Date: 05 Apr 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
The problem here is even in fiction HEA is a no go from here. Lies, using and embarrassment galore. Shame really.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Rose, Alice and Esme are creepy and controlling. I agree with Edward that's why he's single. Who needs that mess. JS
Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
I was thrilled to find this story today as I have seriously thought about what a B/E fic would look like based on that movie! You did a great job and I like the ending to this. They have known each other less than 3 months at this point right? So anything more would have been too rushed. This shows that they are approaching their relationship maturely now.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
that was a good story and really different
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
"I love you too, Eddie!" Haha! Perfect ending! Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved the story. From start to finish. congrats!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Aww! That's too adorable! I'm excited about the Mariners game, but I hope there aren't any more foul balls...
Any chance we can read Bella's article later?
Author's Response:
Yeah, you'll be able to see Bella's article in the nnext chapter. :)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
TELL HIM, TELL HIM!!!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh this bet is gonna get him in so much trouble! If said girl does happen to fall in love with him and he her then when she finds out about said bet it all goes to hell in a hand basket (or something like that), but I would imagine that Edward isn't planning ot fall in love, eh?
On to the next chapter!
Sarah
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this idea! I love both aspects of the story and can't wait for more! Ok, on to the next chapter!
Sarah
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
was this story on fanfiction before? because it sounds familiar.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I posted it on Fanfiction first.