command
good
Date: 23 May 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 21 Reassigned
It's good to see Edward acting like a man in love. I wondered if he had it in him. We are all eagerly awaiting the conclusion of this story!
Date: 23 May 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 17 Lean, Mean, Fighting Machine
good
Date: 23 May 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 20 Marine Blues
I would be crushed. I would also need to understand that no strings exist now, no matter how much one or both of them were thinking about it....still....
Date: 23 May 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 19 Chain of Command
oh yeah, he's falling hard...but I remember from before what happens....
Date: 23 May 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 18 About Face
I don't think Anthony quite has the hang of being submissive as yet....
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 19 Chain of Command
Edward finely feels a difference. Too bad things can't stay all flowers and rainbows.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 18 About Face
I'm not much into male submission but this scene is quite beautiful. Thanks.
Date: 23 May 2015 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 17 Lean, Mean, Fighting Machine
damn!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 17 Lean, Mean, Fighting Machine
Dammit! That's one of the hottest scenes I've ever read. I'm all got and bothered now.
Date: 23 May 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 16 Crossing Enemy Lines
I love that Anthony is submissive!
Date: 23 May 2015 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 15 TARFU
that was a cruel way to let Anthony know about Edward and Bella.
Date: 23 May 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
It's hard knowing they're both so miserable...
Thank you so much for all these updates today - it was a great surprise 😍
Date: 23 May 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 23 Lock & Load
This poor lost marine - no training could have prepared for this. ...
I like the doctor he went to though - great advice
Date: 23 May 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 Oscar Fox Sierra
you have changed a few things in these reposted chapters, haven't you? it has been a while, so maybe my memory is just not so good. They seem sexier....
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
:):)
Date: 23 May 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
Oh dear Anthony, we weren't expecting that.
Haha.
Seems Bella's interests have been peeked again.
Date: 23 May 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 22 Recruit Training
Bree didn't wear a dress to the club but a corset and short leather skirt - where is the dress coming up from now?! - Again I don't want to be a smart ass, but these things jut stick with me...
Date: 23 May 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 13 Prisoner of Edward's
I'm so grateful for this reposting. Please allow me to just read this very arousing chapter without saying too much. I am just in response mode right now....
Date: 23 May 2015 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
NO!!! I really hope she is willing to work things out with Edward...PLEASE?!!
Date: 23 May 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 23 Lock & Load
Oh wow...Can't wait for more! Edward definitely still wants Bella.
Date: 23 May 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 Recruit Training
OH SNAP!! So, the twins are 38? Older Edward and Anthony? HELL YES! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 23 May 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 21 Reassigned
OH SNAP!!!!! I am really hoping they can patch things up soon!
Date: 23 May 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 20 Marine Blues
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 May 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 19 Chain of Command
GAH! You are AMAZING!
Date: 23 May 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 18 About Face
OH wow...I didn't think I liked a male submissive, but this Anthony made me like him ;)
Date: 23 May 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
what a treat to see my inbox filled with chapters of this story this morning! it always makes me tingle to read this story. thanks so much, dear girl!
Date: 23 May 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 17 Lean, Mean, Fighting Machine
THAT was amazing. I am impressed that I can even write this! One little thing...I think you misspelled "inamorata" in this sentence: “Follow me inamorta". "Inamorta" doesn't translate to anything, while "inamorata" is a "lover that is female". Just so you know :)
Date: 23 May 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 Crossing Enemy Lines
Gah...I want this Edward SO much!
Date: 23 May 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 21 Reassigned
This is not good...