Date: 23 May 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 15 TARFU
Oh wow...loved this chapter. Isn't it ironic that Anthony and Edward are twins, yet one is a closet submissive and the other is a BIG-time Dominant?
Date: 23 May 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 14 Oscar Fox Sierra
GAH!!! This made me wish I hadn't worn underwear today...and had an Edward of my own ;) By the way, what is the significance of the title of this chapter? I tried looking it up, but didn't get anywhere. The closest I came was either the French rapper, or "Tango Sierra Foxtrot Oscar" aka "Tough Shit, Fuck Off".
Date: 23 May 2015 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 13 Prisoner of Edward's
GAH!!!! This Edward is INCREDIBLE!
Date: 23 May 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 12 FUBAR
Well, snap ;)
Date: 23 May 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
OH YES!!
Date: 23 May 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 20 Marine Blues
Bella only stayed the Sunday, but didn't Anthony to reach out to Edward on Friday afternoon/night after meeting Charlie about an appointment on Monday morning?!
Damn, I hated this the first time and it doesn't change now...
Date: 23 May 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 16 Crossing Enemy Lines
good
Date: 23 May 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 14 Oscar Fox Sierra
good
Date: 23 May 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 19 Chain of Command
And there he begins to see and feel the changes in him for the first time 😉
Date: 23 May 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 13 Prisoner of Edward's
good
Date: 23 May 2015 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 18 About Face
I could read this chapter over and over because it is the best male submissive scene I have read - EVER
Date: 23 May 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
good
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 Crossing Enemy Lines
Edward seems to be feeling things he didn't bargain for. Maybe even for him the time has come to settle down with the right woman. Sadly, I know where this is going.
Although I'm not into submissive men I'm so excited for Anthony and Bree.
Date: 23 May 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 17 Lean, Mean, Fighting Machine
Lord almighty...
I think I'm just as drenched as Bella was I'm the last picture here...
And not to be a smart ass here - I really hate that I can't tell you privately - there was a slip in this chapter... Edward starts his undressing completely after he showed the whole playroom to Bella - but around half of this chapter he's wearing his jeans again😦
Date: 23 May 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
I love this story are you going to bring shhhh back I love that story 2
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 15 TARFU
Pie Anthony is surrounded by doms and subs and doesn't even know. The whole lifestyle is so foreign to him. I'm sure it must be a shock to see the girl you like like that, being dominated so openly by someone you despise for doing it. It's a good thing Bree is there to explain things to him.
Date: 23 May 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 16 Crossing Enemy Lines
I'm not sure which is the hotter scene, but I vote for Bella worshipping Edward's cock right beside the dance floor.
But Anthony startinb his submission to Bree isnt too far behind; )
Date: 23 May 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 4 Zero-Dark-Thirty
Yeah Edward is so my fav.
Oh Em, if only you knew.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 14 Oscar Fox Sierra
I'd be totally intimidated by the amount of steel he's carrying around. But again, the pics ... O. My. God.
Date: 23 May 2015 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 TARFU
I remember how much I felt for Anthony the first time reading this, but already then I knew to trust Bree to help him understand things he was so unaware about before...
Can you imagine what it must be like for him seeing Bella that way, believing her to be the poor "Damsel in distress" in the company of Edward and then seeing her like that?! Poor guy must be short of a coronary...
Date: 23 May 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 3 Combat Zone
Loving the pics with it.
Its painful reading her Anthony the second time round, lol.
I know there is worse to come.
But like Edward said previously he always wins.
Date: 23 May 2015 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 14 Oscar Fox Sierra
I think my heartbeat wont be slowing down any time soon from that excitement...
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 13 Prisoner of Edward's
Dammit, as if the story itself wasn't hot enough, those pics and little videos you add make it really hard to read instead of wanting to re-enact it, lol. I've really missed this story.
Date: 23 May 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 2 Water Warrior
I am shuddering.
It is Anthony. I can't help it. lol.
I know we have heartache coming, but so looking forward to reliving it.
Date: 23 May 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 12 FUBAR
Even reading this for the second time I feel so sad for Anthony. He can't understand the alternative lifestyle and therefore can't see that he could never offer Bella what she needs.
I'm just happy to know that he'll find himself a match as well ;)
Date: 23 May 2015 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
Loving it just as much this time around.
Fianlly getting around to being able to read it again.
I did debate whether or not to go straight where I left it beore, but decided to get refreshed.
Looking forward to reading again.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
He knows how to get her all worked up without even doing much. And knowing what's to come had me all worked up as well.
Date: 23 May 2015 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 13 Prisoner of Edward's
I should really know better by now to a) not read your stories through daytime and b) not out of the tub... You and your boys always cause my hamper to explode with panties....
Date: 23 May 2015 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 FUBAR
Jealousy between siblings isn't unusual to a degree, and I can only imagine it gets more intense between identical twins... So I know Anthony doesn't has a real problem with Edward, they just need to get the separation to feel like the individuals they are...
Bella seems to enjoy Edwards company very much - and how could she not 😇
Date: 23 May 2015 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
You're back :)
I love the pics you found for this chapter - they're fitting so wonderful!
And if I don't want to die of dehydration I need to remember to take in lots and lots of fluids while reading these chapter...
Author's Response:
Edward would agree! giggles....
♥
Date: 23 May 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
I am so glad that you are back with this wonderful story, all the updates today are great.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
Will this be updated soon??? I really miss this story. I made it to chapter 26 before you pulled it and I REALLY need to know how it ends!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 Combat Zone
That would be so confusing they both have what she wants.
Date: 08 Apr 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
Such a hot story!
Thanks.
Date: 07 Apr 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
good
Date: 07 Apr 2015 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
good
Date: 07 Apr 2015 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
good
Date: 07 Apr 2015 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
GAH!!!!!!! You tease! I cannot wait for the next one now!
Date: 07 Apr 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 9 Inspection
I know who I'd choose! EDWARD all the way ;)
Date: 07 Apr 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
GAH! These two are going to be SO hot when they get together!
Date: 07 Apr 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
GAH!!!
Date: 07 Apr 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 Camouflage
Gah, this Edward is amazing! I want one ;)
Author's Response:
me too! lol
Date: 07 Apr 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
frist iam sorry for your lost i love your storys i just whnted to know if you where going to redo shhhhh i just love that story i is one of my favorites thank you for the time you take to wright thes storys
Author's Response:
aww thank you...
I will repost Shhhhh sometime in the future...its just going to take a while...
and I am honored you enjoy reading them....
Date: 07 Apr 2015 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
nothing to say but *wow*.
Date: 07 Apr 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
This is such a bad place to end the chapter - even reading it for the 2nd time...
Date: 07 Apr 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 9 Inspection
where is his phone? i know she gets there eventually but don't remember what happens...I suspect I know which one I'd choose too, despite having no experience....
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
She needs to let Anthony down easily.....he's just not right for her....but as I remember, he may be right for someone else....
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 9 Inspection
Is it wrong to want them both?!
Author's Response:
absolutely NOT! I would be the meat in between that sandwhich any day! lol
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
I love the way he seems to read her so well...can't wait for more!
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 6 Camouflage
this seems a bit different than before. am I remembering it differently or did you actually change something. either way, it was very seductive and erotic! I loved it!
Author's Response:
I am totally in awe of the fact that you even noticed the little changes I made.
Yes I removed a few things that were mentioned more than once and I am adding things that I have learned over the course of the last year
living in this lifestyle. It is not all true to life...for example...Edward is a little stalkerish and that doesn't sit well in the real BDSM community. I wanted to
keep some of Edward's quirks from Twilight...like his need to make her his.
In the real world, this type of behavior would be frowned on...but this is also a fantasy so I am taking advantage of it.
Trust me...this story wouldn't as sexy if I just stuck the details of what actually happens in a club.
Watching scenes is nothing like being in the middle of it. Yes its sexy to watch but I have discovered I am too impatient to sit on the sidelines while
everyone else gets to play.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
I'm curious about Bella's thoughts fom chapter 9.
-There is just something about Edward that seems dark. Something that is hidden from his past maybe.-
Is she on to something?
This chapter took my breath away.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
Mmh.... your beta must have been very good for such a nice gift from you;)
Oh shit... that was one hell of a surprise for a lot of people at the end of the chapter
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
Hot damn, this is so good:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 9 Inspection
Correct me if I'm wrong but doesn't he need to curb his anger before engaging in a scene?
Author's Response:
Did he come off as angry before they begin? His comment about her sass isn't anger really...
Date: 06 Apr 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 6 Camouflage
That was a very mean thing to do of him... I get that he might want to protect his brother, but surely it is not his first priority!
And he's even more of a hypocrite in the way he hunts her; )
Author's Response:
This Edward teeters on being cocky. And I don't think I could ever write an Edward that didn't in one way or another hunt Bella....lol....
Trust me his heart is in the right place...he just doesn't know it yet...
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
There's area definitely since inspiring pics on that site.
Anyway, I love how protective Edward is of Bella. Can't wait for them to actually enter the cave.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 9 Inspection
That manip is damn hot! Anyway, I'm glad I know she isn't really letting him hang. So on to the next chapter.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
It was very nice of Charlie to allow Anthony to reschedule his appointment, but somehow I doubt his willingness if he knew EVERYTHING about the desaster with Em...
Hm.... A night on the town? Should be interesting
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
Well, Edward in low-hung own jeans must really be a sight to behold. I think is had jumped his bones. Kudos for Bella's control, lol.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 4 Zero-Dark-Thirty
Damn, I surely dont want to be at the receiving end of Emmett’s fist! Poor Anthony will have a big shiner come "tomorrow".
Date: 06 Apr 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 Combat Zone
Love it;)
Date: 06 Apr 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 Water Warrior
Its still so sweet to watch Anthony dance around her and Edward barking in without thought
Date: 06 Apr 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
And holy hell, she would take it! <3
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
:)
Date: 06 Apr 2015 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 9 Inspection
Thank you for reposting this story. I have really enjoyed your writing in the past, and was excited to see you return. My heartfelt condolences to you for your loss. I have no words of wisdom that will make this any easier for you, but I will include you in my prayers. I hope your family & friends have surrounded you with their love & support; just remember that sometimes we don't know what the right thing is to do or to say to you to help. Please forgive them/us any missteps.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
:)
Date: 06 Apr 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
Happy Easter, dear!
To say I was shocked about your loss, is an understatement. I cant put in words how sorry I am about it....
And I'm so very grateful, that you are trying to come back, as I really missed your fantastic writing - this story was dear to me, as well as all of your othes;)
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
I just realized the mistake I made in my review for last chapter. I meant I'm not into femslash of course. My silly brain only ever starts working after I hit send.
Anyway, dammit,Edward's hot. And the little scene on the dance floor ... Wow!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
How accurate is this info on BDSM?
I'm very intrigued by it.
Thanks for another update.
I appreciate any replies you've taken the time for.
Author's Response:
I am trying very hard to make it as close to the real lifestyle as possible. Some of this will be fantasy but the majority of it is from my own experiences over the last year
since I became an active member of my local community. I have learned so much and discovered so many things that you just won't find on the web from reading about it or watching a movie.
The only way I know how to tell it, is to share what I have learned and yes this story will have some major changes than from the original version so that it is more closely related to what really happens in real life.
BDSM clubs are located all over the world and they are not readily available to the general public. There is an order you must follow before you can actually walk into a private club. Munches are the first place to start and from there you will find out what you need to proceed if it is something that truly interests you.
I have made alot of friends and learn new things everyday and I hope I can pass it along to my readers so that they can see what the lifestyle really is all about.
Thanks for reading and don't hesitate to ask me anything...
Andrea
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
WOW! What a pleasant, unexpected surprise. Keep them coming, please.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 6 Camouflage
Oh,so damn sexy. I've never been into slash but that scene with Bella and Bree, damn, that's hot.
Author's Response:
I bet you I could get you hooked on Inveigled by beauty...
Bella, Rosalie and Edward as a threesome...thats just hot... lol
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 6 Camouflage
That was hot!
I was enjoying this the 1st time I read it but I like how it seems to flow smoother now.
Do you have a posting schedule? I only asking because I can't get enough.
Author's Response:
no schedule sweetie I am just trying to do it as I go along....
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
Edward could chain me up in his cage any time he wants, lol.
I'm sure it's hard for Anthony to understand his brother's brother's if it's so far from his own. But maybe there's a change he'll eventually get a taste himself ;).
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 4 Zero-Dark-Thirty
Poor Anthony. I'm afraid he's not what Bella needs. But Edward sure is. Yay!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 3 Combat Zone
They look alike and Max sounds alike but Edward's so much more interesting than his twin. Can't edit to reach the point in the story where Bellagives into his advances.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 2 Water Warrior
Who wouldn't be paralyzed if standing between two Edwards. But wouldn't that be great? Although I'm reading this for the second time, I still have to say Edward sounds way more interesting than Anthony does ;).
I can imagine reposting and rereadiRenee must be strange but I'm so glad you're back and trying.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
I'm so sorry for your loss. I can't begin to imagine how you must feel. I hope we can help you feel better, if only for a little while.
I can't tell you how happy I am that this story is back. I'll read it again now add you update so I'll have it fresh in my mind once the new chapters will be posted;).
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
Do you have a posting schedule?
Author's Response:
no...I don't they will just come as I can get them out...
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2015 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
I'm so glad you're back!
Date: 29 Mar 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
Let the good times begin!
Date: 29 Mar 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 Zero-Dark-Thirty
I'm so happy for all the reposts!
Date: 29 Mar 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
LOVE this, and cannot wait for Bella and Edward to get together ;D
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 3 Combat Zone
OH WOW! I really loved this, but cannot wait for Edward and Bella to be together ;)
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
I just love reading this story again
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 Zero-Dark-Thirty
:)
Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
ah, the club. I remember this part....sort of. love that it's all fresh again for me. glad you're back!
Author's Response:
i am happy you all are still here for me to write again for..
Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 4 Zero-Dark-Thirty
I forgot a lot of the early details of this story so it is good reading it again! Thanks!
Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 Combat Zone
It all seems new again and I'm so glad to be reading it now that you're posting it again. I'm so happy that you are feeling like being out in the world again!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 Zero-Dark-Thirty
I love this story! Can't wait until you catch up to where you were before.